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PUSAT TUISYEN ALFA
UPSR WRITING TIPS AND MODEL ANSWERS
UPSR FORMAT FOR PAPER 2
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2.
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SUBJECT
Type of instrument
Type of items
Number of questions
Marks
PAPER 2
Subjective type
Section A:
Sentence Construction (Based on
the given words and graphics)
Section B:
Information Transfer
Section C:
Note Expansion
Question 1: Section A
Write complete sentences based
on a picture with the words given.
Question 2: Section B
a) Information transfer
b) Choose one item and give
reasons for the choice
Question 3: Section C
Write sentences in paragraphs
based on a series of visual stimuli.
Total: 3 questions
Answer all questions
Section A: 10 marks
Section B: 15 marks
Section C: 15 marks
Total: 40 marks
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QUESTION 1
(SECTION A)
SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION
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QUESTION 1: SECTION A
SAMPLE SENTENCES AND MODEL ANSWERS
PLACE / EVENTS
This is a canteen.
This is a classroom.
This is a hospital.
This is an accident.
This is a football match.
NOUNS (people, things, animals)
There is a boy in the picture.
There are many boys in the picture.
There is a cat under the tree.
There are many pupils in the canteen.
There is some food on the table.
VERBS (activities)
The boy is reading.
The girl is listening to the radio.
The men are talking.
The women are shopping.
Mother is cooking in the kitchen.
Brother is playing computer games.
ADJECTIVES (looks, feelings)
The classroom is clean.
The food is delicious.
The clothes are beautiful.
The children are happy.
The family is busy.
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MODEL QUESTION AND ANSWER
Model 1
Sample sentences:
1. This is a beach.
2. There are many people at the beach.
3. There is a tree in the picture.
4. There is a bag under the tree.
5. The mother is feeding the little boy.
6. The girl is building a sandcastle.
7. The father is eating a sandwich.
8. The boys are swimming.
9. The beach is beautiful.
10. The people look happy.
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Score more marks by following these tips:
Tip number 1: Use adjectives
This is a beautiful beach. This
is a crowded beach.
Tip number 2: Use adverbs
The boys are swimming happily.
The girl is building a sandcastle diligently.
The mother is feeding the little boy lovingly.
Tip number 3: Combine two or three simple sentences to form a compound
sentence.
This is a beautiful but crowded beach.
There is a tree and a bag in the picture.
The girl is building a sandcastle and the family is enjoying their meal.
The mother is feeding the little boy while the father is eating a sandwich.
The people are swimming, playing volleyball, building sandcastles and having a
picnic under the tree.
Lastly, choose the best 5 sentences as your final answer.
Your final answer may look something like this:
1. This is a beautiful but crowded beach. 2.
There are many people at the beach.
3. The people are swimming, playing volleyball, building sandcastles and
having a picnic at the beach.
4. The girl is building a sandcastle diligently while the family is having a
picnic under the tree.
5. The mother is feeding the little boy while the father is eating a sandwich.
Excellent 10!
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Model 2
Sample sentences:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
This is a classroom.
There is a teacher in the classroom.
There are many pupils in the classroom.
The teacher is writing on the blackboard.
The pupils are reading book. The boy is
sleeping.
The classroom is big.
The pupils are busy.
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Try to follow the tips to score more marks:
Tip number 1: Use adjectives
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Tip number 2: Use adverbs
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Tip number 3: Form compound sentences
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Final Answer (Choose the BEST sentences!):
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TRY MORE EXERCISES!
EXERCISE 1
Hisham celebrating Hari Raya shopping trying on shoes clothes Baju Melayu like wear
First, try to write as many sentences as you can:
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Now, reread the sentences. Are there any adjectives or adverbs that you
can add in?
Are there any sentences that you can combine to form a compound sentence?
Check for any mistakes:
1. Plural nouns - (many shoes not many shoe; remember the 's'!)
2. Punctuation and capitalisation - Capital letter at the beginning of
sentences; a full stop at the end.
3. Make sure you use the correct articles - check the article „a‟. Do you put
„a‟ in the correct places? (e.g.: Writing "The woman is a shopping" is wrong!
Remember, „a‟ and „an‟ means ONE).
4. Do you use „is‟ and „are‟ correctly? (Remember: is - singular, are - plural).
5. „There‟ or „They‟? (Do not confuse these two words!)
5. Make sure every sentence you write is related to the picture. (Do not
write any sentence that is not related to the picture!)
6. Spelling - Check and double-check!
Rewrite your improved sentences below:
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EXERCISE 2
dinner helping lay table serve
roast chicken happy wash dry dishes
Draft:
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Final answer:
1. _______________________________________________________
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2. _______________________________________________________
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3. _______________________________________________________
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5. _______________________________________________________
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EXERCISE 3
Now, try to apply everything that you have learned. Write your best 5
sentences for the picture below.
busy market morning bargaining fishmonger
handcart buying meat butcher vegetables
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EXERCISE 4
celebrating twelfth birthday holding party
home cake games photographs enjoy
1. _______________________________________________________
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EXERCISE 5
canteen recess pupils queuing up shouting
helper buying ice-cream scolding running
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QUESTION 2(B)
MAKING A CHOICE AND GIVING
REASONS
(I WOULD CHOOSE)
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QUESTION 2(B): SECTION B (I would choose)
CHOOSING A PRODUCT
INTRODUCTION
I would choose X because
I would choose X because
I would choose X because
I would choose X because
PRICE
It is cheap.
