College Admissions Essays

College Admissions EssaysSo listening in English class may pay off after allThe Run-DownColleges and Universities get admissions applications from many, many people. If they are going to admit you, it is best to have something that distinguishes you from your peers.They look at: GPA, ACT Scores (or SAT), Involvement (extracurricular activities), and the Essay.The GPAIf you are a senior and you have the thought, Huh, I should have done a little better, you are a little late.Now is the time to try to boost your GPA even if you have to take that boring class that everyone knows is boring to get an A. Boost the GPA.ACT/SAT ScoresIf you study and I mean really study (AKA not just thumbing through the test prep book looking for cool pictures, but really sitting down, doing the problems, figuring out how to work the problems, etc.) this could be the easiest thing to change.You can retake the ACT. You cant retake your GPA.Get InvolvedHelp other people. Do interesting things. These two can actually be the same thing.School clubs, church, Boys and Girls club many organizations exist that really could benefit from you. Just get out there and see whats happening and get involved.Schools like students that have done more than study and not do anything else (or worse not study and not do anything else).The EssayYou have less than 300 words to say that you are awesome and they should choose you and not anyone else because you are just that great. And awesome. And wonderful. Dont go crazy and make up stuff (dont say you invented the internet, invented penicillin, cloned human beings in your basement, etc.) Here are 10 easy steps for an awesome essay (per US News and World Report)It was written by these people

They just look like they know how to write a great essay, dont theyHere is the website: http://www.usnews.com/education/blogs/professors-guide/2010/09/15/10-tips-for-writing-the-college-application-essay

Step One: Be ConciseEven though the Common Application main essay has a suggested minimum of 250 words, and no upper limit, every admissions officer has a big stack to read every day.In other words, you write too much, they are not going to read it. Step Two: Be HonestBe honest. Don't embellish your achievements, titles, and offices. It's just fine to be the copy editor of the newspaper or the treasurer of the Science Club, instead of the president. Plus, I am sure your parents always told you to be honest all the time anyway, so why start telling lies when you do your university application? Step Three: Be an IndividualBe an individual. In writing the essay, ask yourself, "How can I distinguish myself from those thousands of others applying whom I don't knowand even the ones I do know?" It's not in your activities or interests. If you're going straight from high school to college, you're just a teenager, doing teenage things. It is your mind and how it works that are distinctive. How do you think? Step Four: Be CoherentBe coherent. Write about just one subject at a time. Don't try to cover everything in an essay. Doing so can make you sound busy, but at the same time, scattered and superficial. The whole application is a series of snapshots of what you do. It is inevitably incomplete. The colleges expect this. Step Five: Be AccurateBe accurate. Use spell check. If you misspell something, they might just throw it out. Watch your grammar and the other mechanics of good writing - conventional punctuation in the use of commas, semi-colons, etc. If you are unsure about your grammar and mechanics, ask an English teacher to help you proofread your essay (and give them time).Step Six: Be VividBe vivid. A good essay is often compared to a story: In many cases it's an anecdote of an important moment. Provide details Use the names (or invent them) for the other people in the story, including your brother, teacher, or coach. This makes it all more human and humane. It also shows the reader that you are thinking about his or her appreciation of your writing, which is something you'll surely want to do.Step Seven: Be Likable Be likable. Colleges see themselves as communities, where people have to get along with others, in dorms, classes, etc. Are you someone they would like to have dinner with, hang out with, have in a discussion section? Think, "How can I communicate this without just standing up and saying it, which is corny." Subtlety is good.Step Eight: Be Careful with HumorBe cautious in your use of humor. You never know how someone you don't know is going to respond to you, especially if you offer something humorous. Humor is always in the eye of the beholder. Be funny only if you think you have to. Then think again.Step Nine: Be ControversialBe controversial (if you can). So many kids write bland essays that don't take a stand on anything. It is fine to write about politics, religion, something serious, as long as you are balanced and thoughtful. Don't state you have the final truth. And don't just get up on your soapbox and spout off on a sensitive subject.Give reasons and arguments for your view and consider other perspectives (if appropriate). Colleges are places for the discussion of ideas, and admissions officers look for diversity of mind.Step Ten: Be SmartBe smart. Colleges are intellectual places, a fact they almost always keep a secret when they talk about their dorms, climbing walls, and how many sports you can play. Show your intellectual vitality. What gets you excited about learning? This is not the same thing as declaring an intended major. What matters is why that subject interests you.Take their adviceThese people stated over 700 words and your essay probably wont be read by the admissions worker. Look what someone posted at the end of this post:

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