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PIIM IS A RESEARCH AND DEVELOPMENT
FACILITY AT THE NEW SCHOOL
© 2011 PARSONS JOURNAL FOR
INFORMATION MAPPING AND PARSONS
INSTITUTE FOR INFORMATION MAPPING
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New York, NY 10011
THE PARSONS INSTITUTE
FOR INFORMATION MAPPING
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Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer's lease hath all too short a date;
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed;And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimmed:But thy eternal summer shall not fade,Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st,
Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st, So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
KEYWORDS Couplets, Elizabethan literature, Helen
Vendler, keywords, quatrains, relational diagramming,
relational mapping, Shakespeare, signified and signifier,
sonnets, -, word mapping, word networks
PROJECT DATE
ABSTRACT Tat rich and emotional inward eeling—
where both desire and prooundity meet—is well ex-
pressed through the outward orm o the sonnet. Son-nets serve as companions in our quest or this type o
prooundness; the best sonnets deliver rich, intellectually
deep qualities reflecting lie’s insights and eelings. Such
prooundness may be gained through both general, and
close reading.1 Te intellectual depth o this experience
is yet more enriched through the incorporative effects o
taking in a sonnet sequence (i the author created such).2
Tough we may seek to grasp this “source” element, pro-
oundness, we realize it is externally intangible; we must
approach such obliqueness through tools and mentors.
Te tools are representational models that can direct us
toward our aim; the mentors assist us with these tools
(directly, or by adding more tools). Our signified thing (in
this case, prooundness) is achieved through signifiers (in
this case letters arranged into words, making the language
o the poem visible, and urther arranged through rules
and structures agreeably organized to constitute the type
o sonnet expected).3 Shakespeare is literally dead, but he
is figuratively alive through the representational strength
o the printed page (or digital means o visual and audio
rendering).
We physically read Shakespeare’s sonnets (symbols in
line) nearly as his contemporaries did in the late sixteenth
and the early seventeenth centuries ( and ).
Such representations are airly direct pathways to thesource. In this paper, we reer to these direct, textual con-
structs as tier-one representational models. Is it possible
to construct representations that yield even greater insight
into the author’s conceit? Yes, perhaps, through two ap-
proaches, the first by building a better tier-one representa-
tion—a representation that more inormatively points to
the source with less noise ( and ).
Comparing Shakespeare’sSonnet Sequence throughRelational Diagram Models
WILLIAM BEVINGTON, PI IM& ERIK FREER
: Sonnet : type setting, printing, and spellingconventions when Shakespeare sonnets were first published.
A tier-one representation.
: Sonnet , another example of a tier-one rep-resentation using current and applied spelling conventions(compare to above).
: Sonnet : a tier-two representation: relies upon atier-one representation as its proxy to “point” back to the thingsignified.
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WILLIAM BEVINGTON, PIIM & ERIK FREER
PARSONS JOURNAL FOR INFORMATION MAPPINGVOLUME III ISSUE 3, FALL 2011[PAGE 2]
In loving thee thou know'st I am forsworn,But thou art twice forsworn to me love swearing:In act thy bed-vow broke, and new faith torn
In vowing new hate after new love bearing.But why of two oaths' breach do I accuse thee,When I break twenty? I am perjured most,
For all my vows are oaths but to misuse thee,And all my honest faith in thee is lost.For I have sworn deep oaths of thy deep kindness,
Oaths of thy love, thy truth, thy constancy,And to enlighten thee, gave eyes to blindness,Or made them swear against the thing they see:
For I have sworn thee fair: more perjured eye, To swear against the truth so foul a lie.
Te second approach is to construct a representation
that is more direct in its path to another representation then
it is to the source; we reer to this as a tier-two representa-
tion ( and ) . Tese representations, designed
to work in conjunction with other representations, may
yield new and valuable intelligence respecting the source.I tier-one representations are the bricks, tier-two repre-
sentations may allow us to understand the mortar, or view
the building the bricks were arranged to compose. Relying
most heavily on the research o the gifed critic and close
reader o Shakespeare’s sonnets, Helen Vendler, this paper
provides a built-out example o what is meant by, and
what may be gained through, the reorienting strengths o
tier-two representations.
INTRODUCTION Let us (or just a brave, brie moment) set
aside all conflicting thought and imagine a pure, intan-
gible, source-thing—something that must rely on exter-nal representation to be known. We have, or example,
measure and math to “see” observable and non-observable
physics as natural law. We know that this natural law
“permits” through restriction, “that which is.” As sentient
beings we act and react within this physical milieu; or us,
as part o this natural order, our sources include percep-
tions o what we are, what we encounter, and what this
composition yields. We can also imagine beyond our own
restriction, which may or may not lead us to deeper rev-
elation o yet-to-be-known source things.
Consider a phenomena, philosophy, or conceptual
contrivance to be worthy o being communicated to
another: through what representation is this sentience best
conveyed? Conversely, what kind o representation should
be utilized to generate the patterns that afford insight
rom the type o inormation we have at hand or desire to
know? Trough these representations we lead, or are lead
to both know and to “eel knowingness.” Felt knowingness
results in emotive response: contentment or rustration,
love or pride, ear or certainty, hope or despair, optimism
or pessimism, acceptance or rejection, desire to preserve
or desire to destroy, confidence or trepidation, glibness
or prooundness. Representations (though they point to
a source tangible thing), ultimately, point more deeply
to the non-tangible. Te most effective communicationsreach through to this depth—these intangible levers o hu-
man conscious and subconscious.
Inormation models, when directed at sentient recipi-
ents, those whom may possess prior knowledge (plus their
collected user profile) advance or retard these emotive
characteristics in combination to the “raw” intelligence
conveyed. An irony o overtly expression-centric com-
: Sonnet , A tier-one representation compared to figure a similar visual experience.
: Sonnet , a contemporary setting. Also visuallysimilar to figure . (However, with a significantly sentiment).
A tier-one representation.
: Sonnet , a tier-two representation, noticedsignificant visual difference of figure : the concept and literaldifiference of the sonnets becomes readly visualized.
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INSTITUTE FOR INFORMATION MAPPING
municative models is that they, though intended to push
the emotive levers more directly, are ofentimes ephemeral
in their effectiveness. Alternately, inormation-centric
communications building upon prior knowledge (with an
aim to advance the intelligence pool o the recipient as op-
posed to directly thrusting upon the emotive), may serveto build a more ormidable emotive worldview. Tis is
why appeals to or through glibness are best conveyed with
relentless repetition, whilst things proound may strongly
alter views via singular exposure.
