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This is a group of lessons for Elementary Adult ESL students to learn how to write, read and speak a short recount.
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Topic Page
Introduction 2
Grammar 3
Recounts 13
Practice tests
Writing 28
Speaking 31
Listening 32
A day at the park.
During the holidays, my family went to a park. First we had a picnic
lunch. Then the boys kicked an old footy around because they were
bored. After a while, Jimbo kicked it into a tree and it got stuck.
They threw long sticks and big stones at it, but it stayed firmly stuck
in the tree. Later on, Tommo climbed the tree but he couldn’t reach
it. Eventually we went home and left the football in the tree.
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INTRODUCTION
What is a recount?
A recount tells what happened. It tells events in the order they happened.
Its social purpose:
Its purpose is to talk or write about things we have done in the past. A holiday,
the weekend, watching TV, what our children have done.
In a recount you will find staging:
Orientation – tells about people, where and when it happened
Record of events – tells what happened in the order they happened
Conclusion – ends the story
Grammar of a recount:
Staging – Orientation, record of events, conclusion ………………………………………..3
Time markers – First, after that, next, finally, last Saturday ……………………..4
Independent clauses - simple sentence (words, groups + 1 verb) …………………6
Noun groups – noun + adjective …………………………………………………………………………….7
Conjunctions – and, but, so, because ……………………………………………………………………8
Past tense verbs – past simple – was/were …………………………………………………..…...9
Action verbs – drove, jumped, ran, kicked ……………………………………………………….10
Personal pronouns – I, we, they, us …………………………………………………………………….11
Correct spelling of important words ………………………………………………………………….12
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GRAMMAR
Staging
Orientation – is always at the start.
It tells us who, where and when it happened.
Who is this recount about? ……………………………………………………………
Where did it happen? ………………………………………………………………………
When did it happen? …………………………………………………………………………
Record of Events – makes the body of the story.
It tells what happened in order of the events.
What did we do first? …………………………………………………………………………
What did we do next? …………………………………………………………………………
Then what happened? ………………………………………………………………………….
What else did they do? ……………………………………………………………………….
What was the last thing they tried? ……………………………………………….
Conclusion – tells how the story ends.
What two things did they do at the end of the story?
1. ……………………………………………… 2. ……………………………………………….
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GRAMMAR
Time Markers
Time markers tell when things happened, and in what order.
What happened during our day at the park?
………………….. the holidays, my family went to a park. ………………. we had a
picnic lunch. …………….. the boys kicked an old footy around because
they were bored. ………………………………, Jimbo kicked it into a tree and it
got stuck. They threw long sticks and big stones at it, but it stayed
firmly stuck in the tree. ……………………, Tommo climbed the tree but he
couldn’t reach it. ………………………. we went home and left the football in
the tree.
Listen to the recount and write down the time markers
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List the time markers from the above recount:
1. …………………………………………………..
2. …………………………………………………..
3. …………………………………………………..
4. …………………………………………………..
5. …………………………………………………..
6. …………………………………………………..
Can you think of some other words that are time markers?
…………………………….. …………………..………….. …………..…………………
…………………………….. …………………..………….. …………..…………………
…………………………….. …………………..………….. …………..…………………
…………………………….. …………………..………….. …………..…………………
…………………………….. …………………..………….. …………..…………………
…………………………….. …………………..………….. …………..…………………
…………………………….. …………………..………….. …………..…………………
During this term, record other time markers that you learn
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GRAMMAR
Independent Clauses
An Independent clause is a simple sentence made up of words and groups.
It must have 1 verb.
Clause We had a picnic lunch.
Group We had a picnic lunch.
Word We had a picnic lunch.
The groups in these sentences are like this
Naming who or what
(Noun Group)
Subject
Naming the action
(Verb Group)
Verb
Naming who or what,
(Noun Group)
Object
My family went to a park.
We had a picnic lunch.
Tommo climbed the tree.
He couldn’t reach it.
We went home.
