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WALK

ING

TALK

ING

TEXTS:

COLU

MN P

LANNER

For

EC

/Primar

y Unit

of W

ork

Title:

Th

e W

ind

Blew

Ye

ar/C

lass

gro

up:

Year

Thr

ee

Dat

e:

Mar

ch 2

006

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WALKING TALKING TEXTS PLANNING A Unit of WORK incorporating the NTCF

• Choose a book • Analyse the text for the language items (sheet) • Evaluate the book's suitability for the class, given what you now know about the

language in the book as well as the assessment data on the learner group. If the language is too hard or too easy, begin the process again with another book.

• Decide on two or three of these language items to concentrate on for the unit. These will become language outcomes - Locate linguistic outcomes in the NTCF on page 103 in the �ESL Broad Outcomes�, under Linguistic structures and features

• Work through the Framework for developing Assessment tasks for the Learning Area

Studies sheet. You need to - Brainstorm activities linked to the concepts/content in the book, to do with students

in the curriculum Learning Area. - Categorise the brainstormed activities into curriculum areas and culture areas - Go to the NTCF and locate outcomes from Learning Areas for this unit of work and

for the levels of students in your class - Write down the learning outcomes for each of the activities you have identified

which link to the levels of the students in your class, for the curriculum areas identified

- Write assessment tasks directly linked to the outcomes targeted and an rubric for each task

• Fill in the column planner with the brainstormed activities for the curriculum areas • Write the outcomes in your program • Go ahead and plan the rest of the activities and exercises in the column planner.

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LA

NG

UA

GE

AN

ALY

SIS

The

gram

mat

ical

item

s are

thos

e th

at n

eed

to b

e ex

plic

itly

taug

ht a

t thi

s lev

el.

Te

nsep

ast s

impl

e p

62/6

3 Ex

ampl

es: i

rreg

ular

Te

nsep

ast c

ontin

uous

p 6

2/63

Ex

ampl

es: K

ept

Tens

epre

sent

con

tinuo

us p

61/

63

Exam

ples

: flu

tterin

g Te

nse

Exam

ples

:

Tens

e

Ex

ampl

es:

Te

nse

Exam

ples

:

VER

B T

YPES

(p.5

4)

Sent

ence

form

(p 8

7 �

90)

Sim

ple,

com

poun

d,

com

plex

Sen

tenc

es

(p 9

3/94

) Si

mpl

e se

nten

ces

Com

poun

d jo

ined

by

�and

� Tw

o co

mpl

ex

sent

ence

s �as

if it

ha

dn�t

had

enou

gh�/

then

�..

Pers

on (p

48)

Th

ird

(spo

ken

abou

t) Ex

ampl

es: T

he w

ind

- it

Exam

ples

:

Exam

ples

:

Neg

ativ

e fo

rms (

p.67

) no

t con

tent

no

t sat

isfie

d di

dn�t

hadn

�t in

stea

d

Pron

ouns

/pro

noun

refe

renc

e (p

48

� 52

) Pe

rson

al

Subj

ect

It (th

e w

ind)

Pers

onal

O

bjec

t It

(kite

s, sh

irts,

hank

y,

wig

)

Poss

essi

ve

S O

ther

Re

fere

nce

That

(to

ok a

ha

t)

Re

lativ

e pr

onou

ns

Th

em

(sca

rves

, ev

eryt

hing

)

Que

stio

n pr

onou

ns

Poin

ting

word

s

Prep

ositi

ons/p

repo

sitio

nal p

hras

es (p

74)

Fr

om

Insi

de o

ut

Up

Into

R

ound

up

ther

e O

ut

Upw

ard

to th

e sk

y U

p, u

p, u

p U

p it

rose

O

n To

A

way

to se

a

Ellip

sis

Expr

essi

ons o

f qua

lity

(adj

ectiv

als p

29;

adv

erbi

als p

73)

B

ack

Up

(mix

ed th

em u

p; sw

ept i

t up)

Th

rew

them

(dow

n)

Insi

de o

ut (u

mbr

ella

) Q

uick

ly

Littl

e C

onte

nt

Satis

fied

Spin

ning

roun

d Le

ft ou

t to

dry

(shi

rt)

Upw

ard

Judg

e�s (

head

) Po

stm

an�s

(let

ters

) So

har

d Q

uick

ly

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WALK

ING

TALK

ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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roni

c ve

rsio

n 01

06: F

ran

Mur

ray

2004

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W

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ng T

alki

ng T

exts

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umn

Plan

ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

- 4 -

Strip

ed

New

O

ther

Ti

red

(win

d)

Expr

essi

ons o

f qua

ntity

(a

djec

tival

s p 2

9; a

dver

bial

s p 7

3)

En

ough

A

Pl

ural

�s�

Twin

s Th

em

Tim

e m

arke

rs/te

mpo

ral

wor

ds (p

76)

Qui

ckly

St

ill n

ot

Kep

t it s

pinn

ing

Then

Poss

essi

ve fo

rms(

p51,

p32

)s

Con

junc

tions

(p 9

6)

As

if A

nd

Then

,

Nou

ns (p

19-2

6)

Um

brel

la, K

ite, H

anky

, Wig

, Jud

ge, P

ostm

an, L

ette

rs, F

lag,

Pol

e, S

carv

es

Gen

re(E

xplo

ring

How

Tex

ts W

ork

B.D

eriw

iank

a)

Nar

rativ

e O

rient

atio

n �

the

win

d bl

ew

Serie

s of c

ompl

icat

ions

��

R

esol

utio

n w

ith a

twist

� m

esse

d up

bel

ongi

ngs

Dec

ide

on tw

o or

thre

e of

the

abov

e la

ngua

ge �b

oxes

� to

focu

s on

for t

he d

urat

ion

of th

is u

nit o

f wor

k.

This

cho

ice

will

be

mad

e on

the

asse

ssm

ent e

vide

nce

of th

e le

arne

r gro

up. F

or e

xam

ple,

whi

ch g

ram

mat

ical

item

s of E

nglis

h pr

esen

t pro

blem

s for

mos

t of y

our l

earn

er g

roup

at t

he

mom

ent?

Doe

s thi

s tex

t pro

vide

a ri

ch so

urce

of t

his a

spec

t of g

ram

mar

to fa

cilit

ate

the

teac

hing

?

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WALK

ING

TALK

ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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lect

roni

c ve

rsio

n 01

06: F

ran

Mur

ray

2004

.

W

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ng T

exts

: Col

umn

Plan

ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

- 5 -

Inte

r dis

cipl

inar

y C

URR

ICU

LUM

OU

TCO

MES

N

ot a

ll cu

rric

ulum

are

as w

ill b

e ap

prop

riate

as L

earn

ing

Are

a ta

sks

for e

ach

text

. D

ecid

e to

use

the

curr

icul

um a

rea

that

has

an

obvi

ous l

ink

to th

e co

ncep

ts a

nd su

bjec

t mat

ter o

f the

text

a

nd, w

hich

cle

arly

link

s to

a cu

rric

ulum

out

com

e fo

r the

app

ropr

iate

yea

r lev

el o

f the

lear

ner g

roup

. TH

E C

HO

ICE

OF

TEX

T IS

BA

SED

ON

TH

E L

ANG

UA

GE

IN T

HE

TE

XT.

TH

E C

OM

PLEX

ITY

OF

THE

LAN

GU

AG

E A

ND

ITS

APP

RO

PRIA

TEN

ESS

FO

R T

HE

PAR

TIC

ULA

R G

RO

UP

OF

STU

DEN

TS D

ETER

MIN

ED B

Y P

REV

IOU

S ST

UD

ENT

ASS

ESSM

ENT.

TE

XTS

SH

OU

LD N

OT

BE

CH

OSE

N F

OR

TH

EIR

CU

RR

ICU

LUM

�CO

VE

RA

GE

� OR

LIN

KS

FIR

ST, B

UT

RA

THER

AFT

ER T

HE

CH

OIC

E H

AS

BEE

N M

AK

E O

N L

AN

GU

AG

E R

ELEV

AN

CE.

A G

ENER

AL

RU

LE T

O G

O B

Y, I

S TO

CH

OO

SE A

TEX

T IN

WH

ICH

TH

E LA

NG

UA

GE

IS

SLIG

HTL

Y H

IGH

ER T

HA

N T

HE

HIG

HES

T A

CH

IEV

ING

LEA

RN

ER IN

TH

E G

RO

UP

CA

N A

CC

ESS

IND

EPEN

DEN

TLY

.

ESL

LEV

EL

OU

TCO

MES

Li

steni

ng 3

.1-3

.4; S

peak

ing

3.1-

3.4

Rea

ding

2.1

-2.4

W

ritin

g 2.

1 �

2.4

EN

GLI

SH

BA

ND

/LEV

EL

O

UTC

OM

ES

C

URR

ICU

LUM

LEA

RNIN

G A

REAS

SC

IEN

CE

BAN

D/L

EVEL

Wor

king

Sci

entif

ical

ly 2

.1; C

once

pts a

nd C

onte

xts 2

.4

OU

TCO

ME

M

ATH

S

BAN

D/L

EVEL

MD

S 2

.1;

2.4

Ch

an

ce; 2.5

Data

Sen

se

OU

TCO

ME

HEA

LTH

/PH

YSIC

AL

EDU

CA

TIO

N

BAN

D/L

EVEL

OU

TCO

ME

SO

CIA

L ED

UC

ATI

ON

BAN

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EVEL

OU

TCO

ME

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WALK

ING

TALK

ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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c ve

rsio

n 01

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ran

Mur

ray

2004

.

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alki

ng T

alki

ng T

exts

: Col

umn

Plan

ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

- 6 -

THE

ART

S

BAN

D/L

EVEL

OU

TCO

ME

TE

CH

NO

LOG

Y

BA

ND

/LEV

EL

O

UTC

OM

E

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WALK

ING

TALK

ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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c ve

rsio

n 01

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ran

Mur

ray

2004

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umn

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ner P

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y Te

mpl

ate

- 7 -

FRAM

EWO

RK F

OR

DEV

ELO

PIN

G A

SSES

SMEN

T TA

SKS

FOR

THE

LEAR

NIN

G A

REA

STU

DIE

S SE

CTI

ON

(Act

iviti

es 2

7/28

/29

and

30)

1.

Sel

ect a

n ou

tcom

e/lin

ked

outc

omes

from

the

NTC

F (W

rite

in c

ode

and

page

num

bers

):

L L3

.1 C

omm

unic

atio

n re

spon

d to

con

text

ualis

ed S

AE in

pr

edic

tabl

e so

cial

and

lear

ning

situ

atio

ns

L L3

.2 S

ocio

-cul

tura

l und

erst

andi

ngs i

dent

ify so

me

oral

te

xt ty

pes,

resp

ond

to so

cial

cue

s, an

d in

terp

ret i

nton

atio

n an

d st

ress

L

L3.3

Lan

guag

e st

ruct

ures

and

feat

ures

resp

ond

to

cont

rolle

d sp

oken

SAE

incl

udin

g te

ache

r str

uctu

red

SAE

L L3

.4 L

earn

ing-

how

-to le

arn

seek

repe

titio

n/cl

arifi

catio

n an

d vi

sual

supp

ort t

o ex

tend

thei

r und

erst

andi

ng o

f ora

l te

xts.

S L3

.1 C

omm

unic

atio

n co

mm

unic

ate

and

lear

n th

roug

h SA

E in

pre

dict

able

situ

atio

ns a

nd c

onst

ruct

sequ

ence

d or

al

text

s usi

ng li

mite

d SA

E S

L3.2

Soc

io-c

ultu

ral u

nder

stan

ding

s use

asp

ects

of s

poke

n SA

E la

ngua

ge b

ehav

iour

whe

n co

mm

unic

atin

g an

d le

arni

ng

at sc

hool

, with

var

ying

acc

urac

y in

tona

tion

S L3

.3 L

angu

age

stru

ctur

es a

nd fe

atur

es m

anip

ulat

e le

arne

d st

ruct

ures

and

feat

ures

to m

ake

orig

inal

utte

ranc

es,

char

acte

rize

d by

sim

plifi

ed la

ngua

ge a

nd v

aryi

ng

gram

mat

ical

acc

urac

y S

L3.4

Lea

rnin

g-ho

w-to

lear

n pr

actic

e, ta

ke so

me

risk

s, in

itiat

e ta

lk w

ith su

ppor

t. R

L2.

1 C

omm

unic

atio

n re

ad, w

ith u

nder

stan

ding

, sho

rt

text

s bas

ed o

n si

mpl

e fa

mili

ar c

onte

nt, v

ocab

ular

y an

d la

ngua

ge st

ruct

ures

R

L2.

2 So

cio-

cultu

ral u

nder

stan

ding

s ind

icat

e di

ffere

nces

be

twee

n na

rrat

ive

and

fact

ual t

exts

whi

ch re

late

to o

wn

know

ledg

e or

exp

erie

nce

R L

2.3

Lang

uage

stru

ctur

es &

feat

ures

read

text

s wi

th

basi

c pr

int c

onve

ntio

ns, u

sing

sigh

t and

ora

l voc

abul

ary,

an

d ba

sic

SAE

stru

ctur

es

R L

2.4

Lear

ning

-how

-to le

arn

use

supp

ort f

rom

cla

ss-b

ased

re

sour

ces,

soun

d/ sy

mbo

l and

vis

ual c

ues t

o pr

edic

t and

co

nfir

m m

eani

ng in

SAE

. W

L2.

1 C

omm

unic

atio

n wr

ite sh

ort,

sim

ple,

coh

eren

t tex

ts

cont

aini

ng a

few

idea

s rel

ated

to ta

sk/to

pic

and

show

ing

orga

nisa

tion

of su

bjec

t mat

ter

with

mod

elle

d su

ppor

t W

L2.

2 So

cio-

cultu

ral u

nder

stan

ding

s in

dica

te th

at S

AE

writt

en te

xts a

re o

rgan

ised

and

pre

sent

ed in

spec

ific

ways

ac

cord

ing

to to

pic

and

purp

ose

W L

2.3

Lang

uage

stru

ctur

es &

feat

ures

use

bas

ic se

nten

ce

stru

ctur

es in

clud

ing

feat

ures

of l

earn

ed o

ral a

nd w

ritte

n SA

E W

L2.

4 Le

arni

ng-h

ow-to

lear

n ta

ke so

me

risk

s, as

k fo

r SAE

vo

cabu

lary

, app

ly li

mite

d so

und/

sym

bol a

nd v

isua

l cue

s in

spel

ling.

