Salman's review

Review

Salman Karasayli 9 Owen

The Publications

1) Eat well Database reports (3) (Popular foods, Main course,

Dessert)

A) Main Course

Who was it for?

This is mainly for people who like to eat fatty foods and people who would like

to eat healthier food

1. Did I complete all the work?

All the work is completed every report and the data base report is complete

2. Did I use text and images and do they work together effectively?

I have used text and I mages on the report and they do work effectively It suits

the layout of the reports even more the text colour and the background colour

suits so it stands and it makes the audience able to read it without any

problems.

3. Did I make good use of feedback? (From the teacher and test buddy/pupils)

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Yes, I have made good use of feedback from the test buddy etc... And they

were all good so I think that my reports are good however I could have

improved my report just a bit more.

4. Did I use copyright-free material only? (Most likely not, but explain copyright

issues and how you used the sources table to keep a record of Images/Text)

I have used copyright – free material or images.

The copyright issues are that you can get sentenced in prison for not get

permission from the owner of the image/graphic however if it is something

educational or you got the permission from someone else which knows you

can we are allowed to use the copyright material further more I have used the

sources table to record the websites I went on for my AIDA coursework and

where I got the Images from and I explained what type of graphic or website is

this e.g. is it a copy right?

5. What Improvements Could I make to the Publication and why?

I can improve my reports by just making the layout the same for every report

so that it can look more professional

6. What was the project about?

This report was about different types of meals or main course

7. Did I complete all the tasks?

Yes I have completed all the tasks

8. Did I use on going plan every lesson to monitor my progress?

Yes I always uses on going plan to monitor my progress

9. Did I manage my time?

Yes everything was completed at the right time

10. Did I choose the right people as my test users and reviewers?

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Yes because he sits right next to me so he does not need to move out his seat

to come to me and he always talks about my work

11. What others have to say?

Others thought it was nice

12. What IMPROVEMENTS you would make if you had time?

I would change the position of the pictures

13. What you would do differently if you did the project again?

I would change the design of the report so that none of the reports look

different

14. What feed back did you get from others?

They liked my report

15. What, if anything, went wrong?

I would have had to start all over again


Yes because they always comment on my work

17. How well did I work during the project?

I was focused on my work and listened to my teacher so that I know what I

have to do

18. Did I keep to deadlines and targets?

Yes I knew when the deadlines and targets are

19. How do I think my work on this project affected my performance in other

work?

Because it would have had to have the same layout because it’s about the

same thing

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20. How have I benefited from working on the project?

I learned how to use new tools that I never have used before in my life

21. What would I do differently if I did the project again?

I would change my images

A) Popular foods

Who was it for?

The audience for this report is people who like eating and want to eat the most

popular food & wants to know more


Yes all the work is completed


Yes, I did use a graphic and certainly I did use text and they both suit the

layout of the report and I think it is really effective because the text is

clear and easy to read.


Yes, I have got good feedbacks however I got feedback that I could have

Improved my report design and layout, by just a few changes.

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Yes I did use copyright graphic on this report and I have recorded this

information on my sources table and copy right does have issues for example

being sentenced to prison


I just have to improve my text at the top of the report so that it does not get

blocked by the graphic.


This report is about popular food items or the most popular food.


Yes everything was included in the report so everything was

completed


Yes I did use on going plan every lesson


Yes, because everything was completed just on time


Yes because he told me what I can improve on and what was good


They thought it looked nice

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Change the layout of my report so it looks like the rest of my reports


Change my text size and colour


That it looks nice


I would have started again


Yes, because they tell me what my improvements are


I was always on time to hand in my work so I always listened to my teacher


Because it would have had to have the same layout because it’s about the

same thing


work?

Yes I knew when the deadlines and targets are


I learned how to use new tools


Change the layout and images

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B) Dessert

Who was it for?

People who like eating desserts...


Yes, all the work is successfully completed and handed in.


Yes, I have used text and graphics and I think they are effective to the report

and it suits the layout of the report.


Yes I got good feedbacks however I still could have improved with a few

changes.

4. Did I use copyright-free material only? (Most likely not, but explain

copyright issues and how you used the sources table to keep a record of

Images/Text)

Yes, I did use copyright material however I used for educational purpose and I

had permission from my teacher to use the copyright graphic and I recorded all

this information on my sources table.

