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  • Tom Sawyerby Celine Khalife

    FILETIME SUBMITTED 04-FEB-2015 01:17PMSUBMISSION ID 501335195

    WORD COUNT 731CHARACTER COUNT 3448

    TOM.DOCX (33.64K)

  • FINAL GRADE

    98/100Tom SawyerGRADEMARK REPORT

    GENERAL COMMENTS

    Instructor

    PAGE 1

    PAGE 2

    Comment 1 | Sentence St ructure 10 ptsrun-on

    Comment 2 | Sentence St ructure 10 ptsrewrite - sounds as if Tom tore the book

    PAGE 3

    Comment 3 | Sentence St ructure 10 ptsrun-on

    PAGE 4

    PAGE 5

    GRADING FORM: LITERARY ANALYSIS

    CELINE KHALIFE 98

  • FORMAT 10 PTS

    Title page, page numbers, footnotes, bibliography, paragraph - margin,spacing, font, indentation.

    INTRODUCTION/CONCLUSION 10 PTS

    Introduction - Hook, intro. scene, quote, THESIS Conclusion - THESIS,summary, quote

    BODY PARAGRAPHS 20 PTS

    Topic sentence, summary of scene, quote, explanation

    SENTENCE STRUCTURE 10 PTS

    Deductions for awkward sentences, run-on sentences, capitalizationerrors, and spelling errors.

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    10

    20

    9

    Did you use a different source in first and lastfootnote?

    Intro - good, flows smoothly conclusion - goodstrong statements

    Don't let summaries get too long. Used transitions.Good commentaries.

  • CONTENT 50 PTS

    This part of the grade is from Mr. Gehrer.

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    Tom Sawyerby Celine Khalife

    Tom SawyerGRADEMARK REPORTFINAL GRADEGENERAL COMMENTSInstructor

    CELINE KHALIFE98