Scie

nce:

Wor

king

Sci

entif

ical

ly: P

lann

ing;

sugg

est

ways

of d

oing

inve

stig

atio

ns, g

ivin

g co

nsid

erat

ion

to

fair

test

ing,

and

mak

e si

mpl

e pr

edic

atio

ns b

ased

on

pers

onal

exp

erie

nce

Mat

hs: M

easu

rem

ent:

Est

imat

ing

and

Mea

suri

ng u

se c

omm

on m

etri

c un

its to

est

imat

e, m

easu

re a

nd c

ompa

re le

ngth

, cap

acity

and

mas

s; c

ount

un

its to

mea

sure

are

a an

d vo

lum

e;

Cha

nce:

Pre

dict

and

exp

lain

the

com

para

tive

likel

ihoo

d of

fam

iliar

ch

ance

eve

nts

Dat

a Se

nse:

col

lect

, org

anis

e, re

cord

, dis

play

and

inte

rpre

t dat

a in

a

vari

ety

of w

ays,

incl

udin

g gr

aphs

and

sim

ple

tabl

es, i

n or

der t

o an

swer

qu

estio

ns.

Wha

t do

I wan

t th

e st

uden

ts to

le

arn?

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TEXTS

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PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

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iviti

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ran

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exts

: Col

umn

Plan

ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

- 8 -

2.

List

the

key

wor

ds (g

ener

ally

the

verb

s w

hich

will

giv

e th

e de

gree

of �

leve

lnes

s�) f

rom

eac

h of

the

outc

omes

sel

ecte

d:

O

ral:

resp

ond

to, o

ral t

ext t

ypes

, use

vis

ual

supp

ort

Rea

ding

: sho

rt, s

impl

e, fa

mili

ar te

xts;

di

ffere

nces

bet

wee

n na

rrat

ive/

fact

ual,

sigh

t an

d or

al v

ocab

, res

ourc

es fr

om c

lass

-bas

ed

wor

k W

ritin

g: c

oher

ent,

a fe

w id

eas,

mod

elle

d su

ppor

t, te

xt o

rgan

isat

ion,

lear

ned

oral

and

w

ritte

n, ta

ke s

ome

risks

, ask

for s

uppo

rt,

limite

d so

und/

sym

bol

Sug

gest

way

s�

Mak

e si

mpl

e pr

edic

tions

Est

imat

e, m

easu

re, c

omm

on m

etric

uni

ts, l

engt

h,

pred

ict a

nd e

xpla

in�

, C

olle

ct, o

rgan

ise,

dis

play

, rec

ord

data

, gra

ph

3.

List

the

mai

n sk

ills a

nd p

roce

sses

that

stu

dent

s w

ill n

eed

in o

rder

to a

chie

ve/d

emon

stra

te th

e ou

tcom

es li

sted

abo

ve, e

g

Eval

uate

� s

tude

nts

will

nee

d to

mak

e ju

dgem

ents

, jus

tify

thei

r opi

nion

s, c

ompa

re o

ptio

ns, i

dent

ify a

dvan

tage

s an

d di

sadv

anta

ges

Stu

dent

s w

ill ne

ed to

resp

ond

to th

e te

ache

r and

oth

er s

tude

nts,

use

the

visu

al a

nd o

ral r

esou

rces

in th

e ro

om to

sup

port

thei

r ind

epen

dent

co

nstru

ctio

n of

text

s, m

ake

sim

ple

pred

ictio

ns a

bout

how

far t

he p

arac

hute

/kite

s w

ill fly

, (es

timat

e), t

hen

with

mod

elle

d su

ppor

t, m

easu

re in

m

etre

s, a

s a

mem

ber o

f the

gro

up, c

reat

e a

com

para

tive

grap

h, ta

lk a

bout

the

grap

h, ta

ke a

risk

and

mak

e ow

n pa

rach

ute/

kite

, fly

it a

nd re

cord

in

gra

ph fo

rm.

4.

Writ

e do

wn

the

reas

ons

why

you

hav

e se

lect

ed th

ese

outc

omes

. B

and

2 S

cien

ce a

nd m

aths

out

com

es a

re n

eede

d to

sca

ffold

lear

ners

to th

e ap

prop

riate

cog

nitiv

e le

vel f

or th

eir a

ge; E

SL

leve

ls a

s go

als

� if

stud

ents

are

wor

king

eas

ily a

t lev

el 2

lite

racy

and

leve

l 3 o

racy

at t

he e

nd o

f yea

r thr

ee, t

hey

will

abl

e to

ach

ieve

leve

l 4 li

tera

cy b

y th

e en

d of

ye

ar 7

in p

repa

ratio

n fo

r Sec

onda

ry.

Link

this

to o

ne/tw

o E

sseN

Tial

Lea

rnin

gs

An

eff

ecti

ve C

OM

MU

NIC

ATO

R a

nd

GRO

UP

MEM

BER

wh

o C

ol 1

Lis

ten

s at

tent

ivel

y an

d co

nsid

ers

the

con

trib

utio

ns

and

vie

wp

oin

ts o

f o

ther

s w

hen

sh

arin

g o

wn

idea

s an

d o

pin

ion

s.

Co

l 3 F

ulfi

ls t

hei

r re

spo

nsi

bilit

ies

as a

gro

up

mem

ber

an

d ac

tive

ly s

up

po

rts

oth

er m

emb

ers.

Why

do

I wan

t th

em to

lear

n th

is?

5.

Bra

inst

orm

a ra

nge

of a

ctiv

ities

you

cou

ld u

nder

take

to e

nabl

e yo

ur le

arne

rs to

wor

k to

war

ds/p

ract

ise/

deve

lop

thei

r ski

lls a

nd u

nder

stan

ding

s of

th

ese

outc

omes

. M

ake

para

chut

e/ki

tes

and

fly th

em o

n a

win

dy d

ay a

nd a

not

so

win

dy d

ay, p

redi

ct h

ow fa

r, m

easu

re a

nd g

raph

.

How

will

I kno

w

whe

n th

ey h

ave

lear

ned?

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TEXTS

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E

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EX

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umn

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ner P

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y Te

mpl

ate

- 9 -

6.

Out

line

an a

sses

smen

t tas

k yo

u co

uld

set w

hich

wou

ld a

llow

lear

ners

to d

emon

stra

te th

eir u

nder

stan

ding

s/ab

ilitie

s of

the

outc

omes

. If p

ossi

ble

brea

k th

is a

sses

smen

t tas

k in

to a

ser

ies

of s

mal

ler a

sses

smen

t eve

nts

whi

ch to

geth

er a

llow

the

bigg

er ta

sk to

be

com

plet

ed.

(Eg:

a re

sear

ch ta

sk m

ay in

volv

e de

velo

ping

an

info

rmat

ion

retri

eval

cha

rt fro

m li

brar

y/w

ww

text

s, a

n in

terv

iew

, an

oral

pre

sent

atio

n as

wel

l as

a fin

al re

port.

) D

O:

Chi

ldre

n w

ill p

artic

ipat

e in

the

read

ing

of a

pro

cedu

ral t

ext o

n m

akin

g pa

rach

ute/

kite

s. Th

ey w

ill m

ake

para

chut

e/ki

tes,

pred

ict/e

stim

ate

how

hig

h th

ey w

ill fl

y, h

ow fa

r the

y w

ill g

o, h

ow lo

ng th

ey w

ill st

ay in

the

air.

They

will

do

this

on

a w

indy

day

an

d a

less

win

dy d

ay. T

hey

will

mea

sure

thes

e as

pect

s of t

he p

arac

hute

/kite

flig

hts a

nd d

escr

ibe

wha

t hap

pene

d.

TALK

: La

ngua

ge o

f pre

dict

ion

(I th

ink

my

para

chut

e/ki

te w

ill�

�),

lang

uage

of d

escr

iptio

n �o

n ac

tion�

(my

para

chut

e/ki

te st

ayed

up

for a

long

tim

e, m

y p

arac

hute

/kite

flew

a lo

ng w

ay; i

t wen

t spi

nnin

g, it

fell

slow

ly; u

se li

st o

f act

ion

verb

s in

lang

uage

an

alys

is/fr

om th

e te

xt)

Rec

ord:

D

raw

a p

ictu

re o

f the

flig

ht p

ath

of th

e pa

rach

ute/

kite

, mea

sure

the

fligh

t pat

h no

n-fo

rmal

uni

ts a

nd in

met

res.

Mak

e a

grap

h an

d w

rite

a sh

ort d

escr

iptio

n of

the

�par

achu

te/k

ite tr

ials

�.

7.

Opt

iona

l O

utlin

e an

othe

r ass

essm

ent t

ask

in a

sec

ond

Lear

ning

Are

a th

at y

ou c

ould

set

whi

ch w

ould

allo

w le

arne

rs to

dem

onst

rate

thei

r un

ders

tand

ings

/abi

litie

s of

the

outc

omes

. If p

ossi

ble

brea

k th

is a

sses

smen

t tas

k in

to a

ser

ies

of s

mal

ler a

sses

smen

t eve

nts

whi

ch to

geth

er

allo

w th

e bi

gger

task

to b

e co

mpl

eted

. (E

g: a

rese

arch

task

may

invo

lve

deve

lopi

ng a

n in

form

atio

n re

triev

al c

hart

from

libr

ary/

ww

w te

xts,

an

inte

rvie

w, a

n or

al p

rese

ntat

ion

as w

ell a

s a

final

repo

rt.)

DO

:

TALK

:

Rec

ord:

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TEXTS

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PEN

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ITIN

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E

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EX

T

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exts

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umn

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ner P

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y Te

mpl

ate

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-

8.

List

the

mai

n cr

iteria

you

cou

ld u

se to

ass

ess

each

stu

dent

�s a

bilit

ies:

Mak

e su

re th

is c

riter

ia li

nks

back

to th

e ou

tcom

es s

elec

ted

(focu

s on

the

key

wor

ds/v

erbs

of t

he o

utco

me)

O

ral:

resp

ond

to, o

ral t

ext t

ypes

, use

vis

ual s

uppo

rt A

ll as

sess

men

t of R

eadi

ng it

ems

: sho

rt, s

impl

e, fa

mili

ar te

xts;

diff

eren

ces

betw

een

narr

ativ

e/fa

ctua

l, si

ght a

nd o

ral v

ocab

, res

ourc

es fr

om

clas

s-ba

sed

wor

k A

ll as

sess

men

t of W

ritin

g ite

ms

in th

e un

it: c

oher

ent,

a fe

w id

eas,

mod

elle

d su

ppor

t, te

xt o

rgan

isat

ion,

lear

ned

oral

and

writ

ten,

take

som

e ris

ks, a

sk fo

r sup

port,

lim

ited

soun

d/sy

mbo

l In

the

mak

ing

and

the

flyin

g of

the

para

chut

e/ki

tes

Sug

gest

way

s�

Mak

e si

mpl

e pr

edic

tions

Est

imat

e, m

easu

re, c

omm

on m

etric

uni

ts, l

engt

h, p

redi

ct a

nd e

xpla

in�

, In

the

grou

p an

d in

divi

dual

reco

rdin

g of

the

lean

ing

from

the

para

chut

e/ki

te m

akin

g C

olle

ct, o

rgan

ise,

dis

play

, rec

ord

data

, gra

ph

Wha

t evi

denc

e ca

n I u

se fo

r re

porti

ng

purp

oses

?

9.

Pre

pare

a c

onte

xt s

heet

with

the

asse

ssm

ent t

ask

and

rubr

ic to

giv

e to

the

stud

ents

.

10.

Inse

rt th

e pl

anne

d Le

arni

ng A

rea

task

s usi

ng th

e D

O T

ALK

RE

CO

RD

mod

el in

to th

e ap

prop

riat

e pl

ace

in A

ctiv

ities

27

to30

.

How

can

I he

lp

the

stud

ents

le

arn?

N

ow p

roce

ed to

the

begi

nnin

g of

the

colu

mn

plan

ner a

nd fi

ll in

det

ails

for e

ach

activ

ity o

r exe

rcis

e pe

rtin

ent t

o th

e te

xt y

ou a

re u

sing

.

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TEXTS

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ITIN

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EX

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The

follo

win

g gu

ide

ma

y be

hel

pful

in

pla

nnin

g fo

r dev

elop

men

t in

the

stud

ents

� ind

epen

dent

writ

ing.

St

uden

ts n

eed

at le

ast h

alf a

n ho

ur a

da

y to

dev

elop

inde

pend

ent w

ritin

g sk

ills.

For s

tude

nts w

ho a

re n

ot y

et

inde

pend

ent w

riter

s, fo

llow

the

Scaf

fold

ing

Inde

pend

ent W

ritin

g m

etho

dolo

gy.

Follo

w th

e se

quen

ce b

elow

for e

ach

genr

e of

writ

ing

begu

n by

the

stud

ents

who

are

abl

e to

beg

in

writ

ing

inde

pend

ently

. A

. H

ave

a m

eetin

g to

br

ains

torm

, tal

k ab

out a

nd

list p

ossi

ble

topi

cs o

r as

pect

s of

the

wri

ting.

B

. St

uden

ts b

egin

firs

t dra

ft an

d co

ntin

ue w

ritin

g th

is da

ily

C.

Tea

cher

talk

s with

indi

vidu

al

stud

ents

abo

ut th

eir

wri

ting

D.

Tea

cher

lead

s a m

eetin

g to

di

scus

s the

wri

ting

so fa

r E

. St

uden

ts b

egin

to r

edra

ft an

d co

ntin

ue w

ritin

g th

is ea

ch d

ay

F.

Tea

cher

s tal

ks w

ith in

divi

dual

st

uden

ts a

bout

thei

r w

ritin

g G

. C

ontin

ue u

ntil

this

ver

sion

is

com

plet

e (fi

nal c

opy)

or

it is

tim

e to

intr

oduc

e a

new

w

ritin

g ta

sk.

T

each

er a

nd st

uden

ts w

ill n

eed

to sp

end

from

one

hal

f, up

to tw

o ho

urs p

er d

ay e

ngag

ed

with

who

le te

xt a

ctiv

ities

: C

OM

POSI

NG

A

ND

CO

NST

RU

CT

ING

OR

AL

TE

XT

S

TH

RO

UG

H

INT

ER

AC

TIO

N

IN

SH

AR

ED

L

EA

RN

ING

E

XPE

RIE

NC

ES

LE

AD

ING

T

O

T

HE

CO

NST

RU

CT

ION

O

F

G

RO

UP

N

EGO

TIA

TED

J

OIN

TLY

C

ON

STR

UC

TE

D

WR

ITT

EN

T

EX

TS

F

OR

STU

DE

NT

S

TO

U

SE

A

S

A

R

ESO

UR

CE

IN

IND

EPE

ND

EN

T

SP

EA

KIN

G

AN

D

WR

ITIN

G

T

ASK

S.