It is reasonable.
It is not very expensive. I
can afford it.
I think it is the best.
it is the most suitable. I
like it very much.
my mother likes it very much.
It is expensive, but worth it.
COLOUR
The colours are my favourite.
The colours are my father‟s favourite. The
colours are nice. It is attractive.
I like the colours.
MATERIALS
The quality is good. It is
long-lasting. It is
beautiful.
I like the materials.
FREE GIFT / OFFERS It is
useful.
I can use the free gift.
My brother can use the free gift. It is
interesting.
I like the free gift.
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MODEL QUESTION AND ANSWER
Model 1
You would like to buy a handbag for your mother. Which handbag would you
choose? Give reasons for your choice.
Model answer:
I would choose Coco Leather Handbag because I think it is the most suitable.
First of all, the price is RM105.00. It is expensive, but worth it. Besides, the
material is soft leather. The quality is good. Other than that, the colours are
black, brown and red. The colours are my mother‟s favourite. Lastly, the free
gift is a lipstick case. My mother can use the free gift. I believemy mother will
be happy with my choice.
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Try to answer this question again. Choose another handbag. Use the sample
sentences and model answer to guide you.
I would choose ___________________________ because ____________
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CHOOSING AN ACTIVITY
TYPE OF ACTIVITY
Outdoor:
I am an active person, so I prefer outdoor activities.
My friend is an active person, so I recommend outdoor activities.
Indoor:
I am usually quiet and inactive, so I prefer indoor activities. My
friend is a quiet person, so I recommend indoor activities.
THINGS NEEDED
I already have the things needed.
My friend already has the things needed.
The things needed are not difficult to find. I can
get all the things needed easily.
My friend can get all the things needed easily.
BENEFITS / ADVANTAGES I
like the benefits.
My friend will like the benefits. I like
to learn new things.
My friend likes to learn new things. I can
improve myself.
My friend always wants to improve himself.
OTHER SENTENCES THAT CAN BE USED
It is a very interesting activity. It is a
challenging activity. It is good for
health.
It is good for mental health.
It is a good way to spend leisure time. It is
a good hobby.
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Model 2
You want to introduce your friend to an activity. Based on the information
given, which activity would you choose? Give reasons for your choice.
I would choose football because it is the most suitable for my friend. First of
all, the type of activity is outdoor activity. My friend is an active person, so I
recommend outdoor activity. Besides, the things needed are a ball and
football boots. My friend can get the things needed easily. Other than that,
the benefit is it is a good form of exercise. My friend will like the benefit.
Lastly, the advantage is my friend can learn football skills. My friend likes to
learn new things. This is the best choice for my friend.
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Try to answer this question again. Choose another activitiy. Use the sample
sentences and model answer to guide you.
I would choose ___________________________ because ____________
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CHOOSING A PERSON
AGE
We have the same age, so we will have many things in common. I
want to make friends with someone younger. I want to make
friends with someone older.
COUNTRY / NATIONALITY
I want to learn more about Britain.
Japan is an interesting country.
I believeto visit Australia one day.
HOBBIES / INTEREST
We have the same hobbies. We
can discuss our hobbies. The
hobbies are interesting.
AMBITION
I also want to be a pilot.
We can talk about our ambitions.
I want to know more about his ambition.
OTHER SENTENCES THAT CAN BE USED
I believewe can become good friends. We
can exchange ideas.
I can tell him about our country.
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Model 3
Which pen pal would you choose to write to? Give reasons for your choice.
I would write to Sam Richards because I like him. First of all, he is 12 years old.
We have the same age, so we will have many things in common. Besides, he is
from Britain. I want to learn more about Britain. Other than that, he
likes to read and collect stamps. The hobbies are interesting. Lastly, he
wants to be a pilot. I also want to be a pilot. I believe we can become good
friends.
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Try to answer this question again. Choose another person. Use the sample
sentences and model answer to guide you.
I would choose ___________________________ because ____________
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CHOOSING A FOOD PRODUCT
PRODUCT OF / COUNTRY / MADE IN I
want to try products from Australia. I
prefer Malaysia product.
My sister likes product from England.
TASTE
The taste is nice. I
like the taste.
It is my favourite.
It is my sister‟s favourite. It is
delicious.
NUTRIENTS
The nutrients are good for health. It
is nutritious.
My body needs the nutrients. It
is a healthy product.
I like to take care of my health.
OTHER SENTENCES THAT CAN BE USED I
prefer this product. This product is better. I
like this product.
