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    NOTHING COMES OUT OF NOWHEREBy

    William Kelly

    Dedicated to my mother and father. THE STAGGERING SIMILARITIES

    between the book for children calledTravels with Li Po

    And the Harry Potter series.

    Subject: Travels with Li Po Date: Mon, 26 Jan 2009 12:13:15 +0000 The Goldsmith Press Ltd. Newbridge,

    Co. Kildare

    This is to say that Mr. William Kelly submitted some chapters of his book, Travels with

    Li Po, in the early 90s. As we are mainly a Poetry Press, we were unable to publish the

    book -- but were impressed by its quality.

    Viv Abbott, MA, MPhil.

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    Brief Introduction to the Synopsis

    Coming here to read this you are likely an intelligent person who wants to know the truth about Harry Potter or a functionary of Rowlings legal firm assigned to monitor every word, movement, change of tense, syntax or whatever I decide to do to my own text so that they can fulfill their divine mission to protect the public money-spinning persona of their valuable charge - J.K. Rowling. Aware as I am that these people are paid and paid well to do what they have to do, and act, for the most part, out of economic prudence and the all the rest of it, I cannot say I personally have much respect for any of them considered as a class. Get a life , is my first response; and my second, - do something to leave the world a marginally better place than you found it. My book TRAVELS WITH LI POwas written for children to help them out of the morass of a conflicted and frightening world and I have to say that my experience of Schillings and Little, Blair and their supporters suggests to me that none of them appear to have done much to lessen the conflict or ameliorate the fear but seem solely intent on filling their pockets. My views however on such matters are not relevant here nor indeed are my views on the literary merits or lack of them of the Potter series (even if I know better than to accept it all as the product of single mind) or, at any rate, the three volumes I have managed to clamber through. This brief exposition of the similarities between Harry Potter and my own creation, however embarrassing it may be for all concerned including myself, is as short as I can make it because all the factual correspondences cited in it are important. A fuller exposition you will find on the other links below. The literary world is well enough policed by conscientious and learned people who still have some reverence for the craft above and beyond its monetary exchangevalue; and there is no doubt in my mind that this document will, sooner or later, make its way to their archives astestimony to what, I am convinced, is one of the most blatant, crassest, brutally cynical examples of competitiveplagiarism in the entire history of world literature. I place it, in terms of authenticity, alongside the fictitious diaries of Adolf Hitler that not so long ago swindled gullible editors out of a fortune and conned literary experts into thebargain. Lastly, a world wherein I am not at liberty, by reason of legal intimidation to express these views is one I mustwork to change rather than live to support. Now, I will leave you to figure it all out for yourself, with my assurance thatwhat you are reading is entirely the truth but, by no means, the whole picture. There are people out there who can placethe missing pieces of that together better than I if they would ever find the courage, or had conscience enough, to do so.

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    SIMILARITIES OF CONTENT Travels With Li Po

    STRUCTURE

    1. Main Themes - existential abandonment. A boy who is a

    sorcerer and doesn't know it but must be trained into

    the realisation. The human condition and the search for

    Enlightenment i.e. , The Philosophers Stone and

    its immortal gifts.

    2. Magical empowerment through self-knowledge.

    3. Relationships. Everybody is related to somebody else and

    these relationships mediate their lives and, in many cases,

    determine them.

    4. Sub-theme - low self-esteem.

    5. Sub-theme - living by ones intelligence

    6. Sub-theme - time.

    7. Sub-theme - Decisions that shape personal destiny andindividual responsibility for them.

    8. Sub-theme - madness, dreams and free will.

    NB: These themes were established to be amplified later throughout the series.

    Harry Potter and the Philosophers Stone

    STRUCTURE

    1. Main Themes - existential abandonment. A boy who is a

    sorcerer (wizard) and doesn't know it but must be

    trained into the realisation. The human condition and

    the search for Enlightenment i.e., The Philosophers

    Stone and its immortal gifts.

    2. Magical empowerment through self-knowledge.

    3. Relationships. Everybody is related to somebody else and

    these relationships mediate their lives and, in many

    cases, determine them.

    4. Sub-theme - low self-esteem.

    5. Sub-theme - living by ones intelligence.

    6. Sub-theme - time.

    7. Sub-theme - Decisions that shape personal destiny andindividual responsibility for them.

    8. Sub-theme - madness, dreams and free will.

    NB: These themes were also amplified throughout the series.

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    P63: Bartholomew was a Portuguese alchemist who voyaged to P160: Professor Dumbledore is particularly famous for .... and his Peking in search of The Philosopher's Stone. He met Li Po there.' work on Alchemy with his partner Nicolas Flamel. 'And did Li Po give him.......' P161: Nicolas Flamel, she whispered dramatically, is the only known 'Yes, now he is an immortal, like me.' maker of The Philosphers Stone! (Hermione)

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    EXPLANATION: This is important enough to be part of the title of the Harry Potter book. In ...Li Po it is established as the goal to die for. It is indeed what my heroOwen Muldoon is all about and you would be hard pressed to find a better or more exciting goal for any story appealing to young or old.

    P38/39: 'The man who finds The Philosopher's Stone never dies,' said Li Pohaughtily. 'The Philosophers Stone, that's what they call the mystery of

    things, the answer to the riddle of the universe. Li Po has all power and allwisdom. He can turn lead into gold as well.' 'Gee,' said Owen. 'I wouldn't mind having that trick up my sleeve.' 'Many have tried, earthling. Down through the ages there have been wizardsand warlocks. In what you call the Middle Ages they called themselves alche-mists. Before that they were known as The Druids. Li Po learnt his skills inEgypt. He was an explorer. Still is.' 'Did he tell you the secret?' 'Tell me Li Po. Tell me the secret!' pleaded Owen.

    'P36: You're not as stupid as you look, earthling. Li Po was a great magician.He found The Philosopher's Stone.' 'The what? ' 'Never mind....... Li Po found the secret of eternal life. I am Li Po, master of myself. I am over two thousand years old. ' P35: 'My master was an ancient Chinese philosopher and a magician.Does itshow?' 'Yes.'

    P43: I don't know if it's all a dream and I don't care no more neither . Don't talk to me about eternal youth or Chinese magicians or anything elsefor that matter! I am going to sleep......after I say my prayers.

    P161: A stone that makes gold and stops you ever dying! said

    Harry .Anyone would want it!

    P215:As for the stone it has been destroyed.... (Dumbledore) But that means he and his wife will die, wont they?(H P) They have enough Elixir stored to set their house in order and then,yes, they will die.

    P162: Harry and Ron were still discussing what they would do with aPhilosophers Stone if they had one. It wasnt until Ron said hed buy hisown Quidditch team

    P161: The ancient study of alchemy is concerned with making ThePhilosophers Stone, a legendary substance with astonishing powers.The stone will transform any metal into pure gold. It also producesthe Elixir of Life which will make the drinker immortal. (Hermione).

