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What are the 5 Basic Brush Strokes?
1- Absolute- Consists of a noun and an - ing word (also known as a participle). Usually,
you can add one or two absolute brush strokes to the beginning or end of a
sentence. Adding them to the middle makes them lose their power.
2- Appositive- Using it is like capturing the same subject with images from two different
perspectives. After a noun (or noun phrase) in a basic sentence, you can
add another noun, set it off with commas, and paint a second image in the
mind of the reader.
3- Participle- It is similar to the absolute, but without the noun. It is an - ing word (or an
- ing phrase) tagged onto the beginning or end of a sentence.
4- Adjectives
Out-of-Order-When two consecutive adjectives are positioned after the noun.
5- Action Verb- Refrain from using forms of the verb to be. When you see them, replace
them with brush strokes or action verbs. To be verbs include: is, was, are
and other forms of the verb to be).
Example
Core Sentence: The elephant charged the lions.
1- Adding an Absolute Brush Stroke
Feet stomping, ears flapping, the elephant charged the lions.
2- Adding an Appositive Brush Stroke
The elephant, an angry 1200- pound beast, charged the lions.
3- Adding a Participle Brush Stroke
Roaring a loud warning screech, the elephant charged the lions.
4- Adding an Adjectives Out-of-Order Brush Stroke
The angry elephant, monstrous and fierce, charged the lions.
5- Adding an Action Verb Brush Stroke
The elephant attacked the lions.