Having argued that every “deepest” source point is
intangible, it may benefit to back-pedal or a moment. For
these intangibles may have very “close,” very real, tangible
representational models. Te idea o a perect rabbit, or
example, is airly well represented by an actual, healthy
rabbit, (particularly at the county air where such things
are judged and declared to be so, or in the wild where
awareness and speed results in survival). However, theideal o this perect rabbit may be less well represented by
a photograph, or less still than a written description.
For our model, the source is the point at the center o
the thing, moving beyond the real because there are too
many “reals” and they cannot all be the source. From this
source-point tangible representational markers stretch out
in every direction rom that which they represent. Myriad
representational markers, as stars, in a galaxy o distances
and noise—surround that single ideal point which is noise-
less and “undistant” unto itsel—this is our über-model.
So now we’ve touched upon the source (the signified
intangible point); their proxies—representational mark-
ers or points (the signiying tangibles); the distance these
points are rom the source point; and the noise which
effectively tells us how successul one representational
model (in context o its use or occurrence) is at represent-
ing the source. Distance can be understood by how the
points may either be more, or less, accurately traceable in
their representational value (the actual rabbit), or more
or less cognitively tractable (the schema o the rabbit).
In the first instance the representation is ostensibly reflec-
tive o what the source thing looks like (we’ll call these less
distant ). In the second instance, the representation does
not appear at all like the thing it represents (more distant ).
Te ormer type (accurately traceable models), are morereadily comprehended by a greater audience with less
prior knowledge—the second type (cognitively tractable
models) are intended or a set o users with a much higher
degree o prior knowledge.
One would assume that increased distance would
be commensurately noise-prone, but this is not the case.
Every point in the sphere is susceptible to noise. Te best
deense against noise is the quality o the representational
patterns. Strong patterns resist intrusiveness; they displace
the potential or undesirable sub-patterns and chaos to en-
ter. Noise indicates how ineffective the representation is in
the transerence o the “sourceness” o the thing. Noise en-
ters due to lack o quality, pollution rom other representa-tions pointing to other sources, lack o prior knowledge,
etcetera. Excessive noise can “overcome” a representation
to the level that the representation no longer yields ac-
curate or cognitive value; that star has lost its hold on the
universe and is adrif. Some models are very distant, yet
virtually without noise (a swastika representing ascism),
while some models are very near but ull o noise (a very
poor quality photograph o anything, unless it represents a
poor quality photograph).
Tereore, some representations will be ar weaker
though they are less distant rom the source, and vice
versa. It is assumed that increased amiliarity (such ascommon usage and thorough knowledge o the interpre-
tative language) will yield a better understanding o the
source thing, however, this is not always the case. Gilman
Louie stated that, “A tool that presents me with new ways
o looking at new data is not nearly as useul as a tool
that presents me with new ways o looking at data I have
to deal with every day.”4 Even a radically different way to
look at inormation with which we are very amiliar (a
distant view) may yield surprising insight into what we
had thought we had known beore. It is the surprise o
the “anti-match,”5 the joy o discovering the unamiliar
through new representational tools applied to what we
thought we have known.
So here is our galaxy: a central source point and all the
points that serve as it representational models, all spaced
at myriad distances rom the center and each other. Tese
representations are undesirably accompanied with their
respective noise, in a ellipsoidal construct, at whose edge
communicative capability ails. In this galaxy there are
only two types o star classes; tier-one, those that point
as best they can to the source, and tier-two—those that
convey the source things through the reliance on tier-one
representations. Why develope the tier-two types? Tis shall
be addressed through our chosen invisible source (pro-
oundness), through a more tangible source (Shakespeare’spoetic conceits); through the tier-one representations
(printed text o a particular Shakespeare sonnet), through
the tier-two representational (relational models o word
types and patterns).
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TIER-ONE REPRESENTATIONS & THE SONNET FORM
Te patterns o poetic construction provide maniold op-
portunities or investigating its composed language under
aspects such as meanings, literacy, and musicality. Tis
can be done inormally, or through ormal keys, as Harold
Bloom provides in his opening sections o Te Best Poemsof the English Language. Bloom distills his exhaustive
capability into a brie guide or deciphering the figura-
tive language o a poem according to a concise taxonomy
o types (irony, synecdoche, metonymy and metaphor).6
Tese figurative devices, in turn, may trigger the reader’s
discovery o some pattern (intended by the author, or
possibly not) through visual- or audio-representational
patterns constructed o symbols. Tese symbols have no
inherent meaning, yet when arranged into decipherable
patterns what ormidable messages they may convey!
I present, such patterns become “activated” through
prior knowledge (ormal and experiential) that a viewerbrings to the representation o the poem. Te source
poem, being as it were a conceit within (or our examples)
the mind o Shakespeare, is no more. Yet, reading it now,
even though we are “as an unperected actor on the stage”
makes one become, in some little corner o their nervous
system, like Shakespeare.
All representations all under Pictorial, Quantitative,
Relational or Symbolic structures, or some assemblage o
these. Each o these our visualization types can be urther
divided into “high-constraint” and “low-constraint” ver-
sions, yielding eight total structures or patterns.7 Gener-
ally, one underlying structure grows in popularity and
utility as a desirable representational type until it becomes
something o the communicative standard or the media
and message in question. Obviously, visualized literature
depends upon symbols in context to yield inormativeness
and accompanying levels o expressiveness.
In brie, a pictorial high-constraint representation may
be a high-resolution image, while a low constraint picto-
rial representation would be a sketch; a high-constraint
quantitative might be a Cartesian matrix, a low con-
straint, a quantigraph (a device representing a quantity);
a high-constraint relational would be a table, spreadsheet,
or arrangement o cells, while a low-constraint would
simply be nodes connected in a social network diagramwith links. Symbols also ollow the high/low logic: with
high-constraint being elements such as phonograms (our
letterorm devices, specifically graphemes that stand in or
phonemes), as opposed to low-constraint devices such as
logos and ormal symbols—such as a skull and crossbones.