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    PLOT continued THE FOREST Page 2

    EXPLANATION:The enchanted forest that OM has to go through is to facilitate his first encounter with his real self and his hidden power s. If he calls it a jungle on occasion it is only to allude to the fact that in all its wildness and hunger it has much to do with himself and the world as it is.

    P39: 'Are there wild animals in this jungle Li Po?' 'You bet. Millions of them.' P35: Often he could discern the shape of animals that came near orheard their presence in the bush. Maybe, I wouldn't even recognizethem even if I did see them, he thought. Strange fruit hung from treesall around him and once a huge snake dropped down from a branchright in front of him and scared him half to death. P41: Creatures stirred in their branches and things moved in the tallgrass all around . P37: And horses too. They like to ride the horses especially at night.Angels taught the horse how to run.

    P32: If you are not out of the forest by then you will never get out. 'P34: When you sleep at night make sure you are well covered. Apartfrom that you will need all the luck you can get.'

    P38: LiPo has all power and all wisdom. (Bart) P35: I've decided to guide you through the forest,' said he. 'Poor Bartdidn't like it. But, what's a Puffin without a conscience, eh?'

    P27: Au contraire. It's just that this forest here casts a powerful spell

    over anybody what gets too close to it. If it takes a likin' to ye, you'redone for

    P34: The deeper he went into the jungle the darker it became, until thefoliage became so thick that scarcely any light got through at all. Thenoises and screams that echoed all around him grated on his nervesand made him fearful.

    P95: The forests full of dangerous beasts, everyone knows that.P182: The forest? he repeated. theres all sorts of things inthere - P185: He walked forward and shook the centaurs hand. P183: Its not easy ter catch a Unicorn, theyre powerful magicalcreatures. (Hagrid)

    ....

    P181: Well think again boy - its into the forest youre going and Immuch mistaken if youll come out in one piece. (Hagrid).

    P183: Theres nothin that lives in the forest thatll hurt yeh if yerwith me or Fang, said Hagrid.

    P184: And into the clearing came - was it a man, or a horse?

    P185: At last, he said, The forest hides many secrets.

    P186: Their ears seemed sharper than usual. Harrys seemed to bepicking up every sigh of the wind, every cracking twig. What was goingon? Where were the others? P186: They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper into theforest, until the path became almost impossible to follow because thetrees were so thick.

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    MORE similarities of PLOT EXPLANATION:What are dealt with here are plot significances common to both stories . Sub-themes are dealt with elsewhere in this document.

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    TRAVELS WITH LI PO BULLYING etc. HARRY POTTER AND THE PHILOSOPHERS STONE

    P37: His face was round and he hated the fact it madehim look even younger which gave the bullies in hisschool one more reason to torture him .

    P107. Here it's like a school playground, only a thousandtimes worse. ( Li Po). P103: Fear makes a man lonely. Loneliness makes a manafraid. It's a spiral, a prison. So, he frightens others forthe company. Bullies are Jokers.' (Li Po).

    P22: The bullies played their games for real, and some-body always suffered, some more, some less. Andmany, like Owen, suffered badly in a way grown-upscould never understand

    P23: Dudleys gang had been chasing him as usual ,.. P20: Dudley's favourite punch bag was Harry. P27: Everybody knew that Dudleys gang hated that old Harry Potter in his baggy old clothes and broken glasses.

    P23: Dudley had laughed himself silly at Harry, whospent a sleepless night, imagining school the next day,where he was already laughed at for his baggy clothesand sellotaped glasses.

    P47: At school, Harry had no one. Everybody knew thatDudleys gang hated that old Harry Potter in his baggy

    old clothes and broken glasses, and nobody liked todisagree with Dudleys Gang.

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    P111: 'It would appear so,' said Owen noting the marblefloor of black and white tiles that stretched out beforehim like an endless chessboard.

    'P47: Excuse me, Madam. Where is everybody?' asked Owen..... P48: 'Underground. When any of us gets depressed wecome up here.'

    P64: Thirdly, I am not really a Puffin at all, and so I'vegot few friends even among Puffins. (Li PO the Master

    Magician)

    P204: They were standing on the edge of a huge chessboard..

    P51: Gringotts is hundreds of miles under London,see.

    P213: .and once I have the elixir of life I will beable to create a body of my own. ( Voldemort).

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    P53: The first thing he noticed was the vaulted ceiling P87 Harry looked upwards and saw a velvety blackfestooned with gold stars .... ceiling dotted with stars.

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    P22: for, St Benedict's High, however pretty it might

    have looked on the outside, was actually a bullies' havenwhere the weak and the odd suffered abominably.

    P88: Virtue! It's worth its invisible weight in gold fidgets.

    P33/34: Li Po hopped quickly up to his mirror pretending not to see his master's disgruntled face. Then, the old

    man laughed: 'It's not that he's vain, as you suppose,' hewhispered. 'That is all an act for your benefit. He knows a great deal about you.

    P29: 'And may I present, gentlemen and unseenpresences ... P47Owen moved on. Once or twice he looked back, notaltogether sure if he hadn't been talking to a ghost.

    P59: At least that was his first thought. His second was -And I won't be getting rich either.

    P568 P29: tried not to think how he was going to

    look on his first day at Stonewall High -....

    P50: Give him five Knuts ...

    P219: I don't think it was an accident he let me find

    out how the mirror worked."

    P86: About twenty ghosts had just streamed throughthe back wall.

    P59: ...and he leant forward eagerly, expecting to seefabulous jewels at the very least - but at first hethought it was empty.

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    P56: 'Tut, tut, tut, tut,' went on The Major, 'and double tut. It is better for your own sake and for that of the human race at this perni-cious time, when the very pith and marrow of ourcivilization and culture is under threat, that youstarve.' P58: 'Tut, tut and treble tut, Sir. Have you nograteee tuuude?' P62: 'Tut tut,' laughed Li Po, as he soared into the air.

    P19: Indifference ruled everywhere. He was alone inthe midst of it like a tiny spider in a big bath. The sunsank in a blaze of purple and a cold wind came out of nowhere. That too frightened him.

    P114: As the oars hit the water he covered his nose andmouth with his hands to ward off the intolerable pongthat rose from the black river.

    P102: Snapes lips curled into a sneer. Tut, tut fame clearly isnt everything.

    P118: Peeves cackled. Wandering around at mid-night.? Tut, tut, tut.

    P37: As night fell, the promised storm blew up aroundthem. Spray from the high waves splattered the wallsof the hut and fierce wind rattled the filthywindowsThe storm raged more and more fero-ciously as the night went on. Harry couldnt sleep. Heshivered and turned over, trying to get comfortable,his stomach rumbling with hunger.

    P206: A disgusting smell filled their nostrils, makingboth of them pull their robes up over their nose.

