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John Carlton’sJohn Carlton’sSimple Writing SystemSimple Writing System

The Easy Shortcut Menu To Writing EverythingYou'll Ever Need To Bring In The Big Bucks…

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Why Learn The Simple Why Learn The Simple Secrets Of Writing Copy?Secrets Of Writing Copy?

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Because…Because…Nothing Good Will Ever Nothing Good Will Ever

Happen Happen In Your BusinessIn Your Business

Until Your Sales Message Until Your Sales Message Gets WrittenGets Written

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Everything…Everything…

EmailsEmails AdsAds Website copyWebsite copy Video scriptsVideo scripts Radio spotsRadio spots SpeechesSpeeches Blogs… Blogs…

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EVERYTHINGEVERYTHING

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You can strip away every other You can strip away every other advantage they have…advantage they have…

All their wealth. All their wealth. Their staff.Their staff. Their offices.Their offices. Their Google ranking.Their Google ranking. Their product.Their product. Their reputation.Their reputation. Their computers.Their computers.

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And -- armed ONLY with the ability to And -- armed ONLY with the ability to write what is needed…write what is needed…

They can They can restorerestore their wealth, their wealth, fame and happiness in record fame and happiness in record

time.time.

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The power to fix The power to fix anyany problem, problem, conquer conquer anyany market… market…

and bring in and bring in allall the cash, notoriety the cash, notoriety and influence you desire in life.and influence you desire in life.

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Murderously bad marketing. Murderously bad marketing. No product. Bad product. Broken No product. Bad product. Broken

product. product. No website. No ad. No traffic. No No website. No ad. No traffic. No

hope. hope. Not enough customers. Not enough customers. Too many refunds Too many refunds Natural disasters Natural disasters Bankruptcy. Embezzlement. Life Bankruptcy. Embezzlement. Life

Crises. Crises.

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Too much ego. Not enough ego. Too much ego. Not enough ego. Really bad blunders. Really bad blunders. Raw stupidity. Raw stupidity. Vicious new competition that is Vicious new competition that is

smarter, has more money, bigger smarter, has more money, bigger staff, better product. staff, better product.

Not having a clue Not having a clue what to dowhat to do… or … or how to get startedhow to get started making money. making money.

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Simple secrets of writing to get Simple secrets of writing to get your message across: your message across:

Get attentionGet attention…… Tell your storyTell your story in a way that sucks in a way that sucks

the reader in…the reader in… Turn up the heatTurn up the heat on desire… on desire… … … and and persuadepersuade your prospect to your prospect to

act.act.

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Essentially…Essentially…

You You becomebecome that guy… that guy…

… … who your prospect who your prospect needsneeds you to be… you to be…

… … so he feels good about so he feels good about doingdoing what you're asking him what you're asking him

to do.to do.

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I've taught every type of I've taught every type of person you can think of person you can think of

how to do this.how to do this.

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I’ve taught…I’ve taught… Idiots… Idiots… Socially retarded geeks… Socially retarded geeks… Misfits who've been fired from every Misfits who've been fired from every

job they ever held (that includes me)… job they ever held (that includes me)… ““Verbally challenged" wannabe Verbally challenged" wannabe

entrepreneurs… entrepreneurs… And the most clueless people on the And the most clueless people on the

planet.planet.

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And I can teach And I can teach everyone in this everyone in this

room.room.

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The ONLY thing I can't The ONLY thing I can't help you solve…help you solve…

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… … is your own stubborn is your own stubborn refusalrefusal to allow success to allow success

and wealth into your and wealth into your life.life.

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1.1. As an endorsement of who I am, As an endorsement of who I am, and what I offer you.and what I offer you.

2.2. But more importantly… please pay But more importantly… please pay close attention to close attention to WHATWHAT caused caused these people -- both famous and not these people -- both famous and not so famous -- to be so happy.so famous -- to be so happy.

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It's because of It's because of

RESULTS.RESULTS.

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Craig ForteCraig ForteForte Communications, Inc.Forte Communications, Inc.

“You Simply Cannot Compete In “You Simply Cannot Compete In Today’s World Without These Skills”Today’s World Without These Skills”

"I've earned more than $28 million dollars in my own ventures as a "I've earned more than $28 million dollars in my own ventures as a real estate marketing expert, teaching more than 23,000 agents real estate marketing expert, teaching more than 23,000 agents how to create breakthrough profits in their practices. So I believe I how to create breakthrough profits in their practices. So I believe I speak with authority. speak with authority.

Over the years I've seen (literally) thousands of strategies, ideas and Over the years I've seen (literally) thousands of strategies, ideas and gimmicks for building a real estate business, but if I had to cut gimmicks for building a real estate business, but if I had to cut through the clutter and reveal the ONE thing that will guarantee through the clutter and reveal the ONE thing that will guarantee your unlimited success in real estate (or any business), it's the your unlimited success in real estate (or any business), it's the ability to write hard-hitting, persuasive sales copy. ability to write hard-hitting, persuasive sales copy.

I've been blessed to know and learn from the greatest copywriting I've been blessed to know and learn from the greatest copywriting legends over the past 30 years, and John is hands-down the best legends over the past 30 years, and John is hands-down the best copywriting teacher I've ever met. copywriting teacher I've ever met.

Not only does John know every tip and nuance you'll ever need, but Not only does John know every tip and nuance you'll ever need, but he makes mastering the craft EASY and FUN. You simply cannot he makes mastering the craft EASY and FUN. You simply cannot compete in today’s tough real estate world without these skills.compete in today’s tough real estate world without these skills.

Learning to write persuasive copy IS the key to unlimited wealth, Learning to write persuasive copy IS the key to unlimited wealth, success and happiness, and success and happiness, and there’s no one else on earth better to there’s no one else on earth better to teach you these skills than teach you these skills than John CarltonJohn Carlton.”.”

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Frank Kern“The Underachiever System”

"Just before the famous StomperNet launch, everything was in doubt. We

cornered John for advice, and in just a few minutes he provided such clarity that the fog melted away... and I was finally able

to write the pitch that brought in over $10 million in one day.

That's twice he's helped me -- long ago, when I was broke, clueless and desperate,

I somehow found John's 'Kick Ass' course... and halfway through, a calm

confidence came over me. I told my wife that everything was going to be all right, because this really made sense. When

John talks about changing your life, he's not kidding around."

Over $10 millionin one day

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Joe PolishPiranha Marketing

“You've Helped My Ads Get Wicked-Good”

“Phenomenal content. Of all the marketing, advertising and copywriting

experts I pay attention to, John Carlton is by far the most articulate and passionate

and knowledgeable (and funny). I get more value just from your hilarious, ballsy stories alone than from the serious efforts of most

other gurus. Man, you've helped my advertising get wicked-good.”

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Jim Edwards, TheNetReporter.com & author of

MiniSite CreatorIf you want to make money with sales copy,

anything John Carlton's ever written needs to be right at your fingertips. The money I've made

just from the bullets I've been able to write as a result of modeling and learning from John easily gets into the high six-figures. There's a reason people rip off John's copy: it's the best in the

business! If I had to start all over again online today, I'd only need 3 things to get back to my

current level:

1. John's copyrighting knowledge.2. An html editor. 3. A web site.

With those simple tools I could conquer any part of the Internet I set

my mind to... John's stuff is THAT good!"

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“John is the first guy I call when I have a marketing problem. His insights and

marketing prowess are unparalleled among the working advertising

experts I know... and I know them all. The money available, when you learn what insiders like John has to share, is

just insane. In my book, there is John... and no one else is even close.”

