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hen Dorothy was left alone, Dorothy began to feel hungry. So Dorothy went to the cupboard and cut some bread, which Dorothy spread with butter. Dorothy gave some to Toto, and taking a pail from the shelf, Dorothy carried the pail down to the little brook and filled the pail with clear, sparkling water. Toto ran over to the trees and began to bark at the birds sitting there. Dorothy went to get Toto, and saw such delicious fruit hanging from the branches that Dorothy gathered some of the fruits, finding the fruits just what Dorothy wanted to help out her breakfast.

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hen Dorothy was left alone, Dorothy began to feel hungry. So Dorothy went to the cupboard and cut some bread, which Dorothy spread with butter. Dorothy gave some to Toto, and taking a pail from the shelf Dorothy carried the pail down to the little brook and filled the pail with clear, sparkling water. Toto ran over to the trees and began to bark at the birds sitting there. Dorothy went to get Toto, and saw such delicious fruits hanging from the branches that Dorothy gathered some of the fruits, finding the fruits just what Dorothy wanted to help out her breakfast.

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hen Dorothy was left alone, she began to feel hungry. So she went to the cupboard and cut some bread, which she spread with butter. She gave some to Toto, and taking a pail from the shelf she carried the pail down to the little brook and filled the pail with clear, sparkling water. Toto ran over to the trees and began to bark at the birds sitting there. She went to get Toto, and saw such delicious fruits hanging from the branches that she gathered some of the fruits, finding the fruits just what she wanted to help out her breakfast.

hen Dorothy was left alone, she began to feel hungry. So she went to the cupboard and cut some bread, which she spread with butter. She gave some to Toto, and taking a pail from the shelf she carried it down to the little brook and filled it with clear, sparkling water. Toto ran over to the trees and began to bark at the birds sitting there. She went to get Toto, and saw such delicious fruits hanging from the branches that she gathered some of the fruits, finding the fruits just what she wanted to help out her breakfast.

hen Dorothy was left alone, she began to feel hungry. So she went to the cupboard and cut some bread, which she spread with butter. She gave some to Toto, and taking a pail from the shelf she carried it down to the little brook and filled it with clear, sparkling water. Toto ran over to the trees and began to bark at the birds sitting there. She went to get Toto, and saw such delicious fruits hanging from the branches that she gathered some of them, finding them just what she wanted to help out her breakfast.

hen Dorothy was left alone, she began to feel hungry. So she went to the cupboard and cut some bread, which she spread with butter. She gave some to Toto, and taking a pail from the shelf she carried it down to the little brook and filled it with clear, sparkling water. Toto ran over to the trees and began to bark at the birds sitting there. She went to get Toto, and saw such delicious fruits hanging from the branches that she gathered some of them, finding them just what she wanted to help out her breakfast.