It is a high-quality product.
I will enjoy eating the biscuits with my family.
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Model 4
You want to buy some biscuits. Based on the information given, which packet of
biscuits would you prefer? Give reasons for your choice.
I would choose Milk Cookies because I think it is the best. First of all, the
price is RM4. It is not very expensive. Besides, it is imported from Australia.
I want to try products from Australia. Other than that, the taste is milky and it
melts in the mouth. I like the taste. Lastly, it is high in calcium. My body needs
the nutrients. I will enjoy eating the biscuits with my family.
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Try to answer this question again. Choose another food product. Use the
sample sentences and model answer to guide you.
I would choose ___________________________ because ____________
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CHOOSING A HOUSE FOR RENT
TYPE OF HOUSE
I prefer to stay in a bungalow. I like
wooden house better.
An apartment is more suitable for my family.
DESCRIPTION OF THE HOUSE
It has enough bedrooms for all the members in our family. It
has enough bathrooms for our family. My family likes a large
porch. My family likes the balcony.
LOCATION
The location is very nice. The
location is beautiful. I like the
location.
My family likes the location.
ADVANTAGES
It is convenient for my family. It
can make our life easier.
It can make our life more comfortable.
RENT
It is not very expensive. It is
reasonable.
My family can afford it.
It is expensive, but worth it.
OTHER SENTENCES THAT CAN BE USED
My family will like the house.
We will enjoy staying in the house. It is
a beautiful house.
It is a comfortable house.
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Model 5
You are helping your father to choose a house to rent. Based on the
information given, which house would you choose? Give reasons for your
choice.
I would choose House A because it is the most suitable for my family. First of
all, the type of house is a bungalow. I prefer to stay in a bungalow.
Besides, it has 4 bedrooms. It has enough bedrooms for all the members in our
family. Other than that, it is located close to the beach. The location is
beautiful. Also, it is near to a school and town. It is convenient for my family.
Lastly, the rent is RM500 per month. My family can afford it. We will enjoy
staying in the house.
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Try to answer this question again. Choose another house for rent. Use the
sample sentences and model answer to guide you.
I would choose ___________________________ because ____________
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CHOOSING A PET
PHYSICAL FEATURE
I like the physical feature. It is
cute and nice. It is beautiful. I
like it.
PLACE TO STAY
It is easy to accommodate. It
is easy to look after. It is
convenient.
FOOD
It is easy to feed.
The food is easy to find. It
does not cost much.
CARE
It is not difficult to take care of. I
can take care of it well. I can look
after it easily.
OTHER SENTENCES THAT CAN BE USED I
always love rabbit. I prefer goldfish.
I can play with my pet.
My pet will make me happy.
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Model 6
Try to answer this question using the sample sentences as your guide:
I would choose __________________________________ because
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PRACTISE MAKES PERFECT! HERE ARE MORE EXERCISES FOR YOU
TO DO:
EXERCISE 1
Tales from India
Price: RM16.00
Publisher: Andra Publishing Malaysia
Available at: AWK Bookshop Free gift: Colourful Bookmark
Discount: 30% given
Tales from China
Price: RM10.00
Publisher: Tai Publishing
Republic of China(R.O.C)
Available at: A & S Bookshop
Free gift: Colouring book
Discount: 40% given
Tales from Africa
Price: RM12.00
Publisher: Kang Publishing Singapore
Available at: RBK Bookshop
Free gift: Colourful pocket file
Discount: 20% given
(A) Complete the table base on the advertisement given.
Title
Price
Publisher
Available at
Free gift
Discount
Country
Tales from China
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Andra Publishing
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Colourful bookmark
30%
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Tai Publishing
A & S Bookshop
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Republic of China (R.O.C.)
Tales from Africa
RM12.00
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RBK Bookshop
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20%
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(B) If you want to buy a birthday present for your younger sister, which book would you
like to buy? Give reasons based on your choice.
I would like to buy the _______________________ because______________
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EXERCISE 2
Island Surprise Hawaiian Chicken Beef Barbecue
RM35.90 RM39.50 RM40.00
Size: Medium Size: Medium Size: Large Toppings: Shrimp, Toppings: Toppings: Beef
tuna and Thousand Chicken, sausages, island dressing pineapple and mushrooms and
Drinks: 2 orange bell peppers barbecue sauce juice Drinks: 2 iced- Drinks: 2 soft
lemon tea drinks
(A) Complete the table based on the menus given.
Menus
Price
Toppings
Drinks
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RM35.90
1. Shrimp
2. _________
3. _________
orange juice
Hawaiian Chicken
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1. ___________
2. Pineapple
3. Bell peppers
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Beef Barbecue
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1. ______________
2. Mushrooms
3. ______________
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(B) You and your mother want to have pizza for lunch, which set would you choose? Give reasons based on your choice.