See if you can write some clauses by filling spaces below
My friend ate
ran into the water.
My son out of a tree
Your dog my lunch.
gave me some money.
Our family
fell
a computer.
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GRAMMAR
Noun Groups
The main part of a noun group is the noun.
1. We had a picnic lunch.
2. The boys kicked an old footy.
3. Tommo climbed the tree.
Sometimes, we add an adjective to tell more about the noun and this
makes a (NOUN GROUP).
1. We had a (picnic lunch).
2. The boys kicked an (old footy).
What are some adjectives you could add to these nouns?
………………… girl ……………….. woman ……………….. teacher
………………… book ……………….. party ………………… brother
………………… chair ……………….. table ………………… job
………………… picture ……………….. day ………………… tree
………………… boys ……………….. game ………………… box
………………… friend ……………….. boat ………………… carpet
………………… water ……………….. cat ………………… house
………………… cup ……………….. coat ………………… dress
………………… hat ……………….. hands ………………… shoes
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GRAMMAR
Conjunctions
A simple sentence has one independent clause.
1. The boys kicked an old footy around.
2. They were bored.
A compound sentence has two or more clauses.
We join the clauses with conjunctions (joining words).
The boys kicked an old footy around because they were bored.
The conjunctions we use a lot are: and but so because
And:
But:
So:
Because:
I went to town and did some shopping.
(positive) (positive)
I like living in this city but it’s very expensive.
(positive) (negative)
They haven’t got much money but they’re very happy.
(negative) (positive)
It was a very wet day so we stayed at home.
(reason) (result)
I didn’t go to work because I felt sick.
(result) (reason)
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Practice Conjunctions: (and, but, so or because)
1. It was a lovely day………….. we decided to go out.
2. We walked to the station ………… caught the train.
3. I like John very much ………… I don’t like his brother.
4. I’d like to live somewhere by the sea ………… I love the sun.
5. She enjoys learning English ………… she finds it very difficult.
6. The restaurant had to close down ………… very few people went there.
7. I got up ………… had my breakfast
8. I’m very busy today ………… I can’t come and see you.
9. It’s a very interesting job ………… the pay isn’t very good.
10. We can’t go out tonight ………… we haven’t got any money
11. The music was playing very loudly ………… I didn’t hear the phone.
12. He went to the theatre last night ………… had a wonderful time.
13. They didn’t want to walk home ………… it was very dark.
14. It’s a beautiful place ………… the people aren’t very friendly.
15. I felt very tired ………… I left the party early.
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GRAMMAR
Past Tense Verbs For more information about past tense verbs,
please see page ….…. of your blue book.
I walked to school. Past simple tense: positive
I
You
She
He
It
We
They
Walked.
Write the past simple of these verbs:
Stay Listen
Rain Love
Help Wash
Carry Stop
Want Ask
Play Look
Smoke Open
Walk Start
Study Live
Cry Watch
Work Like
Spelling
like liked e, add d
study studied consonant + y, change y to i + ed
stop stopped vowel + consonant, double the
consonant + ed
Play played y and w at the end of a word
are not consonant sounds, so verbs
ending in y or w do not double the
consonant
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GRAMMAR
Personal Pronouns Subject Verb Object
I see them.
She knows me.
We don’t like it.
Subject pronouns
I you she he it we they
Object pronouns
me you her him it us them
Circle the correct word in the following sentences:
1. Can you help we/us with these bags?
2. We/Us usually see they/them at the weekend.
3. How did you teach he/him to read?
4. I/Me write to she/he once a month.
5. He/Him loved she/her very much.
6. Why did you ask they/them to come?
7. I/Me don’t think she/her understands I/me.
8. Please don’t wait for we/us.
9. Did they/them tell she/her the news?
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GRAMMAR
Spelling
Words ending in s, ch, sh, or x, add e before final s:
glass glasses pass …………………………
match matches catch …………………………
dish …………………… wash …………………………
box ……………………. fix …………………………
Words ending in consonant + o often add es:
tomato ……………………….. potato …………………………..
