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C` wm wratm gh ahtr`cudta`h0 [mbb, wm c` h`t wratm gh mssgy-stybm ahtr`cudta`h. Semrm as h`
ngdlkr`uhc `r `paha`h t` wratm sahdm tem tgsl as h`t gh mssgy nut ahstmgc g suoo ry ` fgdts .
T`, gkgah, c` wm wratm gh ahtr`cudta`h0 Sem ghswmr as pr`ngnby yms nmdgusm ny kavahk tem sunjmdt
ghc rghkm
`
tem krgpe, tgnbm, degrt, ogp `r cagkrgo, at dgh
7.
d`hhmdt
tem cmsdrapt a`h t` tem rmgb atmo tem Sgsl @hm) `r tem tgsl
d`hdmpt
ny g
suoogry).
embp us gv`ac rmpmtata`h
`f
b`hk h`uh pergsms, taom rmfmrmhdms, `r `temr pgrgomtmrs.
Semsm b`hk h`uh pergsms ghc tem taom pmra`c wabb egvm t` nm wrattmh gt s`om stgkm ah tem ghswmr,
s` at as b`kadgb t` mstgnbase temo gbb gt tem nmkahhahk. Bmt us mxpb`rm teas.
, Mxmrdasm 75
Ygrt
hm
Sap 5 Mxmrdasm 7> Sgsl M as g ngr degrt, se`wahk tem pradms ` eghckuhs, rafbms, sbuk kuhs, ghc
se`tkuhs `vmr tem pmra`c >996 t` >979. f temsm grm ogcm dbmgr ah tem ahtr`cudta`h, temh wm dgh
usm syh`hyos w`rcs wate tem sgom omghahk), pgrgpergsms, `r pr`h`uhs t` rmfmr t` temo o`rm
mffadamhtby, weade kavms us krmgtmr vgramty ah `ur v`dgnubgry. Fabb ah tem kgps.
Sem pgrgomtmrs
eghckuhs, rafbms,
sbuk kuhs, ghc
se`tkuhs
>996 t` >979
>996
>979
... omhta`hmc
h
tem ahtr`cudta`h
dgh b tmr nm
rmfmrrmc
t` ah tem
`cy `f
tem
hswmr
wate
tmros
sude gs ...
Tyh`hyos/Ygrgpergsms
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Ygrt Sw`
Bmt us b``l gt tem ahtr`cudta`h wm egvm f`r `ur 'f``tngbb dbuns' krgpe cmsdrapta`h.
t as
h`w o`rm
f`rogb ah krgoogr ghc w`rcs, nut temrm as stabb g pr`nbmo. D`opgrm `ur ahtr`cudta`h (se`wh
hmxt) wate tem gdtugb ahtr`cudta`h
usmc
h
tem qumsta`h pgpmr
(se`wh gt tem nmkahhahk
`
Sap 3).
[egt as tem pr`nbmo wate `urs
Ygrt Sermm
As teas ahtr`cudta`h nmttmr0
G quadl kbghdm gt tem rghkm ghc mxtmht `f gbb tem ahf`rogta`h suppbamc ny tem krgpeadgb
cgtg rmvmgbs tegt temrm grm termm dbuns ahv`bvmc ah tem peysadgb kgom `f f``tngbb , ghc
tem pr`fat tegt temy oghgkm t` gdquarm as gbs` rmprmsmhtmc `h tem vmrtadgb gxas
ah
tem
uhats
`f
te`usghcs `f c`bbgrs `vmr tem d`ursm `f g we`bm ymgr. Seas ymgr as se`wh `h
tem e`raz`htgb gxas, weade as cavacmc aht` f`ur qugrtmrs, nmahk tem farst , smd`hc, tearc,
ghc f`urte.
Ygrt `ur
Ghc h`w f`r s`om krgoogr. Fabb
ah
tem tw` tgnbms.
d`opgrm
fbudtugtm
Ygrt avm
7 Dgh y`u ghgbysm tem pgrt `f spmmde ah tem h`uh pergsm:
tem pr`fat fakurms `f termm f``tngbb dbuns .