I would choose _________________________because ____________
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EXERCISE 3
Mr. Vadetto Master Johan
Price: RM80 Price: RM90
Material: Material: silk
leather Made in
Made in Italy Indonesia
Colour: black Colour: red and
and brown blue
Discount: 20% Discount: 10%
Anwar's Batik
Price: RM100
Material: silk
Made in Malaysia
Colour: yellow
and blue
Discount: 30%
(A) Complete the table based on the information given.
Brand
Mr. Vadetto
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Anwar's
Price
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RM90
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Material
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silk
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Product of
Italy
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Malaysia
Colour
black
and
brown
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Discount
______ 10%
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Batik
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(B) You want to give your father a present on his birthday. Which present would you choose? Give reasons for your choice.
I would choose _________________________ because ___________
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EXERCISE 4
SWIMMING
trunks, goggles,
swimming cap
-body exercise,
fun
setting, self confidence
PLAYING CHESS
fun
setting,
self confidence
READING
comics
knowledge
(A) Complete the table below based on the advertisements given.
Name of activity
Type of activity
Things needed
Benefits
SWIMMING
_________________ 1. Swimsuit 2. Swimming trunk
3. ______________
1. _______________
2._______________ 3. Self confidence
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Outdoor
1. _____________
1. _______________. 2. Goal setting 3. Self confidence
READING
_________________ 1. Books 2. Magazines 3._______________
1. _______________
2._______________
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(B) You want to take part in one activity. Which activity would you choose? Give reasons based on your choice.
I would choose ______________________________ because __________
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EXERCISE 5
Hi there! My name is Akiko Myama. I am
eleven years old. I live with my parents in
Tokyo, Japan. I enjoy swimming and
writing. I love to play bowling, too. When I
grow up, I want to be a singer like Utada
Hikaru. I wish to have a response from
someone with the same interest.
My email address:
Hello, I am Anthony McGee. I live in East
London. I am twelve years old. I enjoy
swimming very much. I enjoy football and
badminton, too. I also like to play computer
games. I want to be a doctor. Hope to hear a
good response from you soon.
Email me at: [email protected]
I am Sarsono Budianto. I am eleven years
old. I live in West Bali, Indonesia. I like to
surf very much. Besides that, I also love to
draw and write. I am a part time dancer in
our culture community. I enjoy it very much. I
wish that I could be an artist someday. Email
me if you are interested to be my
friend: [email protected]
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(A) Complete the table below based on the information given.
Name Akiko Myama ______________ ____________
Age
Hobbies
Ambition
Country
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swimming
writing
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singer
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twelve years old
swimming
football
badminton
computer games
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England
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surf
draw
write
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(B) You want to have a pen friend oversea. Which one will you choose? Give reason based on your choice.
I would like to be friends with __________________________ because
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QUESTION 3
SECTION C
NOTE EXPANSION
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QUESTION 3: NOTE EXPANSION
Model 1
Noni - walking - school - saw - beggar - shivering - hungry - took
beggar - tree - lunch box - gave - him
ate up - food - eating - smiled
- thanked - kindness
STEP 1: What is the story about?
It is about a girl who gave her food to a beggar.
STEP 2: Look at the verbs given. Try to identify the correct tense to use.
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Find the verbs in the story:
walking
saw
shivering
took
gave
ate
eating
smiled
thanked
Continuous Tense
Past Tense
Continuous Tense
Past Tense Past
Tense Past
Tense
Continuous Tense
Past Tense Past
Tense
What is the Tense to be used?
Simple Past Tense and Past Continuous Tense
STEP 3: Write the story.
Introduction
Noni was a kind and helpful girl. She liked to help other people in trouble.
Picture 1
SUBJECT VERB ROS
Noni was walking to school
She saw a beggar
The beggar was sitting under a tree
One day, Noni was walking to school. On
her way, she saw a beggar. The beggar was
sitting under a tree.
Noni - walking - school - saw -
beggar - tree
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Picture 2
beggar - shivering - hungry - took
- lunch box - gave - him
Picture 3
SUBJECT
The beggar
He
He
He
VERB
ate up
finished
eating
smiled
thanked
ROS
the food
Noni for her
kindness
ate up - food - eating - smiled
- thanked - kindness
The beggar ate up all the food. After he
finished eating, he smiled and thanked Noni
for her kindness.
Ending:
Noni felt happy because she had helped the beggar. She continued her
walk to school with a big smile on her face.
STEP 4: Read the story again. Can you make it better?
Try to add some adjectives and adverbs. Change nouns to pronouns wherever
appropriate. Form compound sentences. You may also try to add similes,
idioms and proverbs* to make your writing more interesting.
*Refer to Appendix 7-8.
