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There are two types of run-on sentences: 1. Comma Splices My grades are good this semester, my social life is not. 2. Fused Sentences My grades are good this semester my social life is not.
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RUN-ONS
• A run-on sentence is two complete thoughts that run together with no adequate sign given to mark the break between them
• or
• Two complete sentences with no break between them
• There are two types of run-on sentences:
• 1. Comma Splices• My grades are good this semester, my social
life is not.
• 2. Fused Sentences• My grades are good this semester my social life
is not.
• In this class we will use the term “run-on” to signal both.
Example (incorrect):
• He threw the ball the dog chased it.
Example (incorrect):
• He threw the ball the dog chased it.
Example (correct):
• He threw the ball. The dog chased it.• He threw the ball; the dog chased it.• He threw the ball, and the dog chased it.• He threw the ball before the dog chased it.
1. A period and a capital letter2. A semicolon3. A comma and a conjunction4. Subordination
1. A period and a capital letter1. He threw the ball. The dog chased it.
2. A semicolon1. He threw the ball; the dog chased it.
3. A comma and a conjunction1. He threw the ball, and the dog chased it.
4. Subordination1. He threw the ball before the dog chased it.
Example (incorrect):
• He threw the ball the dog chased it.
Example (correct):
• He threw the ball. The dog chased it.
• Method #1 To Correct Run-On Sentences
• Use a period and a capital letter at the break.
• This method is especially good when the sentence is really long.
• Example:• He threw the ball the dog chased it.
• He threw the ball. The dog chased it.
• Method #2 To Correct Run-On Sentences
• Use a comma and a joining word (a conjunction)
• There are 7 conjunctions.
CONJUNCTIONS
• For• And• Nor• But• Or • Yet• So
Think of “FANBOYS” to help you remember
Example (correct):
• He threw the ball, and the dog chased it.
• He threw the ball, and the dog chased it.
• He threw the ball, and the dog chased it.
• Before you use the method of comma and conjunction to fix a run-on, make sure you know the definition of each conjunction.
• and = in addition to, along with
• but = however, except, just the opposite
• or = the opposite of a specific choice (otherwise)
• for = because of, the reason why, the cause of something
• so = as a result, therefore
• yet = a specific exception to something
• nor = additionally not, meaning “also a negative”
• and = in addition to
• but = however, except
• for = because, the reason why
• so = as a result, therefore
• Method #3 To Correct Run-On Sentences
• Use a semicolon
• ;
• He threw the ball; the dog chased it.
Example (correct):
• He threw the ball; the dog chased it.
Semicolon Note!!!
• In addition, you may use the semicolon when you’re listing 3 items or more and each of those items contains a comma and/or a conjunction.
• He has lived in Sacramento, California; Portland, Maine; and Springfield, Illinois.
• (correct) He has lived in Sacramento, California; Portland, Maine; and Springfield, Illinois.
• (incorrect) He has lived in Sacramento, California, Portland, Maine, and Springfield, Illinois.
• You can also use a semi-colon and a transition and a comma.
• We were short of money; therefore, we decided not to eat out.
NOTE:
• however = but
• nevertheless = but [it] happened anyway
• on the other hand = but the opposite is [is not] true
• Method #4 To Correct Run-On Sentences
• Subordination: Use dependent words like:• After• Although• As• Because• Before• If• Since• Unless• Until• When• While
Example (correct): Use “after”
• He threw the ball the dog chased it.
• The dog chased the ball after he threw it.
• After he threw the ball, the dog chased it.
• If the dependent word falls in the middle of the
sentence, you do not need a comma.
The dog chased the ball after he threw it.
• However, if the dependent word begins the sentence, you DO need a comma between phrases.
After he threw it, the dog chased the ball
Example (correct): Use “after”
• The dog chased the ball after he threw it.
• After he threw the ball, the dog chased it.
• Subordination is a way to signal your reader that one part of the thought is not as important as the other.