> Ah e`w oghy caffmrmht wgys dgh y`u rmwratm teas0
Sry t` teahl `f s`om rmgb-w`rbc v`dgnubgry.
9
u
d
r
..
d
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b
`om ssums
Ah Mxmrdasm
75
, Ygrt @hm, wm dgh rmfmr
t`:
eg
hckuhs, rafbms, sbuk
kuhs, ghc se`tkuhs
>996 t` >979
>996
>979
gs
tem f`ur typms
`f
wmgp`hry
AA
temsm sogbb gros
AA
temsm cmvadms AA temsm f`ur cmfmhsavm atmos
A tem pmra`c
temsm
ymgrs AA tem kavmh taom AA tem taom frgom
A tem nmkahhahk AA tem stgrt AA ahatagbby AA `rakahgbby
A tem fahase AA tem mhc AA fahgbby AA ubtaogtmby
T`, usahk ahtr`cudta`hs gbb`ws o`rm vgramty ah tem v`dgnubgry, nut temrm
as
`hm nak assum gn`ut
temo. Semy hmmc t` egvm `rakah b w`rcs. Sem ahtr`cudta`h wm egvm usmc ah Ygrt Sw`
`f
tem
prmva`us mxmrdasm
as
mx dtby tem s om gs tem ahtr`cudta`h usmc ah tem qumsta`h pgpmr. Seas as ngc
sodm
7
tem w`rcs grm h`t d`hsacmrmc pgrt `f
y ur
ghswmr
gs g rmsubt `f teas , y`u oust b`kadgbby
nm
pmhgbasmc
C`ms teas omgh tem ahtr`cudta`h ah Mxmrdasm
75
, Ygrt Sermm
as
nmttmr0 H` At as 59 w`rcs, `vmr `hm
egbf
`f
gh ghswmr ^momonmr, tem ahtr`cudta`h as rmpm tahk ahf`rogta`h gbrmgcy dbm rby kavmh ny
tem tgsl. Sem ahtr`cudta`h
as
tem bm st ahtmrmstahk pgrt
`f
ghy ghswmr ghc gccs tem bm st t`wgrcs
Sgsl Gdeamvmomht ghc y`ur `vmrgbb sd`rm.
At
as
gbs` ' `pmh' f`r oude fbuff.
C` h`t wgstm t`` oghy w`rcs `h gh ahtr`cudta`h. O`vm
t`
tem p`aht
gs
quadlby ghc saopby
gs
y`u dgh \Tmm gbs` Sap
6
Mxmrdasm 6, Ghswmr 3_. Sem mxgopbm ahtr`cudta`h as oude nmttmr wrattmh
ah 76
w`rcs:
G quadl kbghdm gt tem rghkm ghc mxtmht `f gbb tem ahf`rogta`h suppbamc ny tem krgpebmgf
cgtg rmvmgbs tegt temrm grm termm f``tngbb) dbuns ahv`bvmc
ah
tem peysadgb kgom
`f
f``tngbb, ghc tem temar) pr`fat tegt temy oghgkm t` gdquarm
as
gbs` rmprmsmhtmc
`h
tem
vmrtadgb gxas ah tem uhats `f te`usghcs `f c`bbgrs `vmr tem d`ursm `f g wftmfm ymgr. FG s-
ymgr as
se`Hh `h
tem e`raz`htgb gxas,
v77eade as
cavacmc aht` f`ur qugrtmrs, nmahk tem farst ,
smd`hc, tearc, ghc f`urte .
H`uh Yergsms
\ _
@f
d`ursm, wm `ftmh e vm t` usm tem lmy h`uhs (f`r mxgopbm: 'f``tngbb dbuns'), nut wm se`ubc h`t
usm tem b`hk h`uh pergsms tegt grm rmfbmdtmc `h tem Q gxas \Q_ w`rc f`r w`rc.
[m
oust deghkm
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tem w`rc `rcmr, krgoogr, ghc
af
wm dgh) ahtr`cudm s`om hmw v`dgnubgry, ah `rcmr
t`
oglm tem
wratahk
`urs
Seas pr`dmss as dgbbmc pgrgpergsahk .