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    P47. Jokers killed most of the young'uns. Laughed formonths too when they did it.' P62: For Jokers games are what life is about.P103: Bullies are Jokers.' (Li Po)

    P93: 'That's my job, Sir. I am to virtue what a hog is totruffles. I can see it in the mystical aura. Psychic, you see.If in doubt, I send him to Gotcha. 'Gotcha?' 'The governmental testing laboratory. They have a veryadvanced machine there. It incorporates a lie detector, agood manners detector, a virginity detector, an emotiondetector, compassion detector, libido detector,patriotism detector, a humour detector and so on. Itmeasures virtue to one ten thousandth of a micro-penance. It can detect everything. It can even tell us howmany times you have picked your nose in public sincebirth.

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    P43: A Muggle, said Hagrid. Its what we call non-magic folk like them. An its your bad luck you grew upin a family o the biggest Muggles I ever laid eyes on.

    Filch is at least able to use wizarding devices that have their own innate magic such as the Secrecy Sensor used in Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince. Wikipedia.org

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    P63: Bartholomew was a Portuguese alchemist who voyaged to Peking in search of The Philosopher's Stone.He met Li Po there.'

    P110: When they reached the ground floor he was hus-tled down another flight of stairs to the cellars. He heardthe sounds of lapping water as they stopped. A subterranean river flowed at his feet in an echoing bab-ble. A small rowing boat drew alongside through the mistand he was pushed into it

    P19: With an almighty crash the sea closed over. P15: But, the horror was always present that the lightswell would become an angry sea... P23: The sea, as if in obedience, became softer as if toreassure him.

    P116: If mercy were a physical attainment the Comptewould be a total cripple .

    P160: Professor Dumbledore is particularly famousfor....and his work on alchemy with his partner NicolasFlamel.

    2942 P84: ....the little boats.... were carried along a darktunnel, which seemed to be taking them right under-neath the castle, until they reached a kind of under-ground harbor, where they clambered out on to therocks and pebbles.

    P38: Was that the sea, slapping hard on the rock likethat? (HP) P37: The storm raged more and more ferociously as thenight went on.

    P163: Long bottom , if brains were gold youd be poorerthan Weasley, and thats saying something.

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    P15: How difficult it was now to heed the warning he remem- P113: Professor McGonagall peered sternly over her glasses atbered from Miss Cecilia's talk on safety at sea. "Under no cir- Harry; I want to hear youre training hard, Potter, or I maycumstances,' she said, "if the worse ever comes to the worse, change my mind about punishing you drink sea-water!"

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    P127:.there was really no way he could permit him to pursuehis mission of world conquest unimpeded.

    P17: But, nothing seemed ever to please Jonathan. He wasspoilt and always miserable. In the canteen, Jonathan was theonly one who dared complain about his dinner, often.

    P118: THE NATIONAL ANTHEM OF STRANDEDUSIA

    He's six foot two. Has eyes of green, And the strength of fifty lions. His waist is thin. Commits no sin. His limbs are concrete pylons. His word is true. All honour due. He never will confuse ya. He's the King, the King, the King of Strandedusia. All hail the King!

    P196: SO WHAT? Harry shouted. .There wont be any Hog-warts to get expelled from! Hell flatten it, or turn it into a schoolfor the Dark Arts!..... because Im never going over to the DarkSide!

    P21: Dudley meanwhile was counting his presents. His face fell.Thirty -six, he said. ....Thats two less than last year.

    P95: And now before we go to bed, let us sing the school song!( Dumbledore).

    Hogwarts, Hogwarts, Hoggy Warty Hogwarts,Teach us something please. Whether we be old and baldOr young with scabby knees,Our heads could do with fillingWith some interesting stuff, For now theyre bare and full of air,Dead flies and bits of fluff.

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    P107: Owen flung himself on the straw face down. 'Why is all this happening to me?' P108 : He even managed to scratch a couple of poems toServilia onto the hard cement, but thinking Li Po mightconsider them amateurish, he quickly scratched them out

    again. P109: Time and again he screamed through the door ortried to tear it from its hinges. Defeated, he would laughhysterically at his absurd belief in his own strength andthen the laughter would turn to tears. P105: 'But, life is so empty. So grey.' moaned Owen. 'Ican't see the point in any of it, if I can't make her myfriend. And I never will. I just want to die, Li Po.' CP=1

    P98: He was sure of it as he remembered her eyes onhis, the perfect smile. A feeling of leaden futility wasupon him. P108: The riddle strained his will. Try as he might he justcould not figure it out. CP=1 P39: Owen, for his part, lay long time thinking. If onlythat ship had spotted him he wouldn't have had to gothrough all this. CP=1 P51: He hauled himself towards the gate and lent backagainst it letting out an enormous sigh of relief. P77 : Owen sat up and relaxed. He could think a littleclearer now. CP=1 ( stress)

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    Harry doubts himself and this is not only a stage he goesthrough at eleven, but at several points in his life. Harry is often unsure of his abilities and often undervalueshimself. This is what makes Harry human and helps thereader relate to him . (the-leaky-cauldron.org)

    P76: I bet, he added, voicing for the first timesomething that had been worrying him a lot lately, Ibet Im the worst in the class. (HP) CP=1

    P205: Were nearly there, he muttered suddenly. Letme think - let me think... CP=1 P63: Harry could have laughed out loud with relief. Hewas safe. CP=1 P154: What Harry feared most was that he might beable to find the mirror room again. CP=1 (stress)

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    P36: 'And what if I call you Loony Muldoony? Would you like P11: "Harry. Nasty, common name if you ask me."

    that?' P81: Think my names funny do you?(Malfoy)

    'You don't like Gabriel?' (the name) 'My name is Li Po.' (Li Po to OM) (the name)

    P30: He'd be famous overnight. He'd be on every television P15: "He'll be famous - a legend - I wouldn't be surprised if

    channel in the world. He would be more famous than anyone today was known as Harry Potter day in future - there will be

    that had ever lived. CP-2 ( the dream of fame) books written about Harry - every child in our world will know his name." CP-2 (the dream of fame)

    P47: . youll be right famous at Hogwarts.

    P69: Owen needed no more persuasion. Seconds later, he was P20: Harry didn't look it, but he was very fast.running through the traffic, P49: The thing to do was to get to hell out of there as fast as hisfootwear would allow.

    THE CHARACTER SIMILARITIES Page 12 EXPLANATION:When the Japanese want to do Hamlet on stage or screen, they pick a small guy with black hair. It is still Hamlet he plays. The character isthe man. Or, as Mr. Yuthere put it so Owen....whats a little dye between friends? For simplicity in reading what follows, Owen is cited by his initials OMas is Harry Potter - HP. The CP-1, 2 etc refers to OMs original character chart that you can view in the unabridged account.

    OWEN MULDOON HARRY POTTER

    P32: 'Were there any more survivors.......Mister Po?' 'None,' announced the bird as if he was calling a tennis score.P16: Owen Muldoon found it very hard to believe that he wasthe sole survivor. (The Chosen One)

    P37: OM... was also skinny and a little knock-kneed.P30: 'Skinny, isn't he?' (Li Po of OM)

    P15: "...But how in the name did Harry survive?"P17: "To Harry Potter, the boy who lived."

    (The Chosen One)

    P20: "....Harry had always been skinny for his age."

