Group Review Conclusion for me More historical info in the introduction about why there is a problem- Alicia Shorten quotes- William Use of eamples is really !ood and helpful to ma"e ar!s more concrete- Alicia #on$t be afraid for outside sources if you have room- William %i formattin! of the essay- William Group Review Conclusion for Alicia • Use year in tet cite& not pa!e number ' #avid • More real life eamples- William • (oo" to future more in conclusion- William • Use more quotes rather than )ust your own summari*ations& thin" one quote in whole paper- #avid +rief Report on ,eer Review #avid& William& Alicia. • / thin" the ,eer Review was pretty constructive0 1veryone "new what he or she were doin!& had clearly done the readin!s and had read the prompts0 1veryone was able to !enerate specific eamples that mi!ht better fit a p for a body para!raph or a way to cut down on ecess words0 / don$t thin" anyone was particularly quiet or dominant0 A lot of the feedbac" was constructive& not )ust critical which lent to a positive environment- esp when it was a bit aw"ward to start off readin! a draft aloud to other peo A lot of the feedbac" included phrases li"e 2/ really li"ed the way you d but / thin" you could use this eample from Sha"espeare instead34 etc0 et 5nly Alicia and / had papers William had had a personal conflict. so we were able to discuss our entire papers in depth and also the paper as a w the way the para!raphs transition into each other& the way the conclusion introduction interact etc0 Also include pa!e number with the year for te
Group Review Conclusion for me More historical info in the
introduction about why there is a problem- Alicia Shorten quotes-
William Use of examples is really good and helpful to make args
more concrete- Alicia Dont be afraid for outside sources if you
have room- William Fix formatting of the essay- WilliamGroup Review
Conclusion for Alicia Use year in text cite, not page number David
More real life examples- William Look to future more in conclusion-
William Use more quotes rather than just your own summarizations,
think one quote in whole paper- DavidBrief Report on Peer Review
(David, William, Alicia) I think the Peer Review was pretty
constructive. Everyone knew what he or she were doing, had clearly
done the readings and had read the prompts. Everyone was able to
generate specific examples that might better fit a paper for a body
paragraph or a way to cut down on excess words. I dont think anyone
was particularly quiet or dominant. A lot of the feedback was
constructive, not just critical which lent to a positive
environment- especially when it was a bit awkward to start off
reading a draft aloud to other people. A lot of the feedback
included phrases like I really liked the way you did this, but I
think you could use this example from Shakespeare instead etc. etc.
Only Alicia and I had papers (William had had a personal conflict)
so we were able to discuss our entire papers in depth and also the
paper as a whole- the way the paragraphs transition into each
other, the way the conclusion and introduction interact etc. Also
include page number with the year for text cite