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SUBJECT VERB ROS
The beggar Was shivering
He Was Hungry
Noni Took out Her lunch box
Model 2
Halim - washes - hands - before - - weekend - he - breakfast
meals - - together - parents
- after breakfast - helps - mother -
clear - table -
Identify the Tense: ___________________________
Introduction:
Halim is a _______________________________ boy. He likes to
__________________________________. He also likes to
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SUBJECT VERB ROS
Halim washes his hands
before
meals
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Halim - washes - hands - before -
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Picture 2: Try to answer these questions:
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SUBJECT
He
VERB
eats
ROS
breakfast
together
with his
parents
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- weekend - he - breakfast ____________________________________
- together - parents
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Picture 3: Try to answer these questions:
- after breakfast - helps - mother
-clear - table -
Ending:
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SUBJECT VERB ROS
Halim helps His mother
He clears The table
MORE EXERCISES!
EXERCISE 1
- Aswad - Sports Day - parents - - took part - high jump - 200
came - support - metres race - first - both - events
-received - trophies - headmaster -
parents - proud - Aswad - tired - happy-
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EXERCISE 2
holidays - theme park - morning - father - entrance - excited -
restaurant rides
ride - spaceship - stars - got off train ride - driver - places - lunch
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EXERCISE 3
week - took - bus - airport - flew - Kota Kinabalu
Kinabalu Park - rafflesia - biggest - Mount
Kinabalu - highest - South East Asia - photographs
Manukan Island - boat - seawater - beautiful - snorkeling - marine life - corals - enjoyed
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EXERCISE 4
Lotter - friend - went - bird -evening - home - lost - way - tired
watching - jungle - - frightened - decided - spend night
heard - voices - woke up - happy -
parents - hugged
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EXERCISE 5
- crow - found - meat - flew - tree fox - saw - wanted - told - sing
- chicks - sweetly
- proud crow - opened mouth -
dropped -meat - fox - ran away
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APPENDIX 1
ADJECTIVES
FEELINGS PERASAAN CHARACTER SIFAT LOOKS RUPA
angry arrogant attractive
anxious brave beautiful
bored clumsy big
shy courageous nice
scared diligent dark
puzzled hardworking elegant
surprised intelligent fair
happy clever gorgeous
sad smart handsome
excited funny tall
gloomy strict short
joyful selfish small
sleepy pleasant spacious
tired rude neat
hungry polite large
ill talkative tiny
worried quiet good-looking
confident humble ugly
hungry friendly hideous
CONDITIONS KEADAAN FEATURES CIRI-CIRI
dirty long-lasting
clean expensive
tidy cheap
neat high-quality
cold delicious
hot modern
crowded old-fashioned
empty challenging
hectic easy
bad difficult
good interesting
terrible suitable
excellent reasonable
new useful
o ld educational
comfortable nutritious
enjoyable heavy
dull light
hectic affordable
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accurately
beautifully
carefully
diligently
excellently
faithfully
gracefully
hungrily
loudly
nicely
neatly
obviously
pleasantly
quickly
soundly
tidily
skillfully
slowly
softly
definitely
surely
truly
clearly
lovingly
gently
excitedly
joyfully
cheerfully
sadly fast
well
badly
terribly
quietly busily
attentively
accidentally
proudly
comfortably
patiently
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APPENDIX 2
ADVERBS
APPENDIX 3
SC CARDS
SC CARD 1
1. Place / Location / Event
This is a (name of place / location / event).
2. People / Animals / Things / Plants
There is a (singular noun). There
are (plural noun).
3. Activities
(Singular subject) is (verb + ing).
(Plural subject) are (verb + ing).
4. Adjectives (Feelings / Look)
(Singular subject) is (adjectives).
(Plural subject) are (adjectives).
SC CARD 2
1. Add adjectives
(beautiful, big, happy, excited, angry, busy,
etc.)
2. Add adverbs
(busily, happily, soundly, gracefully, sweetly,
etc.)
3. Write compound sentences
- Use conjunctions: and, but, while, because, or
4. Write complex sentences (if you can)
The (subject), who/which (is/are)
(verb+ing/adjective), (is/are)
(verb+ing/adjectives).