It is worth noting that some elements o our text (question
marks, exclamation marks) are low-constraint symbols
that carry their own independent meanings. Our ocus is
on high-constraint symbols, those used primarily or nar-
ration and supported through a very simple pattern: a line.
Poetry and prose are the art o the line. Tis line is
then broken, or aesthetic reasons, to enhance its poetic
character, or or technical reasons, to fit all the copy uponthe page. Tereore, constrained-symbolic language de-
pends upon a relational matrix or its ultimate display (un-
less it is one very long line o text). I one tightly controls
the length o these lines rom a schematic point o view
the text shifs—by the mere aspect o arrangement—rom
prose to a kind o poetry.
Language merely made visible does add important
intellectual dimensionality. Poems, such as sonnets, can
deliver new subtleties and complexities through the visible
medium. Te rhyme aspect is also a turning point o the
line, but this is not always necessary or even desirable as
Tomas Campion and many others argued.
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Some poets(E.E. Cummings) greatly exploit the visual; concrete po-
etry requires it.
Shakespeare’s conceit, which he ormed as a sonnet,
is what Shakespeare’s publisher wished to have signified
via the medium o letters, these in turn could be rendered
through the technology o printing via inked and movable
types upon paper. Te resulting representation was merely
a simple string o symbols; the string being broken into
lines. Te breaks become part o poetic physics. Here, the
poetic physics is a sonnet: ten syllables (in most cases)
permitted per line, these lines grouped into three sets
o our each (, , ) and a couplet () o two lines
(providing the typically ourteen line example). In this
respect the symbol/linear pattern o the poem is contained
within a simple high-constraint relational structure: a
grid o cells with ten columns and ourteen rows. Tis is a
Shakespearean sonnet rom a pure, cold, schematic view.
Te representation is a tier-one type: it is as direct
as possibilities and convention permit to the conceit o
Shakespeare’s intent. Not to distant and not too noisy.
However, (at least) three things do provide unwelcome
noise in the effectiveness o this sonnet transer: one is
intentional obuscation on the author’s part, another is
the inadequacy o the reader to decipher the poem (the
singular lack o linguistic or interpretative skills, etc.), thelast being the collective “cultural drif” rom the time o
publishing until today. It is however, the best we have in
raw orm, a good tier-one representation.
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TIER-TWO REPRESENTATIONS & SONNET SEQUENCES
ier-two representations may be defined by a number o
characteristics. First, they should be understood as more
distant rom the source that they represent. Factors o
accurate traceablity take a back seat to cognitive tracta-
blity. ier-two representations will only appeal to userswith significant prior-knowledge, or who are trained to
specifically understand this new representation. A tier-two
representation reveals the nature o its signified thing with
orms that are barely, or nothing like the source. A map o
the stars is tier-one, a table o their names, brightness, and
distance is decidedly tier-two.
For this reason tier-two representational devices
depend upon tier-one representations as the “final mile” to
the source, just as an airplane gets one to the outskirts o
the city with speed (but not accuracy) and a taxi takes one
through mid-town with accuracy (but not speed). Famil-
iarization, however, may overcome this, and the somelevel, begin the process o turning tier-two representation
into tier-one representation.
A third, most critical actor is that tier-one and tier-
two representations never share the same basemap (i.e. pic-
torial, quantitative, relational, or symbolic primary organi-
zational pattern). So i a tier one representation is pictorial,
tier-two representations are either quantitative, relational,
or symbolic at their heart. In the examples given in this
paper, we are building high-constraint relational basemaps
that support low-constraint symbols. ext is a composition
o high-constraint symbols.
Te last actor respecting tier-one representations is
particularly revealing, it requires us to return to the galaxy
o stars metaphor. ier-one representations may address
singular ideas, or comparative ideas within a collective,
however, tier-two representations point out o their galaxy
altogether, across a universe o galaxies, they are intrinsi-
cally comparative in their nature.
A tier-two representation emerges as a tool to compare
tier-one devices to each other. In the ullset o devices
shown Shakespeare’s collective, his universe o sonnets,
can suddenly be seen holistically. Just as a sonnet sequence
evokes a theme and a story across the set o poems, so
does (in a ar more objective, i emotionally-drained way)
the meta-visualization o tier-two collections. Each maybe read independently, but in total they orm a ascinating
universe that speaks to the ebb and flow o passions and
observations long ago ormulated in the genius o Shake-
speare. It is worth noting, in passing, that sonnet sequenc-
es were popular in the Renaissance, ollowing exemplars
laid down by the prototype sonnet-maker, Petrarch. Te
topic is generally unulfilled desire—lie’s model lesson.
In most sequences the love object is not consummated. A
grand exception is Shakespeare’s sequence. Shakespeare
maintains a wonderul tension by not revealing the names
o rivals and objects o his desire (ofen one in the same)—
this is a powerul tool as it allows the reader to substitute
himsel/hersel, riends, or enemies into the quagmire.Many sequences create characters out-o-touch with terra
firma: this antasy allows some o the concepts to become
readily metaphysical.
Let us return to our tier-two models and add another
aspect that ofen serves as the entire rational or the cre-
ation o such representations: new data. When a new field
o data becomes available an opportunity arises to provide
additional clarity or insight toward the source thing. In
many cases this permits the build-out o tier-one represen-
tations to a higher order. New data fields provide opportu-
nities or new insights—the goal o finding the unknown
rom the inormation one already thought they knew. Forour model such a set o data was envisioned, researched,
and extracted by Helen Vendler in her book Te Art of
Shakespeare’s Sonnets.9 Ms. Vendler, through nine years o
poetic analysis ocused on Shakespeare’s sonnets created
an ostensibly objective dataset. Tese she called, Keywords,
Defective Keywords, and Couplet ies. We supported these
layers with another series, Personal Pronoun Sets. It is
primarily based on these inormational types that the tier-
two representations displayed here are developed.
