Las lneas resaltadas son los errores encontrados y las lneas sin resaltar son las correctas redacciones en el artculo analizado.Laminar and turbulent flow in waterErrores de Nominalizaciones innecesariasThere are many ways to visualize flowThis flow is visualized in many waysEither for laminar or turbulent flows.For laminar or turbulent.They clearly show the difference between turbulent and laminar flowThe difference between turbulent and laminar flow is showedEmpleo de palabras inadecuadas (poco precisas o vagas)FlowLiquidSurface of a beam of waterSurface of a water jetWe found research articles about turbulence measurements,

They examined research articles about turbulence measurements,

Empleo innecesario de jerga o acrnimosAs the diameter of the water beam changes

As the diameter of the water jet changes

Turbulence increases with increasing pressure.

The turbulence increases incrementing the pressure

Usually, to observe laminar flow, ink or air bubbles have been used; turbulent flow is detected by the light scattered by small particles suspended in the fluid.

Usually, to observe laminar flow, ink or air bubbles have been used; turbulent flow is detected by the light dispersed by small particles suspended in the fluid.