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In Your Own Words
ENG II VOCABULARY
ABSTRACTN
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Not real
Can not be touched because it is not real
FREEDOM is an abstract concept. Is it not real?
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Difficult to understand
Hard to understand
Something that can’t be identified with the five senses
ABSTRACT
The artwork was abstract. How?
Her abstract feelings were very strong about him. How does this tell me what abstract means?
He painted an abstract painting. What makes the painting abstract?
POOR SENTENCES
ABSTRACT
That idea was very abstract; I couldn’t identify it with any of my senses.
That picture is very abstract because you cannot clearly see what it is.
The painting was abstract because it was hard to understand.
When I was looking at something abstract, I couldn’t figure it out.
GOOD SENTENCES
AESTHETICN
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A creative or artistic piece
Beauty of things (relating to the)
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Something relating to beauty
Nice in appearance
Something with a nice appearance
Something pleasing in appearance
AESTHETIC
The painting of Venus was aesthetic. How? In what way?
The dance was aesthetic and graceful. I’m still not sure what aesthetic means here. The context clue is graceful. Good, but not enough.
The drawing is very aesthetic, I think I will buy it and hang it up in my house. If I didn’t know the meaning of the word, I might think it means interesting or odd of other things? The meaning needs to be clearer.
POOR SENTENCES
AESTHETIC
The painting was very beautiful, so the tour guide described its aesthetic qualities.
The drawing is very aesthetic, I think I will buy it and hang it up in my house so that everyone can appreciate its beauty.
I think of aesthetic when I think of brown eyes, because I think brown eyes are beautiful.
GOOD SENTENCES
ALLITERATIONN
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Use of the same consonant vowel. (Any vowel? Anywhere?)
The repetition of a letter (what kind of letter? See above.)
The use of the same consonant or vowel (Where?)
The repetition of first letter of words (What if the letters make different sounds?)
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The repetition of the same beginning sound in multiple words of a text
Repetition of the first sounds of words in writing or speech
ALLITERATION
Alliteration are in Winnie the Pooh. How? In what way?
The story was filled with alliteration. Because . . .
The poet used alliteration to stress a line in his poem. By doing what?
POOR SENTENCES
ALLITERATION
Mama made me mash my m&ms is an example of alliteration because the beginning sound is being stressed.
Many of the words in my poem started with the same sound, so I told my teacher I was using alliteration.
Many literary pieces include alliterations which are easy to find because the beginning sounds of words often have the same letter.
GOOD SENTENCES
ALLEGORYN
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Fable or moral reading (Is it always a reading? Can a song or painting be an allegory?)
A part of literature use to demonstrate deeper meanings.(What is a part of literature?)
Story told by writer. (Many stories are told by writers but not many are allegories.)
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A poem, play, or other work of art that has a deeper meaning throughout
Play, picture, poem, etc. in which characters, events and objects all symbolize some kind of moral
ALLEGORY
I wrote an allegory. How? In what way?
My allegory was about the Greeks ‘ Mount Olympus. Because . . .
Hamlet is an allegory. In what way?
POOR SENTENCES
ALLEGORY
Peter Pan is an allegory because it teaches a moral..
Edgar Allan Poe’s “The Raven” has a deeper meaning and therefore is an allegory.
The excerpt used an allegory to show a deeper meaning that what the book literally said
It is very hard to write an allegory and include a deeper meaning in a poem.
GOOD SENTENCES
ALLUSIONN
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An indirect reference to an event. (Just an event?)
An indirect reference to something.(Like what?)
A reference to another thing in a book. (It can also be in music, a poem, a tv show or movie, someone’s speech or conversation.)
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Recalling another time in history, a story, or a famous person
Refers to a work, a time in history, or a famous person
ALLUSION
Disney Channel shows often have allusions in them. Such as?
We’ve read many allusions in this class. Like what?
When you watch a movie you can see a lot of allusions in it. Explain.
In the book Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry, there is a reference to another book. (which is an allusion.)
POOR SENTENCES
ALLUSION
That books was just a big allusion, because they were referring to the Bible the whole time.
The piece we read the other day had an allusion it; it referred to the Brown’s Decision.
GOOD SENTENCES
ANNOTATIONN
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A body of notes added to a passage (What kind of notes? They must be EXPLANATORY.)
Analyzing a work (so, I can talk to you and analyze a work . I can write an essay and analyze a work. What makes the analysis an annotation?)
Being able to tell and explain what something is. (I can tell and explain what a hamburger is, but is that an annotation?)
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Notes explaining your thoughts and analysis added to a text
Explanatory note or body of notes added to a text
When you write on a text and analyze it
ANNOTATION
When you go back and add a sentence to a passage it is an annotation. If you wrote the passage this would be considered revision. Specify the kind of passage you are adding the sentence to. What kind of sentence?
The annotation was very creative. OK, so was the poem. What makes this creativity an annotation?
I had to make annotations in Ms. Hedrick’s class. (by making notes explaining my understandings and thoughts on the text we were reading.)
I have analyzed this paragraph. (ALWAYS put the word in the sentence. How could we make this sentence work?)
POOR SENTENCES
ANNOTATION
When you go back and add a sentence to a passage it is an annotation. If you wrote the passage this would be considered revision. Specify the kind of passage you are adding the sentence to. What kind of sentence?
The annotation was very creative. OK, so was the poem. What makes this creativity an annotation?
I had to make annotations in Ms. Hedrick’s class. (by making notes explaining my understandings and thoughts on the text we were reading.)
I have analyzed this paragraph. (ALWAYS put the word in the sentence. How could we make this sentence work?)
POOR SENTENCES
ARCHETYPE – YOU’VE GOT TO INCLUDE “THAT SEEMS TO REPRESENT COMMON PATTERNS IN LIFE”
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An original model in which later copies are made (good. But it literature it has to include the above)
A pattern that occurs over and over again (Where? Or How?)
A model. (Is Heidi Klum an archetype?)
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A pattern you see over again in a book, movie, etc.
A recurring pattern in stories that reflect life
ARCHETYPE
The archetype was full of great ideas. But what makes it an archetype?
The annotation was very creative. OK, so was the poem. What makes this creativity an annotation?
I had to make annotations in Ms. Hedrick’s class. (by making notes explaining my understandings and thoughts on the text we were reading.)
I have analyzed this paragraph. (ALWAYS put the word in the sentence. How could we make this sentence work?)
POOR SENTENCES
ARCHETYPE
Batman is an example of an archetype because they came out with a movie and are still making different movies about him.
An example of an archetype is in movies the witch is always evil.
The annotation I wrote in the margin summarized the paragraph.
While I was annotating the story, I found something that really surprised me, so I put an exclamation point by it.
The teacher made annotations on the student’s essay to help him revise it.GOOD SENTENCES