NOTES ON HELEN VENDLER’S KEYWORD MODEL
Developing relationships in a set o data, one that inher-
ently dislikes being quantified, poses a problem. A schol-
arly commentary aids in the process. Helen Vendler’s de-
tailed inspections o each o Shakespeare’s sonnets in
her book Te Art of Shakespeare’s Sonnets allows or more
comprehensive understanding. Vendler suggests that “the
density o Shakespeare’s sonnet-structure is ofen best un-
tangled through giving a separate diagram”.10 Untangling
through symbolic distance is precisely the goal o this
exercise, on a grander scale. In her commentary, Vendler
creates diagrams o sonnet’s “ideational” aspects. In the
constructs below, important topological ideas serve as a
basemap. Working with the sonnet basemap, a sequence
o superfice layers within which Vendler’s observationso undamental linguistic keys are graphically highlighted
come into play, rendering each dense poem new represen-
tational orms. All o Vendler’s word classifications help us
penetrate Shakespeare sonnets. Te couplet tie is “a word
[and it’s variants] appearing in the body o the sonnet,
which is repeated in the couplet, […] and almost always
thematically significant”.11 Te keyword, is ”a complex
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orm o repetition, [… it] connect[s the] our units o the
sonnet—three quatrains and a couplet—repeating in each
o these units. Te implementation o root words, labeled
as key words by Vendler, is extremely difficult, especially
in the couplet, where “closure is necessary.”12 Tus, she
deems these words or word variants the most influen-tial component to a sonnet’s meaning. (Tese keyword
constructs, in our devices, are visually amplified by an
additional graphic element o a white highlighting ring).
Finally, the “ghosts” or omissions o key words maniest
themselves in Vendler’s logic as deective keywords; de-
fined as the “absence o an expected word. [Vendler says]
”we are meant to notice the thematically relevant word
‘suppressed’ in the quatrain or couplet where we have sup-
posed it would appear.”13 Labeling each sonnet in which
key words and deective key words appear enables the user
to connect sonnets thematically. Similar sonnets begin to,
not only linguistically unite beyond their place in numeri-cal sequence and color cycle, but also in terms o graphical
patterning. In Vendler’s analysis o Shakespeare’s sonnets,
she states: “I aim to disclose some o the sonnet’s signifi-
cant eatures—imaginative, structural, semantic, syntactic,
phonemic, graphic—and to point out their cooperation in
a mimetic aesthetic result. Tat is, I assume that the ea-
tures o these poems are designed to cooperate with, rein-
orce, meaningully contradict, and play with one another.”
Overall, these poems work toward an assumed “aesthetic
novelty with respect to lyric tradition” creating something
new.14 Exploiting Vendler’s inventory o keywords, deec-
tive keywords, and couplet ties, and conjunction with
other inormational set allowed or the construction into
tier-two devices. Tese, in turn, allow or new perceptions
in the well trodden path o Shakespearean interpretation.
EARLY DEVELOPMENTS OF TIER-TWO DE VICE
Te initial intent or this project was to establish a means
to make Shakespeare’s sonnets visually quantifiable. Look-
ing beyond the basic structure o text, the goal was to
move into in a diagramatic model. Early iterations were
simply word counts o nouns, adjectives, and verbs. Treecurves, differing in circumerence, color, and length were
used to distinguish the word type. In the center o early
models colored circles reerenced five possible thematic
cycles present within each sonnet. Tese were distinctions
o love within Greek philosophy. Te fifh theme was the
theme o death. Te classifications o love used were: agape
(purple), philial (blue), erotic (pink) and storge (rust).
Other variations represented the top ten words used
in each sonnet. Te problem was that the distinction
lef much o the Shakespearean richness and word play
untapped and unprocessed. How could the value o words
be scored? What words could be used to encapsulate thethematic material o each poem? One o many o these
early models is shown in .
Finding a more objective word identification model
rom Helen Vendler’s Te Art of Shakespeare’s Sonnets,
opened up a pathway. Using her systemic counting o
keywords, etc., in combination with the relational skel-
eton developed in ormer models, along with the personal
pronoun count began to reveal a pulse to the diagrammic
devices. Tis nearly completed the model. Afer many
additional tweaks and some ramework revisions, particu-
lary with color and minor shaping the model was slowly
advanced to a device similar to the final ones shown here
( ).
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28
33
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eye | hearteye | heart | part | right
: Early attempts for the tier-two devices using clas-
sical divisions of for the greek word love and verb, noun, and
adjective counts.
: A nearly finalized model of the tier-two devices
showing the placement of elements in a fourteen- segmented
structure. elements.
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BUILDING THE FINAL KEY
Te final representational device is composed to convey
and interrelate, via patterns, eight eatures. (Te specifies
o these eature will be discussed presenty.) Te devices
serve especially well as a means to cross-reerence the
entire sonnet series as a pooled collective. It becomesquickly apparent that some poems seem “calmer” in their
constructs even though these might be conveying very
complex ideas. Te visually complex examples speak to
another kind o energy, namely, a very active philosophi-
cal, intellectual, or metaphysical subplot to the poem.
Othertimes, the devices seem to reveal natural symmetries
or intellectual dichotomies.
THE BASEMAP COMPONENTS
Each sonnet is represented within a circular area. Te
circle is divided into sections or each o the components
o the sonnet. In all but one case (sonnet ) theseinclude quatrains o our lines each, and a couplet o two
lines. Tereore the basemap is dived into our pies, three
o which occupy approximately degrees o a circle and
one that occupies approximately . degrees. (sonnet
is composed o six couplets, twelve degree sec-
tions). Tese are indicated by white breaks, lines, in a
gray field ( ).
Part o the joy in reading a sonnet is to uncover its
“turn,” a shif in the division, or “argument,” o the poem.
In many instances this might occur in the couplet. Some-
times there is more than one turn, the author leading the
reader to new insight, or rom one viewpoint to another.
Te turn o the poem in the early stages seemed to have
effect upon how keywords, deective keywords, or couplet
ties were dispersed in the sonnet, but this was a very sof
observation. It made sense as a cross comparative element
to take note o these principle turns. Most o the turns are
quite apparent, some are not so, all readers (and critics)
may not agree with certain decisions here. Te turns are
represented by a color shif in the base-map rom gray to
putty color ( ).
Te basemap was also marked with a circular, ad-
ditional division i the the presence o a keyword was
evident in the sonnet. Vendler’s analysis and interpreta-
tion identified sonnets with keywords. In most casesthese keywords are identical, shared in all quatrains and
the couplet. Sometimes they are more tenuous, such as
an anagram o time/might in sonnet 100. Regardless, the
devices are true to Vendler’s research and no variations are
taken orm her composite list.15 Te sonnets with key-
words are identified through the use o the circular white
drop-out band ( ).
: Basemap element revealing the quatrain turn.
: A break in the basemap indicate Vendler key-
words.