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    Muldoon -Potter

    P40: 'What!? Speak to a tiger.......me!? You speak to him.'P42: 'Tiger, tiger burning bright in the forests of the night,' hebegan. (brave)

    P27: 'Puffins don't talk,' scoffed Owen.

    P45: 'Just......just don't say another word,' said Owen. 'Not an-other word. I mean it.' 'P103: Of course, she does, you stupid bird! Everybody wants tobe free!' P40: This is no time for jokes bird! (OM) (capable of anger)

    P17: 'I really don't know how to dance,' was all he said.P67: I dont really know. CP=2 (self-honesty)

    P93: 'And where do I come into your scheme?' asked Owenlooking down at his rags. P79: He adjusted what was left of his clothes and tried to ignorethe chaffed toes that poked through his trainers. P102: Owen turned his head away, and then sadly began pick-ing threads from the fringe of a rent on the knee of his jeans.P61: He remembered too how shabby he looked in the mirror of The Major's hall. P80: Owen sat down on the velvet feeling very awkward in hisrags. CP=2 (concern for appearances)

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    P25: I know, Harry murmured through the glass although hewasnt sure the snake could hear him. It must be reallyannoying. P202: Yeah, said Ron, and lucky Harry doesnt lose his headin a crisis. (brave)

    P24: .MOTORBIKES DONT FLY

    P111: Give it here, Harry called, or Ill knock you off thatbroom! P192: I wish I knew what this means! he burst out angrily.(HP) P116: Shut up, both of you! said Harry sharply.... P134: Hes just made that story up, Harry muttered angrily.... (capable of anger)

    P102: I dont know, sir, said Harry. P70: Yes, said Harry. The thing is the thing is, I dont knowhow to- CP=2 (self-honesty)

    P29: He sat down at the table and tried not to think about howhe was going to look on his first day like he was wearing bitsof old elephant skin, probably. P23: Dudley had laughed himself silly at Harry, who spent asleepless night, imagining school the next day, where he wasalready laughed at for his baggy clothes and sellotaped glasses.CP=2 (concern for appearances)

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    Muldoon -Potter

    P26: 'Where am I, Sir?' he asked. P78: 'If there is any way I can repay you for your kindness Missus.....,' began Owen: P53: I....would be glad of any food you could spare me, Sir.P57/58: 'I couldn't possibly accept all that,' said Owenremembering his manners. CP=2 (mannered)

    P58: He was angry at the way these people had made a fool of him. P89: There didn't seem to be a lot to smile about and he feltfoolish. CP-2 (self-regard)

    P26: Try as he did, he could not sleep. Images came and went inhis mind: P26: 'Inquisitive wee lad now, aren't you?' (Bart) 'I have to know....' began Owen. P62: 'Wait a minute!' cried Owen. 'There are some questions....'P66: 'You see I'm lost...... I'm trying to find......' P28: 'But, I have to know!' Owen stared wild-eyed. P53: 'I am a traveler on my way home,' he said clearly. (OM)

    CP = 1, 2 (seeking truth)

    P18: He clambered on top and lay flat down clutching its sides,unable to restrain the crying fit that suddenly came over him.

    (cries when he has to)

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    P73: Poor dear no wonder he was alone, I wondered. He wasever so polite when he asked how to get on to the platform. P41: Im sorry, but I still dont really know who you are. (HP)P217: And sir, theres one more thing .... (HP) CP=2 (mannered)

    P107: Typical, said Harry darkly. Just what I always wanted.To make a fool of myself on a broomstick in front of Malfoy.

    CP=2 (self-regard)

    P135: Harry went to bed with his head buzzing with the samequestion. Neville was snoring loudly but Harry couldnt sleep. He

    tried to empty his mind P63: he swallowed a lot of new questions that had justoccurred to him.

    P112: Potter, this is Oliver Wood. Wood Ive found you a Seeker. P145: We must have been through hundreds of books alreadyand we cant find him anywhere just give us a hint I know Iveread his name somewhere. (HP) CP = 1, 2 (seeking truth)

    P217: ...which gave Harry time to dry his eyes on the sheets.When he had found his voice again...

    (cries when he has to)

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    Muldoon -Potter Page 15

    P32: Is there danger in the forest?' For you there will be. (OM special)

    P187: The forest is not safe at this time especially foryou.

    P89: 'But that is lying!' protested Owen. CP-2 (integrity)

    P66: The dryness was back again in his throat. The Land of The Best People in the World,' he lied. P68: 'Yes!' lied Owen. 'I know a few ologies.'

    (lies when he has to)

    (HP special)

    P213: LIAR! Harry shouted suddenly. CP-2 (integrity)

    P212: I must lie, he thought desperately. I must lookand lie about what I see. P61: Nothing, Harry lied.

    (lies when he has to)

    P82: 'I suppose not,' said Owen who blushed carmine as hisstomach gurgled. (can blush)

    P106: Maybe, she wasn't who he thought she was. In that case,beauty was just an illusion; and if it was an illusion then whathope for anyone? (OM ) CP = 2 (intellect)

    P58: 'You belong in another century, all of you. Can't you seethat?' (relies on his own viewpoint) P96: 'I'll consider your offer, Sir. But I have to go.' . ..Honesty

    P30: If I could take Li Po back home with me......I would makemillions. P60: I'd have a swimming pool and a gym. And I'd live until I wasa hundred and ninety. CP-2 (Pride of Ownership)

    P195: Harry flushed. P62: Harry felt himself go red. (can blush)

    P189: But whod be that desperate? he wondered aloud.If you are going to be cursed forever, deaths better isntit? (HP) CP=2 (intellect)

    P81: He held out his hand to shake Harrys but Harrydidnt take it. I think I can tell who the wrong sort are formyself, thanks, he said coolly. (relies on his own viewpoint)

    P123: Harry had a lot of trouble keeping his mind on hislessons that day. It kept wandering up to the dormitorywhere his new broomstick was lying under his bed.

    (CP-2) (Pride of Ownership)

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    P80: The square man went on: P20: Harry had a thin face, knobbly knees, black hair and bright 'You are not bad looking. Of course we will have to do something green eyes." about the chin, too pointy. And dark hair is in these days. But, P153:.... even a little old man who looked as though he had what's a little dye between friends? And the knees might have to Harrys knobbly knees. (knees) be straightened. (knees)

    P41: 'You're a coward.' P90: ....Plenty of courage I see.... - and nice thirst to prove your- 'I am not!' CP-1 (bravely determined) self. CP-1 (bravely determined) (sorting hat).

    P50: But, suddenly, his legs began to tremble as if an electriccurrent had been passed through them. P40/41: A wave of fear came over Owen. He grabbed hismachete. P110: Owen could see why as he gazed with horror at thenumerous skeletons that lined the way

    P40/41:'But I am! I'm terrified. Look at me; I'm trembling fromhead to foot.' (knows fear)

    P102: Then he fell to his knees, overcome by a sadness that wasimpossible to bear. (pain of loss)

    P108: He grew to hate this old man even though he was not real. (can hate)

    P68: Are you familiar with that word.......ideology?' 'Yes!' lied Owen. 'I know a few ologies.' (not the academic)

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    P203: He took a deep breath..He expected to see sha rp beaksand claws tearing at him any second. 1343 1092 P205: Harrys knees were trembling. What if they lost?P211 And to Harrys horror, a voice answered. P206: Shaking, Harry moved three spaces to the left.P86: Harrys heart gave a horrible jolt . A test?

