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<>- vs '1.-u.A-4 c cN-. r ",""-~") l lA.,v us i OV\ °'-4,vvlo:, S'1 "t..,y., ) d_µ.f\;__ 11A "tv .eA C r / ) w....J...,J,""-'/1 ·, "'Ov-< R. u,. \\ k IND IAA9-'"- ~('aw,, ) ~fN'. o\_ !l ~ll .{,~ ' r~ rbfyf;-, ,1.vvJ\..J. ;:.,.__ ~r<?i l /,\_ J -av\ I / J w.:~ l ~t---vt/\ ' \ \ l . _/ S1~ D-,,(l <1V\ • / - / Ld-'ls J/v~ Vl,<.£.~'CA1- ~VII\__ cti v ~h Vv1--j 1/iJ\-e_ - -. we_ --- The Debt BY PAUL LAURENCE DUNBAR debt & payment A This is the debt I pay colon A Just for one riotous day, B day vs years (disproportion: "interest") Years of regret and grief, sin? B Sorrow without relief. inversion Gives me a true release — Until the grave, my friend, Pay it I will to the end — ambiguous syntax tied only w/ next line Small was the debt I thought, Gives me the clasp of peace. Slight was the thing I bought, death as given (of release/clasp) Revelation: "There will be no more sorrow" another economy: release from debt calculation of "how much" not, invoked in context of Poor was the loan at best — God! but the interest! extortion, usury mercy, absolution, simply as an exclamation undisclosed terms Let's evaluate metrical norm & any variations. This is the debt I pay Just for one riotous day, Years of regret and grief, Sorrow without relief. Pay it I will to the end — Until the grave, my friend, Gives me a true release — Gives me the clasp of peace. Slight was the thing I bought, Small was the debt I thought, Poor was the loan at best — God! but the interest! ] ] ] syntax Anaphora: Gives me... Gives me... 1

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The Debt BY PAUL LAURENCE DUNBAR

debt & payment A This is the debt I pay colon A Just for one riotous day, B

day vs years (disproportion: "interest")Years of regret and grief, sin? B Sorrow without relief.

inversion

Gives me a true release — Until the grave, my friend,Pay it I will to the end —

ambiguous syntax tied only w/ next line

Small was the debt I thought,

Gives me the clasp of peace.

Slight was the thing I bought,

death as given (of release/clasp) Revelation: "There will be no more sorrow" another economy: release from debt

calculation of "how much"

not, invoked in context ofPoor was the loan at best — God! but the interest! extortion, usury mercy, absolution,

simply as an exclamationundisclosed terms

Let's evaluate metrical norm & any variations.This is the debt I pay

Just for one riotous day,

Years of regret and grief,

Sorrow without relief.

Pay it I will to the end —Until the grave, my friend,Gives me a true release — Gives me the clasp of peace.

Slight was the thing I bought,Small was the debt I thought,Poor was the loan at best — God! but the interest!

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Anaphora: Gives me...Gives me...

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“Doth God exact day-labour, light denied?”

Sonnet 19: When I consider how my light is spentBY JOHN MILTON

goneWhen I consider how my light is spent, Light is ... Ere half my days, in this dark world and wide, And that one Talent which is death to hide time, timeliness

Lodged with me useless, though my Soul more bent commaTo serve therewith my Maker, and present semicolon/colon My true account, lest he returning chide; full stop no end stop (enjambment) I fondly ask. But patience, to prevent

That murmur, soon replies, “God doth not need Either man’s work or his own gifts; who best lines with no caesura

Bear his mild yoke, they serve him best. His state (mid-line pause) Is Kingly. Thousands at his bidding speed And post o’er Land and Ocean without rest: non-iambic stress

They also serve who only stand and wait. sightedness

compare how each voice forms sentences

But patience, to prevent That murmur, soon replies, “God doth not need Either man’s work or his own gifts; those who best Bear his mild yoke, they serve him best. His state Is Kingly. Thousands at his bidding speed And post o’er Land and Ocean without rest: They who only stand and wait also serve.

