Audience Feedback

Sara and Hannah

NarrativeHarriett Thomas – “The synopsis is quite intriguing because the audience will want to find out how Alisia will find justice for her friend, however the beginning, when it says how Jack is killed is a bit detailed.” Rhian Swan – “The synopsis is really detailed but lacks certain information which makes you want to find out more.”We were glad that people liked our synopsis because we were not sure if we went into too much detail, however our audience did not believe that we did, and they will left wondering what was going to happen next, encouraging them to watch the film.

Name of FilmHarriett Thomas - “the name is good as it has a lot of meanings and ensures the audience have an idea of what the film is about.”Rhian Swan – “the name gives the audience bit of information on what the film could be about but leaves you to wonder what exactly it is about.”Previously we were going to call our film the Bittersweet Forsaken however after previous audience feedback and teacher feedback we reevaluated our original name and changed it to Justice which we believed was more appropriate and we liked the name much better.

Music Harriett Thomas- “The music is good because it represents the theme of the film, as it is slow in places which gives a depressed and sad feel, however there are also higher notes suggesting that there could be happier times in the film.”Rhian Swan – “The music is dramatic which creates a good scene and sense of atmosphere.”We are still using the music that we originally decided upon, peoples opinions of it only strengthened our decision to use the music.

ScriptHarriett Thomas – “I like the script but it is quite long and detailed.” Rhian Swan – “The script is good because you can imagine what is actually happening due to detailed stage directions.”People liked our finished script as they were able to clearly imagine what would be happening without even watching the film and by reading it they believed it would be something they wish to watch.