This is a small comic that is based on the fable “The tortoise and the hare”. This comic has been analyzed and contains some corrections.
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Fernanda
Sticky Note
1)The tortoise can not just appear besides the rabbit. 2) It would be useful to put some eyes to the tortoise. This way you can distinguish the head from a hand.
Fernanda
Sticky Note
1)When did the Fox appear???? You have to show a step that show that they are at least searching for the fox.
Fernanda
Sticky Note
1)It would help if you show the rabbit looking back to see id the turtle is coming. 2) Also show a step in which the rabbit decides, to go to sleep
Fernanda
Sticky Note
It is REALLY IMPORTANT that you learn how to manage your space and make sure that no space is left empty.
