Georgia Shelton

ANALYSIS OF PREVIOUS STUDENTS WORK.

RESEARCH & PLANNING…

Student name:

Joel

Luke

Louise

James

Mark:

14/20

19/20

12/20

19/20

Comments:

Has included some detailed research and planning, however some areas such as conventions, lack detail.

Excellent planning throughout all tasks, however some research areas lack detail.

Lacks detail in conventions as well as several other tasks, however she had a set plan on what she wanted to do.

Excellent detail and understanding throughout, and was kept consistant throughout blog.

Mark given:

15/20

19/20

12/20

20/20

CONSTRUCTION- JOEL

Mark:

43/60

Comments:

Jump shots in areas, low level lighting effective in some scenes however in others, made the shot bad quality. The use of the editing and freeze frames to introduce characters very effective and eye catching.

Given mark:

39/60

CONSTRUCTION – LUKE

Mark:

36/60

Comments:

Some nice shot types showing mise en scene, relative music, however the chosen shot types became repetitive. Could’ve used low lever lighting to relate more to the genre.

Given mark:

52/60

CONSTRUCTION – LOUISE

Mark:

25/60

Comments:

Not all shots were in frame, or in focus, making it look poor and bad quality. Lighting in some areas was over exposed, story line was unclear.

Given mark:

35/60

CONSTRUCTION - JAMES

Mark:

47/60

Comments:

Good use of voiceover. Time lapse at the beginning very creative and original. Nice use of editing when introducing characters. However the fight scene was bad framing and bad quality sound.

Given mark:

50/60

CONCLUSION… From analysing previous students work and using the marking criteria , I can now understand what elements I need to include and what not to include to reach the top marks.

For example some students work included jump shots which I will aim to avoid and the use of low level lighting can sometimes reduce the quality of your shots.

However by analysing previous constructions, it has given me an insight on the effective titles and music that can be used as I like the use of Joel’s freeze frame and posterized titles when introducing the characters.

I also learnt that it is essential to ensure your final construction has a clear story line, and relates to your chosen sub genre, including mise en scene and location.