Lea

rnin

g an

d sh

arin

g in

form

atio

n ab

out r

eadi

ng a

nd

wri

ting,

usi

ng p

arts

of t

he te

xt.

Teac

her a

nd st

uden

ts re

ad th

e or

igin

al st

ory/

text

and

all

the

text

s ge

nera

ted

from

the

activ

ities

eac

h da

y. D

ispl

ay a

ll of

thes

e te

xts

prom

inen

tly a

roun

d th

e ro

om.

In e

xam

inin

g th

e te

xts p

rodu

ced

in

the

unit

of w

ork,

tell

the

stud

ents

ab

out t

he c

onve

ntio

ns o

f rea

ding

an

d w

ritin

g.

Use

the

text

s as a

bas

is fo

r ex

erci

ses t

o fu

rther

dev

elop

st

uden

ts� s

kills

in E

nglis

h.

The

lang

uage

exe

rcis

es in

this

colu

mn

allo

w fo

r pra

ctic

e by

st

uden

ts in

con

struc

ting

and

deco

nstru

ctin

g pa

rts o

f tex

ts fo

r th

emse

lves

. Th

e te

ache

r sca

ffol

ds e

ach

activ

ity fi

rst,

expl

aini

ng th

e pr

oces

s to

the

stud

ents.

A

fter t

his t

he st

uden

ts pr

actis

e th

e ac

tiviti

es th

emse

lves

.

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1.

D

isco

ver

the

Tex

t (N

egot

iatin

g th

e fie

ld o

f kno

wle

dge;

setti

ng s

tude

nts u

p fo

r pre

dict

ion)

T

alk

abou

t the

con

tent

s of

the

text

. D

iscus

s an

d re

cord

wha

t the

lear

ners

alre

ady

know

ab

out t

he to

pic

and

them

e of

the

text

. Rep

rese

nt th

is in

the

form

of a

sem

antic

web

or n

otes

on

a re

triev

al c

hart.

Use

info

rmat

ion

from

the

title

, cha

pter

hea

ding

s, in

trodu

ctio

n an

d th

e su

mm

ary

of th

e te

xt to

disc

uss w

hat t

he te

xt m

ight

cov

er/b

e ab

out (

pred

ictio

n).

R

ead

the

text

to/w

ith th

e st

uden

ts.

Tal

k ab

out:

Ta

lk a

bout

wha

t ch

ildre

n al

read

y kn

ow

abo

ut w

ind

� bra

inst

orm

; sem

anti

c we

b -

disc

uss

conc

epts

of

prin

t � t

itle

,

aut

hor,

cov

er

- pr

edic

t wh

at t

ext

will

be a

bout

usi

ng

t

he p

ictu

res (e

xpre

ssions

on

face

s)

For

stud

ents

just

beg

inni

ng

liter

acy

in E

nglis

h, th

e te

achi

ng

and

lear

ning

of t

he E

nglis

h so

unds

and

lett

er n

ames

nee

ds

to b

e or

gani

sed

in c

onju

nctio

n w

ith th

e fo

llow

ing

exer

cise

s. O

nce

thes

e ex

erci

ses

have

bee

n in

trodu

ced

in th

e or

der t

hey

occu

r in

the

pla

nner

, th

ey n

eed

to b

e tim

etab

led

regu

larly

in

to

the

stud

ents

� da

ily

wor

k re

quire

men

ts

to

prac

tise

the

deve

lopi

ng li

tera

cy sk

ills.

D

ay

A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

2. C

ompl

ete

oral

clo

ze e

xerc

ises

(Che

ckin

g th

e st

uden

ts� l

ingu

istic

ac

cess

ibili

ty to

the

text

) a)

Te

ache

r and

stud

ent t

oget

her

b)

Indi

vidu

al st

uden

t (on

e to

on

e) w

ith te

ache

r. T

each

er m

akes

ane

cdot

al n

otes

on

lear

ners

� abi

litie

s, ke

ep in

fo

lio.

Choo

se w

ords

ran

dom

ly t

o ju

dge

how

muc

h pr

evio

us

know

ledg

e th

e St

uden

ts

are

brin

ging

to

the

text

Lear

ning

W

ritte

n E

nglis

h an

d Le

arni

ng

Abo

ut W

ritte

n E

nglis

h fo

r In

form

atio

nal

Use

(3b)

Ass

essm

ent C

hoic

e

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-

D

ay

3. (C

onfir

min

g pr

edic

tions

, che

ckin

g un

ders

tand

ing,

re se

tting

pre

dict

ions

) T

each

er (

as a

lang

uage

mod

el a

nd sc

affo

lder

of l

earn

ers�

En

glis

h) to

geth

er w

ith th

e st

uden

ts

a)

disc

uss w

heth

er th

e se

ctio

n of

the

text

so fa

r was

as p

redi

cted

b)

w

hat m

ay h

appe

n su

bseq

uent

ly in

the

text

� fu

rthe

r pr

edic

tion

base

d on

con

tent

so fa

r c)

ex

chan

ge id

eas,

opin

ions

and

feel

ings

abo

ut th

e co

nten

t of t

he te

xt.

Ta

ke e

ach

page

and

tal

k ab

out

it in

det

ail w

ith

the

stud

ents

, en

cour

agin

g ea

ch s

tude

nt t

o gi

ve s

ome

info

rmat

ion

D

ay

4.

(F

urth

er a

cces

sing

the

sem

antic

s of t

he te

xt th

roug

h ph

ysic

al e

ngag

emen

t/ena

ctm

ent o

f con

cept

s, E

nglis

h w

orld

m

eani

ngs o

f wor

ds e

tc)

Rea

d th

e te

xt to

/with

the

stud

ents

. Enc

oura

ge st

uden

ts to

read

alo

ng.

Expl

ore

the

text

by

plan

ning

toge

ther

to r

ole

play

asp

ects

of t

he

char

acte

rs, t

he c

onte

xts,

the

issue

s, th

e so

lutio

ns, e

tc

T

ype

of r

ole

play

/ Par

ticip

ants

Us

ing

prop

s, r

ead

the

book

, chi

ldre

n th

row

item

s up

in

to t

he a

ir a

s th

e te

xt d

irec

ts; m

ay u

se a

fan

D

ay

5.

(L

inki

ng c

ross

-cul

tura

l kno

wle

dge

to th

e ex

peri

ence

s/si

mila

ritie

s in

stud

ents

� wor

ld

expe

rien

ces)

Re

ad th

e te

xt. D

iscu

ss th

e de

velo

pmen

t of t

he p

lot t

oget

her w

ith th

e st

uden

ts

as th

e te

xt is

rea

d.

Mak

e lin

ks b

etw

een

the

writ

ten

text

and

the

real

w

orld

ex

perie

nces

of

th

e st

uden

ts.

Tal

k ab

out

sim

ilarit

ies

and

diff

eren

ces.

T

alk

abou

t/disc

uss�

�.

Umbr

ella

s � w

hat

do y

our

use

to p

rote

ct y

ours

elf

from

the

rai

n?

Man

�s su

it �

top

and

tai

ls �

hav

e yo

u ev

er s

een

anyo

ne w

ear

clot

hes

like

this

? Do

you

kno

w wh

ere

a m

an w

ould

wea

r th

ese

clot

hes?

Ta

lk

abou

t ki

tes

and

let

the

child

ren

know

th

ey w

ill b

e m

akin

g

Lear

ning

Eng

lish

and

Lear

ning

Th

roug

h Sp

oken

E

nglis

h fo

r In

terp

erso

nal

(2)a

nd A

esth

etic

U

se (5

)

Lear

ning

Spo

ken

Eng

lish

and

Lear

ning

Th

roug

h Sp

oken

E

nglis

h fo

r In

terp

erso

nal U

se

(2)

Lear

ning

thro

ugh

Spok

en a

nd

wri

tten

Eng

lish

Inte

rper

sona

l Use

(1

,2)

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E

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EX

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-

para

chut

es/

kite

s la

ter

on

Wha

t is

a h

anky

? Do

we

use

hank

ys?

Wha

t is

a ju

dge?

Do

you

know

wha

t he

doe

s? D

oes

our

com

mun

ity

have

co

urt?

Wha

t do

judg

es w

ear

when

the

y co

me

to o

ur c

omm

unit

y? T

his

is

the

judg

e�s u

nifo

rm.

Wha

t do

you

thi

nk t

he p

ostm

an d

oes?

How

do

lett

ers

get

from

one

pl

ace

to a

noth

er?

The

post

man

is w

eari

ng a

uni

form

as

well.

Po

int

out

the

flag

and

tal

k ab

out

the

flag

s we

hav

e in

our

com

mun

ity

and

wher

e th

ey a

re

Talk

abo

ut s

carv

es �

why

do y

ou t

hink

the

twi

ns a

re w

eari

ng t

hem

?

D

ay

A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

6. (

Dec

onst

ruct

ing

the

text

; gen

res

are

soci

al a

nd c

ultu

ral c

onst

ruct

s th

at m

eet c

ultu

ral n

eeds

. Wha

t is

the

purp

ose

of th

is g

enre

?)

Teac

her d

iscus

ses t

he g

enre

of t

he te

xt w

ith th

e st

uden

ts.

Dec

onst

ruct

the

text

so st

uden

ts le

arn

how

diff

eren

t aut

hors

use

diff

eren

t sty

les

for e

ffec

t.

Disc

uss/

dem

onst

rate

how

the

aut

hor

has

stru

ctur

ed t

he t

ext

and

how

the

di

ffer

ent p

arts

mak

e up

the

who

le.

How

did

we

know

wha

t th

e bo

ok w

as g

oing

to

be a

bout

? (t

itle

an

d fi

rst

page

� or

ient

ation)

. Bu

tche

r�s p

aper

� tc

hr d

raws

�win

d�

Wha

t pr

oblems

did

the

wind

cau

se?

Tchr

dra

ws it

ems

that

the

win

d bl

ew u

p as

eac

h pa

ge is

co

vere

d H

ow w

as t

he p

robl

em solve

d?

Tchr

dra

ws p

ictu

re o

f it

ems

in a

pile

W

e ca

ll th

is k

ind

a bo

ok a

nar

rati

ve o

r a

stor

y.

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ITIN

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D

ay

7.

(A

sses

sing

stud

ents

� upt

ake

of th

e la

ngua

ge, s

eque

nce

and

conc

epts

of t

he te

xt so

far)

St

uden

ts r

etel

l the

sto

rylin

e/pl

ot s

o fa

r in

sm

all

grou

ps o

f tw

o or

th

ree,

sta

ting

wha

t th

ey l

ike/

don�

t lik

e so

far

and

why

. St

uden

ts

may

be

give

n di

ffer

ent

sect

ions

to

rete

ll an

d co

mm

ent

on e

g ch

apte

rs.

Mak

e us

e of

tape

reco

rder

s to

keep

reco

rds f

or a

sses

smen

t. Us

ing

the

page

s in

the

boo

k, h

ave

the

whol

e gr

oup

tell

what

is

happ

enin

g on

eac

h pa

ge,

tchr

exp

ands

chi

ldre

n�s t

alk

and

scaf

fold

the

ir E

nglis

h.

D

ay

A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

8. (T

hese

wor

ds m

ake

up th

e ba

sis

of th

e w

ord

stud

y pr

ogra

m �

spe

lling

pro

gram

. Wor

ds f

rom

the

text

w

ill b

e fr

eque

ntly

enc

ount

ered

by

the

stud

ents

in

a va

riet

y of

wri

tten

cont

ext

thro

ugh

the

unit

thus

pr

ovid

ing

a co

ntex

t for

use

.) Te

ache

r and

stud

ents

mak

e a

list o

f wor

ds w

hich

fit c

erta

in c

ateg

orie

s lin

ked

to

the

stud

y of

the

tex

t eg

wor

ds w

hich

des

crib

e th

e ch

arac

ters

, w

ords

whi

ch

desc

ribe

feel

ings

/em

otio

n lin

ked

to t

he p

lot/s

tory

line,

wor

ds w

hich

car

ry

spec

ific

mea

ning

s etc

. D

ispla

y th

is lis

t and

con

tinue

to a

dd to

the

lists

as

the

unit

of w

ork

deve

lops

. D

evel

op se

man

tic w

ebs u

sing

thes

e w

ords

. As

k th

e st

uden

ts t

o gi

ve y

ou w

ords

fro

m t

he b

ook

or a

bout

wi

nd; t

hen

add,

with

the

chi

ldre

n�s p

arti

cipa

tion

, the

tar

gete

d wo

rds

� act

ion

verb

s an

d pr

epos

itio

ns/

prep

osit

iona

l phr

ases

. Ai

m f

or a

bout

20

word

s.

Ass

essm

ent C

hoic

eLe

arni

ng S

poke

n E

nglis

h an

d Le

arni

ng

Thro

ugh

Spok

en

Eng

lish

for

Info

rmat

iona

l U

se (4

)

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A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

9. (S

tude

nts n

eed

alph

abet

ical

kno

wle

dge

and

orde

ring

skill

s fo

r res

earc

h an

d in

depe

nden

ce in

lite

racy

an

d le

arni

ng)

Org

anis

e th

is lis

t and

oth

er w

ords

fro

m t

he t

ext i

nto

alph

abet

ical

ord

er i

n a

visu

al d

ispl

ay.

� w

hole

gro

up to

geth

er

� in

pai

rs

� in

divi

dual

ly

For s

tude

nts w

ho a

re b

egin

ning

lite

racy

, do

Exer

cise

10.

..

D

ay

A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

10.

(The

26

lette

rs o

f the

alp

habe

t nee

d to

be

linke

d to

the

44 so

unds

use

d in

SA

E a

nd �c

hunk

s of

soun

ds� �

sylla

bles

- re

pres

ente

d in

the

Eng

lish

spel

ling

syst

em).

For

stud

ents

who

are

beg

inni

ng l

itera

cy,

intro

duce

the

Eng

lish

alph

abet

and

di

spla

y al

ong

a w

all.

Tea

ch t

he E

nglis

h so

und

and

lett

er n

ames

and

pa

ttern

s (s

ingl

e so

unds

, ble

nds,

wor

d en

ding

s, irr

egul

ar le

tter/s

ound

pat

tern

s et

c)

List

wor

ds fr

om th

e te

xt u

nder

the

appr

opria

te le

tter n

ame.

A

focu

sing

Exe

rcis

e Fo

r stu

dent

s w

ho a

re c

ontin

uing

to d

evel

op li

tera

cy in

Eng

lish,

use

thes

e w

ords

to

dev

elop

a w

all d

ictio

nary

(wor

ds w

ith m

eani

ngs)

or s

eman

tic w

ebs.