    (knows fear)

    P153: He had a powerful kind of ache inside him, half joy, half terrible sadness. (pain of loss)

    P144: I hate them both, said Harry, . (can hate)

    P41: I know some things, he said. I can, you know, do mathsand stuff. (not the academic)

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    P61: 'You've been reading my thoughts!' exclaimed Owen sitting P203: Not for nothing though was Harry the youngest Seeker in

    up. (aware) a century. He had a knack for spotting things other people didnt. (aware)

    P213: Then kill him fool and be done! screeched Voldemort.

    P62: If you had laughed out loud even once they would have (faces possible death)

    killed you on the spot. Sports people, don't you know? (Li Po). P114: One boiler coming up.' He reached for his pen to add hissignature to Owen's death warrant. (faces possible death)

    P52: He was an absurd and comical little thing but Owen didn't feel brave enough to laugh P92: Harry didnt know whether to laugh or not. P92: It was difficult not to laugh. (has a sense of humour) (has a sense of humour )

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    P75: Owen, feeling suddenly very ashamed of himself, fought hisway through the mob. CP-2 (integrity)

    P23: He resolved then he would not sleep again, no matter what. (resolute)

    P179: He felt so ashamed of himself that he went to Wood.... CP-2 (integrity)

    P179: Harrys new resolution not to interfere in anything.... (resolute)

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    P102: Then, a very old man with long white hair and beard came P10: He was tall, thin and very old, judging by the silver of hisand she took his arm. (Li Po in the flesh). hair and beard..He was wearing long robes, a purple cloakP32: Then, there was the beak, yellow as a banana, curved like which swept the ground and high-heeled, buckled boots.... andan Indian dagger, .... his nose was very long and crooked..

    'P39: Did he tell you the secret?' P157: Sir Professor Dumbledore? Can I ask you something? 'Yes.' ..Dumbledore smiled. You may ask me one more thing, how - 'Tell me Li Po. Tell me the secret!' pleaded Owen. ever. 'Here it is. Always brush your teeth and get to bed early at night.' What do you see when you look in the mirror?

    (wry humour) I? I see myself holding a pair of thick, woolen socks. (wry humour)

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    NB: I should be borne in mind that Li Po is not a puffin but an ancient alchemist and magician in the form of a puffin. Hisactual human description is below.

    P45: Li Po could be anywhere, anywhere in this wide universe.

    P38: 'A great poet. He Taught Confucius everything he knew.Wisest man in China my master is. (Bart about Li Po). P36: 'You're not as stupid as you look, earthling. Li Po was agreat magician.

    (Albus means white)

    P215: We must have crossed in mid -air. (Dumbledore)

    P48: Great man, Dumbledore. P217: Dumbledore now became very interested in a bird out onthe window sill,. P92: ...Best wizard in the world!

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    P107: 'Why is all this happening to me?'Li Po ignored the question: P62: 'Truth is, earthling; I was interested in how you would cope. P219: "No, it isn't," said Harry thoughtfully. "He's a funny man,

    You did very well.' Dumbledore. I think he sort of wanted to give me a chance. IP.62: 'I apologize,' explained Li Po. 'But, I have great faith in your think he knows more or less everything that goes on here, youinstincts. know. I reckon he had a pretty good idea we were going to try,P62: If you had laughed out loud even once they would have and instead of stopping us, he taught us enough to help. I don'tkill you on the spot. Sports pe ople, don't you know? think it was an accident he let me find out how the mirrorP44: L Pos insistence took the form of a long lecture on laziness worked." P106: Something in what the bird said always seemed to reach a (Dumbledore - mentor and co ntroller) part of him that seemed to be wiser than his thinking self. P51: The Law . That's what law. They have to learn the blessingsof old age. When they learn that lesson, they will be younga ain.' Li Po - mentor and controller

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    P28: Vain creature by all accounts this Puffin, he thought tohimself.

    P78: He looked pleased with himself but then he never seemedto look anything else. P31: 'When God was handing out the looks to Puffins he got awee bit extravagant when he came to Li Po, that's what I say.' (Li Po about himself) (vanity)

    P217: It was one of my more brilliant ideas, and between you andme, thats saying something. (Dumbledore about himself)

    (vanity)

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    P101: And where was Li Po? Why wasn't he here when he It was Dumbledore who arranged for the infant Harry to be res-needed him most? cued from the cottage at Godric's Hollow . His abilities as a wizP62: 'I apologize,' explained Li Po. 'But, I have great faith in

    ard are combined with a cunningness and subtlety of mind thayour instincts. allows him to comprehend human nature in addition to DumbleP50: 'A mere...I could have gotten killed!' dore's great trust in the power of the human spirit... I could have gotten killed, I could have gotten killed, I could

    have gotten killed,' mimicked Li Po as he shrieked and whirledabove him.

    P102: Then, a very old man with long white hair and beard came Albus Dumbledore was tall and thin, with long silver hair and a and she took his arm. long beard (auburn in his earlier years). He had brilliant blueP108: Always, at the end of the dream the ancient one would eyes, which usually twinkled with kindness and mischief.appear to take her out of the garden. He grew to hate this old man even though he was not real. He was a mystery.

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    P39: Li Po, enthralled at his own quip, flew around the tentletting out that shrieking laugh of his. (Li Pos zany humour)

    P43: 'Maybe that's why you met the tiger in the first place,'counseled his feathered sage. 'Li Po, he say, a little brush withdanger can paint a most revealing picture. P61: 'Go away,' said Owen, turning over so that the bird wouldnot see his tear-filled eyes. P44: But Li Po pecked at his neck and face so that he had no

    choice but to keep moving forwards. P105: Owen rolled over on the straw and with tearful eyes gazedup at the low ceiling: 'I just want to die,' he moaned. (to Li Po)P64: 'I'm not saying you are lying. But, you know a lot more thanyou are telling, Li Po.' (Li Po and Om- buddies)

    '

    P91: Before we begin our banquet, I would like to say a fewwords. And here they are: Nitwit! Blubber! Oddment! Squeak! (Dumbledores s zany humour)

    Harry and Dumbledore forged a bond comparable to that between two brothers, in spite of the century in age difference.Harry felt comfortable enough around the impressive,intimidating figure of Dumbledore to shout at him in frustration,

    cry out of grief, admit to his fears, and entrust him with his life.http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki Albus_Dumbledore#Personality_and_traits (Li Po and Om- buddies)

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    P45: Li Po flew higher and higher until he was a tiny dot; andthen he disappeared entirely. (Li Po invisible)

    P61: 'You've been reading my thoughts!' exclaimed Owensitting up. Li Po moused along the branch and tried to lookindifferent. 'That's not very nice Mister Po!' 'Well......I......was curious, that's all.'