H`uh pergsms grm just b`hk h`uhs ghc dgh tglm termm ngsad f`ros.
A.
>
4g
-
n
t
'
~ 7 ~ r , ~ ~
b 7 f
, ,,
Tunj. mrn
F`r mxgopbm. Q`u grm
7.
oy (AMBST/k``c) stucmhts. stuc
mh
ts `f oahm ah AMBST)_
d`opgrms \Qs_
H`t Omhta`hahk tem Sgsl
Gh`temr acmg as t`
h`t
omhta`h tem tgsl atmo. ^momonmr, gs tem fahgb pgrt
`f
Sap 6 mxpbgahs, tem
tgsl as ahf`rogta`h trghsfmr : just trghsfmrrahk tem ahf`rogta`h fr`o tem atmo t` tem pgpmr. [m
d`ubc temrmf`rm oglm tem stybastad de`adm t` d`opbmtmby rmo`vm gbb rmfmrmhdm t` tem gdtugb atmo
atsmbf. Emrm grm s`om o`cmbs t` c` teas, usahk Ygttmrhs 7 ghc >
9
u
+-
(_.)
8
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Ygttmrh
- deghkm(s)
A Se
m - vgragta`h(s)
ah
\Q
+ats
pgrgomtmrs_
-as grm)
gs f`bb`ws.
R
A -
fbudtugta`h(s)
Ygttmrh >
- [egt f`bb`ws
- Emrm
as
g suoogry
`f
- Sem f`bb`wahk suoograsms
. Mxmrdasm 1
- dgh
nm
suoograsmc
- deghkms
e`w
\Q_ - vgrams \Ygrgomtmrs_
- tem o hhmr h weade
- fbudtugtms
7
^mwra tm tem f` bb wahk h`uh pergsms ah gt bmgst tw` caffmrmht wgys. B``l gt Gppmhcax 3 t` smm
oy ghswmrs.
7
Nrmglc`wh `f Mcudgta`h Bmvmbs `f GGG Mbmdtr`hads Mopb`ymms
> Gvmrgkm Yradms `f Kuhs gt J`ehs`h s Kuh Te`ps
4 T`urdms `f [`rbc Hmws f`r Ogbms ghc Fmogbms ah Nratgah
3 [gtmr Tuppby ghc Tghatgta`h ah ]rngh ghc ^urgb Grmgs
=
Cmvmb`pomht `f tem S`wh
`f
[gbkmtt
6
Yr`dmss `f [gtmr Yurafadgta`h
;
]hats `f Mbmdtradaty ny Fumb Sypm
ah
Jgpgh ghc Deahg
> K` ngdl
t`
Sap ; Mxmrdasm 79 wemrm temrm grm termm saopbafamc Sgsl @hms - G N ghc D - ghc
try wratahk s`om ahtr`cudta`hs t` temsm. B``l gt Gppmhcax 3 t` smm oy ghswmrs .
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Ttrgaket aht` gh mxmrdasm
B P
2
Mxmrdasm >
Ygrt hm
Grm
tem
f`bb`wahk - At dgh nm smmh fr`o tem krgpe tegt. ..
k``c gccata`hs t` gh - At as mvacmht fr`o tem krgpe tegt.
..
ghswmr0
- Sem ahf`rogta`h ah tem krgpe gbs` rmvmgbs tegt. ..
- ]p`h db`smr mxgoahgta`h `f tem krgpe, at as dbmgrby `nva`us tegt.
..
Ygrt Sw`
D`hsacmr: 7. [egt as wr`hk wate tem f`bb`wahk termm sgopbm ghswmrs0
>. E`w d`ubc y`u fax temo0
Tgopbm Ghswmr 7 \Ygrt_
Sem krgpe se`ws e`w tem pr`fat vgrams f`r Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun
ah
`hm ymgr ah
te`usghcs `f c`bbgrs.
Ah
tem farst qugrtmr tem pr`fat f`r Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun kr`ws fr`o
4= t` 39.
Ah
tem smd`hc qugrtmr tem pr`fat f`r Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun d`htahums t` kr`w.
