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MARIA FASHAKIN

LUARA’S PIRES BLOG:

• What I thought went well, was Luara documented each and every draft well. Luara

then added a little description, explaining what it is, this would of made it easier for

the examiner. Luara also started her blog from September, so she has more

presentations and work that is done and completed

• However I don’t think she used enough imagery, just video files the blog does not

seem fluent its mainly videos, schedules timing and small descriptions after another .

MARIA YOUNES BLOG:

• Maria had great use of presentation explaining when it came to the desired topic.

She also had images of proof of her work and filming which is essential. Maria also

managed to include graphs and storyboards and each one of her video drafts were

done well, Maria used a great deal of information to support her coursework.

• Although Maria has not completed all her work which would cause her to loose

marks.

• Further more both blogs have good use of presentations, they just need to have

completed all the work.