Gary Halbert

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Ken McCarthy“The System”

“I heard John at a seminar say something about writing headlines I'd never heard or read anyone else say before -- and believe me, I've been a

serious and successful student of copywriting for over ten years. The

result: I came up with a headline that crashed through all the noise in a very,

very crowded marketplace and, starting from zero, very rapidly created

a new seven figure ($1,000,000+) a year money machine that's only just

getting warmed up.”

7-FigureMoney Machine

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$4 Million And A Complete Life-Change"John, ever since we met a few years ago my life has completely changed. I'd say the amount of money my

company has made directly from what you've taught me is in the neighborhood of 4 million dollars, maybe more.

What can I say other than thanks a million and I owe you BIG time."

Lou Vukas, Internet marketer

"John Carlton is one of the best marketers in marketing HISTORY. I have

learned a ton from him... and you should soak up everything from him that you can. It will only help you

make more money from your Internet marketing efforts." John Reese, Web pioneer

Created Millions In Profit"John has created millions in profit for us. We pitted his ads and letters against big-city ad agencies, PR firms, and writers with lots of awards... and John slaughtered them all. He consistently hits 'home runs' for us -- a 20-to-1 return in profit is not unusual. He has saved our butts on several occasions." Robert Pierce, President, OHP Direct

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Tripled Response!"You know that new 'hook' you insisted I try in my sales pitch? It TRIPLED response! This translates into several hundred thousand dollars in sales over the coming year. You are on my Christmas gift list for life, dude." Lisa Wagner, California

“Your headline suggestion for one of

my web sites boosted sales by

70%! This equals an extra $3,000 every month... from ONE

simple change. Thanks.” Terry Dean, Internet

Marketing Coach, New Castle, IN

Boosted Sales

70% Online

One Tip, One New Car“On your advice, I edited my copy using your 'Action Verbs'. This killer strategy ALONE allowed me

to buy a new car (for cash) after the first campaign!” Dr. G.E. Nielsen, Wisconsin

"He doesn't just tell you how to do it... he don't just show you how to do it... he involves you so you learn his strategies, techniques, and the psychology of world-class copy." Alex Mandossian

“Worked So Good It Was Scary!”“Just finished a 1,000 trial mailing with new copy using Carlton's concepts. Raked in $22,000 the first week. It worked so good it was scary.” Dr. John M. La Tourrette, OR

50% More Orders“My average order is 50% higher (and more) since I adopted your idea. I love your outlook, and your advice cracks me up while bringing in the results.” Tom Venuto, NJ

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1,100% ROI With One Simple Idea

“I put one simple idea I learned from John into action. The result was an immediate 1,100% return

on my investment!” Bill O'Connell

"I Use This Every Time I Write For The Web"

“My highlighter ran out 6 pages into Section 7! This course is going on my A+ shelf of resources I use every time I write a

sales letter for my web sites.” Yanik Silver, Surefire Marketing

From $500 To Over $2,000 A Month

"I went from making about $500 a month from my website... to pulling down over $2,000 each

month. And it's all because of your advice on my copy. Nothing else changed." Fernando Cruz

Email List DOUBLED In 2 Months"John Carlton is the KING of Internet marketing! My

list of email names doubled over just a 2-month period using just some of his strategies." Reggie

Van Der Werff

Record Sales Week“I applied what I learned in John Carlton's course and just had a record sales week. Just wanted

to say thanks.” Kent Sayre

Info I Wanted - Not Found Anywhere Else

"This is the exact information I wanted, but couldn't find anywhere else!  You covered everything the other guru's

neglect.  I'm keeping your stuff close by." Wendy Baldwin

Free Money!“Amazing! My web site

conversion rate has nearly DOUBLED, just

from what you've taught me. And guess what? Also

following your advice, I tested a much higher

price... and the conversion rate was not affected at all. That's FREE MONEY without any extra work! You were

right, John.” Michael Norman, UK

300% Profits Online“Thanks to your critiques, my ad is a BIG winner right off the bat!

It's pulling over 300% profits online, in a hotly competitive market. We're already on the

way to seven figures, minimum.” Matt Gallant, Vancouver

An extra $20,979 in sales!"I had a massive breakthrough reading your stuff. Over the last 14 days, what you taught

me generated an extra $20,979 in sales! Thanks again." Jeff Gardner, TX (Update:

"After a full month, my take is now $70,000!")

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My MISSION…My MISSION…

… … and my joy in life…and my joy in life… Is to take people who are Is to take people who are as clueless as clueless

and lost as I once wasand lost as I once was…… … … and and empowerempower them with the ability them with the ability

to overcome ALL obstacles and to overcome ALL obstacles and problems and fears.problems and fears.

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3 main problems:3 main problems:

They are They are confusedconfused about what to do, about what to do, and this confusion freezes them up.and this confusion freezes them up.

They feel they lack the skills to write… They feel they lack the skills to write… because it's because it's so mysterious and hardso mysterious and hard. . And this freezes them up.And this freezes them up.

They are just plain They are just plain scaredscared to try to to try to write. ("Writer's block.")write. ("Writer's block.")

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And here is the truth:And here is the truth: Knowing what to do when you need Knowing what to do when you need

something written (an ad, website, email, something written (an ad, website, email, video script or whatever)… is actually video script or whatever)… is actually very very simplesimple to figure out. Once you know the to figure out. Once you know the secrets.secrets.

There is no voodoo to writing a great sales There is no voodoo to writing a great sales message. You simply have to be shown the message. You simply have to be shown the easy, step-by-step basicseasy, step-by-step basics..

Your Your fear vanishesfear vanishes as soon as you finally as soon as you finally know the steps.know the steps.

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You do not need to write "well". In fact, I have a You do not need to write "well". In fact, I have a simple tactic that allows simple tactic that allows illiterateilliterate people to write people to write killer ads. Works for ADHD types, too. killer ads. Works for ADHD types, too.

You do not need to be a native speaker. Good, You do not need to be a native speaker. Good, basic salesmanship basic salesmanship translates easilytranslates easily into every into every language on earth. language on earth.

You do You do notnot need to be successful already. This is need to be successful already. This is the FIRST skill to learn. Everything else will fall the FIRST skill to learn. Everything else will fall into place once you learn the simple basics of into place once you learn the simple basics of writing a persuasive sales message. writing a persuasive sales message.

This can work immediately, even if you're unclear This can work immediately, even if you're unclear on what you're doing… on what you're doing… as long as you follow the as long as you follow the steps.steps.

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… … this is your this is your

moment of truth.moment of truth.

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3 success stories 3 success stories

The rookieThe rookie who has zero idea of how to even begin who has zero idea of how to even begin writing what needs written. This is an EASY fix.writing what needs written. This is an EASY fix.

The business ownerThe business owner who is struggling… because who is struggling… because he's ignored writing. He's at the mercy of he's ignored writing. He's at the mercy of freelancers and others who will gobble up his freelancers and others who will gobble up his money, and still leave him vulnerable and clueless money, and still leave him vulnerable and clueless about how to create success. This is a REALLY about how to create success. This is a REALLY easy fix.easy fix.

The Player or "mostly successful" marketerThe Player or "mostly successful" marketer who who needs to help his staff writer get good. This is the needs to help his staff writer get good. This is the easiesteasiest fix of all. fix of all.

