PROBLEM-SOLUTION ESSAY

- To discuss or analyse a problem and suggest ways to solve the problemproblem-solution essay

Must be sure to present at least one solution for each problem. 2 ways of handling the ideas. all the problems are listed before the solutions given 1 problem is followed by several solutions to the problem.Problem-solution essay

To cover several related problems in essay, you should use:Body:1. Problems 1, 2 and 32. Solutions to problems 1, 2 and 3Body:1. Problem 1, Solution 12. Problem 2, Solution 2Pattern 1Pattern 2Dont worry, Spongebob still thinks this is super fun!

After decided the content of body paragraphs, you are ready to start writing your essay.

REMEMBER the paragraph plan of problem-solution essay:

Paragraph 1: Introduction Attraction Sentence General Statements Thesis StatementParagraph 2: Descriptions of the problem (Body 1)Paragraph 3: Solutions to the problem (Body 2)Paragraph 4: Conclusion

QUESTION:Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Thesis statement should have 2 parts:

There are still several actions that governments and individuals can do in order to overcome the problems of overpopulation of urban areas.

Expressing the general problemHint about the solutionWHEW!!! THIS IS TOUGHPart 1: Expressing the general problem Part 2: hint about the solution

BODY- think of:

What are the problems that overpopulation causes in cities?What are the consequences of overpopulation in cities?What happens when the cities are overpopulated?Why is it a problem?

Lets Brainstorm

Write as many ideas as you can in your chart.BODY 1 (EXPLAINING THE PROBLEM)Overpopulation in citiesGreater povertySignificant impact on human healthLarge volumes of uncollected wastedifficult to provide services for all peopleAutomobile exhaust

The loss of habitat and food sources

Air pollution Problems in public transportationCrowded buses, trains, metro

CLASSIFYING IDEAS for describing the PROBLEM - supporting ideas and for justifications (examples, explanations)

(BODY 1)

Overpopulation in cities

Peoples health(1st supporting idea)Air pollution(automobile exhaust, houses, factories)Ex: Lung/respiratory diseases large volumes of uncollected wasteEx: infectious diseases stress, depression

Problems in public services(2nd supporting idea)

Uncollected waste crowded buses, metroheavy traffic

Environmental problems(3rd sup.idea-optional) the loss of habitat for animalsloss of food sourcesLoss of forests

Alternative topic sentences:

Overpopulation causes lots of problems in big cities. Overpopulation leads to several problems in big cities. Big cities are negatively affected by the overpopulation.

Overpopulation causes lots of problems in big cities (TOPIC SENTENCE) First problem is that it negatively affects peoples health. (1st supporting idea) Air pollution caused by car exhaust, factories and houses makes it very difficult to breath and it also leads to respiratory diseases among people. Moreover, Miller (2013) noted that people suffer from stress and depression in overpopulated cities since they face with lots of problems during their daily lives Secondly, there are lots of problems in public services (John, 2015). Furthermore, buses and trains are always crowded and people lose a lot of time while travelling.

Steps when discussing solutions

Introduce the solution. Use expressions:One way to solve the problem is to Perhaps one solution is to Discuss who can get involved in solving the problem. Use expressions:For this solution to work, different people need to get involved

Despite these problems, there are some solutions to overcome the negative effects of overpopulation.(TOPIC SENTENCE 2) The main solution is that the government should take actions about reducing the air pollution. They can do this by motivating people not to use their cars and by investing on the public transportation systems more (Mark, 2014). Besides, the factories should be punished if their emissions exceed the limits. As suggested by Kerr (2014), another solution is that the government should provide free health care for all the citizens. In this way, people can cope with the stress of living in an overpopulated city. GET BACK TO WORK, ONE MORE PARAGRAPH TO GO!!!!!!!!!

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPHA SUMMARY: Although there are several negative effects of overpopulation in big cities, overcoming these problems is possible.

Call for action: However, governments, local authorities and individuals should take responsibility and minimize these problems for a better future.

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