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Appendix 4
SUBJECT GROUPS
Group 1 I am do have
was did had
Group 2 He
She is does has
It was did had
Ali (SN)
Group 3 Y ou
We are do have
They were did had
Ali and Abu
(PN)
FORMS OF VERBS
Present Tense Continuous Past Tense Perfect Tense Future Notes
Tense Tense
Every day I Every day he Now I am/he Yesterday Already I Tomorrow Malay (G1 & G3) (G2) is/they are I/he/they have/he I/he/we
(G1, G2, G3) (G1, G2, G3) has/they have will... (G1, G2, G3) (G1, G2, G3)
bathe bathes bathing bathed bathed bathe beat beats beating beat beaten beat begin begins beginning began begun begin bend bends bending bent bent bend bite bites biting bit bitten bite blow blows blowing blew blown blow borrow borrows borrowing borrowed borrowed borrow break breaks breaking broke broken break bring brings bringing brought brought bring brush brushes brushing brushed brushed brush build builds building built built build burn burns burning burnt/burned burnt/burned burn bury buries burying buried buried bury buy buys buying bought bought buy climb climbs climbing climbed climbed climb catch catches catching caught caught catch comb combs combing combed combed comb come comes coming came come come cycle cycles cycling cycled cycled cycle dig digs digging dug dug dig
Present Tense Continuous Past Tense Perfect Tense Future Notes Tense Tense
Every day I Every day he Now I am/he Yesterday Already I Tomorrow Malay (G1 & G3) (G2) is/they are I/he/they have/he I/he/we
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(G1, G2, G3) (G1, G2, G3) has/they have will... (G1, G2, G3) (G1, G2, G3)
dive dives diving dived dived dive do does doing did done do
dance dances dancing danced danced dance
draw draws drawing drew drawn draw
drink drinks drinking drank drunk drink
drive drives driving drove driven drive eat eats eating ate eaten eat fail fails failing failed failed fail fall falls falling fell fallen fall
fight fights fighting fought fought fight fly flies flying flew flown fly
forget forgets forgetting forgot forgotten
forget get gets getting got got get give gives giving gave given give go goes going went gone go
grow grows growing grew grown grow hang hangs hanging hung hung hang hide hides hiding hid hidden hide hold holds holding held held hold keep keeps keeping kept kept keep kick kicks kicking kicked kicked kick
kneel kneels kneeling knelt knelt kneel
leave leaves leaving left left leave lie lies lying lay lain lie
make makes making made made make pay pays paying paid paid pay ride rides riding rode ridden ride ring rings ringing rang rung ring sell sells selling sold sold sell run runs running ran run run say says saying said said say see sees seeing saw seen see sell sells selling sold sold sell send sends sending sent sent send sew sews sewing sewed sewn sew
shake shakes shaking shook shaken shake
shine shines shining shone shone shine
shout shouts shouting shouted shouted shout
shoot shoots shooting shot shot shoot
show shows showing showed shown show skip skips skipping skipped skipped skip sing sings singing sang sung sing
smile smiles smiling smiled smiled smile Present Tense Continuous Past Tense Perfect Tense Future Notes
Tense Tense Every day I Every day he Now I am/he Yesterday Already I Tomorrow Malay (G1 & G3) (G2) is/they are I/he/they have/he I/he/we
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(G1, G2, G3) (G1, G2, G3) has/they have will... (G1, G2, G3) (G1, G2, G3)
sit sits sitting sat sat sit
sleep sleeps sleeping slept slept sleep
smile smiles smiling smiled smiled smile
speak speaks speaking spoke spoken speak
spend spends spending spent spent spend
stand stands standing stood stood stand
steal steals stealing stole stolen steal
strike strikes striking struck struck strike
sweep sweeps sweeping swept swept sweep
swim swims swimming swam swum swim take takes taking took taken take talk talks talking talked talked talk
teach teaches teaching taught taught teach tear tears tearing tore torn tear tell tells telling told told tell
think thinks thinking thought thought think
throw throws throwing threw thrown throw try tries trying tried tried try tie ties tying tied tied tie
wear wears wearing wore worn wear win wins winning won won win wind winds winding wound wound wind
write writes writing wrote written write add adds adding added added add
allow allows allowing allowed allowed allow
arrive arrives arriving arrived arrived arrive breathe breathes breathing breathed breathed breathe
brush brushes brushing brushed brushed brush
carry carries carrying carried carried carry change changes changing changed changed change
close closes closing closed closed close copy copies copying copied copied copy cook cooks cooking cooked cooked cook cry cries crying cried cried cry
divide divides dividing divided divided divide
drop drops dropping dropped dropped drop fit fits fitting fitted fitted fit
hand hands handing handed handed hand
drop drops dropping dropped dropped drop fit fits fitting fitted fitted fit
hand hands handing handed handed hand
hope hopes hoping hoped hoped hope hop hops hopping hopped hopped hop
Present Tense Continuous Past Tense Perfect Tense Future Notes
Tense Tense Every day I Every day he Now I am/he Yesterday Already I Tomorrow Malay (G1 & G3) (G2) is/they are I/he/they have/he I/he/we
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(G1, G2, G3) (G1, G2, G3) has/they have will... (G1, G2, G3) (G1, G2, G3)
hurry hurries hurrying hurried hurried hurry join joins joining joined joined join
drive drives driving drove driven drive
jump jumps jumping jumped jumped jump
laugh laughs laughing laughed laughed laugh live lives living lived lived live lock locks locking locked locked lock
open opens opening opened opened open
read reads reading read read read reply replies replying replied replied replied row rows rowing rowed rowed row stop stops stopping stopped stopped stop
study studies studying studied studied study type types typing typed typed type use uses using used used use walk walks walking walked walked walk wait waits waiting waited waited wait cut cuts cutting cut cut cut hit hits hitting hit hit hit hurt hurts hurting hurt hurt hurt let lets letting let let let put puts putting put put put
push pushes pushing pushed pushed push shut shuts shutting shut shut shut pull pulls pulling pulled pulled pull sink sinks sinking sank sunk sink
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APPENDIX 5
TENSES, SENTENCE STRUCTURE AND
TYPES OF SENTENCES
All English sentences are made up of three basic parts:
Subject Verb The Rest of the Sentence
Ali kicks the ball.