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Slide: CASE STUDY #54Slide: CASE STUDY #54The Tellman Knudson The Tellman Knudson

ChallengeChallenge Website not turning prospects into Website not turning prospects into

customers.customers. Tried "everything" for 6 months to Tried "everything" for 6 months to

increase conversion. Nothing worked.increase conversion. Nothing worked. Rookie staff writer with less than 5 Rookie staff writer with less than 5

months business experience, total.months business experience, total. Worst week in U.S. economic history.Worst week in U.S. economic history.

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““The List Building ClubThe List Building Club Lets You Lets YouStart Your Own Online Business From Scratch In Start Your Own Online Business From Scratch In

Under 30 Days! Under 30 Days! And, For a Limited Time... And, For a Limited Time...

Get A GOLD Level Membership for Get A GOLD Level Membership for FREEFREE

Dear Friend, Dear Friend, As part of a very limited marketing test, I've decided to offer As part of a very limited marketing test, I've decided to offer

unlimited access to the private GOLD level of my unlimited access to the private GOLD level of my membership site, The List Building Club... membership site, The List Building Club... for FREE! for FREE!

The way it works is simple. The way it works is simple. You pay only NOTHING todayYou pay only NOTHING today, , and you get immediate access to my private club at the and you get immediate access to my private club at the GOLD level (for people who want to make $10,000/month GOLD level (for people who want to make $10,000/month and up), AND I will personally send you 2 very special gifts and up), AND I will personally send you 2 very special gifts which I want you to keep, even if you don't stay in the club!which I want you to keep, even if you don't stay in the club!

Here's a quick look at everything you'll get Here's a quick look at everything you'll get to try out for an entire month FREE:to try out for an entire month FREE:

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Full accessFull access to The Listbuilding Club, where you can start your own to The Listbuilding Club, where you can start your own business in under 30 days! Includes access to over 75 step-by-step how-business in under 30 days! Includes access to over 75 step-by-step how-to videos, ongoing new monthly lessons, technical support, live training to videos, ongoing new monthly lessons, technical support, live training calls and more.calls and more.

Thousands of people just like youThousands of people just like you have made their dream of owning have made their dream of owning their very own Online Business come true with The Listbuilding Club. their very own Online Business come true with The Listbuilding Club. They love the step-by-step, simple video formats and our LIVE They love the step-by-step, simple video formats and our LIVE "Marathon" calls where we focus on helping you build a single part of "Marathon" calls where we focus on helping you build a single part of your system on high-speed (for example our "squeeze-a-thon" helped your system on high-speed (for example our "squeeze-a-thon" helped 300 participants put up their squeeze pages in under 24 hours!)300 participants put up their squeeze pages in under 24 hours!)

PLUS,PLUS, as an elite GOLD member of The List Building Club, you will get as an elite GOLD member of The List Building Club, you will get these exclusive one-time-only and ongoing monthly special benefits:these exclusive one-time-only and ongoing monthly special benefits:

"Gold Level Only""Gold Level Only" Listbuilding Club Handbook physical edition 50-page Listbuilding Club Handbook physical edition 50-page bound book including chapters by Tellman Knudson and his specialized bound book including chapters by Tellman Knudson and his specialized staff on everything from copywriting tips to technical shortcuts, you staff on everything from copywriting tips to technical shortcuts, you can't get this rare book anywhere else but with a Gold membership! can't get this rare book anywhere else but with a Gold membership!

"Gold Level Only""Gold Level Only" Listbuilding club newsletter chock full of special Listbuilding club newsletter chock full of special news and techniques from Tellman on how to make more money and news and techniques from Tellman on how to make more money and save time with your brand new Listbuilding business, including jump-save time with your brand new Listbuilding business, including jump-start sneak peeks at upcoming Club lessons you can't get any other start sneak peeks at upcoming Club lessons you can't get any other way! way!

"Gold Level Only""Gold Level Only" Exclusive Mindjack CD recorded by Tellman in his Exclusive Mindjack CD recorded by Tellman in his home using his legendary hypnotic triggers for getting more done and home using his legendary hypnotic triggers for getting more done and focusing like a laser; the perfect way to start your online work sessions! focusing like a laser; the perfect way to start your online work sessions!

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Try it all for FREE for 1 full month; If you like what Try it all for FREE for 1 full month; If you like what you see (and I'm sure you will), simply do nothing you see (and I'm sure you will), simply do nothing at the end of 30 days and at the end of 30 days and your membership your membership will automatically continue with no will automatically continue with no interruption at only $97/mo interruption at only $97/mo for as long as you for as long as you wish to remain in the Club. wish to remain in the Club.

If you decide you don't want to stay in the Club, just If you decide you don't want to stay in the Club, just let me know, we'll cancel for you and let me know, we'll cancel for you and you'll you'll never pay a dime more.never pay a dime more. (The Mindjack CD and (The Mindjack CD and the 50 Page Handbook are still yours to keep the 50 Page Handbook are still yours to keep forever--absolutely free). forever--absolutely free).

There are no strings attached, and there is no There are no strings attached, and there is no "catch"... "catch"... but you must act now if you want to but you must act now if you want to take advantage of this rare offer.take advantage of this rare offer.

Like I said earlier, this is a marketing test and I Like I said earlier, this is a marketing test and I don'tdon't plan to offer the GOLD level of The plan to offer the GOLD level of The List Building Club at this price forever… etc.List Building Club at this price forever… etc.

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Yuck.Yuck.

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Here's what I told him:Here's what I told him:

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Figure out your actual Big Promise (Step #13). It's NOT Figure out your actual Big Promise (Step #13). It's NOT getting a deal on membership. I don't value the getting a deal on membership. I don't value the membership yet. What appeals to me is the Quickstart membership yet. What appeals to me is the Quickstart program (get online in 24 hours with a biz)… start making program (get online in 24 hours with a biz)… start making money fast… and finding out whatever the "perfect tool" money fast… and finding out whatever the "perfect tool" is.is.

The coherent flow of your message is critical. Step 12 of The coherent flow of your message is critical. Step 12 of the checklist is always "The simple basics of a great the checklist is always "The simple basics of a great sales message" -- have that CONVERSATION with your sales message" -- have that CONVERSATION with your reader as if you were face to face. And you know he's reader as if you were face to face. And you know he's ready to RUN if you bore him, act crazy, or start to sell.ready to RUN if you bore him, act crazy, or start to sell.

Here, your squeeze has set me up to get free stuff, from Here, your squeeze has set me up to get free stuff, from Tellman. What I read is upside down, though. You push Tellman. What I read is upside down, though. You push for the membership without revealing anything for free.for the membership without revealing anything for free.

Lay it out in the simplest way possible: Lay it out in the simplest way possible: Here's who I am. Here's who I am. Here's what I've got for you. Here's what it will do Here's what I've got for you. Here's what it will do for you. Here's what you need to do right now.for you. Here's what you need to do right now.

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And here's how his new ad And here's how his new ad appeared:appeared:

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"Your Free Info Is Minutes Away From "Your Free Info Is Minutes Away From Being Sent To You… Including Your Being Sent To You… Including Your Quickstart Instant Training That Allows Quickstart Instant Training That Allows You To Set Up A Profitable Online You To Set Up A Profitable Online Business Right Away… Plus A TON Of Business Right Away… Plus A TON Of Other Amazing (And Free) Bonuses To Other Amazing (And Free) Bonuses To Help You Succeed Fast… Help You Succeed Fast…

Let's get straight on this:Let's get straight on this: I'm going to I'm going to show you -- for FREE -- how the show you -- for FREE -- how the "Perfect Tool" can quickly and easily "Perfect Tool" can quickly and easily create a create a rabidrabid following of people following of people foaming at the mouthfoaming at the mouth to snap up to snap up everything you offer… even if you've everything you offer… even if you've never sold anything before in your life!never sold anything before in your life!