Ah tem tearc qugrtmr Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun s pr`fat cmdrmgsms temh tem f``tngbb dbuns
pr`fat ahdrmgsms gkgah.
Tgopbm Ghswmr > \Ygrt_
Sem pr`fat wgs =9
te`usghc c`bbgrs.
Ah tem farst qugrtmr at r`sm t` 6=
te`usghc c`bbgrs
nut temh fmbb t` >9
te`usghc c`bbgrs.
Ah tem bgst tw` qugrtmrs at krgcugbby cmdbahmc t` favm
te`usghc c`bbgrs.
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A
Tgopbm Ghswmr 4 \Ygrt_
Sem pr`fat f`r Cghcmh`hk ahdrmgsms. h tem bgst pmra`c, at d`htahums teas ahdrmgsm gt
tem sgom rgtm. Sem pr`fat f`r H`nbm Ygrl cmdrmgsms
ah
tem farst qugrtmr. h tem smd`hc
qugrtmr, at cmdrmgsms gkgah, d`htahuahk teas cmdrmgsahk trmhc f`r tem we`bm pmra`c .
Tgopbm Ghswmr 3 \Ygrt_
Thgzzbm ahdrmgsms, Thatde gbs` rasms, To``teb`w kr`ws, Tatn`y se`ws g p`satavm trmhc,
nut Tpmrbzg cmdrmgsms.
Sem smhtmhdms
ah
Ygrt @hm grm vmry
vmry
d`oo`h. ^momonmr, tem ahtr`cudta`h
`
`ur ghswmr egs
gbrmgcy ogcm at dbmgr tegt wm grm b``lahk gt g krgpe (`r pam/ngr degrt, tgnbm
`
fakurms, ogp `r
cagkrgo), ghc gs
Sap
79
tmbbs us, tem purp`sm
`
teas ahtr`cudta`h
as t gv`ac rmpmtata`h
T`,
gs
tem mxpbghgta`h t` Sap
6
Mxmrdasm
6
Ghswmr = tmbbs us, ghy furtemr omhta`h
`
tem krgpe
as g f`ro
`
rmpmtata`h. Gt ats w`rst, at as just uhhmdmssgry fbuff, fabbahk `ur ghswmr wate w`rcs ghc
tglahk us h`wemrm. Gv`ac teas .
Mbaoahgtahk ^mpmtata`h
[mbb, af wm wght g
rghkm `
w`rcs, wm se`ubc h`t rmpmgt temo. Ah Mxmrdasm >9, Ygrt Sw`, Tgopbm
Ghswmr
7
tem bmgcahk h`uh Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun as rmpmgtmc. Ah Tgopbm Ghswmr >, te`usghc
c`bbgrs
as
rmpmgtmc.
Ah
Tgopbm Ghswmr 4, tem vmrns ahdrmgsm ghc cmdrmgsm grm rmpmgtmc.
Tude rmpmtata`h gbs` gffmdts D`emrmhdm D`emsa`h (sahdm tem pgrts c` h`t fat wmbb t`kmtemr) ghc
gffmdts Sgsl Gdeamvmomht (sahdm wm grm wgstahk w`rcs tegt wm hmmc t` rmgbby c` tem tgsl). Gs
wm bmgrht fr`o tem prmva`us tap, gxms ahf`rogta`h sude gs f``tngbb dbun `r te`usghc c`bbgrs
d`ubc gbwgys nm put ah tem ahtr`cudta`h.
- Seas pr`fat as se`wh ah te`usghcs
`
c`bbgrs.
- ... se`ws tem pr`fat (ah te`usghcs
`
c`bbgrs ...
Seas w`ubc gbb`w just tem fakurms
t`
nm usmc, pmregps wate just `hm rmoahcmr
`
temsm uhats wemh
y`u kavm tem farst fakurm:
Cghcmh`hk's pr`fat nmkahs gt =9 (te`usghc c`bbgrs).
... `r y`u d`ubc usm tem kmhmrgb tmro uhats .
Cghcmh`hk's pr`fat nmkahs gt =9 uhats.
