Today we will: Juniors: Re-Work/ Edit/ Improve

EssaysFreshmen: Presentations

Jan. 26, 2016

Stop:Can I see or hear your

cell phone?Fix it!

Homework: Juniors: Write 4 DJs for Act II:

Freshmen: Research for Presentations

Problems…• “Get to bed!” “I don’t think so.” punctuation inside the

quotation marks.• If a quotation occurs mid sentence, introduce it with a

comma. My momma always told me, “Life is like a box of chocolates.” Quotations start with a capital letter. Except:

• “Life is like,” she hesitated, “a box of chocolates.”• Lower case first person pronoun I is NEVER EVER EVER

EVER EVER lower case.• Subject/Verb and Noun/Pronoun agreement. • Capitalization – all rules• Run on sentences (2 independent clauses separated by

nothing or a mere comma)

• Colon: separate 2 clauses, what follows explains what precedes. I really need coffee: I didn’t sleep last night.

• Semi-Colon: showing a closer relationship between ideas than a period would show. I studied all night; I sure hope I pass.

• Comma + Conjunction: I ate all of the peanut butter, but I apologized.

• Period. New sentence. • I slept. I woke. I sipped coffee. I ran to work. I tripped on the way out

of the door.• Spell out numbers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! • WW: Wrong Word • WC: Word Choice• Verb Tense: Past, Present, and future walk into a room: it was tense.• 2nd Person: get rid of it.

What should I write about?

• Making Good Food• Learning New Things• Being Humbled by failure

Sample AnecdoteI believe in making good food. Just yesterday, after my morning coffee I ambled into the kitchen. I placed the seasoned cast iron grill pan on the high flame and put together my list of carefully chosen ingredients. First, the aioli! I flattened the white, thinly papered clove and tossed it into the food processor. I spooned the rich mayonnaise in after it. I carefully chopped the remaining cilantro from the produce drawer and added it to the party. Next the juicy, ripe lemon: first sliced, then aggressively squeezed it into the bowl. Salt. Pepper. Cayenne pepper, of course. And WHIRRRRRRRRR! Delicious.

FailureThe year: 1988. The stage, literal. In front of eleven thousand people I quietly and gleefully awaited my turn. It arrived, after what seemed like ages. I stepped up to the microphone, waved to the anxious crowd and then it happened. I repeated the same phrase twice. “Who cares?” you might say, I did. I was supposed to be clever and change my phrase slightly for a laugh, but I didn’t. So I smiled, waved, forgot to tell them my name and gracefully walked backstage to cry into the generous shoulder of my hairdresser.

SOME CONCEPTS THAT MIGHT INFORM THEMES

WEALTH LIESHYPOCRISY RELIGIONWITCHCRAFT BETRAYALFEAR IGNORANCESIN DISTRUSTLOSS FAITHLOYALTY GUILTPRIDE TEMPTATIONREVENGE LUST

Now, form complete sentences expressing Miller’s opinions based on your reading of the plot, the characters, and the conflicts.

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