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TOUCHED

MAGAZINE

Minimal

Level 110 23

marks

Basic Level 22435 marks

ProfciencyLevel 33647 marks

ExcellenceLevel 44860 marks

framing a shot, including

and ecluding elements

as a!!ro!riate

"ome !hotos,

li#e the co$er

!hoto seem to

%e framed

reasona%l&

'ell( No

irrele$ant

%ac#grounds(using a $ariet& of shot

distances as a!!ro!riate

A lot of

di)erent shots

used( None of

them are

!erfect, %ut a

$ariet& of shot

ideas has

%een sho'n(shooting material

a!!ro!riate to the tas#

set

The shooting

material is

not

a!!ro!riateas the !hotos

loo# li#e the&

should %e in a

home

maga*ine or a

coo#ing

maga*ine, not

a music mag(selecting mise+en+scne

including colour, -gure,

lighting, o%.ects and

setting

The

%ac#ground in

!hotos on the

contents andD/" are not

reall&

musicall&

lin#ed(

0ighting is

fairl& good,

along 'ith the

colour ofclothing and

tet used to

create a colour

theme(mani!ulating !hotogra!hs

as a!!ro!riate to the

contet for !resentation,

including cro!!ing and

resi*ing

/hotos ha$e

%een cro!!ed

'ell, lea$ing

.ust the model

in the !hoto(

/hotos ha$e

%een resi*ed

fairl& 'ell, nostretching(

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accuratel& using language

and register

Not reall&

music

maga*ine

language, the

D/" article is

more lin#ed

to gossi! and

the !ersons

li#e and

disli#es rather

than music(a!!ro!riatel& integrating

illustration and tet

"ome tet on

the co$er has

%een !laced

'ell, some

tet ho'e$er

is all o$er the

!lace and isn6t$er& uniform(sho'ing understanding of

con$entions of la&out and

!age design

Contents is

fairl& 'ell laid

out( 7er&

uniform and

neat( Ho'e$er

num%ers in

the %ottom

%o are

cur$ing round

'hich doesn6t

loo# good(8est of the

mag is laid out

-ne, %asic

understanding

(sho'ing a'areness of the

need for $ariet& in fonts

and tet si*e

Not much

a'areness

sho'n, most

tet is %ig and

then small

sho'ing that

none of thetet is more

im!ortant( All

a %it mess&(using ICT a!!ro!riatel&

for the tas# set

9asic use of

ICT, !hotos

resi*ed 'ell,

cro!!ing is

good( 7ariet&

of fonts used(

O#a&, %ut

nothing

s!ecial(

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!mmary "ommen#$ %verall& an okay ma'a(ine) *+e 'enre is a ,i#

con-!se. as i# looks more like a +ome .esi'n ma'a(ine ra#+er #+an a

m!sic ma'a(ine) ome /+o#os +ave ,een cro//e. an. e.i#e. ell&

+ils# o#+ers are a ,i# s!is+e. or s#re#c+e. like #+e ones on #+e P)

e. +as ,een a consis#en# #+eme +ic+ is 'oo.) o# a ,a. #ry& ,!# some

/ar#s nee. #o ,e a.a/#e.)

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