C

ontin

ue to

add

to th

is vi

sual

disp

lay

as u

nfam

iliar

wor

ds a

re e

ncou

nter

ed in

th

e te

xt. U

se th

e lis

ts fr

om n

o. 8

. (U

sing

dic

tiona

ries

and

oth

er la

ngua

ge r

efer

ence

s, un

ders

tand

ing

how

dic

tiona

ries

wor

k is

a li

tera

cy to

ol

to su

ppor

t fur

ther

lear

ning

in a

seco

nd la

ngua

ge).

Teac

h th

e st

uden

ts h

ow to

use

this

as a

res

ourc

e fo

r the

ir pe

rson

al w

ritin

g. U

se

the

grow

ing

list o

f wor

ds o

n th

ese

wal

l res

ourc

es fo

r the

stud

y of

wor

ds

incl

udin

g sp

ellin

g, ru

les a

nd ir

regu

larit

ies i

n ru

les.

For e

xam

ple,

stud

ents

, in

pairs

disc

uss a

nd so

rt th

e w

ords

on

card

s int

o ca

tego

ries:

- w

ord

fam

ilies

-

sam

e en

ding

s/be

ginn

ings

TE

AC

HE

R

AN

D S

TU

DE

NT

S G

O O

N A

PR

INT

WA

LK

A

RO

UN

D

TH

E C

LA

SSR

OO

M.

Rea

d th

e pr

int

Disc

uss t

he te

xt, c

once

pts o

f prin

t, gr

apho

phon

ic re

latio

nshi

ps, w

ords

, us

ed, u

se o

f pun

ctua

tion

etc

R

ecal

l the

act

ivity

in w

hich

eac

h te

xt w

as w

ritte

n.

D

iscus

s wha

t els

e m

ay b

e w

ritte

n an

d di

spla

yed

in th

is un

it of

wor

k

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xerc

ises

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lect

roni

c ve

rsio

n 01

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ran

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ray

2004

.

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alki

ng T

alki

ng T

exts

: Col

umn

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ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

- 17

-

- so

und

patte

rns

- le

tter p

atte

rns

- rh

ymin

g w

ords

-

plur

als e

tc

Ask

the

stud

ents

to

give

you

wor

ds f

rom

the

boo

k or

abo

ut

wind

; the

n ad

d, w

ith t

he c

hild

ren�s

par

tici

pati

on, t

he t

arge

ted

word

s � a

ctio

n ve

rbs

and

prep

osit

ions

/ pr

epos

itio

nal p

hras

es.

Aim

for

abo

ut 2

0 wo

rds.

Day

11. (

Rec

onst

ruct

ing

the

Text

. Dem

onst

ratin

g ho

w to

wri

te. T

each

ing

aspe

cts o

f wri

ting

in a

mod

elle

d si

tuat

ion)

. R

ead

the

text

to/w

ith th

e st

uden

ts. T

each

er a

nd st

uden

ts

wri

te a

gro

up n

egot

iate

d te

xt o

f the

orig

inal

(a w

ritte

n re

telli

ng).

D

ispla

y th

is pr

omin

ently

in th

e cl

assr

oom

. St

uden

ts m

ay il

lust

rate

the

text

. Seq

uenc

e th

e pa

ges a

nd

disp

lay

thes

e as

a w

all s

tory

. (Re

cons

truc

ting

the

text

) Th

e ge

nre

of th

is te

xt is

:

Nar

rative

with

and

ending

which

is �n

ot h

appy

� as

all t

he t

hing

s ar

e mix

ed u

p. W

hat

would

happ

en n

ext?

D

ay

A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

12. (

Voca

bula

ry e

xpan

sion

/voc

abul

ary

build

ing:

ess

entia

l for

sec

ond

lang

uage

lear

ners

. We

can

expe

ct

seco

nd la

ngua

ge le

arne

rs to

giv

e ba

ck w

hat h

as b

een

taug

ht �

inpu

t rec

eive

d)

Cre

ate/

deve

lop

a w

all

thes

auru

s. B

egin

with

the

wor

ds f

rom

the

list

in

Exer

cise

10.

Add

to

the

thes

auru

s as

new

an

d un

fam

iliar

wor

ds a

re

enco

unte

red

in t

he t

ext

(voc

abul

ary

expa

nsio

n).

Teac

h st

uden

ts t

o us

e th

ese

wor

ds in

thei

r per

sona

l writ

ing.

Se

man

tic

webs

- tak

e th

e wo

rd li

sts

and

deve

lop/

intr

oduc

e ne

w wo

rds

for

the

sam

e co

ncep

t: f

ocus

on

prep

osit

ions

and

act

ion

verb

s.

13 A

SSE

SSM

EN

T PI

EC

E

Day

Lear

ning

Spo

ken

an

d W

ritte

n E

nglis

h an

d Le

arni

ng a

bout

W

ritte

n E

nglis

h fo

r In

terp

erso

nal (

2)an

d In

form

atio

nal u

se

(4)

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ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

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umn

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ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

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- 18

-

(Ind

epen

dent

wri

ting

is a

sked

of t

he st

uden

ts o

nly

afte

r the

y ha

ve b

een

part

of

grou

p-ne

gotia

ted

wri

ting

on a

topi

c th

ey h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t; af

ter t

hey

have

se

en a

mod

el o

f wha

t the

fina

l pro

duct

mig

ht lo

ok li

ke a

nd h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t as

pect

s of i

ts c

onst

ruct

ion

in th

e gr

oup

wri

ting

proc

ess)

. T

each

er o

rgan

ises f

or th

e

stud

ents

to b

egin

wri

ting.

a)

H

ave

a m

eetin

g to

bra

inst

orm

, disc

uss a

nd li

st

poss

ible

way

s to

writ

e ab

out t

he te

xt.

b)

Stud

ents

beg

in th

eir

first

dra

ft an

d co

ntin

ue w

ritin

g th

is da

ily

c)

Teac

her t

alks

with

indi

vidu

al st

uden

ts a

bout

thei

r w

ritin

g so

far

d)

Teac

her l

eads

a c

lass

mee

ting

to d

iscus

s the

writ

ing

so

far a

nd to

mak

e su

gges

tions

whi

ch in

divi

dual

s m

ay

take

up

as th

ey c

ontin

ue th

eir w

ritin

g.

e)

Stud

ents

revi

ew th

eir w

ritin

g so

far,

base

d on

teac

her

inpu

t and

revi

se a

s nec

essa

ry

f)

Stud

ents

con

tinue

to w

rite

in e

ach

day

g)

Teac

her c

ontin

ues t

o ta

lk w

ith in

divi

dual

stud

ents

ab

out t

heir

writ

ing

on a

rota

tiona

l bas

is R

epea

t d) t

hrou

gh to

g) u

ntil

the

writ

ing

is co

mpl

ete.

St

uden

ts m

aint

ain

folio

of a

ll of

thei

r w

ritin

g, d

ated

. Ch

ildre

n re

writ

e th

e te

xt, u

se s

caff

oldi

ng

liter

acy

met

hodo

logy

. Aft

er in

trod

ucin

g 13

, pl

an t

o co

ntin

ue t

his

in d

aily

writ

ing

time,

unt

il th

is t

ext

is c

ompl

ete

RE

LA

TE

D T

EX

TS

TO

RE

AD

TO

/WIT

H T

HE

ST

UD

EN

TS

EA

CH

DA

Y:

D

ay

A

shap

ing

exer

cise

14

. (R

eadi

ng c

ompr

ehen

sion

act

ivity

whi

ch u

tilis

es g

raph

opho

nic,

synt

actic

and

sem

antic

cue

s)

Sort

scra

mbl

ed te

xt, u

se lo

nger

chu

nks o

f tex

t suc

h as

par

agra

phs/

the

cont

ents

of a

pa

ge. a)

w

hole

gro

up w

ith te

ache

r b)

co

oper

ativ

ely

in g

roup

s of t

wo

or th

ree

c)

indi

vidu

ally

Kee

p in

divi

dual

sam

ple

for s

tude

nt fo

lio

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ING

TALK

ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

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iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

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-

Page

leng

th t

ext.

Set

this

up

as a

n on

goin

g ex

erci

se t

hat

stud

ents

can

do

when

in �s

pare

� tim

e, b

etwe

en a

ctiv

itie

s et

c as

th

e un

it p

rogr

esse

s.

D

ay

A

shap

ing

exer

cise

(D

econ

stru

ctio

n of

the

text

; te

xt s

truc

ture

rep

rese

nted

vis

ually

� a

noth

er p

athw

ay to

und

erst

andi

ng h

ow

Eng

lish

text

s are

con

stru

cted

, seq

uenc

ed).

15. T

each

er a

nd st

uden

ts p

rodu

ce a

vis

ual r

epre

sent

atio

n w

hich

su

mm

aris

es t

he s

truct

ure

of t

he g

enre

of

the

text

or

the

mai

n ev

ents

/tim

e se

quen

ce/a

ctio

ns in

the

text

� a

stor

y m

ap o

r gra

ph.

Use

the

pict

ures

fro

m e

xerc

ise

6 as

the

bas

is o

f th

e m

ap.

Wri

te k

ey w

ords

und

er e

ach

pict

ure

to r

epre

sent

the

mea

ning

on

eac

h pa

ge, e

g �sn

atch

ed t

he b

alloon

D

ay

A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

16.

a)

Sort

scra

mbl

ed se

nten

ces

into

a p

arag

raph

to a

pag

e of

m

eani

ngfu

l tex

t. b)

So

rt sc

ram

bled

text

into

ap

prop

riate

ly st

ruct

ured

se

nten

ces:

-

who

le g

roup

with

teac

her

- co

oper

ativ

ely

in g

roup

s of

two

or th

ree

- in

divi

dual

ly

(Rea

ding

com

preh

ensi

on a

ctiv

ity w

hich

ut

ilise

s gra

phop

honi

c, sy

ntac

tic a

nd

sem

antic

cue

s)

Kee

p in

divi

dual

wor

k fo

r stu

dent

fo

lio

Sent

ence

leve

l

Ass

essm

ent C

hoic

e

R

ead

the

prin

t

Disc

uss t

he te

xt, c

once

pts o

f prin

t, gr

apho

phon

ic re

latio

nshi

ps, w

ords

, use

d,

use

of p

unct

uatio

n et

c

Rec

all t

he a

ctiv

ity in

whi

ch e

ach

text

was

writ

ten.

Disc

uss w

hat e

lse

may

be

writ

ten

and

disp

laye

d in

this

unit

of

wor

k

TE

AC

HE

RA

ND

ST

UD

EN

TS

GO

ON

A P

RIN

T W

AL

K

AR

OU

ND

T

HE

CL

ASS

RO

OM

.

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ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

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iviti

es

EX

PLO

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HE

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XT

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n 01

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ner P

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-

Wor

d le

vel

(typ

e ta

rget

ed w

ords

� pr

epos

itio

ns a

nd a

ctio

n ve

rbs

- in

anot

her

colo

ur

for

scra

mbl

ed w

ords

). Se

t th

is u

p as

an

ongo

ing

exer

cise

tha

t st

uden

ts

can

do w

hen

in �s

pare

� ti

me,

bet

ween

act

ivit

ies

etc

as t

he u

nit

prog

ress

es.

Day

17

. A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

(Usi

ng n

ew w

ords

, phr

ases

lear

ned

� ex

erci

se 1

2 �

to m

anip

ulat

e/co

nstr

uct n

ew E

nglis

h se

nten

ces w

hich

m

ean

the

sam

e as

the

orig

inal

to te

ach

how

the

sam

e m

eani

ng c

an b

e co

nstr

ucte

d di

ffer

ently

in E

nglis

h)

Cre

ate

alte

rnat

ive

endi

ngs a

nd b

egin

ning

s fo

r se

nten

ces a

nd la

rger

chu

nks o

f te

xt. -

who

le g

roup

with

teac

her

- co

oper

ativ

ely

in g

roup

s of t

wo

or th

ree

- in

divi

dual

ly

Kee

p in

divi

dual

wor

k fo

r stu

dent

folio

Cr

eate

new

way

s of

say

ing

the

sam

e th

ing.

Foc

us o

n pr

epos

itio

ns a

nd a

ctio

n ve

rbs

with

in t

he e

ndin

gs a

nd

begi

nnin

gs. S

et t

his

up a

s an

ong

oing

exe

rcise

tha

t st

uden

ts

can

do w

hen

in �s

pare

� tim

e, b

etwe

en a

ctiv

itie

s et

c as

the

uni

t pr

ogre

sses

.

D

ay

18. A

shap

ing

exer

cise

(R

eadi

ng c

ompr

ehen

sion

act

ivity

whi

ch u

tilis

es g

raph

opho

nic,

synt

actic

and

sem

antic

cue

s)

Com

plet

e w

ritt

en c

loze

exe

rcise

s: -

who

le g

roup

with

teac

her

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PEN

DE

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WR

ITIN

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XPL

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EX

T

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-

- co

oper

ativ

ely

in g

roup

s of t

wo

or th

ree

- in

divi

dual

ly

Kee

p in

divi

dual

wor

k fo

r stu

dent

folio

Fo

cus

on p

repo

siti

ons

and

acti

on v

erbs

. Set

thi

s up

as

an

ongo

ing

exer

cise

tha

t st

uden

ts c

an d

o wh

en in

�spa

re� t

ime,

be

twee

n ac

tivit

ies

etc

as t

he u

nit

prog

ress

es.

Day

19.

(Lin

king

con

cept

s fr

om t

he t

ext

to m

usic

al/p

oetic

lyr

ics

enab

les

inte

rnal

isin

g of

�c

hunk

s of

lang

uage

�, al

low

s le

arne

rs a

noth

er p

athw

ay in

to le

arni

ng n

ew la

ngua

ge a

nd

conc

epts

in E

nglis

h, a

nd is

fun)

Ex

plor

e th

e th

emes

of t

he te

xt th

roug

h po

etry

/son

g/m

usic

. Id

entif

y an

d lis

t kno

wn

poem

s/so

ngs/

mus

ic li

nked

to th

e th

emes

of

the

text

. Le

arn/

reci

te/s

ing/

danc

e/m

ime

as a

res

pons

e to

the

text

as

appr

opria

te.

Nam

es o

f ide

ntifi

ed so

ngs/

poem

s/m

usic

Kno

wn

New

Cha

nge

the

word

s �ra

in� a

nd� t

hund

er� i

n th

ese

two

song

s (see

jpg

file b

elow

) to

mak

e th

em �w

ind� s

ongs

.

�The

wind�

pa

ge 1

0, 1

1. T

he U

sefu

l Boo

k: s

ongs

and

gam

es f

rom

Play

scho

ol. AB

C Aus

tralia.

