Today we will begin working on your first MAJOR writing assignment for the year.
Our first step is to brainstorm about our selves.
Complete the handout given about yourself and you life. This will help you as we continue to the writing process.
We will use this handout in the next step of the brainstorming process.
A2 Brainstorming
On your handout, make a list of all the people, places, things, or ideas that matter to you. You do not need to organize this list. Just write down anything you can think of to add.
Bell Ringer
Warm-UpPrewriting
Categorizing BrainstormingConnecting to a Prompt
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By the end of class, we will prewrite to generate ideas for a personal essay.
Today’s Agenda and Learning Target
Create the following chart and place your brainstormed ideas into the proper categories:
Categorizing Brainstorming
People Places Things Ideas
Write a personal essay to your peers to share how you define your American identity. Choose one person, place, thing, or idea to describe or tell the story of in order to provide an example of an American cultural value that helps create your American identity.
Writing Prompt
Now, next to each one, jot down how it relates to your American identity. You will have to think about what we, as an American culture, value.
Connecting Brainstorming to a Prompt
People Places Things Ideas
Bell RingerReview your chart. Which contribution shows
the best connection to your identity as an American? Circle it.
Now free write about that one idea for 10 minutes. You want to write down everything you know, can remember, like, or love about that one person, place, thing, or idea.
Carefully read and review the rubric.
Bell Ringer
Bell RingerBeginning a Personal Essay: Assessing Peer
SamplesExit Slip
By the end of class, we will evaluate student work based on a scoring rubric.
Today’s Agenda and Learning Target
“I DO”: Watch as I use the rubric and additional handout to assess student sample #1. Copy what I do.
“WE DO”: Now, work with the group at your table to assess student sample #2.
“YOU DO”: Lastly, assess student sample #3 on your own.
Assessing Student Samples
Review the rubric and answer the following questions on the back of your handout:1) In which category will you score the
highest? Why?2) In which category will you score the lowest?
Why?3) What person, place, thing, or idea will you
use for your essay? How does he/she/it relate to your American identity?
Exit Slip
Begin thinking about how you want to describe or tell a story about your topic: person, place, thing, or idea that matters to our American culture and your American identity
Warm-Up
Warm-UpPrewriting for a Personal Essay
Handout #1Handout #2
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By the end of class, we will prewrite for a personal essay by focusing on a specific topic and planning a draft.
Today’s Agenda and Learning Target
Complete the handout for your specific topic.
Please ask me to check this work then I will give you the next prewriting handout to complete.
Prewriting Handout #1
Complete the handout for your specific topic.
We will begin drafting our blog entries next class.
Prewriting Handout #2
Make sure you submit both completed handouts to the tray.
Next class . . .
Exit Slip
Log on to your assigned laptop.
Warm-Up
Warm-UpReviewing Computer Expectations and
ProceduresDrafting a Personal EssayExit Slip
By the end of class, we will draft a personal essay.
Today’s Agenda and Learning Target
You may open a browser to listen to music, if you have headphones.
Open Microsoft Word.Type a draft of your personal essay, using
your prewriting handouts.If I see you using the computer for anything
other than music or word processing, I will take your computer, and you will handwrite your draft.
Computer Expectations and Procedures
Save your document to your student account or flash drive.
Log off your computer and return it to the cart in the proper space. Make sure you plug in your computer to charge.
Exit Slip
Log on to your assigned laptop.
Warm-Up
Warm-UpRevising and Editing a Personal EssayPublishing a Personal Essay as a Blog EntryExit Slip
By the end of class, we will publish a blog entry.
Today’s Agenda and Learning Target
You may open a browser to listen to music, if you have headphones.
Open your saved draft. Read through your work as you review the rubric. Make sure to revise and edit you draft.
Remember: If I see you using the computer for anything other than music or word processing, I will take your computer, and you will handwrite your draft.
Revising and Editing a Personal Essay
Publishing a Personal Essay as a Blog Entry
Go to kidblog.org.Enter your class
code:_______________
Publishing a Personal Essay as a Blog Entry
Enter your first and last name: (e.g., Catherine Vannatter)
Password: your choice
Publishing a Personal Essay as a Blog Entry
Click on your class name.
Publishing a Personal Essay as a Blog Entry
Click on “New Post.”
Publishing a Personal Essay as a Blog Entry
Give your blog entry a title in the “Post Title” box.
Copy and paste the paragraphs from your Word document into the body of the post.
Add images as you like. When you finish, click
“Publish.”
Log off your computer and return it to the cart in the proper space. Make sure you plug in your computer to charge.
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Extra Work Day:Drafting a Personal EssayRevising and Editing a Personal EssayPublishing a Personal Essay as a Blog Entry
By the end of class, we will publish a blog entry.
Today’s Agenda and Learning Target
Log on to your assigned laptop.
Warm-Up
Warm-UpAnnotating Personal EssaysAnnotating a Peer’s Personal EssayExit Slip
By the end of class, we will annotate personal essays published online as blog entries.
Today’s Agenda and Learning Target
On a piece of paper, answer the journalist’s questions and parts of speech annotations about your blog entry:Who? AUTHOR and AUDIENCEWhat? SUBJECT/TOPICWhen and Where? CONTEXT/SITUATION/SETTINGWhy? PURPOSEHow?
3 NOUNS3 ADJECTIVES3 VERBSMOOD
Next, offer a PRAISE.Lastly, offer a POLISH.
Annotating Your Personal Essay
On a piece of paper, answer the journalist’s questions and parts of speech annotations about a peer’s blog entry:Who? AUTHOR and AUDIENCEWhat? SUBJECT/TOPICWhen and Where? CONTEXT/SITUATION/SETTINGWhy? PURPOSEHow?
3 NOUNS3 ADJECTIVES3 VERBSMOOD
Next, offer a PRAISE.Lastly, offer a POLISH.
Annotating a Peer’s Personal Essay
Log off your computer and return it to the cart in the proper space. Make sure you plug in your computer to charge.
Exit Slip