Moderator’s commentary
The candidate’s narrative approach in the Explorative Study means that very low marks are achieved
across all the assessment objectives. There is an attempt to capture the register in the Creative Critical
Response but, again, there is barely any interpretation of the text itself.
Moderator’s marks
Explorative Study AO1: 3
AO2: 2
AO3: 8
AO4: 4
Creative Critical Response
AO1: 4
AO4: 3
Total 24/80
Moderator’s commentary
This is perhaps an example of a candidate whose busy engagement with interpretations by other readers is often at the expense of his / her own argument. The result, at times, is a lack of a clear argument and a sense of the candidate’s own critical skills. There is nevertheless an excellent understanding of context and of others’ critical views.
Moderator’s marks
Explorative Study AO1: 4
AO2: 6
AO3: 34
AO4: 12
Creative Critical Response
AO1: 4
AO4: 7
Total: 67/80