A

sses

smen

t Cho

ice

Lear

ning

Spo

ken

and

Wri

tten

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lish

and

Lear

ning

Abo

ut

Wri

tten

Eng

lish

for I

nfor

mat

iona

l U

se (4

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ITIN

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XPL

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D

ay

20

. (O

ppor

tuni

ty fo

r le

arne

rs to

con

trib

ute

to th

e re

cons

truc

tion

of a

wri

tten

text

mak

ing

use

of th

e pr

edic

tabi

lity

of in

tern

alis

ed E

nglis

h la

ngua

ge le

arne

d fr

om th

e po

etry

/son

gs)

Teac

her,

toge

ther

with

the

stu

dent

s, cr

eate

s/w

rite

s/pr

oduc

es a

ne

w p

oem

/son

g/pi

ece

of m

usic

in

resp

onse

to

the

them

es o

f th

e te

xt. S

tude

nts

may

illu

stra

te, s

eque

nce

the

page

s and

disp

lay.

W

ords

of

song

s, a

dd o

ne o

r tw

o ne

w ve

rses

to

each

.

D

ay

21.

(L

earn

ing

to h

ear t

he so

unds

in E

nglis

h th

at a

re d

iffer

ent t

o th

e so

unds

in th

e st

uden

ts� L

1 an

d le

arni

ng

to h

ear t

he so

unds

that

may

be

the

sam

e as

thos

e in

L1,

but

use

d in

diff

eren

t for

mat

ions

, usi

ng th

e 44

so

unds

of S

AE

) Pr

actis

e lis

teni

ng sk

ills.

O

nce

thes

e lis

teni

ng e

xerc

ises

hav

e be

en in

trod

uced

, do

som

e of

them

for 1

0 m

inut

es

ever

y da

y.

Man

y ot

her l

iste

ning

exe

rcis

es c

an b

e ch

osen

from

reso

urce

boo

ks.

List

enin

g ex

erci

ses s

houl

d co

ver t

he a

reas

of s

tres

s, in

tona

tion

and

rhyt

hm a

nd

pron

unci

atio

n of

Eng

lish.

Fo

llow

ing

are

som

e ex

ampl

es:

Focu

sing

exe

rcis

es:

- Li

sten

for

spec

ific

wor

ds, p

hras

es, s

ound

s in

spo

ken

text

s. C

hoos

e a

grou

p of

w

ords

, a

wor

d, a

sou

nd t

hat

the

stud

ents

nee

d to

lis

ten

to a

nd l

earn

to

pron

ounc

e. W

hen

the

stud

ents

hea

r th

e ta

rget

sou

nd/w

ord

they

ind

icat

e in

so

me

way

. (N

B i

t is

muc

h m

ore

diffi

cult

to d

iffer

entia

te s

ound

s of

ano

ther

la

ngua

ge in

song

s).

- Re

ad a

par

t of a

ny o

f the

text

s with

whi

ch th

e st

uden

ts ar

e fa

mili

ar su

bstit

utin

g in

corr

ect w

ords

. Allo

w th

e st

uden

ts to

cor

rect

the

wor

ds a

nd su

pply

the

appr

opria

te o

nes

- C

hoos

e ta

rget

soun

ds fr

om th

e te

xt. P

lay

gam

es w

hich

requ

ire th

e st

uden

ts to

di

scrim

inat

e be

twee

n th

e so

unds

-

Play

alli

tera

tion

gam

es b

y ad

ding

ont

o a

list w

ords

said

pre

viou

sly

that

beg

in

with

the

sam

e so

und

patte

rn; p

lay

rhym

ing

gam

es b

y fin

ding

new

wor

ds th

at

soun

d th

e sa

me;

wor

k ou

t wor

ds w

here

the

begi

nnin

g an

d en

d so

unds

hav

e be

en re

vers

ed�

A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

Cho

ose

a re

petit

ive

part

of t

he te

xt to

use

as a

cha

nt, w

hile

the

stude

nts f

ollo

w th

e rh

ythm

and

stre

ss o

f the

lang

uage

usin

g bo

dy m

ovem

ents

, mus

ical

instr

umen

ts e

tc.

Ass

essm

ent C

hoic

e

Lear

ning

Spo

ken

and

Wri

tten

Eng

lish

and

Lear

ning

Abo

ut

Wri

tten

Eng

lish

for I

nfor

mat

iona

l U

se (4

)

RE

LA

TE

D T

EX

TS

TO

RE

AD

T

O/W

ITH

TH

E S

TU

DE

NT

S

EA

CH

DA

Y

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ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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roni

c ve

rsio

n 01

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ran

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ray

2004

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ng T

alki

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exts

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umn

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ner P

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y Te

mpl

ate

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-

The

whol

e te

xt is

wri

tten

in r

hym

e an

d le

nds

itse

lf t

o ch

anti

ng

usin

g rh

ythm

sti

cks,

cla

ppin

g et

c.

List

the

liste

ning

act

iviti

es c

hose

n fo

r thi

s uni

t of w

ork�

-

who

le g

roup

with

teac

her

- co

oper

ativ

ely

in g

roup

s of t

wo

or th

ree

- in

divi

dual

ly

Kee

p in

divi

dual

wor

k fo

r st

uden

t fol

io.

Unf

amili

ar c

onso

nant

beg

inni

ngs w

ith fa

mili

ar v

owel

s�.

Non

e fo

und

in t

he t

ext

Unf

amili

ar c

onso

nant

beg

inni

ngs w

ith u

nfam

iliar

vow

els�

. Si

ngle c

onso

nant

�b� s

ound

at

the

beginn

ing

of w

ords

: ba

lloon

, ba

ck,

Voiced

�th� s

ound

at

the

beginn

ing

of w

ords

: th

e, t

hat,

th

ere,

the

m, th

en,

Sing

le c

onso

nant

�h� s

ound

a t

he b

eginning

of

word

s: h

at,

hank

y, h

ead,

had

n�t,

har

d,

Sing

le c

onso

nant

�d� s

ound

a t

he b

eginning

of

word

s: d

idn�t,

do

ne,

down

, �s

ingle� c

onso

nant

�sh� a

t th

e be

ginn

ing

of w

ords

: sh

irt

Sing

le c

onso

nant

��s�

soun

d a

the

beginn

ing

of w

ords

: se

nt,

satisf

ied,

sea

22

. (In

depe

nden

t wri

ting

is a

sked

of t

he st

uden

ts o

nly

afte

r the

y ha

ve b

een

part

of g

roup

-neg

otia

ted

wri

ting

on a

topi

c th

ey h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t; af

ter

they

hav

e se

en a

mod

el o

f wha

t the

fina

l pro

duct

mig

ht lo

ok li

ke a

nd h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t asp

ects

of i

ts c

onst

ruct

ion

in th

e gr

oup

wri

ting

proc

ess)

. T

each

er o

rgan

ises f

or th

e

stud

ents

to b

egin

wri

ting

a po

em/s

ong.

a)

ha

ve a

mee

ting

to b

rain

stor

m, d

iscus

s and

list

po

ssib

le st

ruct

ures

for t

he p

oem

/son

g b)

St

uden

ts b

egin

thei

r fir

st d

raft

and

cont

inue

w

ritin

g th

is da

ily

c)

Teac

her t

alks

with

indi

vidu

al st

uden

ts a

bout

Day

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ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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lect

roni

c ve

rsio

n 01

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ran

Mur

ray

2004

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ng T

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umn

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ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

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-

thei

r writ

ing

so fa

r d)

Te

ache

r lea

ds a

cla

ss m

eetin

g to

disc

uss t

he w

ritin

g so

far a

nd to

mak

e su

gges

tions

whi

ch in

divi

dual

s m

ay ta

ke u

p as

they

con

tinue

thei

r writ

ing.

e)

St

uden

ts re

view

thei

r writ

ing

so fa

r, ba

sed

on

teac

her i

nput

and

revi

se a

ne

cess

ary

f)

Stud

ents

con

tinue

to a

dd to

thei

r writ

ing

each

day

g)

Te

ache

r con

tinue

s to

talk

with

indi

vidu

al st

uden

ts

abou

t the

ir jo

urna

ls on

a ro

tatio

nal b

asis

Rep

eat d

) thr

ough

to g

) unt

il th

e so

ng/p

oetry

writ

ing

is co

mpl

ete.

St

uden

ts m

aint

ain

folio

of a

ll of

thei

r w

ritin

g, d

ated

. Ch

ildre

n wr

ite

one

of t

he s

ongs

as

thei

r ow

n te

xt �

use

scaf

fold

ing

writ

ing

met

hodo

logy

Day

23. V

isual

art

s act

ivity

(E

ngag

ing

in th

e ph

ysic

al p

rodu

ctio

n of

vis

ual a

rts

linke

d to

the

them

es o

f the

text

cre

ates

th

e co

ntex

t for

the

teac

hing

of a

nd u

se o

f pro

cedu

ral a

nd d

escr

iptiv

e la

ngua

ge a

s wel

l as

deci

sion

-mak

ing

and

colla

bora

tive

lear

ning

pro

cess

es a

nd la

ngua

ge. A

t the

sam

e tim

e,

abst

ract

cro

ss-c

ultu

ral c

once

pts c

an b

e fu

rthe

r com

preh

ende

d th

roug

h an

othe

r med

ium

.) E

xplo

re th

e th

emes

of t

he te

xt th

roug

h vi

sual

arts

pro

cess

es a

nd

prod

ucts

. Bra

inst

orm

idea

s for

pro

cess

es a

nd p

rodu

cts �

vide

o pr

oduc

tion,

mur

al m

akin

g, 3

D a

rt fo

rms,

inst

alla

tions

, pai

ntin

g,

potti

ng, c

onst

ruct

ing

etc.

Tea

cher

and

stud

ents

toge

ther

, pro

duce

the

art p

rodu

cts;

teac

her

scaf

fold

ing

the

proc

esse

s, th

e En

glis

h la

ngua

ge u

sed

in th

e pr

oces

s and

the

prod

uctio

n.

Do:

Mak

e pa

rach

utes

/kit

es. C

hild

ren

will

follo

w th

e te

ache

r�s m

odel

led

proc

ess

in m

akin

g a

para

chut

e or

kit

e th

at w

ill f

ly. T

ake

phot

os o

f th

e st

uden

t in

eac

h st

age

of t

he m

akin

g pr

oces

s.

A

sses

smen

tCho

ice

Lear

ning

Spo

ken

Eng

lish

and

Lear

ning

Th

roug

h Sp

oken

E

nglis

h fo

r In

terp

erso

nal (

2),

Info

rmat

iona

l (3

a)an

dA

esth

etic

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ING

TEXTS

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DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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roni

c ve

rsio

n 01

06: F

ran

Mur

ray

2004

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ng T

alki

ng T

exts

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umn

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ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

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-

Tal

k: Pro

cedu

ral l

angu

age

in im

pera

tive

for

m�

Bind

two

stick

s to

geth

er in

the

for

m o

f a

cros

s M

ake

a no

tch

in e

ach

end

of t

he c

ross

(ho

rizo

ntal) st

ick

etc

Rec

ord:

Use

the

pho

tos

take

n to

seq

uenc

e th

e or

der

of m

akin

g th

e ki

te/p

arac

hute

s. W

rite

a p

roce

dura

l sen

tenc

e to

mat

ch e

ach

phot

o.

Day

24.

(Opp

ortu

nity

for

lea

rner

s to

con

trib

ute

to t

he r

econ

stru

ctio

n of

a w

ritte

n te

xt

mak

ing

use

of th

e E

nglis

h la

ngua

ge le

arne

d or

ally

from

the

cont

ext o

f visu

al a

rts

prod

uctio

n)

Teac

her,

toge

ther

with

the

stu

dent

s, w

rite

a jo

intly

con

stru

cted

te

xt li

nked

to th

e ar

t wor

k (p

roce

dura

l, de

scrip

tive,

exp

lana

tory

�.)

Talk a

bout

: -

what

we

mad

e -

what

we

need

ed

-

the

sequ

ence

of m

akin

g -

how

we m

ade

the

prod

uct

-

what

the

prod

uct r

epre

sent

s M

ake

note

s ab

out:

the

ord

er/s

eque

nce

of �m

aking�,

the

word

s we

will u

se

for

each

ste

p Co

nstr

uct

the

whole

text

: How

to

mak

e a

para

chut

e/a

kite

.

Le

arni

ng S

poke

n an

d W

ritte

n E

nglis

h an

d Le

arni

ng A

bout

W

ritte

n E

nglis

h fo

r Inf

orm

atio

nal

Use

(4)

TE

AC

HE

RA

ND

ST

UD

EN

TS

GO

ON

A P

RIN

T W

AL

K

AR

OU

ND

T

HE

CL

ASS

RO

OM

.

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ING

TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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lect

roni

c ve

rsio

n 01

06: F

ran

Mur

ray

2004

.

W

alki

ng T

alki

ng T

exts

: Col

umn

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ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

- 26

-

25

. (I

ndep

ende

nt w

ritin

g is

ask

ed o

f the

stud

ents

on

ly a

fter t

hey

have

bee

n pa

rt o

f gro

up-

nego

tiate

d w

ritin

g on

a to

pic

they

hav

e le

arne

d ab

out;

afte

r the

y ha

ve se

en a

mod

el

of w

hat t

he fi

nal p

rodu

ct m

ight

look

like

and

ha

ve le

arne

d ab

out a

spec

ts o

f its

co

nstr

uctio

n in

the

grou

p w

ritin

g pr

oces

s).

Tea

cher

org

anise

s for

the

st

uden

ts to

beg

in w

ritin

g a

text

ba

sed

on th

e ar

t/cra

ft w

ork.

(F

ollo

w se

quen

ce o

utlin

ed i

n Ac

tiviti

es 1

3 a

nd 2

2)

Child

ren

begi

n wr

itin

g a

proc

edur

e on

ki

te/p

arac

hute

mak

ing,

ba

sed

on t

he m

odel

led

grou

p ne

goti

ated

tex

t. Us

e th

e Sc

affo

ldin

g W

riti

ng a

ppro

ach.

St

uden

ts m

aint

ain

folio

of a

ll of

th

eir

wri

ting,

dat

ed.

