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Cam 6 Essay Topics

Test 1

Today, the high sales of popular goods reflect the power of

advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are

sold.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Test 2

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money

than people in other important professions. Some people think this

is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Test 3

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow

local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the

host country should welcome cultural differences.


Test 4

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and

avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a

good thing.



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CAMBRIDGE IELTS 6 - TEST 1

Today, the high sales of popular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real

need of the society in which they are sold.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

SUGGESTED ANSWER

Identifying the essay type: Opinion Essay (Agree or Disagree)

Structuring the essay

INTRODUCTION

- Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about the power of

advertising- Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my point of view with

one short and simple sentence (totally agree)

BODY

- Paragraph 1: Advertising helps promote the sales of products

by providing necessary information to potential customers

through the means of media with huge coverage.

- Paragraph 2: Sometimes influential advertising manipulates

people into purchasing products that they do not really need.Using images of celebrities to advertise a product line.

CONCLUSION- Restate my opinion with a clear and direct sentence (totally

agree)


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Sample answer

It is widely believed that advertising, not the real need of consumers, leads to the popularity

of a product. Personally, I strongly agree with such a statement.

Firstly, advertising promotes the sales of products by providing necessary information for

potential customers through the means of media, particularly TV, with huge coverage. As a

matter of fact, when in possession of a TV or a computer connected to the Internet, everyone

would see advertisements almost everywhere, which would help them to know more

specifically about their desirable goods. Compared to the past when the power of advertisingwould not be enough to spark attention, people now have closer access to modern

commodities. Without advertising, producers would not be able to reach out to their buyers

owing to a struggle to introduce or popularize their new lines of product.

Secondly, I would say that under various circumstances, influential advertisements

manipulate people into purchasing something they have no need for. It is common that

images of sport or entertainment celebrities would be selected for commercial purposes,

inflicting huge impacts on buyers, especially their fans. For example, if Ronaldo, who is an

international famous football player, participated in a commercial advertisement on TV about

a new product line of mens perfume, an enormous number of his loyal fans would buy those

goods. This is because they want to be like their idols or simply it is a way to express their

admiration and support.

In conclusion, I think advertising is factored in boosting the sales of a product in spite of the

insignificance of social needs for it.

(264 words)

Useful vocabulary:

- Potential customers: Khch hng tim nng

- Huge coverage: Tm ph sng rng ln


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- Have closer access to modern commodities: C th c tip cn gn hn vi hng

ha hin i

- Reach out to their buyers: Vn ti khch hng

- New lines of product: Cc dng sn phm mi

- Influential advertisements: Nhng qung co c nh hng ln

- Sport or entertainment celebrities: Ngi ni ting lnh vc gii tr hoc th

thao

- Commercial purposes: Mc ch thng mi


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CAMBRIDGE IELTS 6 TEST 2

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other

important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is

unfair.

Discuss both views and give your opinion

SUGGESTED ANSWER

Identifying the essay type: Discussion + opinion essay (Discuss both views and give

your opinion)


INTRODUCTION

- Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about the difference in

salaries between sport celebrities and other professions

- Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for which

side of the argument with one short and simple sentence

(agree with people who think this is unfair)

BODY

-Paragraph 1: 2 reasons why some people think sportcelebrities high salaries are justifiable.

Consistent hardwork and harsh training

Participation in local or international competitions to

gain honor for their country.

- Paragraph 2: 2 reasons why others think it is unfair

Other professions which are indispensable and much


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more essential for society such as scientists or doctors.

They are paid much less than sport celebrities despite

their great contributions.

Sometimes sport stars might set a bad example or

cause severe damage to the image of their country. All

of those stars still receive huge payment and

sponsorships, which is a sign of unfairness.

CONCLUSION Restate my favorable side


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Sample answer

People have different views about the huge difference in salaries between sport stars and

people of other professions. In my opinion, I would argue that it is unfair for people working

in other fields.

On the one hand, some people have several reasons for their support for sport stars current

salaries. Firstly, they believe that becoming a successful individual in the field of sports would

require consistent hardwork and harsh training regulations. If those celebrities did not have

considerable determination, their chance of worldwide acknowledgement would be fragile.Therefore, they truly deserve high salaries according to what they have to go through.

Secondly, they represent their countries to participate in international competitions, such as

the World Cup, to gain honor for their nations, which justifies their enormous earnings.

On the other hand, I would side with those who think that it is unfair for other people. Other

professions such as scientists or doctors are indispensable and much more essential for social

development and security. However, science or medical experts are paid much less than sport

celebrities regardless of their great contributions to techonological advancement and health

care. Furthermore, sometimes sport stars might set a bad example or cause severe damage to

the image of their country. All of those stars still receive huge payment and sponsorships in

comparison with that of scientists and doctors, which is a sign of unfairness.

In conclusion, I agree with people who think paying sport professionals much higher than

those who silently make contributions to society is unreasonable.

