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Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold [email protected]

Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold [email protected]

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Page 1: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

Journalism short courseGrammar and writing

Spring 2011

Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold

[email protected]

Page 2: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

Writing musts

• Style — Check spelling, grammar and AP style for conformity.

• Words — Make sure they agree and go together.

• Concision — Avoid using too many words.

• Punctuation — Learn the rules of punctuation and make your writing clear.

Page 3: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

Why your stylebook is at your side, but style is something you

need to know:

Like a car manual, the stylebook is always available, but there are still some things you should know by heart about your car. For example, you don't need to know how to change your oil, but you at least need to know that your oil needs to be changed every 3,500 miles.

Page 4: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

THE PARTS OF SPEECHä Nouns

Persons, places, things, ideas or qualities

ä PronounsSubstitute for nouns and function as nouns

ä VerbsActions, occurrences or states of being

ä AdjectivesDescribe or modify nouns or pronouns

ä AdverbsDescribe or modify verbs, adjectives, other adverbs, or whole groups of words

ä PrepositionsRelate nouns or pronouns to other words in a sentence

ä Conjunctions: link words, phrases and clausesCoordinating conjunctions Subordinating conjunctions

ä InterjectionsExpress feelings or command attention

Copyright © 1995–2004 by Pearson Education, publishing as Longman PublishersFowler/Aaron, The Little, Brown Handbook, Ninth Edition

Page 5: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

INDEPENDENT (MAIN) VS. DEPENDENT (SUBORDINATE) CLAUSES

– A main or independent clause makes a complete statement and can stand alone as a sentence: The sky darkened.

– A subordinate or dependent clause is just like a main clause except that it begins with a subordinating word: when the sky darkened, whoever calls.

Page 6: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

ACTIVE AND PASSIVE VOICEActive Voice The Subject acts.

The city controls rents.

Subject = actor Transitive verb in active voice

Direct object

Passive Voice The subject is acted upon.

Subject = object of action

Transitive verb in passive voice

By Actor (optional)

Rents are controlled by the city.

Rents are controlled.

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COMPLETE SENTENCE VS. SENTENCE FRAGMENT

A complete sentence or independent clause:– Contains a subject and a verb

Example: The sun shines.– And it is not a dependent clause

A sentence fragment:– Lacks a verb

Example: The sun shining.– Or lacks a subject

Example: And shines.– Or is a dependent clause not attached to a complete sentence.

Example: Because the sun shines.

Page 8: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

TESTS FOR COMPLETE SENTENCES• In order to complete sentences, meet all three of the

following tests:

Find the verb. Find the subject. Make sure the clause is independent.

Page 9: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

EXERCISERevising Sentence Fragments

• Correct any sentence fragments below.1. Scientists who study molds. They are very

different from other people.2. People from California and Nebraska wear

shorts. Pants that fall above the knee.3. People have thin skin. Compared to animals.4. The human equivalent of fur may be blankets.

Especially duvets made of down.

Page 10: Journalism short course Grammar and writing Spring 2011 Instructor Wendy M. Weinhold wendyw@siu.edu

Assignment

In class: 1. Join class wiki: SIUCJournalism20112. Complete evaluation

Out of class:Register at newsu.org, complete the

following course and send a report to [email protected]

3. http://www.newsu.org/courses/cleaning-your-copy-grammar-style-and-more