Day

26

. A

sses

smen

t Cho

ice

(As w

ell a

s lea

rnin

g to

hea

r the

soun

ds o

f Eng

lish

in th

e co

ntex

t of E

nglis

h w

ords

, Sec

ond

lang

uage

Rea

d th

e pr

int

Disc

uss t

he te

xt, c

once

pts o

f pri

nt, g

raph

opho

nic

rela

tions

hips

, w

ords

, use

d, u

se o

f pun

ctua

tion

etc

Rec

all t

he a

ctiv

ity in

whi

ch e

ach

text

was

wri

tten

. D

iscus

s wha

t else

may

be

wri

tten

and

disp

laye

d in

this

unit

of w

ork

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ING

TEXTS

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DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

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c ve

rsio

n 01

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ran

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umn

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ner P

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-

lear

ners

nee

d to

be

taug

ht e

xplic

itly

how

to p

rono

unce

som

e E

nglis

h so

unds

that

will

not

be

part

of t

heir

so

und

repe

rtoi

re fr

om L

1. T

each

ers n

eeds

to h

ave

know

ledg

e ab

out t

he so

und

syst

em o

f the

lear

ners

� L1

so th

at th

e pr

onun

ciat

ion

of so

unds

that

exi

st in

Eng

lish

but n

ot in

L1

(or

in th

e co

mbi

natio

ns u

sed

in

L1) c

an b

e ta

ught

) A

focu

sing

exe

rcis

e Pr

actis

e E

nglis

h pr

onun

ciat

ion.

Use

any

of t

he te

xts f

rom

this

uni

t of w

ork

to

conc

entra

te o

n pa

rticu

lar a

spec

ts o

f Eng

lish

pron

unci

atio

n. In

clud

e so

unds

, wor

ds,

phra

ses,

who

le se

nten

ces i

ncor

pora

ting

into

natio

n an

d rh

ythm

. Use

tape

and

kee

p ca

sset

te in

stud

ent f

olio

. -

who

le g

roup

with

teac

her

- co

oper

ativ

ely

in g

roup

s of t

wo

or th

ree

- in

divi

dual

ly

Kee

p in

divi

dual

wor

k fo

r stu

dent

folio

Fo

cus

on:

Unf

amili

ar c

onso

nant

beg

inni

ngs w

ith u

nfam

iliar

vow

els�

. Si

ngle c

onso

nant

�b� s

ound

at

the

beginn

ing

of w

ords

: ba

lloon

, ba

ck,

Voiced

�th� s

ound

at

the

beginn

ing

of w

ords

: th

e, t

hat,

th

ere,

the

m, th

en,

Sing

le c

onso

nant

�h� s

ound

a t

he b

eginning

of

word

s: h

at,

hank

y, h

ead,

had

n�t,

har

d,

Sing

le c

onso

nant

�d� s

ound

a t

he b

eginning

of

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C

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culu

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e sp

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ing

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oth

the

field

kno

wle

dge

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the

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lish

lang

uage

to e

xpre

ss k

now

ledg

e an

d co

ncep

ts in

that

fiel

d, th

ey h

ave

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nglis

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topi

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use

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lish

to

lear

n �

lear

n th

roug

h E

nglis

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angu

age

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ow n

eeds

to b

e tr

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le to

furt

her

lear

ning

in o

ther

are

as o

f the

cur

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utco

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them

es o

f the

text

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entif

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e L

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area

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mak

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apes

an

d tr

ansc

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s her

dir

ectio

ns fo

r exe

rcis

e 31

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ldre

n w

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ake

para

chut

e/ki

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pred

ict/e

stim

ate

how

hig

h th

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y, h

ow fa

r the

y w

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o, h

ow

long

they

will

stay

in th

e ai

r. Th

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ill d

o th

is o

n a

win

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ay a

nd a

less

win

dy

day.

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y w

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ese

aspe

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par

achu

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crib

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thei

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n gr

aph.

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p fo

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me,

my

pa

rach

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kite

flew

a lo

ng w

ay; i

t wen

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nnin

g, it

fell

slow

ly; u

se li

st o

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verb

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lang

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xt)

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w a

pic

ture

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h of

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para

chut

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te, m

easu

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e fli

ght

path

non

-for

mal

uni

ts a

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met

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d w

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genr

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Text

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s/ki

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fly

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indy

day

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wind

y,

with

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expl

anat

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of w

hat

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clas

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aph

show

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Far

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/kite

fly

?

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8/29

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ndep

ende

nt w

ritin

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as

ked

of th

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uden

ts o

nly

afte

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y ha

ve

been

par

t of g

roup

-neg

otia

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writi

ng o

n a

topi

c th

ey h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t; af

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hey

have

se

en a

mod

el o

f wha

t the

fina

l pro

duct

mig

ht

look

like

and

hav

e le

arne

d ab

out a

spec

ts o

f its

con

stru

ctio

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the

grou

p wr

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pro

cess

). Te

ache

r org

anis

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r the

st

uden

ts to

beg

in w

ritin

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posit

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text

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ed o

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arni

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stud

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ay

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uden

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Eng

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and

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lish

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nter

pers

onal

(2

) and

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form

atio

nal

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A S

TU

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S (L

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ow th

at le

arne

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bot

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e fie

ld k

now

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d th

e E

nglis

h la

ngua

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kno

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and

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at fi

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they

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lish

on th

e to

pic

to b

eing

to u

se E

nglis

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le

arn

� le

arn

thro

ugh

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lish.

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Lan

guag

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arnt

now

nee

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be

tran

sfer

able

to fu

rthe

r le

arni

ng in

oth

er a

reas

of t

he c

urri

culu

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ore

and

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ess o

ther

cur

ricu

lum

out

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es th

at b

road

en

stud

ents

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eral

/aca

dem

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now

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tify

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rnin

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cien

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Mat

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catio

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echn

olog

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/Phy

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d W

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nal

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rner

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con

trib

ute

to th

e re

cons

truc

tion

of a

wri

tten

text

to le

arn

how

le

arni

ng a

rea

base

d te

xt a

re c

onst

ruct

ed a

nd h

ow E

nglis

h is

use

d in

spec

ific

way

s for

ce

rtai

n ta

sks e

g a

proc

edur

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fact

ual r

epor

t etc

). T

each

er a

nd st

uden

ts w

rite

a g

roup

-neg

otia

ted/

join

tly

cons

truct

ed te

xt th

at re

cord

s the

Lea

rnin

g A

rea

activ

ities

. Thi

s co

uld

be fu

nctio

nal,

expo

sito

ry, p

roce

dura

l, re

port

, ex

plan

ator

y et

c. S

tude

nts i

llust

rate

the

text

, seq

uenc

e th

e co

mpl

eted

par

ts a

nd d

ispla

y.

Typ

e of

text

(gen

re):

Titl

e of

text

:

Gen

re:

27/2

8/29

/30

C

LE

AR

NIN

G A

RE

A S

TU

DIE

S (In

depe

nden

t wri

ting

is a

sked

of t

he st

uden

ts

only

afte

r the

y ha

ve b

een

part

of g

roup

-ne

gotia

ted

writi

ng o

n a

topi

c th

ey h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t; af

ter t

hey

have

seen

a m

odel

of

wha

t the

fina

l pro

duct

mig

ht lo

ok li

ke a

nd

have

lear

ned

abou

t asp

ects

of i

ts c

onst

ruct

ion

in th

e gr

oup

writi

ng p

roce

ss).

Teac

her o

rgan

ises

for t

he

stud

ents

to b

egin

wri

ting

an

Expo

sitor

y te

xt b

ased

on

the

Lear

ning

Are

a st

udie

s. C

ontin

ue

to p

rovi

de so

me

time

each

day

un

til th

is pi

ece

of w

ritin

g is

com

plet

e.

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w w

ritin

g gu

idel

ines

use

d fo

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tiviti

es 1

3, 2

2, a

nd 2

5

Day

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arni

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ritte

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h an

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D L

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EA

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(Now

that

lear

ners

hav

e sp

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ime

build

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oth

the

field

kno

wle

dge

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the

Eng

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nglis

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th

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pic

to b

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nglis

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lear

n �

lear

n th

roug

h E

nglis

h. T

he L

angu

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lear

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tran

sfer

able

to fu

rthe

r lea

rnin

g in

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of t

he c

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culu

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out

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at b

road

en

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ents

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eral

/aca

dem

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now

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out t

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Mat

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So

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Edu

catio

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echn

olog

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ealth

/Phy

sica

l Edu

catio

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Do:

T

alk:

R

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d:

27/2

8/29

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B LE

AR

NIN

G A

RE

A S

TU

DIE

S (W

ritin

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C

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culu

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(Opp

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nity

for l

earn

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to c

ontr

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e to

the

reco

nstr

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n of

a w

ritte

n te

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lear

n ho

w

lear

ning

are

a ba

sed

text

are

con

stru

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and

how

Eng

lish

is u

sed

in sp

ecifi

c w

ays f

or c

erta

in

task

s eg

a pr

oced

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a fa

ctua

l rep

ort e

tc).

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cher

and

stud

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wri

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gro

up-n

egot

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d/jo

intly

con

stru

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te

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at re

cord

s the

Lea

rnin

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rea

activ

ities

. Thi

s cou

ld b

e fu

nctio

nal,

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sito

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roce

dura

l, re

port

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lana

tory

etc

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uden

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rate

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text

, seq

uenc

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ts a

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text

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re):

Titl

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text

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Ass

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roug

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ritte

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nglis

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form

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IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

ises

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lect

roni

c ve

rsio

n 01

06: F

ran

Mur

ray

2004

.

W

alki

ng T

alki

ng T

exts

: Col

umn

Plan

ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

- 33

-

G

enre

:

27/2

8/29

/30

C

LE

AR

NIN

G A

RE

A S

TU

DIE

S (In

depe

nden

t wri

ting

is a

sked

of t

he st

uden

ts

only

afte

r the

y ha

ve b

een

part

of g

roup

-ne

gotia

ted

writi

ng o

n a

topi

c th

ey h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t; af

ter t

hey

have

seen

a m

odel

of

wha

t the

fina

l pro

duct

mig

ht lo

ok li

ke a

nd

have

lear

ned

abou

t asp

ects

of i

ts c

onst

ruct

ion

in th

e gr

oup

writi

ng p

roce

ss).

Teac

her o

rgan

ises

for t

he

stud

ents

to b

egin

wri

ting

an

Expo

sitor

y te

xt b

ased

on

the

Lear

ning

Are

a st

udie

s. C

ontin

ue

to p

rovi

de so

me

time

each

day

un

til th

is pi

ece

of w

ritin

g is

com

plet

e.

Follo

w w

ritin

g gu

idel

ines

use

d fo

r ac

tiviti

es 1

3, 2

2, a

nd 2

5 St

uden

ts m

aint

ain

folio

of a

ll of

th

eir

wri

ting,

dat

ed.

FOU

RTH

LEA

RN

ING

AR

EA S

TUD

Y (I

F R

EQU

IRED

)

27

/28/

29/3

0 A

LE

AR

NIN

G A

RE

A S

TU

DIE

S (L

earn

ing

Acr

oss t

he C

urri

culu

m)

(Now

that

lear

ners

hav

e sp

ent t

ime

build

ing

up b

oth

the

field

kno

wle

dge

and

the

Eng

lish

lang

uage

to e

xpre

ss k

now

ledg

e an

d co

ncep

ts in

that

fiel

d, th

ey h

ave

enou

gh E

nglis

h on

the

topi

c to

bei

ng to

use

Eng

lish

to

lear

n �

lear

n th

roug

h E

nglis

h. T

he L

angu

age

lear

nt n

ow n

eeds

to b

e tr

ansf

erab

le to

furt

her

lear

ning

in o

ther

are

as o

f the

cur

ricu

lum

) Ex

plor

e an

d ad

dres

s oth

er c

urri

culu

m o

utco

mes

that

bro

aden

st

uden

ts� g

ener

al/a

cade

mic

kno

wle

dge

abou

t the

them

es o

f the

text

. Id

entif

y th

e L

earn

ing

area

: Sci

ence

M

aths

Soci

al E

duca

tion

Tec

hnol

ogy

Hea

lth/P

hysi

cal E

duca

tion

Lear

ning

Th

roug

h Sp

oken

an

d W

ritte

n E

nglis

h fo

r In

form

atio

nal

Use

(3a,

3b)

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PEN

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NT

WR

ITIN

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E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

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EX

PLO

ITIN

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HE

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XT

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n 01

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Do:

T

alk:

R

ecor

d:

27/2

8/29

/30

B LE

AR

NIN

G A

RE

A S

TU

DIE

S (W

ritin

g A

cros

s the

Cur

ricu

lum

) (O

ppor

tuni

ty fo

r lea

rner

s to

con

trib

ute

to th

e re

cons

truc

tion

of a

wri

tten

text

to le

arn

how

lear

ning

are

a ba

sed

text

are

co

nstr

ucte

d an

d ho

w E

nglis

h is

use

d in

spec

ific

way

s for

cer

tain

task

s eg

a pr

oced

ure,

a

fact

ual r

epor

t etc

). T

each

er a

nd st

uden

ts w

rite

a g

roup

-neg

otia

ted/

join

tly c

onst

ruct

ed

text

that

reco

rds t

he L

earn

ing

Are

a ac

tiviti

es. T

his c

ould

be

func

tiona

l, ex

posi

tory

, pro

cedu

ral,

repo

rt, e

xpla

nato

ry e

tc.

Stud

ents

illu

stra

te th

e te

xt, s

eque

nce

the

com

plet

ed p

arts

and

di

spla

y.

Typ

e of

text

(gen

re):

Titl

e of

text

:

Gen

re:

27/2

8/29

/30

C

LE

AR

NIN

G A

RE

A S

TU

DIE

S (In

depe

nden

t wri

ting

is a

sked

of t

he st

uden

ts

only

afte

r the

y ha

ve b

een

part

of g

roup

-ne

gotia

ted

writi

ng o

n a

topi

c th

ey h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t; af

ter t

hey

have

seen

a m

odel

of

wha

t the

fina

l pro

duct

mig

ht lo

ok li

ke a

nd

have

lear

ned

abou

t asp

ects

of i

ts c

onst

ruct

ion

in th

e gr

oup

writi

ng p

roce

ss).

Teac

her o

rgan

ises

for t

he

stud

ents

to b

egin

wri

ting

an

Expo

sitor

y te

xt b

ased

on

the

Lear

ning

Are

a st

udie

s. C

ontin

ue

to p

rovi

de so

me

time

each

day

un

til th

is pi

ece

of w

ritin

g is

com

plet

e.

Lear

ning

Wri

tten

Eng

lish

and

Lear

ning

Abo

ut

Wri

tten

Eng

lish

for I

nter

pers

onal

(2

) and

In

form

atio

nal

Use

(4)

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ING

TEXTS

IN

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PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

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ises

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c ve

rsio

n 01

06: F

ran

Mur

ray

2004

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alki

ng T

alki

ng T

exts

: Col

umn

Plan

ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

- 35

-

Follo

w w

ritin

g gu

idel

ines

use

d fo

r ac

tiviti

es 1

3, 2

2, a

nd 2

5 St

uden

ts m

aint

ain

folio

of a

ll of

th

eir

wri

ting,

dat

ed.