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Ah Mxmrdasm >9, Ygrt Sw`,
Tgopbm Ghswmr 3
h` w`rcs grm rmpmgtmc, nut tem smhtmhdm as gh
`vmrwrattmh bast. Gv`ac bastahk Sry t` nm d`hdasm (kavahk tem omssgkm ah gs fmw w`rcs gs p`ssanbm),
t` gbb`w y`u t` wratm o`rm bgtmr. Seas pgssgkm (g f`rmst-vamw) d`ubc nm oude nmttmr wrattmh gs:
bb de`d`bgtm ngrs p rt fr`o Tpmrbzg ahdrmgsm.
Surhahk ngdl t` rmpmgtmc h`uhs ghc vmrns, wm gbs` hmmc t`
deghkm
temo aht` `temr w`rcs wate R
tem sgom `r saoabgr omghahk. Seas as s`omtaoms lh`wh gs bmxadgb degahahk , wemrm tem caffmrmht
w`rcs f`ro g degah ( Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun - tem dbun - teas tmgo - at ),
gbb d`hhmdtahk
t`kmtemr ter`uke tem tmxt ghc rmfmrrahk ngdl t` tem farst h`uh.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ P j
Tyh`hyos
ghc
Ygrgpergsahk f`r Ttybm
Sap 7 se`wmc tegt tem ngsad pgrgomtmrs (Q fmgturm, taom frgom, stgrt ghc mhc cgtms), `hdm temy
grm mstgnbasemc ah tem Sgsl @hm ahtr`cudta`h, se`ubc h`t nm rmpmgtmc. Segt as `hm `f tem purp`sms
`f
tem ahtr`cudta`h.
Taoabgrby, try t` usm syh`hyos (w`rcs wate tem sgom omghahk) wemh wratahk tem lmy h`uhs
ah y`ur ghswmr. Ygrgpergsahk (usahk g fmw w`rcs kavahk tem sgom omghahk) dgh se`w tem
nmkahhahks
`f
d`bb`dgta`h ghc stybm (? AMBST Tmvmh). Sem se`rt fgdtugb hgturm `f Sgsl @hm
baoats tem deghdms t` c` teas, s` at as aop`rtght t` tglm tem `pp`rtuhaty af p`ssanbm.
F`r mxgopbm, ah oy sgopbm ghswmrs ah teas n``l, y`u wabb h`tadm sude bmxadgb degahs gs:
ah tem d`htmxt
`f
dgr gddacmhts
xmrdasm >
Ygrt
hm
D`opbmtm tem tw` f`bb`wahk tgnbms ny oglahk bmxadgb degahs.
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egah @hm egah Sw` egah Sermm egah F`ur egah Favm
Fr`o \U
7_
t` \U>_,
Kmmb`hks
\U4_ t` \U3_,
[`rcs `f
Tpmdafad Saom
Ygrt Sw`
Kmmb`hk s pr`fat
pr`fat
ahdrmgsms
egah Tmvmh egah Maket
cmdrmgsms
sbaketby.
g krmgt cmgb.
egah Hahm
... stgys tem
sgom.
Oglahk bmxadgb degahs as gh aop`rtght wgy t` gcc vgramty t` y`ur wratahk, s` bmt us egvm g b`hk
prgdtadm mxmrdasm.
Sry
d`opbmtahk tem f`bb`wahk tgnbms drmgtahk 49 se`rt bmxadgb degahs f`r tem
lmy h`uhs kavmh).
Sry
t` pgrgpergsm f`r stybm wemrm p`ssanbm.
7.
grmg
>
d`opghy
77
t`urast cmstahgta`hs
+
4.
mxp`rts
7>.
trghsp`rt
3.
pr`cudta`h
74.
farahk `f stgff
=.
dust`omrs 73.
earahk `f stgff
6.
mbmdtradaty cmoghc
7=.
egvahk deabcrmh
;.
bmvmb `f mcudgta`h
76.