Within 14 line poem, how does rhymedefine groups of lines?

When I consider how my light is spent, Ere half my days in this dark world and wide are spent, And while that one Talent which is death to hide Is (still) uselessly Lodged with me, although my Soul is more bent To serve my Maker therewith and to present My true account, lest he (returning) chide me; (Then) I fondly ask: “Doth God exact day-labour, when light is denied?”

insight

Where does 2nd sentence begin?

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Proclaimed the time was neither wrong nor right. I have been one acquainted with the night..

Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove.

Admit impediments. Love is not love

O no! it is an ever-fixed mark That looks on tempests and is never shaken;It is the star to every wand'ring bark,Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks Within his bending sickle's compass come;Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks, But bears it out even to the edge of doom.If this be error and upon me prov'd, I never writ, nor no man ever lov'd.

end of L8

Sonnet 116: Let me not to the marriage of true mindsBY WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE Let me not to the marriage of true minds

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The Debt BY PAUL LAURENCE DUNBAR This is the debt I payJust for one riotous day, Years of regret and grief, Sorrow without relief.

Pay it I will to the end —Until the grave, my friend,Gives me a true release — Gives me the clasp of peace.

Slight was the thing I bought,Small was the debt I thought,Poor was the loan at best — God! but the interest!

This is the debt I pay

Just for one riotous day,

Years of regret and grief,

Sorrow without relief.

Pay it I will to the end —Until the grave, my friend,Gives me a true release — Gives me the clasp of peace.

Slight was the thing I bought,Small was the debt I thought,Poor was the loan at best — God! but the interest!

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Sonnet 19: When I consider how my light is spentBY JOHN MILTON

That murmur, soon replies, “God doth not need Either man’s work or his own gifts; who best

Bear his mild yoke, they serve him best. His stateIs Kingly. Thousands at his bidding speed And post o’er Land and Ocean without rest:

They also serve who only stand and wait.

I fondly ask. But patience, to prevent

To serve therewith my Maker, and present My true account, lest he returning chide;

When I consider how my light is spent,

“Doth God exact day-labour, light denied?”

Ere half my days, in this dark world and wide, And that one Talent which is death to hide Lodged with me useless, though my Soul more bent

When I consider how my light is spent, Ere half my days in this dark world and wide that one Talent which is death to hide

more bent To serve my Maker

are spent, And while Is (still) uselessly Lodged with me, although my Soul is

me; (Then) I fondly ask: “Doth God exact day-labour, when light is denied?”present My true account, lest he toandtherewith (returning) chide

But patience, to prevent That murmur, soon replies, “God doth not need Either man’s work or his own gifts; those who best Bear his mild yoke, they serve him best. His state Is Kingly. Thousands at his bidding speed And post o’er Land and Ocean without rest: They who only stand and wait also serve.

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Acquainted with the Night

BY ROBERT FROST

I have been one acquainted with the night.I have walked out in rain—and back in rain. I have outwalked the furthest city light.

I have looked down the saddest city lane.I have passed by the watchman on his beatAnd dropped my eyes, unwilling to explain.

I have stood still and stopped the sound of feetWhen far away an interrupted cryCame over houses from another street,

But not to call me back or say good-bye;And further still at an unearthly height,One luminary clock against the sky

Proclaimed the time was neither wrong nor right. I have been one acquainted with the night..

Sonnet 116: Let me not to the marriage of true mindsBY WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE Let me not to the marriage of true mindsAdmit impediments. Love is not loveWhich alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O no! it is an ever-fixed mark That looks on tempests and is never shaken;It is the star to every wand'ring bark,Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks Within his bending sickle's compass come;Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks, But bears it out even to the edge of doom.If this be error and upon me prov'd, I never writ, nor no man ever lov'd.

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