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I can just make one improvement to my dessert report by just changing the

layout and making look the same as the rest of my reports.


This project was about to design an dessert only report so that it can be easier

to find


Yes, I did complete all the tasks


Yes I have I used on going plan to see what improvement I need to make or

how well I did while I was designing my report


Yes because everything was completed on time


Yes because he always comments on my work so that I know what is good and

what has to be improved


Others thought it was well layed out and it was good


Change the layout so that it looks like my other reports


Change my layout and the colour of text


They think it was a nice report


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I would start again but it won’t take long for me to make it again because it is

easy to make and design a report


Yes because he always helps me out and I help him


I think I worked really well during this project because when I finished it I

thought is was easy to make a report


Yes I knew when the deadlines and what my targets are that is why I finished

my report on time


work?

This would affect my performance in other work because I would know how to

list stuff or main stuff that I want information of


I learned how to find information in an easier way so this means that I could

find what I need any time easily


Change my layout also the colour of the text so that it looks like the rest of the

reports

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2) Meal Card

A) Meal Card Main Course

Who was it for?

Anyone who likes to make dinner and wants to know how to make


Yes, I did complete all the work I have not missed out any thing from Meal Card

Main Course Every information is added to the Meal Card Main Course.


Yes I did use some graphics and I mostly used text and they both are effective

the text and graphics suit each other also they both suit the background.


Yes I did however I could have only made one improvement.



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Yes I did, I used three graphics which were Copyright material and I have added

this information to my sources table


Just a bit of improvement needs to be made to my Meal Card Main Course.


It is a meal card about main course that I have chosen to write about for

example just a healthy food


Yes all the tasks are completed


Yes I did use on going plan and whenever I opened that it showed me what

improvements are I can make


Yes because everything was complete on time


Yes because he always comments on my work


They think it is nice but only a bit of improvements could have been made to

make the meal card look better


I would make the layout of the both meal cards look the same


I would change the text format

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They think it looks nice


I would start again very quickly


Yes because he comments on my work every lesson


Very well because I focused on my work I didn’t talk during the project


Yes that is why I completed my work on time


work?

It could affect my performance in other project because I would help design a

card (any type of card)


I have benefited from working on this project because I have learned how to

design a very good looking card


I would change my text format and maybe the background

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B) Meal Card Dessert

Who was it for?

People who like to make desserts or people loves desserts


Yes all the work is completed and it is perfect


Yes I have used text and images and they do work effectively because they suit

the meal card and it suits the layout of the meal Card


Yes I did get good feedback from my test buddy and teacher



I did use copyright material but just one and I did record this information on

my sources table so that I keep a record


I could have changed my layout and maybe the background.


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This project is about a certain healthy dessert which teaches how to make the

dessert also it has the nutrition’s




Yes and it helps to know where I am




Yes because he always helps me and I help him when we don’t understand

something by saying help I mean that he tells me what to do


They think it is nice however it could be better


Make both my meal cards look the same (layout)


Change the text and layout


They think it looks nice and it will help others


I would have to start again immediately


Yes I did because he always tells me what I could improve


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I worked really well because I was listening to the teacher and focused on my

work etc...


Yes I have that is why I completed my task on time


work?

It could help me design cards for something else


I learned how to make a good looking card


I will change the layout and the text

3) Information Point

Slide 1-Introducttion

Who was it for?

People who would like to know about small steps 4 life


Yes all the work on the introduction has been completed


Yes they do because it suits what the introduction is introducing


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Yes but I could have only made a bit of improvement



I used copy right material however I am using from my teachers permission


I could have talked about what small steps 4 life is more?


It was to introduce what small steps 4 life is


Yes I have


Yes I did, I used it every lesson to record what I’ve done in the lesson and what

needs more improvement




Yes because he all ways gives me feedback


They think the entire components good layout


I could maybe add a bit more text


I would change the layout of the components

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They think it is clear to read the text


I would start it again


Yes because he all ways gives me feedback


I worked really well I thought I was always focused on my work not something

else


Yes I did I know when the deadline and targets are I kept it in mind


work?

It could affect my future when I am making a presentation I would know how

to introduce stuff


I learned how to use hyperlink (buttons)


I could change the layout and add something to background to make it more

intresting

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Slide 2-Olympic/Paralympics Values

Who was it for?