31

. A S

hapi

ng E

xerc

ise

(Eng

lish

si c

onst

ruct

ed d

iffer

ently

for

writi

ng p

urpo

ses

than

it is

for

spee

ch;

Indi

geno

us l

earn

ers

writi

ng o

ften

repr

esen

ts �

spee

ch w

ritte

n do

wn�.

The

form

al c

onst

ruct

ion

of w

ritte

n En

glis

h ne

eds t

o be

exp

licitl

y ta

ught

to se

cond

lang

uage

lear

ners

) Ex

amin

e th

e di

ffere

nces

bet

wee

n sp

oken

and

wri

tten

lang

uage

. A

naly

se

som

e of

the

spo

ken

Engl

ish

from

any

asp

ect

of t

he p

revi

ous

Lear

ning

Are

a ac

tivity

(tap

ed) a

nd c

ompa

re w

ith th

e w

ritte

n m

ode

of th

e gr

oup-

nego

tiate

d te

xt

resu

lting

from

the

activ

ity.

Mai

n te

achi

ng p

oint

s: U

sing

the

ora

l tra

nscr

ipt

of t

he p

roce

dure

, co

mpa

re t

his

to t

he g

roup

neg

otia

ted

text

of

the

proc

edur

e,

expl

aini

ng t

o ch

ildre

n th

at w

riti

ng is

not

just

tal

k wr

itte

n do

wn, a

s th

e di

ffer

ence

s in

lang

uage

con

stru

ctio

n ar

e hi

ghlig

hted

.

D

ay

32

. A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se (

Rea

ding

com

preh

ensi

on ta

sk c

omm

only

use

d in

ext

erna

l tes

ting

and

text

bo

ok g

enre

) D

ecid

e ab

out t

rue/

fals

e st

atem

ents

bas

ed o

n th

e in

form

atio

n fr

om th

e cu

rric

ulum

are

as st

udie

d in

this

unit.

-

who

le g

roup

with

teac

her

- co

oper

ativ

ely

in g

roup

s of t

wo

or th

ree

- in

divi

dual

ly

Kee

p in

divi

dual

wor

k fo

r stu

dent

folio

M

ake

up T

/F s

tate

men

ts f

rom

the

mat

hs a

nd s

cien

ce a

reas

eg

Kite

s/pa

rach

utes

fly

a lo

ng w

ay o

n da

ys w

ith n

o wi

nd.

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ITIN

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E

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EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

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c ve

rsio

n 01

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ran

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ray

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ng T

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umn

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ner P

rimar

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mpl

ate

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-

We

need

win

d fo

r ki

tes/

para

chut

es t

o fl

y.

Day

33

. A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

(Rea

ding

com

preh

ensi

on ta

sk c

omm

only

use

d in

ext

erna

l tes

ting

and

text

boo

k ge

nre)

M

ake

judg

emen

ts a

bout

mul

tiple

-cho

ice

answ

ers,

give

n qu

estio

ns b

ased

on

the

orig

inal

text

and

the

curr

icul

um a

reas

stud

ied

in th

is u

nit.

- w

hole

gro

up w

ith te

ache

r -

coop

erat

ivel

y in

gro

ups o

f tw

o or

thre

e -

indi

vidu

ally

K

eep

indi

vidu

al w

ork

for s

tude

nt fo

lio

Mak

e up

item

s fr

om t

he m

aths

and

sci

ence

are

as e

g

Para

chut

es/k

ites

can

be

mad

e fr

om (p

aper

, bri

cks,

sto

nes)

. Ki

tes

will

fly

furt

her

on (r

ainy

, win

dy, s

unny

) day

s.

Day

34

. A

shap

ing

exer

cise

(Rea

ding

com

preh

ensi

on ta

sk c

omm

only

use

d in

ext

erna

l tes

ting

and

text

boo

k ge

nre)

R

ecog

nise

and

cor

rect

subs

titut

ions

/lies

in th

e te

xt

- w

hole

gro

up w

ith te

ache

r -

coop

erat

ivel

y in

gro

ups o

f tw

o or

thre

e -

indi

vidu

ally

K

eep

indi

vidu

al w

ork

for s

tude

nt fo

lio

Mak

e up

item

s fr

om t

he t

ext.

Focu

s on

act

ion

word

s an

d pr

epos

itio

ns e

g �I

t tied

the

um

brel

la to

Mr

white

and

qui

ckly t

urne

d it

insi

de

out�

TE

AC

HE

R

AN

D S

TU

DE

NT

S G

O O

N A

PR

INT

WA

LK

AR

OU

ND

T

HE

CL

ASS

RO

OM

.

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ING

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PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

ING

TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

xerc

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n 01

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ner P

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-

Day

35.

(A

t the

end

of t

he u

nit,

the

lear

ners

will

be

very

fam

iliar

with

the

orig

inal

text

, its

str

uctu

re a

nd g

ram

mat

ical

feat

ures

. Thi

s le

vel o

f fam

iliar

ity w

ill e

nabl

e th

e st

uden

ts to

join

in th

e gr

oup

cons

truc

tion

of a

noth

er te

xt u

sing

thes

e fa

mili

ar s

truc

ture

s �

tran

sfer

ring

ling

uist

ic k

now

ledg

e to

ano

ther

topi

c)

Usi

ng k

now

ledg

e ga

ined

of

the

stru

ctur

e of

the

stim

ulus

tex

t and

th

e w

ay t

he a

utho

r ha

s co

nstru

cted

the

tex

t, te

ache

r an

d st

uden

ts

join

tly c

onst

ruct

ano

ther

text

mod

elle

d on

the

stim

ulus

text

. T

ype

of te

xt:

narr

ativ

e fo

llow

ing

the

sam

e or

gani

satio

nal

stru

ctur

e (s

ee e

xerc

ise 6

) T

itle:

�Th

e tid

e ca

me

in�

or �

The

rain

fell�

36.

(Ind

epen

dent

wri

ting

is a

sked

of t

he

stud

ents

onl

y af

ter t

hey

have

bee

n pa

rt

of g

roup

-neg

otia

ted

wri

ting

on a

topi

c th

ey h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t; af

ter t

hey

have

seen

a m

odel

of w

hat t

he fi

nal

prod

uct m

ight

look

like

and

hav

e le

arne

d ab

out a

spec

ts o

f its

co

nstr

uctio

n in

the

grou

p w

ritin

g pr

oces

s).

Stud

ents

beg

in to

writ

e a

text

by

impr

ovis

ing

on th

e or

igin

al te

xt

in o

ne o

f the

follo

win

g w

ays:

lang

uage

item

s, pl

ot, s

ettin

g,

cont

ent.

Day

Rea

d th

e pr

int

Disc

uss t

he te

xt, c

once

pts o

f prin

t, gr

apho

phon

ic re

latio

nshi

ps, w

ords

, use

d,

use

of p

unct

uatio

n et

c R

ecal

l the

act

ivity

in w

hich

eac

h te

xt w

as w

ritte

n.

Disc

uss w

hat e

lse

may

be

writ

ten

and

disp

laye

d in

this

unit

of

wor

k

Lear

ning

Spo

ken

and

Wri

tten

Eng

lish

and

Lear

ning

Abo

ut

Wri

tten

Eng

lish

for I

nter

pers

onal

(2

) and

In

form

atio

nal

Use

( 3b

)

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ING

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DE

NT

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ITIN

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E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

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c ve

rsio

n 01

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ran

Mur

ray

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alki

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alki

ng T

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umn

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ner P

rimar

y Te

mpl

ate

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Fo

llow

writi

ng g

uide

lines

use

d fo

r Ac

tiviti

es 1

3, 2

2, 2

5, 2

7 �

30.

Ch

ildre

n be

gin

to w

rite

th

eir

own

inno

vati

on o

n th

e te

xt, b

ased

on

the

grou

p-ne

goti

ated

mod

el.

Use

the

scaf

fold

ing

writ

ing

mod

el.

St

uden

ts m

aint

ain

folio

of a

ll of

th

eir w

ritin

g, d

ated

.

Day

37

. Ass

essm

ent C

hoic

e

(Rea

ding

and

kno

wle

dge

com

preh

ensi

on

task

com

mon

ly u

sed

in e

xter

nal t

estin

g an

d te

xt b

ook

genr

e)

A sh

apin

g ex

erci

se

Iden

tify

and

use

ques

tions

and

st

atem

ents

. Stu

dent

s giv

e ve

rbal

an

d w

ritte

n an

swer

s to

ques

tions

ba

sed

on th

e ar

eas s

tudi

ed a

nd

any

of th

e te

xt p

rodu

ced

in th

e un

it of

wor

k.

- w

hole

gro

up w

ith te

ache

r -

coop

erat

ivel

y in

gro

ups

of tw

o or

thre

e -

indi

vidu

ally

K

eep

indi

vidu

al w

ork

for s

tude

nt

folio

Us

e th

e m

aths

/sci

ence

ta

sk a

nd t

he t

ext

to

gene

rate

que

stio

ns/

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TEXTS

IN

DE

PEN

DE

NT

WR

ITIN

G

E

XPL

OR

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TH

E T

EX

T

Act

iviti

es

EX

PLO

ITIN

G T

HE

TE

XT

E

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c ve

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n 01

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ray

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-

answ

ers,

eg

Wha

t m

ater

ials

can

you

us

e to

mak

e a

kite

/par

achu

te?

Whi

ch c

hara

cter

had

the

ba

lloon

? W

hat

happ

ened

to

all t

he

thin

gs in

the

air

whe

n th

e wi

nd w

ent

away

? W

hat

was

the

long

est

dist

ance

tha

t a

kite

/par

achu

te f

lew?

D

ay

38. (

Lear

ning

to u

se o

ral E

nglis

h fo

rmal

ly is

a sp

ecifi

cally

taug

ht a

nd le

arne

d sk

ill, o

ne th

at is

va

lued

in fo

rmal

Wes

tern

edu

catio

n. T

his a

ctiv

ity a

llows

stud

ents

to le

arn

and

prac

tise

this

En

glis

h la

ngua

ge sk

ill w

ith m

ater

ial t

hat i

s fam

iliar

to th

em, t

hat t

hey

have

bee

n ta

ught

abo

ut

and

scaf

fold

ed in

to.)

Expl

ore

the

text

thro

ugh

an o

ral p

rese

ntat

ion.

Dis

cuss

, dec

ide

on a

nd

plan

the

pres

enta

tion.

Mak

e gr

oup

note

s, us

e he

adin

gs e

g w

hat,

who

, w

here

, whe

n, h

ow.

Typ

e of

pre

sent

atio

n: T

ake

two

or t

hree

gro

up n

egot

iate

d te

xts

and

read

th

ese

to o

ther

cla

sses

Pl

an w

ho w

ill r

ead

whic

h te

xt in

whi

ch g

roup

s, p

ract

ise

read

ing

Invi

te so

me

stud

ents

and

teac

hers

fr

om a

noth

er c

lass

and

org

anis

e fo

r the

stud

ents

to ta

ke th

em o

n a

Prin

t Wal

k ar

ound

the r

oom

.

Lear

ning

Spo

ken

Eng

lish

and

Lear

ning

Th

roug

h Sp

oken

E

nglis

h fo

r In

terp

erso

nal U

se

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/del

iver

ing.

Au

dien

ce �

teac

hers

and

/or

pare

nts

OR

A

role

pla

y ba

sed

on t

he t

ext,

usi

ng a

rea

der.

Titl

e: �T

he w

ork

we h

ave

been

doi

ng t

his

term

� O

R �T

he w

ind

Blew

� by

Year

3 f

or s

choo

l ass

embl

y/pa

rent

s et

c.

Day

39. (

Opp

ortu

nity

for l

earn

ers t

o co

ntri

bute

to th

e re

cons

truc

tion

of a

wri

tten

text

to su

ppor

t a

form

al o

ral p

rese

ntat

ion,

mak

ing

use

of th

e En

glis

h la

ngua

ge le

arne

d or

ally

from

the

cont

ext o

f pl

anni

ng fo

r and

pra

ctis

ing

for t

he o

ral p

rese

ntat

ion)

) W

rite

a g

roup

-neg

otia

ted

text

to su

ppor

t the

pre

sent

atio

n eg

a sc

ript

for a

pla

y, a

repo

rt to

pre

sent

, a st

atem

ent e

tc fo

r a ta

lk.

The

orde

r in

whi

ch t

he t

exts

will

be

pres

ente

d, li

st o

f wh

o is

in w

hich

gro

up a

nd li

st o

f au

dien

ce p

arti

cipa

nts;

pl

ans

that

sho

w wh

ich

day,

the

invi

tati

ons.

OR

The

orde

r an

d pl

ans

for

the

role

pla

y � w

ho w

ill r

ead,

who

will

get

the

pr

ops

toge

ther

, wha

t wi

ll th

ey b

e, e

tc, i

nvita

tion

s.

40. (

Inde

pend

ent w

ritin

g is

ask

ed o

f the

st

uden

ts o

nly

afte

r the

y ha

ve b

een

part

of

grou

p-ne

gotia

ted

writi

ng o

n a

topi

c th

ey h

ave

lear

ned

abou

t; af

ter t

hey

have

seen

a m

odel

of

wha

t the

fina

l pro

duct

mig

ht lo

ok li

ke a

nd

have

lear

ned

abou

t asp

ects

of i

ts c

onst

ruct

ion

in th

e gr

oup

writi

ng p

roce

ss).

Stud

ents

writ

e a

text

to su

ppor

t th

e or

al p

rese

ntat

ion

for

exam

ple,

a d

ialo

gue,

a ta

lk, a

po

ster

, not

es

Day

Lear

ning

Spo

ken

an

d W

ritte

n E

nglis

h an

d Le

arni

ng A

bout

W

ritte

n E

nglis

h fo

r Int

erpe

rson

al

(2) a

nd

Info

rmat

iona

l U

se (4

)

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elin

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om

prev

ious

wri

ting

activ

ities

E

ach

stud

ent

writ

es a

n in

vita

tion

to

one

or m

ore

peop

le t

ellin

g wh

at, w

hen,

an

d wh

o.

D

ay

41.

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mal

ora

l Eng

lish

requ

ires

an

audi

ence

, pre

fera

bly

one

that

doe

s not

kno

w th

e co

nten

t and

ha

s a n

eed

to k

now

so th

at th

e co

ntex

t for

del

iver

y of

the

oral

pre

sent

atio

n is

real

) O

rgan

ise th

e tim

e an

d ve

nue,

invi

tatio

ns e

tc a

nd g

ive

the

oral

pr

esen

tatio

ns.