But words ending in vowel + o, add s: radio ……………..
And abbreviated endings ending in o, add s:
Kilo ………………………… photo ………………………………
We drop the single e at the end of a word before adding
another ending:
Before ing: smile …………………….. live ……………………….
Before ed: love …………………….. dance …………………..
Before er and est: nice nicer nicest
Verbs ending in ee: see seeing
agree agreeing agreed
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My Granddaughter
Last Friday I took my granddaughter to kindy. First she played with
some blocks and put three on top of each other! Then she read a
book, and showed me a picture of a big red car. After that all the
children sat on the floor. They all listened to a story. Finally she was
tired so we went home. We both had a really good time at kindy.
1. This is about
a. A day out
b. My family
c. Going to kindy
2. What did she do first?
_______________________________________________
3. What did she do after she read a book?
_______________________________________________
4. What picture was in the book?
_______________________________________________
5. What happened when she sat on the floor?
_______________________________________________
6. Why did they go home?
_______________________________________________
Staging:
Write the orientation:
_______________________________________________
Write the conclusion:
_______________________________________________
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Now you do some writing about somewhere you went with a friend or
someone in your family.
What is your title?
_________________________________________
First, write your orientation.
It tells us who, where and when it happened.
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Now, your body.
It tells what happened in order of the events.
____________________________________________________
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Now your conclusion.
It tells how the story ends.
____________________________________________________
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Speaking:
Close your book, and tell this recount to your partner
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Cleaning the house Yesterday I decided to clean the house. I started in the kitchen.
First I washed the dishes and put them in the cupboard. Then I
washed the floor. While it was drying I went into the bedroom and
made the beds. After that I did some washing and hung it on the line
to dry. My house is nice and clean now.
1. This is about
a. Washing
b. Cleaning
c. Shopping
2. Where did I put the dishes?
_______________________________________________
3. What did I do while the floor was drying?
_______________________________________________
4. What did I do in the bedroom?
_______________________________________________
5. What was the last thing I did?
_______________________________________________
6. Draw lines to show the order that I did things
(the first one is done for you)
1 Wash the floor
2 Do the washing
3 Hang clothes on line
4 Wash the dishes
5 Made the beds
6 Put the dishes in the cupboard
7. Draw circles around all the time markers in the recount. Add
them to your list on page 5.
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Now write about some work you do. What is your title?
_________________________________________
Orientation.
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Body.
____________________________________________________
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Conclusion.
____________________________________________________
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Editing: Check what time markers you have used. Circle them in your
writing and write them below:
…………………………….. …………………………….. ……………………………….
…………………………….. …………………………….. ……………………………….
……………………………. ……………………………… ……………………………….
Speaking:
Close your book, and tell this recount to your partner
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A Day at Tea Tree Plaza I had a really good weekend but Saturday was especially good. First I
realised that I still had a gift voucher from my birthday so I caught
the O-bahn to Tea Tree Plaza to spend it. When I got there I went to
Myer and found a very nice pair of jeans. Then I went to look for
some shoes, but I couldn’t find any that I liked. I still have $40 left
on my gift voucher for another day!
1. What is this about?
a. A bus ride
b. Shopping
c. A day out
2. How did I get to Tea Tree Plaza? __________________
3. What did I buy? ______________________________
4. What did I do after I bought jeans? _______________
5. What didn’t I buy? ____________________________
6. Did I spend all the money on my gift voucher? ________
Write the order that I did things
Went to Myer
Realised I had a gift voucher
Looked for some shoes
Caught the O-bahn
Underline some independent clauses in the recount
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Write about somewhere you have been.
_________________________________________
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Editing: Check your work for independent clauses.
In the spaces below, write your independent clauses as groups.