The girl is pretty.
Study the sentences below:
Subject Verb The rest of the Time
sentence
1. Ali kicks the ball every day.
2. Ali is kicking the ball now.
3. Ali kicked the ball yesterday.
4. Ali will kick the ball tomorrow.
Sentence 1 is in Simple Present Tense (happens daily or regularly).
Sentence 2 is in Present Continuous Tense (is happening now).
Sentence 3 is in Simple Past Tense (happened in the past).
Sentence 4 is in Future Tense (will happen in the future).
These four tenses are the basic tenses that you may use in writing English
sentences.
Besides the four tenses above, there are another two important tenses that
you should know:
Past Continuous Tense
Ali was kicking the ball when I reached the field yesterday (was happening
at some time in the past).
Perfect Tense
Ali has already kicked the ball (has already happened).
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TYPES OF SENTENCES
1. Active and Passive Sentences
Active sentence:
Subject
Ali
Passive sentence
Object
The ball
More examples:
Verb
kicks
Verb
is kicked
Object
the
ball.
Subject
by Ali.
(Simple Present Tense)
Active sentences
Ali kicked the ball.
Mother cooks the vegetables.
He drove the car.
Siti tears the book.
The policeman caught the thief.
Passive sentences
The ball was kicked by Ali.
The vegetables are cooked by mother.
The car was driven by him. The book is
torn by Siti.
The thief was caught by the policeman.
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2. Simple and Compound Sentences
Simple sentence 1: Ali goes to school.
Simple sentence 2: Abu goes to school.
Compound sentence: Ali and Abu go to school.
A compound sentence is formed by joining two or more simple sentences
using conjunctions (and, but, or, because, so, while).
Another example:
Simple sentence 1: Ali is sick.
Simple sentence 2: Ali does not go to school.
Compound sentence: Ali is sick, so he does not
go to school.
3. Complex sentence
A complex sentence is formed by adding a clause.
Example:
Sentence 1: The girl is my sister.
Sentence 2. The girl is wearing a blue dress.
Complex sentence: The girl who is wearing a blue dress is my sister.
clause
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PRACTISE!
I like to go to school.
One of the girls is missing.
Abu and Ali came here yesterday.
She sells seashells by the
seashore.
The water is clear.
They were walking to the bus stop.
The children are dancing around the rose
bush.
My Bonnie lies over the ocean.
She has already given the names to the
teacher.
Father cooks breakfast every Sunday.
Wendy and her brothers played
badminton last week.
My sister and I will visit
grandmother next Tuesday.
I will get 5A in UPSR.
The cat was jumping over the fence.
The dogs were chasing the cat.
We were happy and excited.
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Sentence Subject Verb Tesnse
APPENDIX 6
PRACTISE!
Every day Now Yesterday Tomorrow Already
I come I am coming I came I will come I have come
She buys She is buying She bought She will buy She has bought
We eat
It flies
He gives You grow
They sing
I hold
The girls go
My father drives The water
flows
The man rests
One of the ladies
shouts
The thief runs The boat
sinks
The flowers bloom The
postman comes
All of them see Most girls
play The tiger roars
Both boys win The fan
turns
I sing
Many teachers
scold
More people leave
Each one brings
Everyone tells Nobody
pushes
No one keeps
Somebody hits
Several man see
Most of them put
It shines
The baby cries The plant
grows
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APPENDIX 7 as agile as a monkey
as alike as two peas
as angry as a wasp
as bald as an egg
as bashful as a schoolgirl as
beautiful as a rainbow
as big as an elephant
as black as coal as
blind as a bat as busy
as a bee
as careless as the wind
as clear as crystal
as cold as ice
as cool as a cucumber
as cunning as a fox as
deep as the sea
as easy as ABC
as faithful as a dog as fast
as lightning
as fit as a fiddle
as gentle as a dove
as graceful as a swan
as green as grass as
happy as a lark
as hard as iron
as playful as a kitten
as sweet as honey
as proud as a peacock
as quiet as a mouse as
steady as a rock
as tall as a giant
as tough as a leather
as white as snow
as wide as the ocean
as wise as an owl
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SIMILES
ENGLISH IDIOMS AND EXPRESSIONS
APPENDIX 8 Bird in the Hand Is worth Two in the Bush: Apa yang sudah pasti lebih baik dari apa yang belum pasti. A Blessing In Disguise: Hikmah dalam kesusahan yang berlaku. A Piece Of Cake: Sesuatu yang sangat mudah. A Slip Of The Tongue: Tersilap cakap. A Wolf In Sheep's Clothing: Kejahatan yang menyamar sebagai kebaikan. Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder: Apabila jarang bertemu, semakin sayang. Actions Speak Louder Than Words: Perbuatan lebih berkesan dari perkataan. All That Glitters Is Not Gold: Tidak semua yang nampak menarik itu baik. As Light As A Feather: Sangat ringan, seperti bulu burung. Beating Around The Bush: Putar-belit. Better Late Than Never: Lebih baik lambat, dari tidak ada langsung / tidak pernah. Birds Of A Feather Flock Together: Orang yang mempunyai persamaan akan berkumpul bersama. Burning The Midnight Oil: Bekerja hingga lewat malam. Cross Your Fingers: Mengharapkan yang terbaik. Cry Over Spilt Milk: Menyesal atas sesuatu yang sudah berlaku. Curiosity Killed The Cat: Perasaan ingin tahu yang membawa kesusahan. Don't Count Your Chickens Until They're Hatched: Jangan mengira hasil sebelum berusaha
(angan-angan Mat Jenin). Don't Put All Your Eggs In One Basket: Jangan letakkan semua harapan pada satu tempat sahaja. Every Cloud Has A Silver Lining: Setiap kesusahan yang berlaku ada hikmahnya. Great Minds Think Alike: Pemikiran yang sama. Have No Idea: Tidak tahu langsung. Head Over Heel: Jatuh cinta. Icing On The Cake: Perkara yang baik / menggembirakan. It Takes Two To Tango: Setiap pergaduhan melibatkan dua pihak. Lend Me Your Ear: Tolong dengar apa yang saya ingin katakana. Let Bygones Be Bygones: Yang berlalu biarlah berlalu. Let The Cat Out Of The Bag: Membocorkan rahsia.