Jgpgh
5.
ahtmrhgta`hgb t`urasts
7;.
pmtr`b
1.
uhmopb`yomht rgtm
75.
omcadgb d`opbgahts
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71. deghkahk
>=.
gdd`oo`cgta`h
sde``b sunjmdts
+
>9. bmasurm taom
>6. tem ]TG ghc Mur`pm
>7. e`usme`bc k``cs >;. oghgkmomht stybms
S
>>. vasats gnr`gc
A
>5. stucy e`urs
A
+
>4. aopras`homht
>1. oakrgta`h
>3. rmgs`hs f`r d`opbgaht
49.
de`rms
Tgopbm ghswmrs t` temsm tw` mxmrdasms grm ah Gppmhcax =. Gbs` stucy tem sgopbm wratahk ghswmrs
ah teas n``l
t`
bmgrh o`rm gn`ut teas.
Mxmrdasm >>
B``l gt `ur f``tngbb dbuns ghswmr. Sem wratahk
as
o`rm f`rogb, egs h` `paha`h `r fbuff, ghc
as
t` tem p`aht. Sem ahtr`cudta`h as `rakahgb, ghc tem f`rmst-vamw ghc trmm-vamw `rkghasgta`h oglm
tem ghswmr dbmgrmr ghc mgsamr t` f`bb`w. E`wmvmr temrm as g krmgt cmgb ` rmpmtata`h ` w`rcs ghc
krgoogr.
Sem krgpe oglms g d`opgras`h
`f
tem pr`fat kgahmc f`r H`nbm Ygrl, Cghcmh`hk, ghc Kmmb`hk f``tngbb
dbuns `vmr g dgbmhcgr ymgr.
B``lahk farst gs g we`bm, Cghcmh`hk
s
pr`fat as eakemr tegh tem pr`fat `f ats tw` ravgbs. .. _ At as h`t
eakemr ah tem
nmkahhahk
\ ... _
ghcmh`hk f``tngbb dbun kmhmrgtms ahdrmgsahkby eakemr mgrhahks
ter`uke`ut tem ymgr. Seas oglms Cghcmh`hk f``tngbb dbun tem o`st fahghdagbby suddmssfub dbun.
H`w
d`hsacmrahk ghcmh`hk ah o`rm cmtgab, temar pr`fat nmkahs gt
gn`ut
3= te`usghc c`bbgrs.
Cghcmh`hk s pr`fat rasms str`hkby t` 69 te`usghc c`bbgrs ah tem farst qugrtmr. ^mkgrcahk Cghcmh`hk
f``tngbb dbun, .. _ Cghcmh`hk f``tngbb dbun d`htahums t` gsdmhc. Cghcmh`hk ahdrmgsms
- ~ ~ : ~ b } P k P ' : b P 2 : 8 P b } P ] ~ ~
~ ~ ~ P ~ ~ q u g r t m r s .
Cghcmh`hk fahasemc h`tadmgnby eake, ghc at o`rm tegh c`unbmc t` 799 te`usghc
c`bbgrs.
Gs f`r
H`nbm Ygrl f``tngbb dbun
H`nbm Ygrl f``tngbb dbun s
pr`fat fgbbs
fgarby mvmhby ter`uke`ut tem
ymgr. Sem pr`fat fmbb fr`o just `vmr =9 te`usghc c`bbgrs . H`nbm Ygrl fahasemc gt just uhcmr 79 te`usghc
c`bbgrs.
O`vahk t` Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun kr`ws ah teas farst qugrtmr. Kmmb`hk kr`ws. \ .. _
Kmmb`hk fgbbs. Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun kr`ws. \ _Sem pr`fat f`r Kmmb`hk mhcmc
gt
69 te`usghc c`bbgrs
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9
u
bJ
8
5>
7. Nmkah vgryahk tem w`rcs (t` gv`ac rmpmtata`h) ny rmo`vahk r deghkahk tem at ba-
dasmc w`rcs aht` te`sm egvahk g saoabgr `r tem sgom omghahk gs tem `rakahgb `hm
(se`wh
ah n`bc
- tegt as, f`ro s`om bmxadgb degahs
ah
tem wratahk , gs wm cac
ah
Mx
mrdasm
>7
.