    (Li Po mind-reading)

    P76: 'Appearances rule here,' replied Li Po. 'Li Po, he say, .appearances rule when poor man seek riches in mirror.' P99: Li Po, he say, what you think of as destination maybe onlyanother part of

    journey.' P104: Li Po, he say, man who cannot live with what he cannotget, cannot live with what he got.' P105: Li Po, he say, poet who try to kiss moon's reflection mayfall in water and drown.' P105: 'You have to learn about the emptiness too. You, yourself,are the emptiness.' P105: 'But, l ife is so empty. So grey.' moaned Owen. 'I can't seethe point in any of it, if I can't make her my friend. And I neverwill. I just want to die, Li Po.'

    Page 21 Invisibility: He claimed the ability to render himself invisible with-out the use of an Invisibility Cloak. To achieve such a state,Dumbledore merely used an extremely powerful Disillusionment Charm. Occlumency/Legilimency Expert: Dumbledore was alsoskilled in Occlumency and Legilimency. http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki Albus_Dumbledore #Personality_and_traits (Dumbledore invisible)

    Many people, particularly Harry Potter, often noted that Dumble-dore sometimes seemed to see right into their mind and correctly decipher what they were thinking. http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki Albus_Dumbledore#Personality_and_traits

    (Dumbledore mind-reading)

    P157: However this mirror will give us neither knowledge nortruth. P215: After all, to the well organized mind, death is but the nextgreat adventure. P157: It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to li ve.

    (Dumbledore as sage)

    (Li Po as sage)

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    P110: Countless bodies hung from the vaulted roof and from be- P181: Its just a pity they let the old punishments die outhangneath the arches in all sorts of contortions... you by your wrists from the ceiling for a few days, Ive got theP116: ... the Compte de Pilfer, says so. He's the chap you just chains still in my office, keep em well oiled in case met. Tall isn't he? But, absolutely without mercy. If mercy were a Filch is a rheumatic and hunchbacked man who wheezes and physical attainment the Compte would be a total cripple. (sadist } shuffles when he walks. (sadist} Harrypotter.wikia.com

    This bitterness expresses itself in the endless restrictions heP120: Pilfer would be really angry, that's for sure. He would put places upon the students and the powerful desire he has toan end to my supply of chocolate. That's the sort of cruel man he torture them. http://en.wikibooks.org/wiki/ is, capable of anything . Muggles%27_Guide_to_Harry_Potter/Characters/Argus_Filch P107: They have a king... 'More often than not he is told to sign P116: Do you think I am going to stand here and wait for Filch an order of execution.' (by Pilfer) to catch me?

    P119: Filch must have hurried off to look for them....but they hardly cared - all they wanted to do was put as much spacebetween themselves and that monster.

    LE COMPTE DE PILFER Etymol.ogy: Pilfer = to steal

    ARGUS FILCH Etymology: Filch = to steal.

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    P111: The men disembarked and Owen was handed over to anofficial. He was a tall man with strikingly green eyes: (ie, Pilfer).P112: His Majesty has a lot of work to......ex...ecute.' His pur-poseful stressing of the last word did nothing to make Owen feelwelcome. (Pilfer) P116: He designed this palace and furnished it too. I just signthings for him. P120: Everybody knows I am mad. It's an honour to be mad, Pil-fer tells me. And he ought to know. Pilfer knows everything.

    (expert on the palace)

    P99: Even worse than Peeves, if that was possible, was thecaretaker, Argus Filch. P99: Filch owned a cat called Mrs. Norriswith bulging,lamplike eyes just like Filchs. P99: Filch knew the secret passageways of the school betterthan anyone. His knowledge of the secrets and shortcuts of the castle isalmost unparalleled..... He has been known to favour almost sadistically harsh punishments... wikipedia.org

    (expert on the castle)

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    P46: . He searched his rags and produced a big rusty key. P41: Call me Hagrid, he said, everyone else does. An like I told 'There it is,' he said. 'Can't pull the gate no more, that's the yeh, Im keeper of the keys at Hogwarts.... problem. (the gatekeeper) P33: 'He called you Bart!' shrieked the Puffin.

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    ( Bartholomew. No birth date given, but old enough to be Owensgranddad.) P25: Glad to be out of it. That were forty years ago now.' P24: He saw that the old man was dressed in animal skins andwore a funny hat with flowers on it. ..., his little blue eyes peer-ing off into nowhere:

    P26: An old man, a beachcomber, had found him and carriedhim to his hut buried deep in the forest. (Barts hut)

    P24: 'Tis that, son. Irish as stout and shamrocks or babblin'brooks.' P24: 'Was shipwrecked meself a long while ago. P25: 'The fightin' Irish they call us. Been fightin' the English for athousand years or more.' (speaks in vernacular)

    P34: 'One other thing. If you do make it, tell nobody about meor where I am.' (Bart - a private man)

    P24: The old man smiled to himself and tweaked one of hisbushy eyebrows. (Bart)

    (Aged 65. Born 1929 -http://harry-potter.hellzworld.com/ hagrid.html)

    P133: Hagrid could be seen.... bundled up in a long moleskinovercoat, rabbit fur gloves and enormous beaverskin boots.

    P104 Hagrid lived in a small wooden house on the edge of theforbidden forest. P169: When they knocked on the door of the gamekeepers hutan hour later (Hagrids hut)

    P40: Ill not say no to summat stronger if yehve got it, mind.P40: Got summit for yer here. (speaks in vernacular)

    P48: Be grateful if yer didnt mention that teh anyone at Hogwarts. (Hagrid - a private man)

    P48: He cast a sideways look at Harry under his bushy eyebrows. (Hagrid)

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    P24: ...he decided there and then that the old man was right P104: There was only one room inside. Hams and pheasants about the forest because everything on the table came from were hanging from the ceiling, a copper kettle was boiling on there. the open fire and in the corner stood a massive bed with a P25: The shack was very neat and furnished with a wide variety patchwork quilt over it. Make yerselves at home, said Hagrid. of wooden things, tables, shelves and chairs that looked very (Hagrids hut) ornate and homely. (Barts hut)

    P24: The dish of rice and vegetables and fruit pie tasted so deli- P41: He passed the sausages to Harry who was so hungry he hadcious ....He had never tasted anything like it. never tasted anything so wonderful.

    P33: 'I do, Bart.' said Owen reaching for another slice of pineap- (Hagrid has the chefs magic touch) ple pie. (Bart has the chefs magic touch)

    P33:'Anyway,' said Bartholomew. 'Time to eat. You get yourself out of bed and go and freshen yourself up and I'll make us a good P169: Hagrid made them tea. meal.'