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I'm Tellman Knudson, founder of the ListBuilding Club, and President / CEO of I'm Tellman Knudson, founder of the ListBuilding Club, and President / CEO of Overcome Everything, INC. In just a moment, I'll expose you to the Overcome Everything, INC. In just a moment, I'll expose you to the drop drop dead simple systemdead simple system that let me go from Less than Zero, to pulling down that let me go from Less than Zero, to pulling down over 3 Million dollars per year.over 3 Million dollars per year.

I started my online career only 3 years ago, in a I started my online career only 3 years ago, in a crampedcramped apartment that I apartment that I shared with three adult roommates, and five cats. I started out on a busted shared with three adult roommates, and five cats. I started out on a busted laptop, and a shoestring budget of 50 bucks. laptop, and a shoestring budget of 50 bucks.

Since then, I've built a Since then, I've built a multi-million dollar a year businessmulti-million dollar a year business- all due to the - all due to the discoveries I made very early on...discoveries I made very early on...Here's what I have for you today:Here's what I have for you today: What What I discovered are, basically, 2 simple secrets. First, I discovered are, basically, 2 simple secrets. First, the easy partthe easy part of building a of building a profitable online business is deciding what you want to sell… and creating a profitable online business is deciding what you want to sell… and creating a website website that does the selling for you.that does the selling for you. Seriously -- this is the easy part. (I'll Seriously -- this is the easy part. (I'll lead you through this simple process and have you online in less than 24 lead you through this simple process and have you online in less than 24 hours.)hours.)

Second:Second: The real secret to big profitsThe real secret to big profits… is in sending a … is in sending a steady streamsteady stream of eager of eager buyers buyers toto your new site. This is where nearly all online businesses fail your new site. This is where nearly all online businesses fail miserably. However, this is exactly where the "tool" I discovered comes in -- I miserably. However, this is exactly where the "tool" I discovered comes in -- I learned how to quickly and easily (learned how to quickly and easily (and inexpensivelyand inexpensively) attract ) attract hugehuge numbers numbers of visitors to your site. of visitors to your site. We Call It ListBuildingWe Call It ListBuildingAnd it's the big darn secret And it's the big darn secret behind behind ALLALL successful online businesses. successful online businesses. EspeciallyEspecially for people just getting for people just getting started. started. What this discovery does for you is What this discovery does for you is life-changinglife-changing: With my step-by-: With my step-by-step guidance, you can go from not having a step guidance, you can go from not having a clueclue what to do… to quickly what to do… to quickly getting your site up and running (ready to take orders and put money into getting your site up and running (ready to take orders and put money into your account). This includes figuring out your account). This includes figuring out what you should be selling, too. what you should be selling, too.

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And it includes all the secrets of finding customers, and keeping them coming And it includes all the secrets of finding customers, and keeping them coming at a steady, automatic pace.Getting started is so easy, I've created aat a steady, automatic pace.Getting started is so easy, I've created a

"Quickstart" program "Quickstart" program -- -- which I will which I will GIVEGIVE to you, for to you, for freefree -- that may be -- that may be all you ever need. I will also include in this free "bundle" of goodies a ton of all you ever need. I will also include in this free "bundle" of goodies a ton of

other shortcuts and step-by-step other shortcuts and step-by-step (and very SIMPLE)(and very SIMPLE) processes to keep processes to keep increasing the profits, month after monthincreasing the profits, month after month. .

Why am I offering all of this for freeWhy am I offering all of this for free?? Simple. Simple. It's a bribe It's a bribe. An ethical bribe . An ethical bribe that allows me to quickly show you just how powerful these secrets and that allows me to quickly show you just how powerful these secrets and

step-by-step processes are… … so you will be tempted to join me in step-by-step processes are… … so you will be tempted to join me in learning even more.learning even more.

You may not need anything other than this Quickstart program.You may not need anything other than this Quickstart program. However, However, I'm betting that once you see what we can do to get you started making I'm betting that once you see what we can do to get you started making

money… you'll see the enormous value in getting even more advice, input money… you'll see the enormous value in getting even more advice, input and specific tactics to continue increasing profits and continue making your and specific tactics to continue increasing profits and continue making your

business run easily and efficiently.business run easily and efficiently.

I've helped hundreds of people get started online in less than 24 hours. I've helped hundreds of people get started online in less than 24 hours.

We recently took 301 rookies who knew nothing about how to get a business We recently took 301 rookies who knew nothing about how to get a business started onlline, and got them up and running with working websites, and started onlline, and got them up and running with working websites, and

building their lists in building their lists in under 24 hoursunder 24 hours. This astonished most of them, yet for . This astonished most of them, yet for me, this is the easiest thing in the world to get going...)If having a me, this is the easiest thing in the world to get going...)If having a

profitable, easy-to-run business online sounds good to you… this will be the profitable, easy-to-run business online sounds good to you… this will be the most fun you've had making money in your life…most fun you've had making money in your life… etc. etc.

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Results:Results:

A fat A fat 99%99% increaseincrease in conversion in conversion (from 1.7% to 3.4%)… which Tellman (from 1.7% to 3.4%)… which Tellman says is an says is an extraextra $250,000 per month $250,000 per month (or way over a million extra over a (or way over a million extra over a year). (In the first week, the increase year). (In the first week, the increase was 70%... which was 70%... which jumpedjumped to 99% in to 99% in the second week.)the second week.)

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During the WORST week for During the WORST week for the economy the U.S. has the economy the U.S. has

ever experienced.ever experienced.

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But wait…But wait…

… check THIS out:… check THIS out:

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Recent Development:Recent Development: Finally Finally convinced, Tellman spent the convinced, Tellman spent the nextnext week absorbed in the Simple Writing week absorbed in the Simple Writing System… learning at his own pace, System… learning at his own pace, on his own… on his own…

… … and is now writing his own sales and is now writing his own sales messages.messages.

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Case History #13:Case History #13:

Savvy business owner.Savvy business owner. Good product, no sales.Good product, no sales. No clue what to write, or how to write No clue what to write, or how to write

it.it.

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Result:Result:

Result: Two of the steps really set his Result: Two of the steps really set his mind on fire.mind on fire.

Wrote Wrote first-everfirst-ever sales letter. sales letter. Brought in $287,000… the first week.Brought in $287,000… the first week. Created new business model worth Created new business model worth

millionsmillions..

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Rich Schefren, Strategic Profits, author of "Marketing Manifesto"

$287,000 The First Week!

"After listening to John for less than an hour, my mind caught

fire and everything fell into place. I immediately produced my first sales letter ever... and

it brought in $287,000 the first week! You can bet I seek

out his advice every time I make a major business

decision.“

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What were those two What were those two steps?steps?

Step #5: Bullets.Step #5: Bullets. And Step #10: Headlines.And Step #10: Headlines.

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Case History #69:Case History #69:

Tons of traffic.Tons of traffic. A crushing deadline -- tens of A crushing deadline -- tens of

thousands of people expecting thousands of people expecting something special in 2 days.something special in 2 days.

Nothing written. Nothing written. No clue what to No clue what to write.write.

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What I told him to do:What I told him to do:

Apply Step #12.Apply Step #12.

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Result:Result:

A few focused hours writing what A few focused hours writing what was needed…was needed…

$10 million pulled in the first DAY.$10 million pulled in the first DAY. Biggest launch in Web history.Biggest launch in Web history.

