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Tom Sawyerby Celine Khalife
FILETIME SUBMITTED 04-FEB-2015 01:17PMSUBMISSION ID 501335195
WORD COUNT 731CHARACTER COUNT 3448
TOM.DOCX (33.64K)
FINAL GRADE
98/100Tom SawyerGRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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Comment 1 | Sentence St ructure 10 ptsrun-on
Comment 2 | Sentence St ructure 10 ptsrewrite - sounds as if Tom tore the book
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Comment 3 | Sentence St ructure 10 ptsrun-on
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GRADING FORM: LITERARY ANALYSIS
CELINE KHALIFE 98
FORMAT 10 PTS
Title page, page numbers, footnotes, bibliography, paragraph - margin,spacing, font, indentation.
INTRODUCTION/CONCLUSION 10 PTS
Introduction - Hook, intro. scene, quote, THESIS Conclusion - THESIS,summary, quote
BODY PARAGRAPHS 20 PTS
Topic sentence, summary of scene, quote, explanation
SENTENCE STRUCTURE 10 PTS
Deductions for awkward sentences, run-on sentences, capitalizationerrors, and spelling errors.
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Did you use a different source in first and lastfootnote?
Intro - good, flows smoothly conclusion - goodstrong statements
Don't let summaries get too long. Used transitions.Good commentaries.
CONTENT 50 PTS
This part of the grade is from Mr. Gehrer.
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Tom Sawyerby Celine Khalife
Tom SawyerGRADEMARK REPORTFINAL GRADEGENERAL COMMENTSInstructor
CELINE KHALIFE98