    P34: Bartholomew had washed his denim, jacket, his T-shirt, his jeans and even his trainers. He heaved a rucksack onto the boy'sback: P35: Old Bartholomew had thought of everything, even a sheetof polythene that he could leave out at night to collect freshwater. (caring Bart)

    P26: Owen could hear him talking to himself outside. He seemedangry about something. He heard a bucket or a wheelbarrow be-

    ing kicked and then, silence. It didn't seem to Owen as if he wascoming back in again. Now he was talking to himself again,louder this time . (Bart has a temper)

    P25: Understand me drift?' He got up and draped a blanket over Owen. 'Think ye'd better sleep now, son.'

    P40: He bent down over the fireplace; they couldnt see what hewas doing but when he drew back a second later, there was aroaring fire there. It filled the whole damp hut with flickeringlight and Harry felt the warmth wash over him as though he hadsunk into a warm bath. (caring Hagrid)

    Dear, dear, you know, that temper of yours will lead you intotrouble one of these days, Hagrid." Lucius Malfoy provoking

    Hagrid. http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Rubeus_Hagrid#Harry_Potter P181: Then get back off ter the castle an pack. Go on!

    (Hagrid has a temper)

    P48: He took off his thick black coat and threw it to Harry: Youcan kip under that, he said.

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    explained in the complete version of this document. SIMILARITIES OF STYLE

    P67: Yes, you know, BELIEFS! P30: Li Po could THINK! (use of caps for specific emphasis)

    P78: The entrance to the Virtue Agency lay atop of a steep flight of marble steps.The huge glass door was flanked by lofty statues in the Greek style and therewere a brace of bronze lions on their plinths. As soon as he entered the spacious

    foyer his eyes met a pretty little gi rl seated at a desk big enough for a game of ping-pong. She was evidently the receptionist and a busy one at that, for she hadno less than six phones all around her. So acute was Owen's shyness that hehesitated before approaching her and instead pretended to read the notice boardthat stretched right across the far wall. He adjusted what was left of his clothesand tried to ignore the chaffed toes that poked through his trainers.

    P51: He closed his eyes and took a deep breath and then another until finally heregained his composure. Slowly, he began to descend. When he touched theground he fell down flat in the dust and lay there listening to h is heart poundingaware that his fingers were still fluttering like blades of grass . He hauled himself

    towards the gate and lent back against i t letting out an enormous sigh of relief. LiPo flew down and perched on his shoulder. 'Can't...can't understand how that gate got locked...I was sure....I locked it, said the bird.

    P17: Standing there at the rails, a light warm breeze blowing through his thinblond hair he felt good. It was a beautiful night filled with the scent of plants, themoon so hugely near and bright, and the sea so calm. He stood there, looking outat the vast expanse of the ocean hoping to see again, in the dying light, the schoolof dolphins that had followed the ship for miles.

    P45: The village was quiet as he approached and seemed to lack any color but amousy grey. A dog or something whimpered in the distance. Shutters creaked in ablustery wind. He pushed the big wooden gate. It gave way easily. Still, he couldhear nothing. A long street flanked by old tenements stretched before him in thedying light. There were no pavements and no tarmac on the road, just the sameold grey dust everywhere. He could see no signs of life at first until at the veryend of the street he spied what he thought was a pile of rags.

    P202: HAVE YOU GONE MAD? Ron bellowed. P196: SO WHAT? Harry shouted. .There wont be any Hogwarts to getexpelled from! (use of caps for specific emphasis)

    P63: A tinkling bell rang somewhere in the depths of the shop as they steppedinside. It was a tiny place, empty except for a single spindly chair which Hagrid

    sat on to wait. Harry felt strangely as though he had entered a very strict library;he swallowed a lot of new questions which had just occurred to him and lookedinstead at the thousands of narrow boxes piled neatly right up to the ceiling. Forsome reason, the back of his neck prickled. The very dust and silence in hereseemed to tingle with some secret magic.

    P115: They pulled on their dressing-gowns, picked up their wands and creptacross the tower room, down the spiral staircase and into the Gryffindorcommon-room. A few embers were still glowing in the fireplace, turning all thearmchairs into hunched black shadows. They had almost reached the portraithole when a voice spoke from the chair nearest them: I cant believe you aregoing to do this, Harry.

    P108: At three-thirty that afternoon, Harry, Ron and the other Gryffindors hurried down the front steps into the grounds for their first flying lesson. It was aclear, breezy day and the grass rippled under their feet as they marched downthe sloping lawns towards a smooth lawn on the opposite side of the grounds tothe forbidden forest, whose trees were swaying darkly in the distance.

    P54: For a famous place, it was very dark and shabby. A few old women weresitting in a corner, drinking tiny glasses of sherry. One of them was smoking along pipe. A little man in a top hat was talking to the old barman, who was quItebald and looked like a gummy walnut. The low buzz of chatter stopped whenthey walked in.

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    P76: Owen observed that the people in the pews ate as they prayed so thatthe place looked and felt like a huge restaurant. Some of them cried while theyate. Owen knelt down beside a woman. At first he tried to pray but when he sawthat the woman was eating sandwiches his mouth began to water and hi s stomachrumbled. Eventually, unable to endure it any longer, he turned to her abruptly:"Could I have a sandwich, Missus?"

    P70: As he wiped the dust from off his badge with his sleeve he saw funeralcortege coming up the hill towards him. As it passed, he noticed with awe that it

    was no ordinary funeral but something of a mass funeral. He counted. There wereno less than one hundred and fifty coffins being transported uphill in a longprocession that seemed to go on forever. Each coffin was carried by four men inwhite coats and white trousers and even white shoes while a representative of thedeceased walked behind dressed in the usual garb of black. Behind him walkedthree more people, also in bl ack, the relatives. These three were all women. Everycoffin therefore had one man to follow and three women. And it was odd too howsprightly and healthy the men in white looked compared to the ones who slow-marched after them. These were frail and stooped and their skin a greyish bluecolor. Nobody cried. P22: When the sun it self peaked above the horizon he felt as happy as he ever did

    in his life. The sea, as if in obedience, became softer as if to reassure him. Fish of radiant hues that he had never seen before leapt up out of the water and ploppedback in again. He was alive like them and just as happy. P50: Owen looked down unable to believe he had climbed so far and yet secretly-proud of the fact that he had survived. P100: Half an hour later he found himself in what appeared to be the local jail.Local is scarcely the right word, for it stood in the countryside miles outside town.There wasn't a house in sight. And it didn't quite resemble any jail he had everseen. It looked more like a lighthouse, its tower rising to a gigantic height. Aroundits turret, crows circled and squawked. P54: Owen followed him into the sitting room. The first thing he noticed was thevaulted ceiling festooned with gold stars and the many chandeliers whose candle-light gave the place an eerie glow. He looked around hoping Li Po had followedhim but the Puffin was nowhere to be seen. Nobody seemed to notice his arrival.There were a number of highly decorated people in the room. Every now and thenone of them would break out in loud applause. Oddly enough, the room wassparsely furnished for its immense size. Because of the ceiling's great height all thefurniture in the room, especially the two long divans in the center, lookeddwarfed. Some of the ladies and gentlemen sat on these while all the othersstrolled around the room like sleepwalkers.

