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By: Joseph R. Long

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FADE IN

Heavy Breathing is heard.

INT. BEDR!"NI#HT

The roo$ is lit only %y the television %eing on &ith 'all

o( D)ty on it. First seen is the television* then a+o$p)ter* then ,lay%oy $aga-ines* then dirty la)ndry* then

a %ed &ith t&o people )nder the %lanet h)$ping. All the

&hile* yo) hear heavy %reathing.

INT.BEDR!"/A!E TI!E

No& seen are t&o %oys in the %ed* one has %la+ hair* ivory

sin* and a tone %ody. He is asleep. Ne0t to hi$ is a %oy

&ith %londe hair* pasty sin* and a sinny physi1)e. He is

a&ae* and has one tear r)nning do&n his (a+e.

FADE T BLA'2

/I3 !NTH/ EARLIER

INT. DIFFERENT BEDR!"!URNIN#

Alar$ +lo+ goes o((* it reads 4:56 a$. The %londe %oy

stops the alar$ +lo+ %)t does not get o)t o( %ed.

Event)ally a &o$an +o$es in the door.

7!AN:

#et )p8 It9s yo)r (irst day o( high s+hool8

/he is the $other* she has dirty %londe hair and raggedy

paa$as on. verall she loos r)gged. /he is s$oing a

+igaret The %londe %oy #RAN/.

!THER:

JHNN;8 #et yer ass )p8 Don9t $ae $e get

yo)r (ather8

JHNN; %egins to get )p. !THER leaves the roo$. Johnny

sits %a+ do&n and sighs.

INT. 2IT'HEN"/A!E TI!E

Johnny &als into the it+hen and sits do&n at the ta%le*

there is also a $an sitting there. He is the (ather* he is

%ald and also r)gged looing. He is reading the ne&spaper

and drining a %eer. !other is %y the toaster* again

s$oing a +igaret

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s$oing )nless told other &ise=.

Johnny:

7hat are &e having (or %rea(ast> Eggs* %a+on*

pan+aes* sa)sage>

Both parents stop &hat their doing and loo at the %oy &ith

disg)st. !other p)ts do&n a plate o( toast.

!other:

No&* yo) no& &e ain9t got the $oney (or that.

Johnny s$irs.

Father:

;o) %es9 appre+iate that godda$n toast yah

got in (ront o( yah.

Johnny:

Ho& +o)ld I not appre+iate this &onder()l

toast> Its e01)isite* divine really.

Father gives another dirty loo* and $other s$irs to

hersel( as Johnny taes a %ite.

!other:

;o) e0+ited (or yo)r (irst day o( s+hool* h)nny>

Johnny:

Eh* I g)ess. Its )st going to %e $ore

%)llshit. Tea+her9s ra%%le on a%o)t nothing*

er o(( d)des trying to i$press girls &ho

&ho are to into their selves and pop)larity

!other:

7ell I9$ s)re yo)9ll (ind the right

girl s&eetie. Don9t &orry a%o)t it.

/he taes a drag.

!other:

And &at+h yo)r lang)age.

Father:

Boy* I re$e$%er $y (irst day o( high s+hool

&aling in there and seeing all the (ine hoes.

It &as lie &aling in a drea$.

Father starts to stare o(( into spa+e* re$e$%ering the good

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old ti$es. B)t !other 1)i+ly slaps hi$ in the %a+ o( the

head.

Johnny:

;o) $ade it to high s+hool>

Father loos at hi$ in disg)st again.

Father:

No& I9$ tired o( that s$art ass $o)th o( yo)rs.

;o) no& I $ade it into the eleventh grade.

;es* I re$e$%er. No& listen* I )se to %e

pretty (ly &ith all the ladies. I re$e$%ering

this one gal. 7hat &as her na$e> Ja+ie> Jenny>

/o$ething lie that. 7ell any&ays...

A no+ at the door interr)pts hi$. Johnny %egins to get

)p.

Johnny:

That9s 'hris. I gotta go8

!other:

Not &itho)t a iss yo) don9t.

Johnny &als to his $other and she isses hi$ on the

(orehead.

!other:

I love yo) s&eetie.

Johnny:

I love yo) too $o$. Love ya pop.

Father:

!h$$.

Johnny e0its.

E3T. FRNT ;ARD" /A!E TI!E

A %oy* a little large %)t still good looing and dar

sinned* is &aiting on the por+h. Johnny &als o)t.

'HRI/:

Johnnnnyyyy8 ;o) p)$ped (or high s+hool $an>

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Johnny shr)gs and s$iles.

'hris:

D)de* thin a%o)t all thesenior %it+hes8 I +an i$agine the$ no&.

7HI/TLE/. Da$n girl8 ;o) got dat (ine ass8

'hris a+ts as i( he is +he+ing a girl o)t &ith his eyes.

Johnny la)ghs.

Johnny:

/h)t )p. ;o) so)nd lie $y dad* let9s )st go.

They &al a&ay (ro$ the ho)se.