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BY NGOC BACH

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The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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CÂU ĐỀ BÀI:

The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007

CÂU VIẾT LẠI:

The maps illustrate the transformation of a town called Harborne between 1936 and 2007.

PARAPHRASE

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Tìm 2 đặc điểm chung của hình ???

TỔNG QUANOverall, the town became more developed with less natural beauty but an extended residential area and more options for shopping and leisure activities

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From 1936 to 2007, the river was filled in in order to make room for the development of a residential area in the north eastern part of the city. The number of trees located in the north west dropped from 3 to 1 tree in the 71 year period.

In the center of the town, there was a new shopping centre while the post office, bank and library remained. The sweet shop and butchers were replaced with a supermarket. Across from the post office, a travel agency was built right on the site of where the flower shop used to be. The cycle path in the south west was rebuilt to become a road. In the south east, the government offices was converted into a museum, the farmland next to that was turned into a golf course.

The maps illustrate the transformation of a town called Harbornebetween 1936 and 2007.Overall, the town became more developed with less natural beautybut an extended residential area and more options for shoppingand leisure activitiesFrom 1936 to 2007, the river was filled in in order to make room forthe development of a residential area in the north eastern part ofthe city. The number of trees located in the north west droppedfrom 3 to 1 tree in the 71 year period.In the center of the town, there was a new shopping centre whilethe post office, bank and library remained. The sweet shop andbutchers were replaced with a supermarket. Across from the postoffice, a travel agency was built right on the site of where theflower shop used to be.The cycle path in the south west was rebuiltto become a road. In the south east, the government office wasconverted into a museum, the farmland next to that was turnedinto a golf course.

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+ Task response: (details)

- The report covered everything needed, clear and well-organised

- The summary paragraph identified two key features of the maps

+ Coherence and cohesion (details)

- sequences information and ideas logically

- manages all aspects of cohesion well

- uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately

+ Lexical resource: (details)

- Some really good use of phrasal verbs : make room for/filled in.

- Some other useful vocabulary:converted into/replaced/ rebuilt

+ Grammar: (details)

- The accurate use of verb tenses, especially the past simple and past simple passive

tenses. These were the correct tenses to use here. The grammar was accurate, and the

range of grammar included several subordinate clauses, expert use of relative clauses.

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