•Accomplishment Improvements

•Improved performance shots•Good framing

•Close ups synced better•Some distraction in the background in performance shots

•Good range of shots•Balance of performance

•Narrative quite hard to follow•Add more effects•Some shots are too long

•Effective lighting•Good “out of focus” effect with the camera

•Sometimes genre isn’t clear•Some shots repeated

•Locations match the song and genre•Good variety

•Redo narrative shots•Poor lighting in the canteen shot

•Good length of shot•Narrative clearer than previous filming

•Made progress since last viewing•Graffito performance shot looks effective

•Song syncs well

Video Feedback

Accomplishment Improvements

•Good selection of images•Nice photos

•Shots don’t relate•Some text not very clear

•Clear text•Good detail

•Bike on cover should be used in video•Some panels are stretched

•Effective font•Shots fit with genre

•Pictures aren’t connected

•Costume matches genre

Digipak Feedback

Accomplishment Improvements

•Picture relates with video•Pixel effect

•Writing is unclear•Colours could be changed

•Good photo•Needs more information

•Needs to connect with the poster

Poster Feedback