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    Teacher Feedback

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    - Improve gradient- Djs names

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    - Narration well balanced- Sound balance good- Selected clips good- Exciting

    Documentary

    - Introduction good- 42 second, increase volume of interview- Framing of interview good- Tittles work well- Good sound quality- 1.30 loose volume of Shakka interview, increase volume- Cutaways work well- Transitions all good- 2.48 insert achieve image of Basement Jaxx, cutaway doesnt match speech- Copy motion style of first Basement Jaxx interview to other clips- Sound bed works well- Insert achieve image of Glastonbury to match speech- Insert crossfade between Storm Queen- Lower Dan Jacksons interview volume- Good shots in intimate locations, limited in space- Mise-en-scene of interviews good, in particular Ian Austin and Dan Jackson- Transitions work well

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    Improvements

    We then made all the improvements made from this feedback, including inserting the

    archieve images as seen in the screen shot below.

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