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Frank Kern“The Underachiever System”

"Just before the famous StomperNet launch, everything was in doubt. We cornered John for advice, and in just

a few minutes he provided such clarity that the fog melted away... and I was finally able to write the

pitch that brought in over $10 million in one day.

When John talks about changing your life, he's not kidding

around."

Over $10 millionin one day

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Would you like to learn Would you like to learn these steps?these steps?

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Here they are:Here they are:

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BulletsBullets

The one-two punch of emotionally-The one-two punch of emotionally-satisfying practical use… satisfying practical use…

with a little tweak of shock and with a little tweak of shock and delight… plus the occasional delight… plus the occasional

direct assault on common sense.direct assault on common sense.

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Your CredibilityYour Credibility

Establish – truthfully and forcefully but Establish – truthfully and forcefully but withoutwithout hype – the TWO SUBSETS behind why hype – the TWO SUBSETS behind why you’reyou’re

the the Go-To GuyGo-To Guy in this situation… using: in this situation… using: 1) The 1) The RATIONAL reasonsRATIONAL reasons to explain to explain WHYWHY

he bought… to his dubious spouse, nosy he bought… to his dubious spouse, nosy neighbors, and arrogant brother-in-law.neighbors, and arrogant brother-in-law.

2) The 2) The EMOTIONAL APE-BRAIN reasonsEMOTIONAL APE-BRAIN reasons that seal the deal deep inside.that seal the deal deep inside.

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Be The Be The One ThingOne Thing He He Encounters Today That Shocks Encounters Today That Shocks Him Out of His Zombie StateHim Out of His Zombie State

Attitude…Attitude… Hooks and tall tales…Hooks and tall tales… The incongruent juxtaposition of The incongruent juxtaposition of

compelling sales elements…compelling sales elements… ““Before-and-after” shockers…Before-and-after” shockers… Inside info, on the sly…Inside info, on the sly…

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The Simple Basics Of A Great The Simple Basics Of A Great Sales Message:Sales Message:

Here’s who I am…Here’s who I am… Here’s what I’ve got for you…Here’s what I’ve got for you… Here’s why it’s important for Here’s why it’s important for

your life right now…your life right now… Here’s what to do now.Here’s what to do now.

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Huge PromiseHuge PromiseWhat can you say – truthfully and without What can you say – truthfully and without

blushing – that will set up believable blushing – that will set up believable opportunity?opportunity?

(Hint: The meek shall NOT inherit (Hint: The meek shall NOT inherit the largest market share…)the largest market share…)

Fix what’s wrong…Fix what’s wrong… Eliminate fears…Eliminate fears… Fortify the sense of power and confidence Fortify the sense of power and confidence

among the powerless and unconfident.among the powerless and unconfident.

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The Greased SlideThe Greased Slide

FINALLY…FINALLY…

Have that riveting-yet-casual… Have that riveting-yet-casual… “face to face”… bar-room “face to face”… bar-room

conversation… that gooses him conversation… that gooses him OUT of his inherently-hostile OUT of his inherently-hostile

““Somnambulant Blob” state. Somnambulant Blob” state.

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Want Some Examples?Want Some Examples?

Thought you might…Thought you might…

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How Does An Out-Of-Shape 55 Year-Old Golfer,Crippled By Arthritis & 71 Lbs. Overweight, Still

Consistently Humiliate PGA Pros InHead-To-Head Matches By Hitting Every Tee Shot

Farther And Straighter Down The Fairway?

Do you think golf is a easy game? Darrell Klassen does… and he's been proving it for most of his life, using a single 2-step secret that allowed him to zoom into the top ranks of the "underground" professional golfing world… and stay on top even as his body deteriorated into a complete mess. What's more, he's now

ready to teach YOU everything he knows.It's a fascinating story worth finding out about… if you love golf.

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Who Else Wants To Learn The Secrets Of EarningAn Extra $96,485 As A Chiropractor This Year…While Working Just 24-Hours A Week (Or Less),

With Minimum Stress And Zero Debt!

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An amazingly FUN opportunity to catch up to -- and even An amazingly FUN opportunity to catch up to -- and even passpass -- everyone who’s having better sex than you are right -- everyone who’s having better sex than you are right

now… and it’s a FREE LOOK, too…now… and it’s a FREE LOOK, too…

““The Most Exciting Sex Of Your Life…The Most Exciting Sex Of Your Life…The Most Satisfying Intimacy Of The Most Satisfying Intimacy Of

Couples Who Know…”Couples Who Know…”

Life is too Life is too shortshort to miss discovering why some couples always seem to miss discovering why some couples always seem so much more “in love” (and happier) than everyone else. so much more “in love” (and happier) than everyone else.

Respected doctors and sex therapists now agree: Deep, lasting Respected doctors and sex therapists now agree: Deep, lasting closeness is nurtured in the bedroom… passionately ignited by closeness is nurtured in the bedroom… passionately ignited by

simplesimple sexual secrets (hidden from most folks) that can sexual secrets (hidden from most folks) that can transformtransform your love life almost overnight into something magical…your love life almost overnight into something magical…

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Dear Friend,Dear Friend, My name is Susan Smith. My name is Susan Smith. With your permission -- With your permission -- and with strict precautions for your privacyand with strict precautions for your privacy -- -- I’m going to send you a fascinating package of uncensored “advanced I’m going to send you a fascinating package of uncensored “advanced sex class” DVDs… sex class” DVDs… … …that have already helped tens of thousands of other “regular people” that have already helped tens of thousands of other “regular people” (of all ages) to finally enjoy the best sex of their lives.(of all ages) to finally enjoy the best sex of their lives. News of these breakthrough “learn it fast” DVDs has spread like News of these breakthrough “learn it fast” DVDs has spread like wildfirewildfire among “in the know” couples all over the world (including among “in the know” couples all over the world (including singles eagerly expecting to couple-up soon). singles eagerly expecting to couple-up soon). Why? Because this special package reveals the Why? Because this special package reveals the provenproven techniques and techniques and specific sexual secrets that not only specific sexual secrets that not only re-charge the intimacyre-charge the intimacy in a in a relationship… but also unleash relationship… but also unleash passion and sexual pleasurepassion and sexual pleasure beyondbeyond anything you’ve ever experienced before.anything you’ve ever experienced before. And guess what? For the next 21 days… And guess what? For the next 21 days… You Can Watch (And Learn) Everything…You Can Watch (And Learn) Everything… For For FREEFREE!! Here, finally, is your opportunity to discover the breathtaking sexual Here, finally, is your opportunity to discover the breathtaking sexual joy and heart-pounding closeness available joy and heart-pounding closeness available onlyonly to those couples who to those couples who use the secret skills, know-how and special “tricks” that allow both men use the secret skills, know-how and special “tricks” that allow both men and women to…and women to………Guarantee a mind-blowing climax for your partner every time you Guarantee a mind-blowing climax for your partner every time you make love… make love… ……Re-kindle “teenage level” passion and healthy curiosity in your Re-kindle “teenage level” passion and healthy curiosity in your relationship (no matter how long you’ve been together)… and…relationship (no matter how long you’ve been together)… and…

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Attention beginning and struggling guitarists!Attention beginning and struggling guitarists!

““The Music Industry’s ‘Secret Weapon’ The Music Industry’s ‘Secret Weapon’ Guitar Wizard Finally Reveals His Guitar Wizard Finally Reveals His

Embarrassingly-Easy Embarrassingly-Easy Short-CutsShort-Cuts That That Can Take Can Take AnyoneAnyone From Raw Rookie To From Raw Rookie To

Stage-Ready ‘Get All The Girls’ Stage-Ready ‘Get All The Girls’ Guitarist As Fast As Humanly Possible!”Guitarist As Fast As Humanly Possible!”

