INTRODUCTIONS, PREVIEWS, CONCLUSIONS, TRANSITIONS, AND THESIS STATEMENTSMrs. Taft

Seriously? Who cares?

• Purpose: The effect of a speech depends heavily on how you greet the audience, how you leave the audience, and how your speech hangs together. Therefore, you must put time and effort into introductions, conclusions, and transitions.

• Note: You can not get an A, B, or C on the 3 biggest grades in here or pass the Final Exam if you do not pay attention today! I expect you to know this information VERY well. We will use this information EVERY DAY!

Basic Outline

Speeches require OUTLINES, but don’t worry, we will go over how to create those LATER.

For now, know that your speech must appear like this… Attention getter Relevance statement Credibility statement Thesis Preview Statement Body with transitions Review Statement Conclusion

Introductions

The introduction has three purposes… Gain Attention – Convince your audience

that you are going to be good at this! Present your topic and purpose – You

should preview your main points by the end of your Intro

Connect with your audience – You must come across as interested in your topic and your listeners POV

Eight Types of Introductions (1-4)

• Startling Statement – grab the audience with an unexpected statement, question, or thought.• Ex. “Jesse is a normal three-year-old child except for

one thing: she is the victim of child abuse.”• Rhetorical Question – ask a thought-provoking

question that you will then answer and discuss.• Ex. “What do Albert Einstein, Cher, and Tom Cruise

have in common? They have all overcome dyslexia.”• Humor – Tell a joke or humorous statement that

relates to your topic. • Ex. “What ten letter word starts with G-A-S? It’s

automobile and this year we may run short again.”• Quotation – Put a quotation at the beginning and

end that relate to your theme.• Ex. “I have a dream!”

Write Your Own Attention Getter! Write 4 attention getters:

Your topic can either be “music” or “reality T.V.”

Startling statement Rhetorical question Humor Quotation

Introductions (5-8)• Story – Tell a short, interesting story that relates to your topic.

• Ex. “Many years ago, a stranger arrived in our town. He wore ragged clothes and carried a walking stick. It turns out this homeless man was my father!”

• Personal Experience – give a personal experience account that relates to your topic.• Ex. “Who would want to spend hours in the blazing sun digging

carefully in the dirt with a small spoon? I did.”• Example – give an example related to your topic.

• Ex. “Anne Graves, age four, died from a gunshot wound to the chest. Her killer was shocked and heartbroken. He was her six-year-old brother, who had found a loaded gun.”

• Reference to occasion – Tell about what exactly you are going to do.• Ex. “Thank you for having me here. I am very pleased to

present this award to…”

Write Your Own: Practice 5-8!

Write 4 attention getters:Your topic is either “music,” “TV shows,” or

“movies.”

Story – Personal Experience – Example – Reference to occasion -

Relevance Statement

A relevance statement is a statement which lets the audience know why they should listen to your topic. You need to relate your topic to your audience. Think about what the audience might have in common with your topic.

Ex. Although we are not yet old enough to vote, paying attention to which candidates are running in the next presidential race should be important to all of us, as many of the issues they will be discussing will directly affect our future.

Credibility Statement

A credibility statement lets the audience know why YOU are qualified to speak on your topic. It also shows your connection and interest with your topic.

Ex. “I have witnessed several traffic accidents and have been directly involved in one which was the fault of someone texting while driving. Since then, I have done extensive research on the subject of texting while driving.”

Re-write this Introduction

“I’m going to talk to you today about something I find interesting. I’ve been interested in this for a long time. Most of you should find it interesting, too. You may have seen dolphins at the zoo. My topic today will be on communication with dolphins.” – THIS IS NOT A GOOD EXAMPLE! FIX THIS!

Write your own example. Share examples with people around you,

then with the class.

Thesis Statements (C+B+R)

• A sentence or two that describes the main idea of your speech and main argument that you are trying to make.

• Claim + Because + Reason = Good Thesis Statement

• Claim = “Sexist language in textbooks is harmful.”• Insert the word “BECAUSE”

• Reason = “it reinforces negative stereotypes about many groups and individuals.”

Thesis practice

• Write 3 thesis statements choosing from 5 of these topics.

• Space Travel• Today’s fashion• Adoption• Missing children• Teenage life• Sports in school

Preview Statement

The preview statement comes directly after your thesis statement.

“So today we will examine 1st…., 2nd….. And finally….

I expect you to know and apply this on every speech from here on out.

Body

The body of your speech should include your main points, with a lot of SUPPORT DETAIL EXAMPLES PROOF

You should include transitions between ideas

Transitions

Meanwhile, First, Second, Also, Next, As a result, In addition to,

These will help you in ALL your writing for

Speech and English classes!

Transitions

In contrast, In conclusion, In the second place, Furthermore, Finally, Therefore,

Transitions

Moving to, For example, On the contrary, To sum up, Another point, On the other hand,

Review Statement

The review statement comes directly after the last line in your final body paragraph.

“So today we examined 1st…,2nd…and finally…”

I expect you to know and apply this on every speech from here on out.

Conclusions Have Three Purposes Summarize your main points

Repeat your main goal

Provide a clear ending – Don’t leave the listeners wondering whether the speech is over. Give a final decisive statement.

Three Types of Conclusions

Quotation – just like for an attention getter, quote something related to your topic. It is actually better if you use the same quote for both with a final statement. Ex. Just like my mom always said, “Life is like

a box of chocolates, you never know what you’re going to get.”

Appeal / Challenge – Asking or motivating the audience to do something Ex. “Please remember that seat belts save

lives and prevent serious injury. Buckle up!” Story – Connecting your Attention getter

story to your end…

PRACTICE IT!!!

Why are these poor examples? “So today we looked at Dolphins. Okay,

I’m done.” “As we learned today, Dolphin

communication is awesome communication. And that’s my speech.”

Write your own conclusion to your music or reality T.V. examples for which you already created attention getters.