This is a spelling mistake I made and this is me using spell check to fix this little problem. As you can see the sentence should be ‘we were then given ‘an’ option of taking…’I had to take this sentence out

because I couldn’t find the website that informed me with this information.

This was a silly mistake I made, I used spell check to check my mistake and changed it straight away. The sentence should be ‘we were looking into documentary conventions such as…’

This paragraph is poor, there is no punctuation at all. I need to fix this and add punctuation to this paragraph, and also I need to take out a few words from the paragraph because personally i think its unnecessarily for it to be there

Comma Full stop

Comma