It’s for people who would like to know more about the Olympics and

Paralympics


Yes all the work is completed


I did not use images but I did use the 2012 Olympics logo however I think that

it is effective


Yes I did

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I only used the 2012 Olympics logo and small steps 4 life logo and I don’t know

if they are copyright because I got them from fronter


I could make the values bigger and change the colour so that it stands out


It was about what the Olympic/Paralympics Values are and it was about how

small steps 4 life promotes it




Yes I did use it every time I had a lesson


Yes because I completed all the work on time


Yes because he always has feedback on my work


They think it’s nice but some people did not see it yet


Change the text size and colour


Change the text size and colour

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They think the layout is good because nothing overlaps the other component


Start the project again


Yes I did


I worked really well because my work was nice and I was not annoyed by

others


Yes I did


work?

I learned how to make a hyperlink button and learned how to use slide master

I might need to use these in the future


Yes I did because I learned new tools and stuff from PowerPoint


Change colour and text size of slide

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Slide 3-Eat Well

Who was it for?

People who would like to eat healthy food


Yes I have


I did use text and images and they do work effectively


Yes I did make good use of feedback but there were some Improvements I

could have made



I did use copyright material and I would have had to ask for permission from

the owners of the copyright images however my teacher has allowed me to

use it


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I could improve the colour of the text because nearly all the colours are

different


It’s about how food affects us


Yes I did


Yes I did use it every lesson


Yes because I completed my work on time


Yes I did because he always comments on my work


Others think it has good information


I don’t think any Improvements need to be made


I would change the layout


Good and some improvements


Start again


Yes I did because we both work hard and focus on our work

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Very well


Yes I did I kept it in mind


work?

I learned how to use new stuff for a presentation


I learned stuff I have never knew


Change the layout

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Slide 4-Get Active

Who was it for?

People who would like to be more active


Yes I did


Yes I did use text and images and I think that they do work effectively


Yes I did



Yes I have and it is copyright material so I would need permission from the

owner of the image that I would like to use it however my teacher has allowed

me to use the image


I could add a bit more text

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It was about how it promotes small steps 4 life and it’s about how to get active


Yes I did


Yes I did use ongoing plan every lesson to record my work


Yes because I completed everything on time


Yes because he is always focused and sometimes helps me


Other thinks that I could add a bit more information however some people like

it


Add a bit more text




Some good and some improvements


Start the project again QUICKLY


Yes because I always get feedback from him


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Very well because I completed my work on time


Yes I did that is why I completed the project on time


work?

I learned how to use new stuff it could affect my future


I learned new stuff I never knew before



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Slide 5-Feeling Good

Who was it for?

Pupils who would like to feel good when their upset, angry or for something

else


Yes I did


Yes I did and I think they do work together effectively


Yes I did



Yes I have and would have needed permission however my teacher said I can

use it without permission because it is for educational purpose


I could improve the background colour of the text box and text colour


It was about how you can feel good when you’re not well


Yes I did


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I did use ongoing plan every lesson to monitor my work


Yes because the project was complete on time




Other think it is good however like I said I could have done a bit more

improvement


Change the layout and colour of the texts


Change the layout


Good and some improvements


I would always start the project again but I will make sure I complete it on time


Yes I did because he is always focused


Good


Yes I did


work?

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It can be useful in the future because I learned how to use new stuff


Yes I did because I learned stuff I never knew before


Change the layout and the colour of the text

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4. Challenge Card

Who was it for?

It is for pupils to record the challenges they are going to do


Yes I have


Yes I did use text and images and I think they do work effectively


Yes I did but the teacher said I could make a bit improvements



Yes I did use for the background so I had to ask for permission to use it

however I am using for educational purpose and my teacher has allowed me to

use so there is no point asking for permission


I could Improve the background and the colour of the text because it make a

bit difficult to read


It was about to make a challenge card for pupils who want to challenge them

self


Yes I have complete all the tasks


Yes I did and I recorded information every lesson

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Yes because the work was completed on time




Other thought it’s nice but it could be improved


Change the background and text colour and colour of text boxes


Change background and colour of text and text boxes


Good and some Improvements


I will redo my challenge card


Yes because he is focused on his work and helps me sometimes


I think I worked hard because it took a bit time for me to finish the challenge

card


Yes I kept in mind


work?

I learned how t make a nice looking card

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I learned how to use different tools


I will change the background and colour of text and text boxes

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