(252 words)

Useful vocabulary:

- Consistent hardwork and harsh training regulations: S chm ch bn b v

iu l luyn tp khc nghit

- Considerable determination: S kin quyt ng k

- Worldwide acknowledgement: S cng nhn ton cu


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- Gain honor for: Ly danh d cho ci g

- Social development and security: Pht trin v an ton x hi

- A sign of unfairness: Mt du hiu ca s bt cng


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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and

behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural

differences.


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your opinion)


INTRODUCTION

- Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about the adherence to the

new customs

- Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for which

side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree

with people who think the host country should welcome

differences in culture)

BODY

- Paragraph 1: 2 reasons why some people think tourists should

follow new customs

Integration into a new environment

Avoiding conflicts

- Paragraph 2: 2 reasons why others think cultural should be


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welcomed.

Culture diverges significantly, depending on different countries

and regions.

A hindrance to tourism

CONCLUSION Restate my favorable side


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Sample answer

There are different opinions about whether visitors should comply with local traditions or

their lifestyles should be accepted. In my opinion, new patterns of belief and behavior should

be welcomed in a new environment.

On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some people think tourists should

adhere to the new customs. Firstly, such adherence would enable them to integrate more

easily and quickly into the new environment. Clearly if a person who comes from the US

understood table manners or knew how to use chopsticks and , he would familiarize himselfwith Vietnamese traditions after a few days. Secondly, following new customs in the host

country would play a part in avoiding social conflicts and, sometimes, hostility. A sense of

isolation and loneliness could be the price for those who refuse to adapt to the new

environment.

On the other hand, I would argue that it would be more suitable for a new way of thinking to

be warmly accepted. Culture diverges tremendously across different countries and

regions,depending on their historial backgrounds. Therefore, it is rather absurd to compel

tourists to comply with the host countrys lifestyles. In addition, such permission would be a

powerful leverage to develop the tourism industy of the host country. On being allowed to

behave according to their cultural standards, visitors would feel respected and satisfied. Also

of great significance is their recommendation to their friends and relatives to travel to those

places, leading to the growth of tourism.

In conclusion, I would agree with the people who support the idea of appreciating every

cultural difference.

(266 words)

Useful vocabulary:

- Comply with local traditions: Tun theo phong tc a phng

- New patterns of belief and behavior: Li suy ngh v c x mi


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- Adhere to the new customs: Tun theo nhng phong tc mi

- Integrate more easily and quickly into the new environment: Ha nhp d

dng v nhanh chng hn vo mi trng mi

- Social conflicts and, sometimes, hostility: i lp x hi v i khi l s hn hc

- A sense of isolation and loneliness: Cm gic c lp v c n

- Adapt to the new environment: Thch nghi vi mi trng mi

- Compel tourists to comply with the host countrys lifestyles: Bt buc du

khch phi tun theo li sng quc gia m h n thm


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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.

Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.


SUGGESTED ANSWER


your opinion)


INTRODUCTION

- Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about whether or not

people should make changes in life

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Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for whichside of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree

with people who think change is a good thing)

BODY

- Paragraph 1: 2 reasons why some people prefer spending time

doing the same things

They have passion for what they do

A fear of uncertainty

-Paragraph 2: 2 reasons why others think change is always a goodthing

Bringing new experiences

Fortifying characteristics

CONCLUSIONRestate my favorable side


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Sample answer

Many people show preference for repeating their daily routine while others always look for

change as they believe change would bring more benefits. In my opinion, I would agree with

the latter point of view.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people only want to stick to their

routine activities. Firstly, simply they have passion for what they are doing everyday. For

example, street artists in Vietnam love creating colorful artworks in public without any wish

for change despite little earnings. Secondly, some people have merely adopted a fear ofuncertainty that prevents them from adjusting their ways of life. If they changed their current

jobs, for example, there would be no guarantee that other jobs would bring the same level of

satisfaction as the previous one. That would explain why they embrace the repetition rather

than change.

On the other hand, I would side with those who think change is better. People would have

the chance to undergo new exciting experiences. For example, instead of staying at home to

watch TV, some people could go on a mountain climbing or motorbike trip to enjoy the open

air. Furthermore, making changes in ones life is believed to fortify his characteristics or

talents. When a person only focuses on what he is doing on a daily basis, he would never

know his limits or his potential. A song composer would never discover his aptitude for

singing if he did not get on stage to sing his favorite vocals.

In conclusion, although legitimate reasons for a life without change are vaired, I believe

adjustment to what one does repeatedly is a better choice.

(275 words)

Useful vocabulary

- Repeating their daily routine: Lp li nhng hot ng thng ngy

- Have passion for: C am m cho ci g

- A fear of uncertainty: S s hi v iu g khng chc chn


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- The same level of satisfaction: Cng mc tha mn

- Embrace the repetition: Chp nhn s lp li

- Fortify his characteristics or talents: Cng c tnh cch v ti nng

- His limits or his potential: Gii hn v tim nng

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