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The line graph gives information about the average number of people using car,

 bus or train as transportation in the UK during a 60-year period.

On the whole, the tendency of travelling by car and train is higher than that oftravelling by bus over the period of 60 years. specially, in term of transportation,

commuters e!press a preference for using car rather than train.

"n the #$%0-&0'0 period, the number of UK daily travelers constantly rise from (

millions to $ millions. )lthough this figure was stagnant in the first decade, it

increased dramatically to % millions. The &000-&0#0 period, which saw the same

trend in the first #0 year, was followed by a rapid acceleration throughout the

remainder of the period.

*rom #$%0 to &000, there was a slow growing tendency for people using train,

which remained stable in the ne!t ten years. )fterwards, this figure suddenly

roc+eted to ( millions, which was the most dramatic change during the whole

 period.

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Over the same period, the average number of people travelling by bus varied much

less significantly than that travelling by car. To be more specific, this number fell

from to ' million commuters.

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