When this famous teacher talks, people who wanna rock When this famous teacher talks, people who wanna rock pay attentionpay attention -- -- and he’s staking his industry-wide reputation on the fact that he can and he’s staking his industry-wide reputation on the fact that he can

take someone with NO previous skills, NO musical experience, and NO take someone with NO previous skills, NO musical experience, and NO clue how to even tune a guitar… and have you ready to play and jam clue how to even tune a guitar… and have you ready to play and jam

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Mysterious Arizona “Human Mysterious Arizona “Human Computer” Humiliates Wall Computer” Humiliates Wall Street “Experts” For 21Street “Experts” For 21stst

Consecutive Year!Consecutive Year!

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World Famous Street Fighter World Famous Street Fighter Will Give You AWill Give You A

FREE GUN…FREE GUN…Just To Prove He Can Take It Just To Prove He Can Take It Away From You Bare-Handed Away From You Bare-Handed

As Easy As Candy From A As Easy As Candy From A Baby!Baby!

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In Just 22 Minutes and 17 Seconds, In Just 22 Minutes and 17 Seconds, You Can Learn For FREE What 400 You Can Learn For FREE What 400 Privileged ‘Elite’ Golfers Will Pay Privileged ‘Elite’ Golfers Will Pay Thousands Of Dollars To See This Thousands Of Dollars To See This Year… And NO Other Golfers Will Year… And NO Other Golfers Will

Ever Hear About It!Ever Hear About It!

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How You Can Profit From TheComing Stock Market Crash andFinancial Bloodbath Caused ByCash-Rich Drug Dealers and

Other Criminal Scum!

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“How To Create A Damn Good Money-Making Ad For Your Business

…In Just 9 Minutes.”

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How To Turn Your Ability To String Two Sentences Together

Into A Freelance Copywriting Career That -- if you’ll just follow the simple “map”

I’ve laid out for you -- Can Easily Earn You

Over $100,000 Your First Year!

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Give Me Just ONE HOUR Of Give Me Just ONE HOUR Of Your Time… And I Guarantee Your Time… And I Guarantee

You Will NEVER Shoot Over 90 You Will NEVER Shoot Over 90 Again! Again!

And If I’m Wrong… I’ll Promptly And If I’m Wrong… I’ll Promptly Send You This Crisp New $50 Send You This Crisp New $50

Bill…Bill…No Questions Asked!No Questions Asked!

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“How A Skinny Little Golf Genius FromCalifornia Accidentally Started Hitting 425-Yard Tee Shots!”

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Amazing Secret Discovered Amazing Secret Discovered By One-Legged Golfer Adds By One-Legged Golfer Adds

50 Yards To Your Drives, 50 Yards To Your Drives, Eliminates Hooks and Eliminates Hooks and

Slices… And Can Slash Up Slices… And Can Slash Up To 10 Strokes From Your To 10 Strokes From Your

GameGameAlmost Overnight!Almost Overnight!

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What Women Secretly Wish What Women Secretly Wish You Knew About Sex…You Knew About Sex…

But will never, ever tell you to But will never, ever tell you to your face!your face!

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““Hey, Guys! Watch This…Hey, Guys! Watch This…ErnestoErnesto

Is Gonna Tee Off!”Is Gonna Tee Off!”

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BulletsBullets

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The amazing “Lazy Businessman’s 3-Step Shortcut” to creating The amazing “Lazy Businessman’s 3-Step Shortcut” to creating youryour first world-class ad.first world-class ad. (How to (How to quicklyquickly turn your hidden salesmanship skills turn your hidden salesmanship skills into into white-hot sales copywhite-hot sales copy... even if you flunked English!)... even if you flunked English!)

How to use the ancient “Function of Seduction” secrets in your How to use the ancient “Function of Seduction” secrets in your advertising to make people advertising to make people desperatedesperate to open their wallets and give to open their wallets and give you money! you money! (It’s the amazing “lost” secret of (It’s the amazing “lost” secret of allall great salesmen and all great salesmen and all intensely-successful wealth-building marketing.)intensely-successful wealth-building marketing.)

How to find the How to find the head-turning hookhead-turning hook that reels customers into your ad like that reels customers into your ad like crazy! (I’ll show you how to be the crazy! (I’ll show you how to be the one thing your prospect reads todayone thing your prospect reads today that that gets his blood pumping and makes him gets his blood pumping and makes him cravecrave what you’re selling. what you’re selling. His His adrenaline levels won’t go down until he’s sent you money.)adrenaline levels won’t go down until he’s sent you money.)

How to nail the How to nail the passionate “sweet spot”passionate “sweet spot” of your customer with master- of your customer with master-class sales copy! (You’ll gain class sales copy! (You’ll gain instant trust instant trust because he feels you’re “just like because he feels you’re “just like family”.)family”.)

The one envelope that The one envelope that no one in the history of civilization has ever no one in the history of civilization has ever NOT openedNOT opened!!

How to write a How to write a killer headlinekiller headline that that stops your intended audience cold! stops your intended audience cold! (Find (Find the right “trigger” words that will pinch your reader on the ass and the right “trigger” words that will pinch your reader on the ass and forceforce her her to drop everything to read your ad.)to drop everything to read your ad.)

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Why your fortune depends on some basic “street savvy”... and Why your fortune depends on some basic “street savvy”... and how to get it how to get it quicklyquickly even if you’ve led the most boring life in even if you’ve led the most boring life in town. (A unique secret to turning town. (A unique secret to turning your overlooked personalityyour overlooked personality and the way people and the way people actually talk to each otheractually talk to each other into huge piles of into huge piles of cash!)cash!)

Very simple tactic to Very simple tactic to double your profits overnight!double your profits overnight! (An (An astonishingly easy technique well-used by smart businessmen... astonishingly easy technique well-used by smart businessmen... but but ignoredignored by 99% of other marketers!) by 99% of other marketers!)

How to close “high ticket” deals for obscenely-large How to close “high ticket” deals for obscenely-large amounts of moneyamounts of money -- even in an ad where your prospect -- even in an ad where your prospect can’t can’t see or hold your product!see or hold your product!

11 11 provenproven examples of successful direct response examples of successful direct response concepts you can use immediatelyconcepts you can use immediately (no matter what business (no matter what business you’re in)... you’re in)... plus a Proven Template for your own mega-pulling plus a Proven Template for your own mega-pulling sales letter!sales letter! (An astonishing “how to do it yourself” (An astonishing “how to do it yourself” shortcut shortcut mapmap.).)

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How to create How to create your own perfect productyour own perfect product over a short over a short weekendweekend... so you can start earning your fortune ... so you can start earning your fortune even if you even if you don’t have a real business or anything to sell yet!don’t have a real business or anything to sell yet!

The cash-multiplying secret of “Operation Moneysuck”!The cash-multiplying secret of “Operation Moneysuck”! (You can (You can skipskip going to college to get a master’s degree in business going to college to get a master’s degree in business -- here’s -- here’s allall you need to know, in a nice tidy 3-pages. The secret of you need to know, in a nice tidy 3-pages. The secret of constant income and successconstant income and success that won’t quit.) that won’t quit.)

