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• 1.Is there anybody or anything so _____to you that you would like to ____it_____?
• 2. I will ___this ____for now, but later in my life I will read it again and think about what happened to me when I was young.
• 3. You hope to ____________ of the person place or thing, ________if it changed your life.
• 4.It is usually _______writing that you want to keep only for yourself.__________, you don’t wish to share what you have written with anyone else.
• 5. Now you may have a better ____________of why Anne thought her diary a good friend to her.
listeningspecial
write downput away
keep your memoriesespecially
filled withIn other words
understanding
Learning Tip
• It is a good habit for you to keep a diary. It can help you remember past happenings. You can express your feelings and thoughts to it. It will help you improve your English if you diary in English. Why not have a try?
Read the passage and decide what each of the following words means in the language of the Hawaiians.
aloha lokahi
kokua ohana
lei
to be with happiness/ goodbye/ our hearts singing together
oneness with all people
help family
a circle of flowers worn around the neck
Read the text again and answer the following questions.
1. What is the first way Hawaiians show their friendship?
2. What is the second way of showing friendship?3. What is their third way of showing friendship?4. Why do many different peoples call Hawaii
their home?5. How do people in Hawaii get on with one
another?6. How can people in Hawaii live in peace?
1. What is the first way Hawaiians show their friendship?
Hawaiians say “aloha” to each other to show friendship.
2. What is the second way of showing friendship?
They welcome people of all races, languages and cultures with “lokahi” which means “oneness with all people” .
3. What is their third way of showing friendship?
They give visitors a “Lei” to make them feel at home.
4. Why do many different peoples call Hawaii their home?
It’s because Hawaii is a place where many cultures live together peacefully and co-operate with each other.
5. How do people in Hawaii get on with one another?
They try to help each other so that all feel stronger.People are told that their actions should be as gentle as the wind blowing from the sea.
6. How can people in Hawaii live in peace?
They solve the problems with understanding and treat all people as if they are part of the same family.
写作弊病• 1. 汉式英语太多 .• Let me give you some advice.• I have seen (read) your letter.• You must (should) join in…• You must say something to let them lau
gh.• Don’t have friends is bad in our life.
Writing
• 3. 用词不当现象太明显• Communicate ( communication )is very
important and important ( necessary ) to people.
• Believe (in ) yourself and you don’t ( won’t) feel lonely.
Writing
• 5. 改作文的标准• 第 5 档 ( 很好 )• ---- 覆盖所有的内容要点• ---- 应用较多的词法结构和词汇• ---- 语法结构和词汇方面有些许错误 ,
但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致 . 具备较强的语言运用能力 .
• ---- 有效地使用了词句间的连接成分 ,使全文结构紧凑 .
Writing
September 12th, 2006 Dear Xiaodong, Thank you for your letter. In my opinion, you should t
ry your best to make friends with your classmates. Firstly, you may open your mind to others. You can t
ry to talk with others about your childhood and share happy things with them. Secondly, you can try your best to make good friends with your classmates. If you make a friend successfully, then you can make more friends. Third, watch a lot of VCD about communication to improve yours. If you take my advice, I’m sure you will have a lot friends.
Best wishes! Yours, Zheng Yadi
Writing
1.They hid there for almost two years and never dared go out.
2.We tried to calm him down, but he kept shouting.
3.Don’t laugh at him. Sometimes you are not able to do as well as he does.
4. In the early 20th century, China went through too many wars.
5. The children haven’t been outdoors( have been indoors) all day. Let them play outdoors for a while.
6. Please use the word to make a sentence according to the situation given.
7. This series of readers is very interesting.
8. The man saved the girl from the river and her mother was very grateful.
9. Mr. Jones lives alone and often feels lonely.
10. We communicate with each other by Internet/through the Internet.