CONTENTS DRAFTS AND FEEDBACK
Cameron Tubb
Draft 1
Feedback
To much plain space Not enough writing Not enough colours No set layout
Draft 2
Feedback
All you have done is change the colour
To much plain space Not enough writing Not enough colours No set layout
final
Feedback
Still way to much plain space If I was you I would restart from the
beginning Poor colours No picture which is visible
NEW CONTENTS
I'm completely changing my contents page to make it simpler to read and so it looks more professional.
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This is my final contents page and I'm very pleased with the result as it looks professional and 100% better than my previous attempts.