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Using academic vocabulary I : connecting ideas & learning conventions of your discipline. Week 2 Jan. 26. Agenda. Conventions By writing type By discipline Connecting ideas Linking words Summary vocabulary. Conventions by writing type. Often given by an instructor or journal - PowerPoint PPT Presentation
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Using academic vocabulary I : connecting ideas & learning
conventions of your disciplineWeek 2Jan. 26
Conventions ◦ By writing type◦ By discipline
Connecting ideas◦ Linking words◦ Summary vocabulary
Agenda
Often given by an instructor or journal Published Book Review (e.g., LinguistList) Journal article (differs by journal and by
discipline) Thesis/dissertation (differs by journal and by
discipline)
Conventions by writing type
Overall shape of a research paper (such as journal article)
(From Swales & Feak, 2012, p 285)
Introduction
Methods
Results
Discussion
General
General
Specific
Specific
Let’s look at what you brought.Does it follow this?
Introduction◦ This paper deals with…◦ The novel feature of our study…◦ The central issue in…◦ It is reasonable assume…◦ There are many ways of measuring…◦ The reason is….
Methods◦ We collected…◦ The characterization of….◦ Our specific sampling…◦ Participants….◦ This instrument consists of…◦ For the analysis of….
Results◦ (Figure 1 shows…)◦ Most importantly…◦ Our findings show that….◦ Significantly,…◦ On the other hand, …◦ The aims of the study were…
◦ *Finally, we would like to conclude….
Discussion◦ The analysis suggests…◦ The findings are as follows…◦ The demonstration shows that…◦ First…. Second… Third…◦ The comparison between….and….◦ By using this model system for analyzing ….
Critiques—purposes are often different by discipline
What do critiques accomplish:◦ Shows the writer’s opinion◦ Create a niche◦ Express evaluation by the field’s standard of judgment◦ Be fair and reasonable
What reasons for using critique have you encountered, and in what genre (book review, etc.)?
Where is critique often found in academic writing? (it will differ by type of writing)
Conventions by discipline
Standard of judgment differences by discipline:◦ Humanities: may focus on how “interesting” the
arguments are◦ Social sciences: may focus on the methodology◦ Science and engineering: may focus on results and
implications for the real world
In the article you brought:◦ Identify the type of writing (e.g., book review)◦ Locate some element of critique; what section is it in?
what does it focus on?
Conventions by discipline
Good Work Average Work Poor WorkHumanities scholarly
originalsound thin
Social sciences perceptive rigorous
scholarly anecdotal
Physics elegant economical
accurate sloppy
Example of Language by discipline
(In Swales & Feak, 2012, p 265, from Becher, 1987)
Differences by discipline:◦ Science and medicine: “simple” can be positive, “well
planned”◦ Social sciences: “simple” is negative, “unsophisticated”
Looking at the example of critique you already identified, how does the writer indicate:◦ good work?◦ average work or limitation?◦ poor work or severe restriction?
Applied
Connecting Ideas, when we return
Workshop Feedback—please return before you leave today, even if you want to wait until after workshopping today.
Break time!
Workshop Feedback HO
Old-to-new connections
Yesterday, Ronny took me to a Dave Matthews concert in Phoenix. When we got to Sun Devil Stadium, he realized that he had left the tickets back in Tucson, so he drove back to get them. While he was gone, I sat on the curb next to some scalpers. One of them started hitting on me, so I flirted with him for a while to see if I could get free tickets. What transitions tie
the sentences together?
Old-to-new connections Take a look at the following sentence:
◦ (a) Some astonishing questions about the nature of the universe have been raised by scientists exploring the nature of black holes in space.
Which of the sentences below better follows the one above? Why?
◦ (b) The collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble creates a black hole.
◦ (c) Each black hole is created by the collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble.
Connecting Ideas Old-to-new, another use! Put new information at the end of the
sentence Weak ending:
◦ Women often feel silenced by men, according to one researcher.
Revised:◦ According to one researcher, women often feel
silenced by men.
Consistent subjects/Topic Chains Jarring shift
◦ Memoirs are becoming increasingly popular. Readers of all ages are finding them appealing.
Topic Chain◦ Memoirs are becoming increasingly popular. They appeal
to readers of all ages.
Old-to-new:◦ (a) Some astonishing questions about the nature of the
universe have been raised by scientists exploring the nature of black holes in space.
◦ (c) Each black hole is created by the collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble.
Connecting Ideas Frequent topic shifts:
◦ I have lived all my life in Brooklyn, New York. Park Slope is a neighborhood that has many different ethnic cultures. Harmony exists among the people, even though it does not in many other Brooklyn neighborhoods. The Slope has been….
◦ Many articles in the press have praised the Slope for its ethnic variety.
Revised:◦ Park Slope neighborhood in Brooklyn, New York has many
different ethnic cultures. Its diversity and harmony among them has been praised in many articles in the press.
◦ I have lived all my life in Brooklyn, New York. As its neighborhood Park Slope has many different ethnic cultures, where harmony exists among
Topic Shifts HO
Connecting Ideas Frequent topic shifts:
◦ I have lived all my life in Brooklyn, New York. Park Slope is a neighborhood that has many different ethnic cultures. Harmony exists among the people, even though it does not in many other Brooklyn neighborhoods. Many articles in the press have praised the Slope for its ethnic variety.
Revised with topic chain (consistent subjects):◦ Many different ethnic cultures flourish in Park Slop,
Brooklyn, where I have lived all my life. These different cultures live together harmoniously, even though they do not in many other Brooklyn neighborhoods. In fact, the ethnic variety of the Slope has often been praised in the press.
Topic Shifts HO
Connecting Ideas1. On a single paragraph from your writing,
look at the connection between sentences.
2. Look for one place where you use old-to-new or COULD use old-to-new.
3. Look for one place where you use a topic chain or COULD use a topic chain.
“this/these + noun” can establish a good old-to-new flow of information
◦ Writing instructors know that students need to understand the differences between formal and informal language. This understanding can help students make strategic choices in their writing.
What does “This understanding” refer to?
Summary words to connect
◦ In recent years, the number of students applying to PhD programs has increased steadily, while the number of places available has remained fairly constant. This situation has resulted in intense competition for admission.
What does “This situation” refer to?
“This/these” does not always need a noun, but the risk is misunderstanding.
Summary words to connect
P37,39 HOP45-46 HO
Look in your writing for this connection:◦ Using “this/that” + noun (or no noun)◦ Is it clear what the summary word refers to?◦ Is there a better summary word?
Applied, if time…
Bring one to two articles from a journal or database in your discipline, similar to what you are writing (hard copy or on your computer)
Workshop Recommendation: exchange emails or contact so that you can ask questions during the week if you both are willing
Homework
Did you have any difficulty giving feedback to your partner last week?
Any easy changes we can make this week to make it go smoother?
Would it help to exchange emails to be able to communicate during the week?
Quick workshopping feedback
Keep the same partner as last week Use the same workshopping instructions
This week’s global issue to consider:◦ Where critiquing is appropriate
This week’s local issue to consider:◦ Transitioning and connecting language
Two have signed up to meet me today.
Return Workshop Feedback before you leave.
Workshop
If time
(From Liu & Hansen, 2002, p 138)