: Core basemap elements: quatrain I, quatrain II,
quatrain iii, and the couplet.
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SUPERFICE ELEMENTS COMPONENT SETS
Positioned upon the superfice are elements that generate
insight via their contextual assemblage. is an
illustration o the matrix in which these elements may
be placed. Te matrix is divided into (excepting sonnet
) ourteen even segments; every segment is o equallyincreasing dimension, radiating rom the center o the cir-
cular diagram. Every segment represents one line rom the
sonnet. Te first division is at the twelve o’clock position.
Te first our segments, running clockwise, represent the
first quatrain. Te next our, segments five through eight,
represent the next quatrain, the next our, nine through
twelve, represent the third quatrain. Te last two segments,
thirteen and ourteen stand in or the sonnet.
Syllable divisions are not represented within the ma-
trix. Instead wherever a Vendler-identified keyword ele-
ment, deective keyword element, or couplet tie element is
reerenced within the sonnet an indicator o such is shown.Tis is also the case with elements within the personal
pronoun sets. Tereore, the curved bars, as seen in these
tier-two devices are representative o the act that one o
the identified elements is ound on that line o the poem.
Our next concern is the concentric circles themselves.
Tese concentric circles, shown in this grid as divided
bands (two thin bands orm a ring), are used to position
the elements according to their type. Te first ring is used
to position personal pronouns: I, me, my, and mine. Te
next ring positions personal pronouns: you, thou, thy,
thine, thee, and your. Te third ring positions: he, his, him,
she, hers, and her. I more than one such personal pronoun
is used on any one line, the line is split indicating quantity.
Beyond these inner rings is a break separating the
Vendler-elements rom the personal pronoun elements.
Tese rings, numbers our, five, six, and seven are used
to place keywords or broken keywords when they occur
within the identified line. Unlike with the pronoun sets, the
Vendler-elements simply “add up” rom the ourth, i one,
to the fifh, i two, etcetera. Tere is an exception: i the
same keyword (say, the word love) occurs twice (or more)
in the same line then the ring is split to indicate such
multiples. In some cases a plethora o Vendler-elements re-
quire indicators outside the grid, as can be seen with cou-
plet ties that exceed that number or the line in question. shows how a color indicator is used at the
center o the tier-two device to indicate what part o the
sonnet sequence the sonnet in question alls within. Te
scholarly consensus (another example o how repetition o
opinion trends a thing rom the subjective to the objec-
tive) applies three main cycles to Shakespeare’s ull sonnet
sequence. Tese include: Te Fair Youth cycle, the Dark
: Te color key device representing the cycle
within the sonnet sequence
: Indicators: for the personal pronoun elements:
st, nd, rd rings.
: Te relational matrix upon which all the super-
fice elements will be arranged.
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Lady cycle, and the ending pair o sonnets, the Anacreon-
tic Narrative. o add urther distinction to Shakespeare’s
general thrust o concern within the Fair Youth cycle, two
sub-cycles (within Fair Youth) are identified: these are the
Procreation cycle at the very beginning, and that interlop-
er, the Rival Poet in the middle o the Fair Youth cycle.Te color code associated with the sonnet numbers
within the complete sequence are as ollows:
Tese collections are shown in complete sets within
this document.
Figures , , , and illustrate what is discussed
above as reerenced to the grid determining the correct
positioning o the elements. One can clearly decipher how
the rings support the taxonomy o symbol types. In Figure
x black devices are placed within the first three rings to
indicate personal pronouns as they relate to their presence
within the line specified. Again, split elements indicate
multiples o that type o personal pronoun (first, in the first
line, second, in the second line, and third, in the third line).
Figure x shows the presence o Keywords as identified
by Vendler. Note two things, first, they are in black, and
second, they are only present i the white indicator line is
also present. Next. Figure x shows the presence o Deec-
tive Keywords (so named and identified by Vendler and
indicate that the word does not occur in all the quatrains
plus the couplet as Keywords do.); these are always shown
in gray. In general the textual importance determines howthese are arranged when multiples occur within the same
line. Again, split elements indicate the same keyword (or
deective keyword) occurring on the exact same line.
Pale yellow: Procreation cycle within Fair Youth:01 through 17
Pale blue: Fair Youth resumed:18 through 77
Medium Tan: Rival Poet intervening Fair Youth:78 through 86
Pale blue: Fair Youth resumed:
87 through 126 Pale Mauve: e Dark Lady Cycle:
127 through 152
Bright Brick: e Anacreontic Narrative:153 & 154
: Te ring used to reference Defective Keyword
indicators as defined by Vendler.
: Te ring used to reference Couplet-ie indicators
as defined by Vendler.
: Te ring used to reference Keyword indicators as
defined by Vendler.
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OBSERVATIONS CONCERN ING THE DEVICES
I only one sonnet is mapped a general deduction is di-
ficult to make. However, as a series much may be ascer-
tained. Te complete set o representations or each o
the sonnets is provided in this paper. (See pages
through ) Tis set is urther enhanced through a count-
ing and graphing o the element-counts within each cycle.
Tis provides an interesting “pulse” to the word-
interplay, or lack thereo; as words proceed across sonnets,
and sonnets proceed across their sequence. It is easy to see
that some cycles, or parts o the cycle, have more o this
intensity than others have. We leave it to persons ar more
versed in Shakespeare’s sonnets (or things Shakespearean)
to find what they may. In order to initiate this process the
next six pages provide minimal commentary, supported
with some excerpts rom specific authors or anthologicalsources dealing with Shakespeare’s sonnets. Tese pages
have several examples culled rom the complete collection
(though taken rom the same cycle, or part o the cycle).
Having baked this shepherd’s pie there comes the desire to
taste, and share a bite or two—the real objective however,
is to take the wares to market; where those more deserving
may reflect upon their potential and eke, yet another tiny
morsel out o the banquet which is Shakespeare.
K e y w o r d & b r o k e n k e y w o r d i n d i c a t o r s
P e r s o n a l p r o n o u n s e t s
Color indication forsonnet “turn”
Line indicator ofKeyword-set presence
Color indicator representing sonnet cycle within fullsequence
Line break indicatorbetween quatrains orcouplet
Dot indicator for couplet-tie
Te last in this series, Figure x, shows the couplet ties.
Tese are indicated as dots within the relevant lines (and
quatrains) and as they are associated with the couplets.