Naming who or what
(Noun Group)
Naming the action
(Verb Group)
Naming who or what,
(Noun Group)
Speaking:
Close your book, and tell this recount to your partner
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Victor Harbor Last year, we had a really good holiday at Victor Harbor. The first
day, we went fishing. My husband caught four fish but I didn’t catch
any! After that we went for a long walk along the beach and collected
some pretty shells. The next day was very hot so we went for a swim
then played cards before we went to the pub for a meal. It was only a
short holiday, but I really enjoyed it.
1. This is about:
a. Fishing
b. Walking
c. A Holiday
2. What two things did we do on the first day?
_______________________________________________
3. What did we find on the beach?
_______________________________________________
4. What did we do before we played cards?
_______________________________________________
5. Number the order that we did things
(the first one is done for you)
1. walk on the beach
2. go for a swim
3. go fishing
4. go for a meal
5. play cards
6. List some noun groups from the recount:
……………………………… …………………………………….. …………………………………..
……………………………… …………………………………….. …………………………………..
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Today, we will speak first.
Think about last weekend. What did you do?
When you finish speaking, write your recount.
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Ask your partner to check your work and list all your noun
groups below:
…………………………………………. …………………………………………….
…………………………………………. …………………………………………….
…………………………………………. …………………………………………….
…………………………………………. …………………………………………….
…………………………………………. …………………………………………….
…………………………………………. …………………………………………….
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A Weekend Away We went to Sydney last weekend. We flew there on Friday night and
stayed in a nice hotel in the city. On Saturday we caught the ferry to
Manley and ate fish and chips on the beach. On Sunday I visited my
Sister. It was her birthday and we had a lovely party. After the
party, we went straight to the train station and had a relaxing trip
home on the train. It was a very busy weekend, but we had a really
good time.
1. When did we fly to Sydney? ____________________________
2. Where did we stay?
With friends
At a hotel
In a camping ground
With her sister
3. What day did we go to Manley? _________________________
4. What did we eat on Saturday? _________________________
5. What day did we go to a birthday party? __________________
6. Number the events in the story in the correct order.
We went to Manley
We went to the train station
We went to a party
We flew to Sydney
7. This recount is about
A birthday party
A trip to Manley
A weekend away
8. What conjunctions have been used in the recount?
……………………….. ……………………….. ……………………. ………………… …………………..
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Tell your partner about your trip to Australia (You should tell your story in less than 2 minutes)
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Edit your work: Which conjunctions did you use? Write your sentences and label with positive or negative (See page 8)
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My Best Friend’s Wedding Last month my best friend got married. It was a busy day for me. First I got up
early and drove to her house. Then I took her to the hairdresser and we both had
our hair done. After that, we stopped at the florist to collect the flowers before
we went home. Next we had to get dressed. It took a long time to help her get
dressed because there were a lot of buttons to do up. When she was dressed, I
got ready and then the wedding car came to pick us up. Finally we got to the Rose
Gardens and the ceremony began. I’m very happy for my friend because it was a
beautiful wedding.
1. Where did they go to get their hair done? __________________
2. What did the get at the florist? _________________________
3. Why did the dress take a long time to put on?
______________________________________________________
4. Where did they go to get married? _______________________
Number the events in the story in the correct order
Picked up the flowers
Drove to my friend’s house
Got dressed
Had the wedding ceremony
Went to the hairdresser
5. This story is about
A day out
A wedding
Hairdressers
Getting dressed
6. Make a list of the simple past tense verbs:
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
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Tell your partner about a wedding or celebration (You should tell your story in less than 2 minutes)
Partner to time how long …………………… minutes
Your partner must list the simple past tense verbs they hear you use:
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
Write about your trip to Australia:
_________________________________________
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____________________________________________________
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What simple past tense verbs have you used?
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
………………………… ……………………………. …………………………. ………………………..
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Rose’s Day
Rose had a good day. She woke up and had some mango for breakfast.