A quickie “Idiot’s Guide” to consumer psychology!A quickie “Idiot’s Guide” to consumer psychology! ( (InstantlyInstantly understand exactly what makes your customer tick... and understand exactly what makes your customer tick... and learn learn how to tickle his “consumer hot buttons” to the point of how to tickle his “consumer hot buttons” to the point of frenzyfrenzy.).)

How to sell How to sell yourselfyourself! (Yes, these ! (Yes, these over-the-topover-the-top salesmanship salesmanship secrets will change every aspect of your life, no matter secrets will change every aspect of your life, no matter whatwhat you you need -- be it love, money, respect or a fresh start.)need -- be it love, money, respect or a fresh start.)

And... And... The mysterious force behind every dollar bill in the The mysterious force behind every dollar bill in the universe that can hook you into an almost universe that can hook you into an almost magicalmagical stream stream of cash-flow! of cash-flow! (Even conservative, prominent and (Even conservative, prominent and well-knownwell-known business owners use this spooky tactic. It’s the biggest “x-factor” business owners use this spooky tactic. It’s the biggest “x-factor” in rapid success, completely in rapid success, completely hiddenhidden from most people.) from most people.)

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How to hit ALL of her “long overdue” hot buttons… at the How to hit ALL of her “long overdue” hot buttons… at the exactexact right moment. right moment. (And finally explore NEW spots of intense (And finally explore NEW spots of intense titillation she never suspected she had!)titillation she never suspected she had!)

How to How to destroydestroy your guy with the best sex he’s ever your guy with the best sex he’s ever received. received. (He’ll be your slave for life, grateful and super-eager to (He’ll be your slave for life, grateful and super-eager to return the favor!)return the favor!)

The simple decision smart women make that instantly The simple decision smart women make that instantly eliminates eliminates any worry over “making it happen” in bedany worry over “making it happen” in bed (especially for him). (especially for him). The result: Better sex, more The result: Better sex, more funfun sex… and “deep sigh” orgasms for sex… and “deep sigh” orgasms for bothboth partners. partners.

And guys -- once you understand how every woman has slightly And guys -- once you understand how every woman has slightly different “orgasm triggers” (which you can different “orgasm triggers” (which you can finallyfinally easily discover)… easily discover)…

The “The “Customized MagicCustomized Magic” technique that allows any man to ” technique that allows any man to become THE expert on sex with any specific woman. You’ll know her become THE expert on sex with any specific woman. You’ll know her deepest desires and most sensitive shiver-inducing areas deepest desires and most sensitive shiver-inducing areas better better than she knows them herself! than she knows them herself!

Are your sexual needs “normal”?Are your sexual needs “normal”? The answer may The answer may shock the shock the heck out of youheck out of you……

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Learn the shortcut secrets of Learn the shortcut secrets of instantlyinstantly playing 99% of all rock, playing 99% of all rock, hard rock and new wave tunes out there. (Most songs are hard rock and new wave tunes out there. (Most songs are stunninglystunningly simple, once you know the pro-level simple, once you know the pro-level trickstricks.).)

How to How to forceforce your hands to start ripping out your hands to start ripping out killer riffs killer riffs -- -- withoutwithout any of the boring practice other teachers insist on! (Proven secrets any of the boring practice other teachers insist on! (Proven secrets that astonish even veteran players.)that astonish even veteran players.)

SkipSkip years of frustration by learning the ONE power chord used by years of frustration by learning the ONE power chord used by most hard rock and metal guitarists! most hard rock and metal guitarists! (In 2 minutes, using 2 (In 2 minutes, using 2 fingers, you’ll know how to play fingers, you’ll know how to play over 200 rock songs!)over 200 rock songs!)

Move like Move like lightninglightning through the 3 stages of guitar mastery: From through the 3 stages of guitar mastery: From “no clue at all” to “this is “no clue at all” to “this is easyeasy” in just a few short hours… and ” in just a few short hours… and then on through “impress all your friends to the point you then on through “impress all your friends to the point you scarescare them”, straight to “ready for the stage”. (You’ll be jamming with them”, straight to “ready for the stage”. (You’ll be jamming with other musicians other musicians before other rookies have even learned their first before other rookies have even learned their first song!)song!)

InstantlyInstantly learn the “insider” techniques behind Nirvana, Led learn the “insider” techniques behind Nirvana, Led Zepplin, Bink 182, The Darkness, and Ozzy Osbourne tunes (just to Zepplin, Bink 182, The Darkness, and Ozzy Osbourne tunes (just to name a few) -- super-popular stuff that will give you smoking name a few) -- super-popular stuff that will give you smoking “audience appeal” “audience appeal” right off the bat!right off the bat!

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TurbulenceTurbulence

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“The 7 Reasons Attractive WomenChoose Other Men Over You”

… and what to do about it, today…

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You gotta HURRY, though. Like I said, I have a package here for you. You gotta HURRY, though. Like I said, I have a package here for you. (They’re DVDs, but you can get videos instead just as easy.)(They’re DVDs, but you can get videos instead just as easy.)

If we hear from you in the next 11 days, your package will be rushed to you If we hear from you in the next 11 days, your package will be rushed to you (by Federal Express Ground, if you’re in the States). And, once you have your (by Federal Express Ground, if you’re in the States). And, once you have your package, you will have a full year to decide if you want to keep it, or send it package, you will have a full year to decide if you want to keep it, or send it back for a full refund. No hassles. Your word is all we need. The staff has back for a full refund. No hassles. Your word is all we need. The staff has orders to treat you with total respect and to honor your word at all times.orders to treat you with total respect and to honor your word at all times.

This is a special privilege I’m offering ONLY to guys like you on our This is a special privilege I’m offering ONLY to guys like you on our “Hot List”… and ONLY in the order you are on that list.“Hot List”… and ONLY in the order you are on that list. By getting this By getting this letter, you have earned a spot up the list, so there’s a package here for you.letter, you have earned a spot up the list, so there’s a package here for you.If you don’t want it, do nothing… and we’ll take your name off the package, If you don’t want it, do nothing… and we’ll take your name off the package, and send it to the guy below you on the list.and send it to the guy below you on the list.

You probably won’t get another chance at seeing what Gregg has, though. You probably won’t get another chance at seeing what Gregg has, though. He is, after all, still the best-kept secret weapon in golf. If his pro clients start He is, after all, still the best-kept secret weapon in golf. If his pro clients start to protest too much, he will quickly pull the plug on this offer.to protest too much, he will quickly pull the plug on this offer.

So call right now, while you’re thinking about it. I don’t care if you’re in the So call right now, while you’re thinking about it. I don’t care if you’re in the middle of your golfing season, or just dreaming about your first round when middle of your golfing season, or just dreaming about your first round when vacation finally comes. Doesn’t matter. Just watch what Gregg reveals… and vacation finally comes. Doesn’t matter. Just watch what Gregg reveals… and then go play the best golf of your life.then go play the best golf of your life.

It really is that simple.It really is that simple.

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Don’t believe me? Fine. Don’t believe me? Fine. Here’s my guarantee:Here’s my guarantee: Check it out for yourself. If you don’t agree Check it out for yourself. If you don’t agree this is THE most vicious and simple-to-master this is THE most vicious and simple-to-master fighting system you’ve fighting system you’ve everever experienced… then experienced… then I’ll give you I’ll give you $10 from my own pocket!$10 from my own pocket!