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Out Of The Blue: Secara tiba-tiba Out Of the Frying Pan and into the Fire: Dari satu kesusahan, ke satu kesusahan yang lain. Practice Makes Perfect: Latihan berterusan akan memahirkan kita. Pulling Your Leg: Bergurau. Rome Was Not Built In One Day: Tidak ada jalan pintas ke arah kejayaan. Second Nature: Kemahiran yang sudah menjadi satu kebiasaan harian. Start From Scratch: Bermula dari bawah. The Apple Of Your Eye: Kesayangan. The Early Bird Catches The Worm: Orang yang awal bangun dan bekerja akan mendapat lebih hasil. The Pot Calling The Kettle Black: Orang yang bersalah tetap mempersalahkan orang lain. The Pros And Cons: Kebaikan dan keburukan. The Sky Is The Limit: Tidak ada batas. Turn Over A New Leaf: Berubah / Insaf. Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right: Jangan membalas kejahatan dengan kejahatan. Under The Weather: Kurang sihat. Variety Is The Spice Of Life: Kepelbagaian menjadikan kehidupan lebih menarik. Without A Doubt: Tanpa sebarang syak-wasangka. You Can't Judge A Book By Its Cover: Jangan menilai seseorang daripada luarannya sahaja.
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PROVERBS Where there's a will there's a way: When a person really wants to do something, he will find a way of doing it.
First come, first served: The first in line will be attended to first.
A friend in need is a friend indeed: A friend who helps when one is in trouble is a real friend.
Discretion is the better part of valor: If you say discretion is the better part of valor, you mean that avoiding a dangerous or unpleasant situation is
sometimes the most sensible thing to do.
A hungry man is an angry man: A person who does not get what he wants or needs is a frustrated person and will be easily provoked to
rage.
Empty vessels make the most noise: Those people who have a little knowledge usually talk the most and make the greatest fuss.
A man is as old as he feels:
A person's age is immaterial - it is only when he thinks and feels that he is ageing that he actually becomes
old.
Great talkers are little doers: Those people who talk a lot and are always teaching others usually do not do much work.
An idle brain is the devil's workshop: One who has nothing to do will be tempted to do many mischievous acts. An ounce of discretion is worth a pound of wit: It is better to be careful and discrete than to be clever.
Faint heart never won fair lady: To succeed in life one must have the courage to pursue what he wants.
A penny saved is a penny gained: By being thrifty one will be able to save up.
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A rolling stone gathers no moss: A person who never settles in one place or who often changes his job will not succeed in life ; one who is
always changing his mind will never get anything done.
As you sow, so you shall reap: One will either enjoy or suffer the consequences of his earlier actions or inactions.
Barking dogs seldom bite: Those who make loud threats seldom carry them out.
Better late than never: To do something that is right, profitable, or good a little late is still better than not doing it at all.
A bird in hand is worth two in the bush: Something that one already has is better than going after something seemingly more worthwhile that one
may not be able to get.
Birds of a feather flock together: People of the same sort of character or belief always go together.
Call a spade a spade: If you say that someone calls a spade a spade, you mean that they speak frankly and directly, often about
embarrassing or unpleasant subjects; an informal expression.
Charity begins at home : A person's first obligation should be to help the member of his own family before he can begin thinking of
talking about helping others.
A great talker is a great liar: A smooth and persuasive talker may be a good liar.
Every cloud has a silver lining: If you say that every cloud has a silver lining, you mean that every sad or unpleasant situation has a positive
side to it. If you talk about silver lining you are talking about something positive that
comes out of a sad or unpleasant situation.
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