She ate a whole mango and after that we went for a walk up to the
lighthouse with Mater and Pater. By the time we got to the
lighthouse, she was really cranky, so we came straight back home and
she went to sleep. She slept for a while but not too long because I
was waiting for Joe to come around. I was really keen for her to play
with Joe and we all went down to the beach for a swim. She’s getting
really confident in the waves now. When we finished swimming I
wrapped her up in a towel and we walked back up the hill and now she’s
playing on the swing with her cousin Rosalee.
1. Number the events in the order they happen in the story.
The first one has been done for you.
____ Rose went for a swim
____ Rose had a sleep
____ Rose played with Joe
__1_ Rose ate breakfast
____ Rose played on the swing
____ Rose went for a walk
Answer these questions in no more than four words
2. How much did Rose eat for breakfast?
______________________________________________
3. Where did Rose go on her walk?
______________________________________________
4. Where did Rose go after her sleep?
______________________________________________
5. Who did Rose go swimming with?
______________________________________________
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6. Who did Rose play with on the swing?________________________________
7. Write some past tense verbs from the story
_______________ ______________ ______________ _______________
8. Write some noun groups from the story
________________________________ _________________________________
________________________________ _________________________________
________________________________ _________________________________
9. Write some conjunctions that are in the story
_______________ ______________ ______________ _______________
10. Write some time phrases from the story
________________________________ _________________________________
________________________________ _________________________________
________________________________ _________________________________
11. Write the personal pronouns that are used in this story
_______________ ______________ ______________ _______________
_______________ ______________ ______________ _______________
_______________ ______________ ______________ _______________
11. Who is Rose?
a. The person’s friend
b. The person’s husband
c. The person’s wife
d. The person’s child
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Writing a Recount checklist
More than 60 words
Staging
Conjunctions
Time markers
Noun groups
Past tense verbs
Personal pronouns
Punctuation & all one paragraph
Spelling
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Homework Test Practice
1. Each day of the weekend, write a recount
2. Edit your writing using the written recount checklist (page 27).
3. The recount can be real or pretend.
Thursday
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Friday
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Saturday
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Sunday
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Monday class practice
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Practice speaking test
Speaking a Recount checklist
Ask your listening partner to tick off the things they hear.
More than 30 seconds
Staging
Conjunctions
Time markers
Noun groups
Past tense verbs
Personal pronouns
Vocabulary appropriate to topic
Pronounce words with clarity and stress
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Practice listening test
On the Murray The best holiday I ever had was on the Murray River. I went for two
days on a river boat. On the first day we travelled slowly up the river
from Renmark before stopping for the night. We made a wonderful
dinner of Australian food such as kangaroo with wild yams, and
blackberries for desert. On the second day, we returned to Renmark
but stopped at several places along the way. One place we stopped
was an aboriginal park and they told us about their culture. It was
really relaxing to be on the river.
1. Where did I go for my holiday? __________________________
2. How many days did I go for? __________________________
3. What did I eat on the first day? _________________________
4. Number the events in the story in the correct order
Ate dinner
Returned to Renmark
Visited an aboriginal park
Left Renmark
5. What was this story about?
A holiday
The River Murray
Aboriginal culture
Australian food
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Practice listening test (Ask a friend to read aloud for you)
Mother-in-law Last weekend my mother-in-law came to visit us from Sydney. We
picked her up from the airport very early on Saturday morning and
took her home. After we got home, I cooked a big breakfast for all of
us. After that, we went to Harbour Town and did some shopping, then
we went to Glenelg for lunch at a Seafood restaurant. In the evening
we went to the movies and then went home. On Sunday we all went to
church together before we took her back to the airport. I like my
mother-in-law, but it was good to say goodbye too.
1. When did my mother-in-law arrive from Sydney?
_______________________________________________________
2. Where did they go shopping? ____________________________
3. Where did they eat lunch? ______________________________
4. What day did they go to the movies? ______________________
5. Number the events in the story in the correct order
Went to Harbour Town
Went to the movies
Went to church
Had breakfast
Took her to the airport
6. What was this story about?
Going shopping
Visit from mother-in-law
Going to the airport
Going to Glenelg