> Yut tem farst omhta`h `f te`usghc c`bbgrs ah nrgdlmts, teus gbb`wahk us t` rmo`vm
gbb furtemr rmpmtata`h `f temsm w`rcs.
4. Taoabgrby, sahdm tem fgdt tegt wm grm cmgbahk wate g f``tngbb dbuns ghc n temar pr`fat,
as dbmgr
ah
tem ahtr`cudta`h, rmo`vm gbb furtemr rmpmtata`h `f temsm w`rcs fr`o tem
rmst `f tem ghswmr.
3. Nmkah vgryahk tem kr oo r (t` gv`ac rmpmtata`h) ny d`onahahk tem uhcmrbahmc
pgrts.
=. Gbs` d`onahm smhtmhdms ny puttahk ah saopbm d`hjuhdta`hs `r smqumhdmrs ah tem
squgrm nrgdlmts ( \ . .. ).
6. Deghkm tem M 0 ~ pergsm wate g o`rm `rakahgb tmro.
Sem ghswmr
as
se`wh ah Sap 7> Ygrt Tmvmh Mxmrdasm >; Ygrt Sw`.
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Yrmbaoahgry
r
[m egvm b``lmc gt vgryahk tem w`rcs, nut wm stabb hmmc t` b``l o`rm gt vgryahk tem
krgoogr
Sem AMBST nghc cmsdrapt`rs grm quatm dbmgr
`h
teas.
Sem
punbad vmrsa`h rmgcs:
Krgoogtadgb ^ghkm Gddurgdy 7. ]sms g rghkm
`
krgoogr
Mxtrgdtmc fr`o tem d`opbmtm AMBST [ratahk Sgsl @hm Nghc Cmsdrapt`rs punbad vmrsa`h).
Seas
omghs
tegt af y`ur
ghswmr
as g bast
`f saopbm
smhtmhdms
`hby
\Tunjmdt Vmrn @njmdt_,
y`ur krgoogr
sd`rm
dgh h`t
nm eakemr tegh AMBST =.
B``l
gkgah gt `ur ghswmr gt tem mhc
`f
tem
prmva`us tap, ghc
y`u
wabb smm tegt at egs teas pr`nbmo.
E`wmvmr
, af
wm
grm
k`ahk
t`
vgry
tem
krgoogr
o`rm,
wm hmmc
t`
lh`w o`rm gn`ut krgoogr
atsmbf. Seas tap as b`hk
ghc
egs smvmh pgrts.
At
wabb b``l gt s`om spmdafad krgoogrs, temh tem usm
`f
prmp`sata`hs , temh krgpe fmgturms, tmhsms, rmbgtavm dbgusms, krgoogr `f d`opgras`h, ghc fahgbby tem
usm `f pgrtadapagb pergsms.
Bmt
us nmkah wate s`om spmdafad krgoogr.
Ygrt @hm w` Krgoogrs
[emh
cmsdranahk trmhcs, temrm grm tw`
ogah
krgoogrs tegt
wm dgh
usm. Semsm grm 7 tem vmrn
krgoogr ghc
>. tem
h`uh
krgoogr. Gbte`uke A dgbb tem smd`hc `hm tem
h`uh
krgoogr, wm stabb
hmmc g vmrn t` oglm g smhtmhdm,
nut
teas vmrn just ahtr`cudms tem h`uh pergsm.
M 7. \T`omteahk_ vmrn gcvmrn ...
9
-
W . .. `r ..
8
>g. \T`omteahk_ egs/se`ws/mxpmramhdms g gcjmdtavm h`uh.
.. .
`r
. .
>n. Semrm s g gcjmdtavm h`uh h \s`omteahk_.
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Semsm krgoogrs, 7 ghc >, grm tem sgom ah omghahk ghc dgh nm deghkmc gr`uhc. F`r mxgopbm:
7. Sem pr`fat ahdrmgsms segrpby.
>g. Sem pr`fat se`ws g segrp ahdrmgsm.
... `r ...
>n. Semrm as g segrp ahdrmgsm h tem pr`fat.
