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BEATS MAGAZINE Minimal Level 110 23 marks

Basic Level 22435 marks

Pr!cienc"Level 33#4$ marks

E%cellenceLevel 44 marks

framing a shot,

including and excluding

elements as appropriate

The shots used are

not famed well. The

model is not in the

centre of many shots

and the shots arenot very

professional. The

DPS photo looks

awful, like someone

has stood on a table

to take it.using a variety of shot

distances as appropriate

A variety of shot

distances have been

used, but none of

them are very good.

They are bad uality

and look like they!ve

been taken with a

phone.shooting material

appropriate to the task

set

The fashion in the

photos is not really

right for a music

mag. " of the photos

have props in that

lead us to music but

not really pop music,

the DPS photo looks

like it should be for a

teachers mag.selecting mise#en#sc$ne

including colour, %gure,

lighting, ob&ects and

setting

'b&ects in the

background are

irrelevant and not

meant to be there.

The background also

shows that the

camera was not

level. The DPS photo

has letters in the

background, leading

again to a school

mag.manipulating

photographs as

appropriate to the

context for presentation,

including cropping and

resi(ing

Photos do not seem

to be cropped to %

the page, they all

have cluttered

backgrounds in, and

no editing seems to

have taken pace.accurately using

language and register

Some text links to

music, very basic

text used. Some

links to gossip, like a

closer maga(ine.appropriately

integrating illustration

and text

Text is all di)erent

colours, no

consistent theme.

*ont is the same o

the cover, minimal

techniue here.

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showing understanding

of conventions of layout

and page design

Text is not lined up

on the cover, some

words are slightly

cut o), like the 3 in

3ustin. Also, some

words are almost

covered by images.

456lassi%ed! pic.7showing awareness of

the need for variety in

fonts and text si(e

Title is bigger than

the rest of text, to

make it stand out.

'ther than that,

knowledge is basic.using -6T appropriately

for the task set

8o real -6T

knowledge has been

shown9 images see

to have &ust been

put on the page. DPS

image looks stretch

out of proportion. 8o

real use of -6T.

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