    P71: Harry pressed on through the crowd until he found an empty compartmentnear the end of the train. He pu t Hedwig inside first and then started to shove andheave his trunk towards the train door. He tired to lift it up the steps but couldhardly raise one end and twice he dropped it painfully on his foot. "Want a hand?" It was one of the red-haired twins he'd followed through theticket box. P123: As seven Oclock drew nearer, Harry left the castle and set off towards theQuidditch pitch in the dusk. He'd never been inside the stadium before. Hundreds

    of seats were raised in stands around the pitch so that the spectators were highenough to see what was going on. At either end of the pitch were three goldenpoles with hoops on the end. They reminded Harry of the little plastic sticks Mug-gle children blew bubbles through, except that they were fifty feet high. P121: As the owls flooded into the Great Hall as u sual, everyone's attention wascaught at once by a long thin package carried by six large screeching owls. Harrywas just as interested as everyone else to see what was in this large parcel andwas amazed when the owls soared down and dropped it right in front of him,knocking his bacon to the floor. They had hardly fluttered out of the way when an-other owl dropped a letter on top of the parcel.

    P165: He couldn't ever remember feeling happier. He'd really done something to be proud of now - no one could say he was just a famous name any more. The eve-ning air had never smelled so sweet. He walked over the damp grass, reliving thelast hour in his head, which was a happy blur....

    P100: And the fleet of little boats moved off all at once, gliding across the lakewhich was as smooth as glass. Everyone was silent, staring up at the great castleoverhead. It towered over them as they sailed nearer and nearer the cliff on whichit stood.

    P87: Harry had never even imagined such a strange and splendid place. It was litby thousands and thousands of candles which were floating in mid -air over fourlong tables, where the rest of the students were sitting. These tables were laidwith glittering golden plates and goblets. At the top of the hall was another longtable where the teachers were sitting. Professor McGonagall led the first years uphere, so that they came to a halt in a line facing the other students, with theteachers behind them. The hundreds of faces staring at them looked like pale lan-terns in the flickering candlelight.

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    EXPLANATION: VERY IMPORTANT or essential similarities are in Y e l l o w . Other Important similarities are in WHITE. TRAVELS WITH LI PO

    CHAPTER 1:OM ESTABLISHED AS LOST, ABANDONED, A MIRACULOUSSURVIVOR LINKED TO ANOTHER WORLD. HE IS THE CHOSEN ONE of whose presence the cosmos and all creatures in it are aware. OM islinked to the forces of nature. Survives he cause he is recognized for whohe is and protected by unseen powers. IT IS ESTABLISHED THAT HE ISBADLY BULLIED AT SCHOOL. CAST OF THE SERIES INTRODUCED. THIS ISHIS BAPTISM OF FIRE IN THE WILD FORCES OF NATURE. CHAPTER 2:OWEN IS RESCUED BY OLD BART. OM FINDS HIMSELF IN ASURREAL WORLD.IS IT DREAM OR REALITY? IS INTRODUCED TO LI POHIS MENTOR AND GUARDIAN, AN ANCIENT ALCHEMIST who has takenthe form of a comical little Puffin in order to instruct his charge. CHAPTER 3:THE ENCHANTED FOREST. OMs education begins in earnest.Li Po tells OM about THE PHILOSOPHERS STONE to whet his appetite. Li Po behaves unexpectedly. But OM is more concerned with survival atthis stage. HP COMMUNES WITH A WILD ANIMAL, A TIGER.Li Podemonstrates his clairvoyance by seeing INVISIBLE PRESENCES. CHAPTER 4:OM journeys through the Land of The Serious who areconstantly at war with The Jokers. They live underground. OM meets thegatekeeper and MUST PROVE HIS COURAGEin order to escape byclimbing over the gate that is a hundred feet high. CHAPTER 5:OM and hunger. The Red House. Madness. THE ROOM OF MIRRORS. Forced to make a fool out of himself for food.CHAPTER 6:OM PERFORMS UNCONSCIOUS MAGICAL FEAT OF LEAPINGWALL. HE PINES FOR HIS MOTHER AND FATHER. Has fun with Li Po. Iscross examined by the customs man, the incurable Joker.

    CHAPTER 7: OM arrives at Abandonville, the nightmare metropoliswhere people are divided into only two classes, the Uglies and theBeautifuls. CHAPTER 8:The Virtue Agency and SATANIC MR. YUTHERE. CHAPTER 9: OM betrayed and imprisoned. Obsessed with girl. Sees Li Poas he really is in a dream... a wise old man. Is sent to the palace to meetking and runs into the evil sadist Le Compte de Pilfer. CHAPTER 10: Li Po scuppers Yutheres plans. OM is released.

    HARRY POTTER AND THE PHILOSOPHERS STONE

    CHAPTER 1:HP ESTABLISHED AS LOST, ABANDONED, A MIRACULOUSSURVIVOR LINKED TO ANOTHER WORLD. THE CHOSEN ONE. Natureitself knows of his existence. He is linked to the forces of the cosmos.Survives because he is recognized for who he is and protected by unseen

    powers. CHAPTER 2:IT IS ESTABLISHED THAT HE IS BADLY BULLIED AT HOME ANDAT SCHOOL. HP PERFORMS UNCONSCIOUS MAGICAL FEAT OFAPPEARING ON ROOF. HP COMMUNES WITH A WILD ANIMAL, A SNAKE, and releases it by magic. CHAPTER 3:HARRY'S BAPTISM OF FIRE IN THE WILD FORCES OF NATURE.HP IS RESCUED BY OLD HAGRID and told he is special - a wizard. CHAPTER 4: HP promised fame and recognition at last as the wizard hehad no idea, except in retrospect, that he was and he is off to studywitchcraft and expand his powers. CAST OF SERIES INTRODUCED. CHAPTER 5: HP has the fortune. Only fame awaits CHAPTER 6:HP FINDS HIMSELF IN A SURREAL WORLD. CHAPTER 7: The school regime. MEETS DUMBLEDORE, HIS MENTOR ANDGUARDIAN, A 150-YEARS-OLD ALCHEMIST. CHAPTER 8: Madness. Dumbledore behaving unexpectedly. Harry thethinker. CHAPTER 9: Harry has feelings. CHAPTER 10:HP MUST PROVE HIS COURAGE. CHAPTER 11: HP has established his warrior credentials again. Intro to The Philosopher's Stone. CHAPTER 12:HARRY LONGS FOR HIS MOTHER AND FATHER.

    THE INVISIBLE PRESENCES. THE ROOM OF MIRRORS. CHAPTER 13:THE PHILOSOPHERS STONE. CHAPTER 14:Interlude. CHAPTER 15:THE ENCHANTED FOREST and its strange creatures. The three headed dog. The baptism of fire proper. Hermione lets it allhang out. Harry has more feelings. CHAPTER 16: Chess game. Journey to the last chamber.CHAPTER 17:SHOWDOWN WITH SATANIC VOLDEMORT.