A

t Sc

hool a

ssem

bly

or a

noth

er o

rgan

ised

tim

e.

Se

e pa

ge 2

06

42. A

sses

smen

t K

eep

the

first

dra

ft an

d th

e fin

al c

opie

s of e

ach

piec

e of

w

ritin

g do

ne b

y th

e st

uden

ts.

Com

plet

e a

wri

ting

anal

ysis

(See

App

endi

ces i

n W

TT

fo

lder

) on

each

pie

ce o

f wri

ting

done

for

the

unit

of w

ork.

A

llow

the

stud

ent t

o de

cide

on

her/

his b

est p

iece

for

asse

ssm

ent.

Not

e do

wn

area

s of

diffi

culty

for

indi

vidu

al

stud

ents

. (T

hese

then

bec

ome

focu

ses o

f the

nex

t tea

chin

g un

it)

This

cou

ld p

rove

tim

e

42

. Ass

essm

ent

How

do

I ass

ess s

tude

nts�

Ora

l Eng

lish

lang

uage

dev

elop

men

t? F

or e

ach

unit

of w

ork,

as

sess

ora

l lan

guag

e ba

sed

on fi

ve a

ctiv

ities

from

the

list b

elow

. Mak

e no

tes

abou

t the

st

uden

t�s k

now

ledg

e, u

nder

stan

ding

s and

use

of l

angu

age.

A g

roup

of s

tude

nts s

houl

d be

targ

eted

for

asse

ssm

ent i

n ea

ch u

nit o

f wor

k. E

ngag

e th

e ta

rget

ed st

uden

ts in

talk

du

ring

the

activ

ities

mar

ked

�Ass

essm

ent C

hoic

e� in

this

colu

mn.

Tap

e th

e st

uden

ts

usin

g St

anda

rd A

ustr

alia

n E

nglis

h an

d w

rite

ane

cdot

al n

otes

abo

ut th

e st

uden

t�s u

se

of E

nglis

h as

obs

erve

d.

See

Page

203

. A

s the

follo

win

g ac

tiviti

es a

re d

one

or th

roug

h th

e re

visi

ting

of th

ese

activ

ities

:

EIT

HE

R

Tap

e th

e st

uden

t as s

/he:

3.

G

ives

her

/his

idea

s, op

inio

ns, a

nd fe

elin

gs a

bout

the

stim

ulus

text

O

R

7.

She/

he r

etel

ls th

e st

imul

us te

xt.

42. A

sses

smen

t a)

C

ompl

ete

a re

adin

g re

cord

she

et fo

r ea

ch

stud

ent u

sing

the

orig

inal

st

imul

us te

xt a

nd o

ne

othe

r un

seen

text

of

appr

oxim

atel

y th

e sa

me

lingu

istic

cha

lleng

e. T

his

unse

en te

xt s

houl

d be

lin

ked

in c

once

pts t

o th

e to

pic/

them

e of

the

orig

inal

text

to p

rovi

de

sem

antic

fam

iliar

ity. (

See

page

s 199

-202

and

the

asse

ssm

ent a

naly

sis s

heet

s in

the

App

endi

ces i

n th

e W

TT

fold

er).

Mak

e no

te

of a

ny o

ther

text

use

d of

Ass

essm

ent C

hoic

eLe

arni

ng S

poke

n E

nglis

h an

d Le

arni

ng A

bout

Sp

oken

Eng

lish

for I

nter

pers

onal

U

se (2

) and

In

form

atio

nal

Use

(4)

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all

done

at t

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e un

it of

wor

k. Id

entif

y tim

e ea

ch w

eek

to a

naly

se

stud

ents

� wri

ting

and

to k

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ongo

ing

reco

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the

wor

k in

eac

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uden

t�s

folio

, col

lect

ed fr

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e ex

erci

ses i

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is co

lum

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mm

ativ

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port

on

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stud

ent�s

de

mon

stra

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pmen

t dur

ing

this

unit.

AS

WE

LL

AS

Mak

e no

tes

and/

or ta

pe a

bout

the

stud

ent�s

21

. Res

pons

es to

the

liste

ning

, ora

l clo

ze a

nd in

tona

tion

exer

cise

s

OR

26

. Pro

nunc

iatio

n of

the

targ

et so

unds

/wor

ds/p

hras

es fo

r th

e un

it A

ND

19

. Hav

e th

e w

hole

gro

up si

ng so

ngs,

reci

te p

oem

s or

say

rhym

es fr

om th

e un

it of

wor

k; o

bser

ve a

nd n

ote

stud

ent�s

leve

l of p

artic

ipat

ion,

co

nfid

ence

and

cla

rity

of w

ords

, soc

io-c

ultu

ral u

nder

stan

ding

s, in

ta

lkin

g ab

out t

exts

pro

duce

d, a

ctiv

ities

don

e et

c.

OR

41

. D

urin

g th

e gr

oup

oral

pre

sent

atio

n, o

bser

ve a

nd n

ote

stud

ent�s

leve

l of

part

icip

atio

n, c

onfid

ence

, cla

rity

of w

ords

and

soci

o-cu

ltura

l

unde

rsta

ndin

gs, i

ndic

ated

by

usin

g E

nglis

h la

ngua

ge a

ppro

pria

tely

in

th

is co

ntex

t. IN

AD

DIT

ION

TO

15

. Tap

e th

e st

uden

t des

crib

ing

the

stor

y m

ap o

r gr

aph.

Not

e st

uden

t�s

un

ders

tand

ing

of th

e st

ruct

ure

of th

e w

ritte

n te

xt th

roug

h he

r/hi

s

sp

oken

des

crip

tion

of th

is ac

tivity

.

OR

23

. Tap

e th

e st

uden

t des

crib

ing/

expl

aini

ng w

hat o

r ho

w h

e/sh

e m

ade

so

met

hing

in A

rt/C

raft.

A

ND

27

-30A

. Tap

e th

e st

uden

t giv

ing

info

rmat

ion

abou

t wha

t the

y ha

ve

lear

ned

in o

ne o

f the

inte

grat

ed le

arni

ng ta

sks,

and

how

this

lear

ning

is

now

rep

rese

nted

in th

e vi

sual

rec

ords

aro

und

the

room

.

OR

27

� 3

0B. T

ape

the

stud

ent g

ivin

g in

form

atio

n ab

out t

he g

roup

text

th

at w

as w

ritt

en, n

ote

the

stud

ent�

s und

erst

andi

ng o

f the

type

of t

ext,

the

way

the

info

rmat

ion

is or

gani

sed

as w

ell a

s the

lear

ning

are

a

know

ledg

e w

ithin

the

text

.

Ta

ke n

ote

of th

e ab

ility

of e

ach

stud

ent t

o us

e th

e ta

rget

ed it

ems o

f SA

E fo

r thi

s uni

t in

wri

tten

in th

is un

it of

w

ork

that

the

stud

ent c

an

read

Not

e th

e us

e of

su

cces

sful

rea

ding

st

rate

gies

as w

ell a

s the

ar

eas o

f diff

icul

ty.

This

cou

ld p

rove

tim

e co

nsum

ing

if it

is a

ll do

ne a

t the

en

d of

the

unit

of w

ork.

Iden

tify

time

each

wee

k to

hea

r stu

dent

s re

ad a

nd to

kee

p on

goin

g re

cord

s b)

U

se th

e w

ork

in e

ach

stud

ent�s

folio

, col

lect

ed

from

the

exer

cise

s in

this

colu

mn

to w

rite

a

desc

ript

ive

sum

mat

ive

repo

rt o

n th

e st

uden

t�s

dem

onst

rate

d la

ngua

ge

deve

lopm

ent d

urin

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is un

it.

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sks1 (I

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ende

nt w

ritt

en ta

sk)

Exp

ecte

d Q

ualit

ies

Indi

cato

rs o

f stu

dent

per

form

ance

Hig

h M

ediu

m

Low

C

onte

nt a

nd u

nder

stan

ding

of r

elev

ant

conc

epts

: Est

imat

ion

and

then

m

easu

rem

ent;

com

pari

son

of n

on-fo

rmal

an

d m

easu

rem

ent i

n m

etre

s thr

ough

re

adin

g an

d ex

plan

atio

n of

the

grap

hs

Inde

pend

ently

iden

tifie

s the

leng

th in

bot

h no

n-fo

rmal

and

met

res t

hat t

he

para

chut

e/ki

te/k

ites h

ave

flown

and

co

mpa

res t

his w

ith th

e es

timat

ed le

ngth

With

som

e gu

idan

ce, t

he le

ngth

in b

oth

non-

form

al a

nd m

etre

s tha

t the

pa

rach

ute/

kite

s hav

e flo

wnan

d de

mon

strat

es a

n ab

ility

to c

ompa

re t

his

with

the

estim

ated

leng

th w

ith te

ache

r su

ppor

t

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rienc

es d

iffic

ulty

in id

entif

ying

the

leng

th in

bot

h no

n-fo

rmal

and

met

res t

hat

the

para

chut

e/ki

te/k

ites h

ave

flown

a

nd in

dem

onstr

atin

g th

is kn

owle

dge,

eve

n wi

th te

ache

r sup

port

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onst

rate

s abi

lity

to m

ake

info

rmed

co

mm

ents

/sta

tem

ents

/gen

eral

isat

ions

lin

ked

to th

e su

bjec

t mat

ter

Inde

pend

ently

exp

lain

s the

info

rmat

ion

on

the

grap

h b

ased

on

lear

ned

know

ledg

e w

hen

anot

her c

lass

vis

its,

Atte

mpt

s to

mak

e sta

tem

ents

abo

ut

/com

men

t on/

gene

ralis

e so

me

aspe

cts o

f th

e in

form

atio

n on

the

grap

h, b

ased

on

lear

ned

know

ledg

e w

hen

supp

orte

d by

ot

her s

tude

nts a

nd in

form

atio

n ar

ound

the

room

for

som

e po

ints

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ds sc

affo

ldin

g su

ppor

t to

mak

e st

atem

ents

abou

t /co

mm

ent o

n/ge

nera

lise

abou

t the

info

rmat

ion

on th

e gr

aph,

ba

sed

on le

arne

d kn

owle

dge

whe

n he

avily

scaf

fold

ed b

y th

e te

ache

r

Wri

ting

task

U

ses i

deas

gen

erat

ed in

mod

elle

d w

ritin

g an

d pl

anni

ng, a

nd m

akes

furth

er li

nks a

nd

conn

ectio

ns re

leva

nt to

the

topi

c, in

a te

xt

with

seve

ral d

iffer

ent r

elat

ed id

eas.

Is a

ble

to tr

ansf

er m

ain

idea

s gen

erat

ed in

m

odel

led

writ

ing

and

plan

ning

by

writ

ing

a te

xt w

ith so

me

rela

ted

idea

s.

Requ

ires a

ssis

tanc

e in

gen

erat

ing

and

trans

ferr

ing

idea

s to

writ

e sh

ort t

exts.

Eff

ectiv

e or

gani

satio

n:

a. P

roce

ss

Show

s evi

denc

e of

bei

ng a

ble

to u

se th

e te

ache

r�s m

odel

led

text

/ prin

t aro

und

the

room

effe

ctiv

ely

to p

lan

and

orga

nise

idea

s pr

ior t

o w

ritin

g.

Atte

mpt

s to

use

teac

her�

s mod

elle

d te

xt/

prin

t aro

und

the

room

to p

lan

and

orga

nise

id

eas p

rior t

o w

ritin

g bu

t mig

ht n

ot d

o so

ef

fect

ivel

y or

con

sist

ently

.

Requ

ires a

ssis

tanc

e to

use

teac

her�

s m

odel

led

text

/ prin

t aro

und

the r

oom

to

plan

and

org

anis

e id

eas p

rior t

o w

ritin

g.

b. P

rodu

ct

Dem

onstr

ates

an

abili

ty to

org

anis

e th

e su

bjec

t mat

ter i

n a

man

ner a

ppro

pria

te to

an

info

rmat

ion/

fact

ual r

epor

t

Dem

onstr

ates

som

e el

emen

ts of

the

orga

nisa

tion

of th

e su

bjec

t mat

ter

appr

opria

te to

an

info

rmat

ion/

fact

ual

repo

rt.

Dem

onstr

ates

littl

e ev

iden

ce o

f un

ders

tand

ing

how

to o

rgan

ise

the

subj

ect

mat

ter a

ppro

pria

te to

an

info

rmat

ion/

fact

ual r

epor

t. C

ontr

ol o

f lan

guag

e Pr

oduc

es te

xts u

sing

the

conv

entio

nal

gram

mat

ical

feat

ures

and

app

ropr

iate

pu

nctu

atio

n (a

cord

ing

to E

SL le

vel

targ

ette

d).

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uces

text

s usin

g so

me

gram

mat

ical

fe

atur

es a

nd p

unct

uatio

n (a

cord

ing

to E

SL

leve

l tar

gette

d).

Lim

ited

use

the

basi

c gr

amm

atic

al fe

atur

es

and

punc

tuat

ion(

acor

ding

to E

SL le

vel

targ

ette

d)..

U

ses k

now

ledg

e of

sigh

t wor

ds a

nd le

tter�

soun

d co

rres

pond

ence

s and

a v

arie

ty o

f st

rate

gies

to sp

ell f

amili

ar w

ords

(aco

rdin

g to

ESL

leve

l tar

gette

d).

Mak

es a

ttem

pts a

t usin

g k

now

ledg

e of

si

ght w

ords

and

lette

r�so

und

corr

espo

nden

ces t

o sp

ell f

amili

ar w

ords

(a

cord

ing

to E

SL le

vel t

arge

tted)

..

Use

s lim

ited

know

ledg

e of

si

ght w

ords

and

let

ter�

soun

d co

rres

pond

ence

(aco

rdin

g to

ESL

leve

l ta

rget

ted)

.

1 A

ckno

wle

dgem

ent:

Cur

ricul

um C

orpo

ratio

n As

sess

men

t for

Lea

rnin

g W

ebsi

te.

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on th

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wor

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I d

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atio

n ab

out

how

we

mad

e th

e pa

rach

ute

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es a

nd h

ow fa

r ea

ch o

ne w

as a

ble

to

fly

and

incl

ude

d al

l the

det

ails

.

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nned

wha

t I w

as g

oing

to w

rite

usi

ng th

e su

ppor

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y re

sear

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kite

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d m

easu

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r fl

ight

path

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fact

ual

text

exp

lain

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the

grap

h sh

owin

g ho

w fa

r ea

ch p

arac

hute

/ki

te fl

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nd

redr

afte

d it

to m

ake

sure

that

all

the

info

rmat

ion

that

cou

ld b

e w

as in

clu

ded,

was

.

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how

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