Editing parragraphs
Add a sentence that explains
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After sentence 6, the author should add a sentence that explains:
Paragraph:(1) I’ve been watching the discovery channel. (2) I saw a program on the coasts of Australia. (3) It showed the beaches in Australia. (4) It also showed the wild sea life. (5) I liked the different resorts. (6) After the program I would like to visit Australia.
Answer choices:A. Why she watches
discovery channelB. the different beaches in
AustraliaC. why she liked the sea lifeD. Why she wants to visit
Australia.
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After sentence 5, the author should add a sentence that explains:
Paragraph:(1) I saw a brochure about traveling by train. (2) I saw the different places you can go in an Amtrak train. (3) I also saw that some trains have beds, (4) many times people eat on the train. (5) I would like to go on a train trip.
Answer choices:A. Why he saw a train
brochureB. Where does he wants to go
on a train tripC. why he wants to eat on a
train.D. Where can he catch a train
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After sentence 4, the author should add a sentence that explains:
Paragraph:(1) At the library, I found a boor about hiking trails. (2) I saw all the different places I can go hiking around my house. (3) there were maps with distances marked on them (4) After I read it all, I don’t think I want to go hiking.
Answer choices:A. Why he found a hiking
brochureB. Why he read it allC. Why doesn’t he want to go
hiking anymoreD. Why did he decide its time
for hiking again
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After sentence 4, the author should add a sentence that explains:
Paragraph:(1) My friend Teresa told me that she visited a person in jail. (2) Some of these prisoners will not have any Christmas there (3) It is sad that their families won’t have them at home to celebrate. (4) Prisoners can’t send Christmas gifts to their kids.
Answer choices:A. Why the friend had to visit
the jailB. Why prisoners cant have
Christmas thereC. why they can’t send
Christmas giftsD. why does she want to help
a prisoner
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After sentence 2, the author should add a sentence that explains:
Paragraph:(1) I visited a recycling company. (2) People who work there have to dress in a very protective way. (3) They sort all the recyclables that come. (4) They also throw away things that came but they might not be recyclable. (5) Some people have no idea of what should be recycled.
Answer choices:A. Why people have no idea
of what should be recycledB. Why she visited a recycling
companyC. Why people that work
there have to protect themselves
D. Why do the workers throw away things
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