In summation these are the eight levels o these tier-two
high-constraint relational devices as they apply to Shake-
speare’s sonnets:
the nomenclature as it applies to sonnet (within the Dark Lady cycle). Note the Vendler-identified Keywords,
shown in boldface, and the Defective Keywords, shown in lightface.
Basemap: Quatrain and Couplet divisions: by shape
Basemap: Color indication of sonnet turn: by color
Basemap: Circular line indicator of Keyword presence: by “break”
Superfice:
Superfice:
Superfice:
Superfice:
Superfice:
Cycle type indicator: by color
Personal Pronoun Set indicators:by elements
Keyword indicators: by elements
Defective Keyword indicators: by elementsand value
Couplet Tie indicators: by dot elements
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COMPARISONS WITHIN THE PROCREATION CYCLE
It is probably too dangerous to suppose that the collection
o visual (tier-two) devices that present us with the high-
level view o Shakespeare’s sonnet sequence reflect, by
their composition, the big themes that underlie the work.
And yet, there is something. In each particular cycle thereis, o course, an energy o a type ‹ this is why a consensus
exists that provides the cycle divisions in the first place.
For comparison, sonnet , , and are shown as de-
vices here. Tese reflect a “simple” device (in appearance),
a “complex” device and a device o compelling pattern.
Te basic theme, or what we will call “first observations” is
that there does exist something o a quality o voice within
the sonnet that their mappings point toward, or reflect.
In sonnet , the simplest in the cycle (see page
or how the cycle graphs out via “volume” o elements),
Vendler opens her comments with, “Tis beautiul sonnet
is the first to exploit the powerul seasonal metaphor.”
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Tis directly speaks to the idea that the more quite map-
pings are ofen metaphorical and narrative.
In sonnet , that with pattern, Shakespeare plays with
the word look. Te pattern is evidenced by the concept
o the sun, looking down on man, but ultimately setting,
compared to having a son, so that lie does not set.
Sonnet scores high or its complexity, Vendler
notes that this sonnet employs Shakespeare’s “grand mac-
rocosmic scale, one that is more suited to philosophical
poetry than to the love-sonnet.”17 Tis backs, to a degree,
an observation seen in other cycles as well, that devices
with a very high number o elements trace into philo-
sophical/metaphysical boundaries. Another high volume
example, the last in the cycle, number also plays the
game o the philosophical. (Again, see page or the
graphing.) Tis poem leads with poise and delicacy to the
couplet, which directly inorms his beloved that she can
“live twice” through her offspring. He thus, most fittingly
climaxes the procreation cycle.
5
15you
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COMPARISONS CONTINUING IN
THE FAIR YOUTH CYCLE (PART I)
Sonnets , , and build in element volume. Te
graph on page shows a pretty wild fluctuation o
intensity, but our concern is or this little series o sonnets.
Tese three “betrayal sonnets” deals with a cycle conciselycaptured in Te Arden Shakespeare, beginning with the
reerence to , the text inorms, “Te speaker loves the
young man so much that however much advantage the
youth takes o his affection he can do him no wrong; or
any wrong he does will be orgiven. Sonnets and en-
large the narrative implications: the youth has betrayed his
riend by taking one o the poet’s loves, i.e. Love-objects.”18
Tis is true tragedy, yet as Bernhard en Brinks asserted in
one o his amous lectures (translated by Julia Franklin),
“We see, then, how it is the greatest masterpieces
of the comic Muse that transgress the limits of thecomics the spectator does not become too vividly
conscious of the painful and hurtful side of the
ridiculous material presented to him. It seems clear
to us that the question whether a certain failing or
certain evil appears ludicrous, depends not only
upon the kind and degree of evil and the extent of its
influence, but very essentially upon the standpoint of
those who happen to be the spectators at the time.” 19
ed Brink is reerencing Shakespeare’s Comedies here,
but the point is parallel: note the closeness o the viewer
through the sequence. As the volume o the keyword ele-
ments and intensities ratchet up the viewer, that is, you,
the reader are brought urther away rom the direct imag-
ined observation into a philosophical observation. Te
game, supported through the increased volume o word
interplay, and away rom “quieter” narrative, shifs us
rom empathetic spectators to intellectual spectators. Te
devices reflect this shif in their intensity o elements.
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COMPARISONS WITHIN THE RIVAL POET CYCLE
Te rival poet group alls within the late middle o the air
youth collection. Tere are nine in the cycle, sonnet num-
bers through . Tey are shown as a little collection
on page (in the most beloved orm o the modernist, a
three-by-three construct!)A challenge o showing the tier-two representations
is that, though they are intentionally spatial, they are, as
with tier-one, linear in their unolding. Shakespeare’s son-
nets are a sequence even though scholars may debate the
ideal sequence. Our devices should be laid out in a line as
well, but the dictates o presentation deny this advantage
here. Te graphical lines associated with the ull collection
(pages through ) help to assuage this shortcoming o
noise through association.
Te graph on page presents the pulse o the rival
poets as they are seen through the nine tier-two represen-
tations. As one would, expect when dealing with a lovetriangle, there is denseness in the center rings that deal
with the personal pronoun sets, particularly so or number
, which has !
Despite some o the relatively high volumes seen in the
rival poet cycle, there is not the very high numbers else-
where, as in the dark lady cycle. Trough a comparison
o all the devices this becomes evidenced because there
is more o a dichotomous nature, which increases the
number o keyword elements, but not the philosophical/
metaphysical twistings which elevate the numbers to the
highest levels in the ull sequence.
Vendler notes (while discussing sonnet ), “Shake-
speare excels in a orm o verbal emphasis pointing up the
conceptual oppositions o his verse. His mind operates
consistently on the basis o antithesis.”20 Sonnet , the
one selected here has the ewest keyword elements in the
cycle. As seems to be the case with other devices with
ewer element the author is trying to get across a concept
(that the rival poet is messing with his muse!), the argu-
ment is complex, the words must be chosen to advance
such a argument. Te other selected here is , it is ornate,
rich, and repetitive in an anti-repetitive manner; it is
complex and the argument is neither linear nor emotional
as much as intellectual.
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COMPARISONS CONTINUING IN
THE FAIR YOUTH CYCLE (PART II)
In this culling we again look at our three “types”: a simple
device, a device exhibiting pattern, and a complex model
(also including a pretty strong pattern). As with a good
number o the simpler sort, number deploys a meta-phorical reerence to nature and the narrative.
