Target…………Hoodlums Hostility………Frustration at crime Realism……….This could happen Exaggeration..3 hoodlums, 3 actions
Emotion……….Feel bad for the old man
Surprise………..Last two words
Aka The Ol’ Switcheroo!
"I disapprove of what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to airbrush
it on a t-shirt." - Voltaire
“Bart, a woman is like a beer.
They look good, they smell good,
and you’d step over your own mother just to get one!”
“Bart, a woman is like a beer.
They look good, they smell good,
and you’d step over your own mother just to get one!”
Set Up
Anticipation
Payoff
Like: Like an agitated, parched cat, Ryan stalked the closed doors of Prime Bar.
As: Ali caressed the American Apparel hoodie with love, as though it were an Apple device.
Than: Lindsey is more lovely than a month with three paychecks.
Try One: “Alex is as…
No, this is not a simile. Jesus people.
“I’m against picketing, but I don’t know if I should
protest it with a sign or whatever.” (17 words)
vs.“I’m against picketing, but I don’t know how to show it.”
(11 words)-Mitch Hedberg
Funny:
Twinkie Turkey Frankfurter Schmuck Chicken Kentucky
Not Funny:
Doughnut Pot Roast Sausage Idiot Rooster Maryland*
*Only funny LOOKIN’! Aw snap