Jennifer Hall
• 7th grade English at Krueger MS, NEISD• Aerospace Magnet program – Krueger
School of Applied Technology• 5 years in current position• 10 years teaching ESL, English, Reading,
and US History at Brentwood MS, EISD grades 6, 7, and 8
Contact Information
NEISD webpage and email• http://tw.neisd.net/webpages/jhall10/index.cfm• [email protected]
Personal email and ning pages• [email protected]• http://www.classroom20.com/profile/Jennifer26• http://sanantoniowritingproject.ning.com/profile/Jen
nifer
Teaching Philosophy
• It’s unfair to students if we aren’t rigorous.• Students need help developing 21st
century skills: clear communication, critical thinking, research, and content creation.
Concerns• Monotonous writing• “Information dumps”• Assertions without
sufficient evidence in essays
• Overuse of adverbs with dialogue tags
• Use of physical details• Variety• Details without lists• Peer and self evaluation• Kinesthetic activity
Goals
Day 1Activity• Discussed body language
and acted out some emotions
Discussion• How do I know someone
is -• angry?• sad?• happy?• embarrassed?• in love?
In all of these cases, you can’t just TELL me they feel a certain way. I need evidence.
Day 1 cont.• Published example -
http://jerz.setonhill.edu/writing/creative/showing.htm
Brainstormed Strategies
• Action words• Figurative language• Dialogue• Specific details• Evidence from the senses• Imagery• Point of view
Day 3
• I gave the students a list of 10 emotions • Students each picked 4 to work with • Students did the writing (timed – 10
minutes for each) • Students posted their pieces in the room
on the appropriate posters
Extension: Response to literature
• Citing textual evidence• Discussion of theme of story• Students used the theme in writing• Use showing strategies in their writing
Extension Deliverables
• Graphic organizer• 80-100 word piece• Wordle to create word clouds and
determine key words• Photo collage from key words using flickr
photos with Creative Commons licensing
Student Writing SampleI ran outside and almost forgot my suitcase, which I grabbed on
my way out the old, apartment door. The taxi man looked annoyed as he waited in the yellow station wagon.
I checked my watch, 9:15. The southwest airline, plane number 45 would take departure in ten minutes. I thanked the taxi as I plopped myself down on the gray, fuzzy seats. “The International Airport please,” The words rushed out of my mouth so fast I was surprised he understood me.
“The traffic looks bad today, what time does your plane leave at?” He asked.
“About nine twenty five,” I waited patiently in the silent cab. When I saw the airport my hopes where high that my watch was at least three minutes early according to the airport. I opened the door and started to dash to the entrance. “Hey! HEY!! That will be $34.78!” Screamed the angered taxi man; I spun around pulled out the proper amount and practically threw it at him.
Finally, I came to the counter and handed the well groomed lady my tickets and blurted “Here you are, to Seattle please?”
“It’s hard to tell you this but, your airplane just announced their departure and they are taxing down the runway as we speak.”