Te pattern evidenced in the tier-two example, number
, but not so evidenced when looking at the text is the
interplay o the first and second person (except or the two
couplet ties it is the personal pronoun set that illuminates
this device).
Te third, complex example, number is made rich
with Vendler’s identified Keyword say/sacred because it
is about things the author said respecting his proession
o love to the beloved. Again, though, the overt volume
o key elements speaks to something o what Bloom calls,
“the resonance o the opposite.”
21
Indeed, it is the tensiono these opposites, seemingly indicated by our most com-
plex renderings that pre-reveals their enigmatic poise.
exhibits both complexity and broken symmetry.
Tis is well elt in the poem, where there is a tension be-
tween what the author said previously, then true, to what
is being said now, now true ‹ thus making past statements
alse. But, as Vendler points out, there needs to be a sort
o love word that rises above the earlier and now current
proessions o love, the word is “grow.” (Vendler provides
several lines concerning how love best, or burn, or dearer
apply, but reerences the power o using grow/growth in
the couplet).22 Te Folger Shakespeare Library sums it this
way, “Te poet acknowledges that the very act that his
love has grown makes his earlier poems about ullness and
constancy o his love into lies.”23 It appears that the author
has gotten over the rival poet interlude. Tis would make
sense, his orgiveness deepens the passion, but this will be
tested in the next cycle.
Pages and present the graphing o the volumes
present in the devices, note the pulse revealed by the
tier-two representations that cannot be seen through the
textual, tier-one representations. It is not difficult to ollow
the building o energy, and then, a all-off beore the Dark
Lady cycle about to unold.
t
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COMPARISONS WITHIN THE DARK LADY CYCLE
Te dark lady cycle exhibits a ecundity o passion exactly
what one would expect with such a conflicted author, an
author who has invested so much in asserting the perec-
tion o his beloved. o “witness” her promiscuity requires
a depth o philosophical and metaphysical twists in orderto jive with the earlier arguments. In the rival poet cycle,
Shakespeare dealt with the anguish o loss through the
acts o another. Now he grapples with a yet more keenly-
elt loss, his loss o aith in his beloved, and himsel. Tat
is what is signified here. Te solution, generally, is to turn
the judgments back upon himsel.
What we’ve reerred to as volumes volley in gyrating
crescendos through this cycle. One o the most intense
in the entire sonnet series, number , presents ag-
gressive escapism and blame on inability to see things as
they clearly are. Te opening o the sonnet is the warn-
ing, “O me!” No ewer letters could prepare us so well.As one might expect, the Keywords, including eye and
love, supported by Deective Key Words o true/alse and
sight, drive the circulating constructs. Te agent seems to
be tears: tears that obuscate clear sight, tears the author
sheds, and, perhaps, tears o the beloved which urther
blind the poet.24
Te graph on pages and , in their sheer intensity
o rise and alls bear out the wild pulse evidenced by the
combined key, deective key, personal pronoun series, and
couplet ties volumes. Compare these graphs to all the
other cycles.
From the near-silence o sonnet , to the explosion
which proceeds through the above mentioned , to the
crescendo with (our graph breaks its boundaries or
sonnet ), we view a kind o math-induced madness.
Sonnet is silent, though, only in its lack o ele-
ments as a visceral, metaphorical message-machine it
speaks volumes to the warnings o every moralizer, “Oh
how you will regret the actions o your passions in the
morning!” It is the morning-afer lament, every word
crafed to the message, a message that builds through lin-
ear examples toward collective depth o the argument. Te
sonnet does not need keywords, et al, it’s argument is too
human and grounded, no sel-delusions.
Rocketing up to , we can see the volume thatVendler expresses, “With this enormously comprehensive
poem, the sequence o the dark mistress is brought to an
end.”25 So, though is intense in its volume, raises
the bar, the argument is simple, “you are a liar, I am that
twenty times more so.” o set this correctly, to argue it
within the context o Shakespearean shoots and ladders,
requires the textual interplay so adroitly and magnificently
carried off here.
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THE ANACREONTICS
Anacreontic reers to the style o poem that reerences the
Greek poet Anacreon. Tis, in turn, reers to a seven-
syllable epigamic, poetic line; the term points also, as here,
to the mythic narrative and subject matter. As Vendler
summarizes, “Te myth represents a contest o chastityagainst passion in which passion wins, its heat transerred
to the water that quenches it.”26 Booth notes, “Te Greek
epigram and those o its descendants… all have vague but
considerable potential or bawdy anatomical reerence.”27
Tese twinned sonnets are outliers to the others in the
sonnet series—perhaps to cool down afer the heat o the
final dark lady verses, or to generalize the idea that passion
cannot be cooled or quenched. Instead, it is merely “trans-
erred” to another place, such as a pool o water, which is a
ready metaphor or sexual reerences as indicated here.
Te two last poems are heavily endowed with deective
keywords, and has a complete keyword set as well. Itis o interest to note that both sonnets are not too dense
with personal pronouns, but very rich with couplet ties.
Te playulness and figurative twists that Shakespeare de-
rives and lays upon the Cupidic myth can be seen visually
dancing within the two diagrams. Shakespears’s final line
o the sonnet sequence, “Love’s fire heats water, water
cools not love.” sums up the conclusive pair o sonnets,
and the myth, succinctly. Tis conclusive line is represen-
tative o the keywords and deective keywords that Vendler
identified: fire, bath, love, and, fire and heat.
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BIOGRAPHY
William M. Bevington currently serves as Associate
Proessor o Inormation Mapping in the School o Art,
Media, and echnology at Parsons Te New School or
Design, Te New School, New York. He ormerly served
as the Executive Director or Parsons Institute o Inorma-tion Mapping, Chairman o the Communication Design
department at Parsons School o Design, and various
proessorial and instructional roles at his Alma Mater , Te
Cooper Union or the Advancement o Science and Art.