But you must act FAST… because once the But you must act FAST… because once the military learns it allowed this stuff to leak into military learns it allowed this stuff to leak into civilian hands, you will never hear about it civilian hands, you will never hear about it again… again…

Plus, I’ve arranged it so you can see Plus, I’ve arranged it so you can see everything for everything for FREEFREE if you choose… if you choose…

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(Dateline: Hollywood, CA) If you’ve ever (Dateline: Hollywood, CA) If you’ve ever dreamed of becoming the kind of bass dreamed of becoming the kind of bass player who player who scaresscares other musicians with other musicians with your skills and ability to drive the beat… your skills and ability to drive the beat… this will be the most exciting message this will be the most exciting message you ever read.you ever read.

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The Greased SlideThe Greased Slide

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It’s so easy you’ll be It’s so easy you’ll be laughinglaughing after every explosive drive! This after every explosive drive! This brilliant new breakthrough by scientific “golf geeks” reveals brilliant new breakthrough by scientific “golf geeks” reveals

a breathtakingly simple and super-a breathtakingly simple and super-fastfast way for you to way for you to instantly “trick” your swing to tap the hidden payload of instantly “trick” your swing to tap the hidden payload of

raw power you’ve been raw power you’ve been ignoringignoring your entire life! But hey -- your entire life! But hey -- don’t believe don’t believe meme… because you can check it out for FREE … because you can check it out for FREE

yourself…yourself…Hi Joe,Hi Joe,

Well, Well, sciencescience has finally come to golf. has finally come to golf.Took ‘em long enough. I mean, you can only waste your time on Took ‘em long enough. I mean, you can only waste your time on projects like landing on Mars and curing baldness for so long, before projects like landing on Mars and curing baldness for so long, before you decide you have to pay some attention to something really you decide you have to pay some attention to something really seriousserious. .

Like golf.Like golf.And I gotta tell you -- you will be And I gotta tell you -- you will be astonished and overjoyedastonished and overjoyed at what at what science has discovered.science has discovered.Because, for essentially lazy guys like you and me, it simply means Because, for essentially lazy guys like you and me, it simply means we can finally enjoy hitting the longest and straightest tee shots of we can finally enjoy hitting the longest and straightest tee shots of our lives… our lives… without even trying.without even trying. In fact… if you’ll just give the science tricks In fact… if you’ll just give the science tricks one short glanceone short glance… I … I can can guaranteeguarantee it will turn you into a driving MONSTER. Immediately. it will turn you into a driving MONSTER. Immediately. And without changing anything essential in your current And without changing anything essential in your current swing.swing.

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Magic vs. RealityMagic vs. Reality

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States of AwarenessStates of Awareness

White:White: Total zombie Total zombie Yellow:Yellow: Selective attention Selective attention Red:Red: Hyper aware Hyper aware Black:Black: Kill everything that Kill everything that

movesmoves

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Are you ready to take this Are you ready to take this to the next logical (and to the next logical (and

profitable) level?profitable) level?

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Your Opportunity Today:Your Opportunity Today: The Shortcut Guide To Writing The Shortcut Guide To Writing Everything You Need Written:Everything You Need Written:

" The Simple Writing " The Simple Writing

System."System."

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Here's what you get:Here's what you get:

The foundation of the Simple Writing The foundation of the Simple Writing System is the 17-point checklist I have System is the 17-point checklist I have used my entire career to write fortune-used my entire career to write fortune-making sales messages, over and over making sales messages, over and over again.again.

Yes, like clockwork.Yes, like clockwork. Because that checklist is a Because that checklist is a SYSTEMSYSTEM. .

Simple to follow, easy to put into use.Simple to follow, easy to put into use. Killer results.Killer results.

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Here's a taste:Here's a taste:

How to use simple, obvious "street level salesmanship" (the How to use simple, obvious "street level salesmanship" (the oldest and easiest to understand psychology in the world) oldest and easiest to understand psychology in the world) to quickly figure out what you need to say to get your to quickly figure out what you need to say to get your prospect's undivided (and almost prospect's undivided (and almost shockedshocked) attention. And ) attention. And "hook" him so thoroughly, "hook" him so thoroughly, he won't be able to sleep he won't be able to sleep until he engages with you, on your terms.until he engages with you, on your terms.

How to determine How to determine where you "fit into" your marketwhere you "fit into" your market… so you … so you piss off your competitors as you zoom by them, and know piss off your competitors as you zoom by them, and know the precise path to dominating any niche (no matter where the precise path to dominating any niche (no matter where your business is languishing now).your business is languishing now).

How to use the simplest storytelling secrets to make sure How to use the simplest storytelling secrets to make sure you are never at a loss of what to write to your marketyou are never at a loss of what to write to your market, , whenever you have something to sell to them. (whenever you have something to sell to them. (This tactic This tactic ensures that you never suffer from "writers block" ensures that you never suffer from "writers block" again.again.))

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More…More… How to get other people to do your bragging for youHow to get other people to do your bragging for you

(which they will do eagerly and with passion, once you know (which they will do eagerly and with passion, once you know the secret). This means you'll never have to blush when you the secret). This means you'll never have to blush when you need to make it clear that you're the guy everyone should be need to make it clear that you're the guy everyone should be buying from…buying from…

How to quickly map out your most profit-efficient "sales How to quickly map out your most profit-efficient "sales funnel",funnel", so prospects can become paying customers so prospects can become paying customers with the with the least resistance possible.least resistance possible. (You may, in fact, currently be (You may, in fact, currently be murdering sales by making it difficult for people to buy from murdering sales by making it difficult for people to buy from you. Most marketers on the way down commit this blunder, you. Most marketers on the way down commit this blunder, you know…)you know…)

How to finally understand exactly what it IS about you and How to finally understand exactly what it IS about you and your business that is (or should be) so darned attractive to your business that is (or should be) so darned attractive to people looking for what you offer.people looking for what you offer. (This step, alone, is the (This step, alone, is the difference between the heartbreak of dismal results, and the difference between the heartbreak of dismal results, and the glory of glory of turning on the cash spigotturning on the cash spigot.).)

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And it doesn't matter how "hip" And it doesn't matter how "hip" or successful you are right or successful you are right

now.now.I do not care if you are…I do not care if you are… A complete rookie with A complete rookie with zerozero business business

experience…experience… A freshly-minted entrepreneur A freshly-minted entrepreneur

strugglingstruggling at your kitchen table… at your kitchen table… Or an established business owner Or an established business owner

who finally got fed up with the who finally got fed up with the heartbreak (and empty bank heartbreak (and empty bank accounts) that come from marketing accounts) that come from marketing that that doesn't work.doesn't work.

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In this home study course…In this home study course…

You learn the de-mystified You learn the de-mystified "voodoo" "voodoo" behindbehind the stuff that the stuff that worksworks……

You learn specific ways to You learn specific ways to make make it work for YOUit work for YOU… and…… and…

You actually You actually PUT THESE SECRETS PUT THESE SECRETS INTO ACTION!INTO ACTION!

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"John, I've been waiting 15 years for "John, I've been waiting 15 years for you to reveal this. you to reveal this. This really is the This really is the missing link to great sales copy.missing link to great sales copy. And And yet… it's so straightforward and yet… it's so straightforward and simple. Astonishing.“simple. Astonishing.“

David DeutschDavid Deutsch (“A List” copywriter (“A List” copywriter with 6 current controls for Boardroom) with 6 current controls for Boardroom)

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"Up until that day Carlton told me "Up until that day Carlton told me about this, I thought 'It about this, I thought 'It can'tcan't be that be that simple'. But you don't argue with simple'. But you don't argue with this guy. When he was through, I this guy. When he was through, I finally got it. finally got it. And the tactic works And the tactic works every single time."every single time."

Frank KernFrank Kern (“Mass Control”) (“Mass Control”)