He is an inormation designer and inormation theorist
specializing in creating tools or the rapid assessment o
complex data. His first significant project was the Blackout
Procedures Manual or Con Edison in , and the last
was a major Geospatial Media Mash-up ool under U.S.
government contract entitled the Geospace and Media-
ool (). Mr. Bevington has developed toolsets or
transit systems applications, stock trading applications,and health management tools as a principle designer
at Spire Integrated Design, New York. He has lectured
worldwide, illustrated Graphic Designers Production
Handbook, co-authored Working with Graphic Design-
ers and Designing with ype with Jim Craig. He is also
the author o ypography: he Principles, A Basic Guide
to Using ype published by he Cooper Union.
Erik M. Freer is an undergraduate student at Te New
School in the dual degree program pursuing a rom
Parsons the New School or Design in Communica-
tion Design and a rom Eugene Lang College the
New School or the Liberal Arts in Writing. At Parsons
his ocus is on Inormation, Print, and ypography and
at Lang his ocus is on Poetry and Playwriting, with a
minor in Japanese. Erik possesses a deep interest in ideas
o mapping and the visual representation inormation.
Te Comparing Shakespeare’s Sonnet Sequence project
eatured in this paper was developed as part o an assign-
ment in opic: Inormation Design studio course taught
by Proessor Bevington. In addition to the project images,
Erik contributed associated captions and schematic plans,
as well as the sections entitled “Helen Vendler’s Keyword
Model” and “Developing the relational device.” Erik dedi-
cates his spare time to any and everything cultural andcreative he can produce and or experience.
NOTES
1 A close reading is an in-depth analysis o the text,
searching or and reflecting on patterns present within
the text and then asking questions about the significance
o said patterns. Patricia Kai, “How to Do a Close Read-ing, Writing Center at Harvard University, http://www.
as.harvard.edu/~wricntr/documents/CloseReading.html
(accessed July , ).
2 Te typical Elizabethan use o the sonnet was in
a sequence o love poems in the manner o Petrarch.
Although each sonnet was an independent poem, partly
conventional in content and partly sel-revelatory, the
sequence had the added interest o providing something
o a narrative development. Perhaps the greatest o all
sonnet sequences is Shakespeare’s, addressed to a young
man and a “dark lady.” In these sonnets the supposed lovestory is o less interest than the underlying reflections on
time and art, growth and decay, and ame and ortune.
Encyclopædia Britannica Online, “Sonnet,” , http://
www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/554519/sonnet
(accessed July , ).
3 A “signifier” (signifiant): the orm which the sign
takes; and the “signified” (signifié): the concept it repre-
sents. Daniel Chandler,” Semiotics or Beginners,” Aberys-
twyth University, http://www.aber.ac.uk/media/Docu-
ments/S4B/sem02.html (accessed July , ).
4 From a presentation in the early s by Gilman
Louie, ormer was o In-Q-el.
5 Match. Tis term is used in heuristics and usability
studies: “Te system should speak the users’ language,
with words, phrases and concepts amiliar to the user,
rather than system-oriented terms. Follow real-world
conventions, making inormation appear in a natural and
logical order.”Jakob Nielsen, http://www.useit.com/papers/
heuristic/heuristic_list.html (accessed July , ).
6 Harold Bloom, Te Art of Reading Poetry (New York:
Harper Perennial, ), i-iv.
7 William M. Bevington, “ , Part One: A
Visualization-based axonomy or Inormation Represen-
tation; Introduction and Overview” (New Nork: Parsons
Institute or Inormation Mapping, ); William M.
Bevington, “PIIMPaper oI, Part One: A Visualization
based axonomy or Inormation Representation: Intro
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Inormation Mapping, ) http://piim.newschool.edu/_
media/pds/PIIM-PAPER _01-Pt3_Bevington-William.
pd.
8 “Wherein it is demonstratiuely prooued, and by ex-ample confirmed, that the English toongwill receiue eight
seuerall kinds o numbers, proper to it sele, which are all
in this booke set orth, and were neuer beore this time by
any man attempted.” Tomas Campion, Te Art of English
Poesie, http://extra.shu.ac.uk/emls/iemls/resour/mirrors/
rbear/poesie.html (accessed July , ).
9 Helen Hennessy Vendler, Te Art of Shakespeare’s
Sonnets (Cambridge, : Belknap o Harvard University,
).
10
Ibid., xvii. xvii.
11 Ibid., xiv.
12 Ibid., xv.
13 Ibid., xvi.
14 Ibid., xiii.
15 Vendler, Te Art of Shakespeare’s Sonnets, –.
16 Vendler, Te Art of Shakespeare’s Sonnets, .
17 Ibid, .
18 Kathererine Duncan Jones, ed., Te Arden Shake-
speare: Shakespeare’s Sonnets (Te Arden Shakespeare,
), .
19 Bernhard en Brink, Five Lectures on Shakespeare,
trans. Julia Franklin (London: George Bell and Sons,
), .
20 Vendler, Te Art of Shakespeare’s Sonnets, .
21 Harold Bloom, Te Art of Reading Poetry (New
York: Harper Perennial, ), .
22 Vendler, Te Art of Shakespeare’s Sonnets, .
23 Barbara A. Mowat and Paul Werstine, ed. Shake-
speare’s Sonnets and Poems ( Folger Shakespear Library,
Washington Square Press, New York etc., , ), .
24 Stanley Wells, ed. Te Oxford Shakespeare, Te
Complete Sonnets and Poems ( Oxord University Press,New York, , reprinted ), .
25 Vendler, Te Art of Shakespeare’s Sonnets, .
26 Ibid, .
27 Stephen Booth, ed. Shakespeare’s Sonnets ( Yale
University Press, , reprinted ), .
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ILLUSTRATION FOR NOTE 7: GRID PATTERNS (FROM VT-CAD) AND THEIR UTILITY FOR INTERRELATABILITY
distorted maps,illustrations
satellite imagery,
photographs,
symbols scaled one to another
to reflect quantities
bar charts, line graphs
stack graphs
node-and-link diagrams,
networks
spreadsheets, tree maps,
tables
ideographs, pictographs
letters, glyphs, Morse code,
braille, binary code
PICTORIALSemi-constrained
PICTORIAL
Constrained
QUANTITATIVE
Unconstrained
QUANTITATIVE
Constrained
RELATIONAL
Semi-constrained
RELATIONAL
Constrained
SYMBOLIC
Unconstrained
SYMBOLIC
Constrained
:
lines of text are organized within a
relational matrix
symbols representing words or ideas
can provide “high-level” view of mor
specific language
constrained symbols, such as text in
alignment, is used for generating
visible language