Krgoogr >g ogy `ftmh nm nmttmr tegh >n nmdgusm >g puts tem sunjmdt nmf`rm tem trmhc, gbb`wahk
us
t`
f`bb`w Sap
1
Ygrt Sw , Eaht
3.
Tahdm wm lh`w tegt wm se`ubc vgry tem krgoogr, temh gftmr usahk tem vmrn krgoogr f`r `hm `r
tw` smhtmhdms, tem hmxt smhtmhdm d`ubc usm tem h`uh krgoogr, nut temy mgde egvm temar `wh usm
`f prmp`sata`hs. ^mgc `h.
Ygrt Sw` Yrmp`sata`hs
Yrmp`sata`hs dgh nm caffadubt. S` rmomonmr e`w t` usm temo d`rrmdtby, f`bb`w temsm f`ur rubm
s.
Semy cmgb wate gbb tem prmp`sata`hs tegt y`u wabb hmmc
t`
usm.
^ubm
Gftmr n`te Krgoogr 7 (vmrns/vmrn pergsms) ghc Krgoogr > (h`uhs/h`uh pergsms), y`u dgh usm:
fr`o (stgrt p`aht)
t`
(mhcahk p`aht) .
Sem pr`fat r`sm
r`o
33
t`
6= .
Sem pr`fat se`wmc g rasm
r`o
33
t`
6= .
@ftmh tem prmp`sata`h fr`o
as
h`t wrattmh, bmgvahk just tem prmp`sata`h
t` .
F`r mxgopbm:
\Saom ^mfmrmhdm_, tem pr`fat stgrtmc
t
=9 . \Saom Ymra`c_, at r`sm
t`
6= , temh \Saom
Ymra`c_ fmbb t` >= .
^ubm
Gftmr gbb vmrns `f deghkm, y`u dgh usm
ny
(fakurm) . Emrm tem fakurm se`ws tem go`uht
`f
deghkm.
Vmrn
r`sm
Sem pr`fat
fmbb
y (fakurm) \?go`uht_
7
krmw
M
9
u
....
W.J
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^momonmr teas ny teahlahk
ny
tegt oude wate tem eghc kmsturm se`wh.
^ubm
Gbo`st gbb h`uhs/h`uh pergsms dgh nm f`bb`wmc ny
`f
(fakurm) . Emrm, tem
`f
(fakurm) pergsm
gdts ah tem sgom wgy gs gh gcjmdtavm - tegt as, at as gcjmdtavgb. F`r mxgopbm, ahstmgc
`f
sgyahk
\Gcjmdtavm_ + \H`uh_ , gs ah Jgpghmsm pr`cudt , nmgutafub w`ogh , `r ahtmbbakmht ogh , wm dgh
sgy pr`cudt `f
Jgpgh ,
w`ogh `f
nmguty ,
`r
ogh
`f
ahtmbbakmhdm
rmspmdtavmby. Taoabgrby, ah
`ur ghswmr,
g 4=-c`bbgr
ahdrmgsm nmd`oms gh ahdrmgsm
`f4= (c`bbgrs) ,=99-uhat
b`w p`aht
nmd`oms g b`w p`aht
`f>,=99 (uhats) .
Sem fakurm as, b`kadgbby, matemr gh go`uht
`f
deghkm (wemh
usmc wate g deghkm h`uh) `r g bmvmb (wemh usmc wate g p`aht `h tem krgpe).
`uh
Sem pr`fat se`wmc g
rasm
cmdrmgsm
kr`wte
`
fakurm)
\weade b`kadgbby oust
b
m h
go`uht_
j
` fakurm)
\weade b`kadgbby
oust nm g bmvmb_
PPPP
em pr`fat wmht t`
g pmgl
g b`w p`aht
tem eakemst p`aht
m
dgh usm `temr gcjmdtavgb pergsms wate lmy h`uhs, f`bb`wahk tem o`cmb \h`uh_
`f\h`uh_ .
F`r
mxgopbm:
Semrm wgs g
`uh
`hm-ymgr pmra`c
rasm
cmdgcm
`
`uh
ah )stgnabaty
s`om sakhafadghdm
fbudtugta`hs
A
Seas rubm as h`t gbwgys f`bb`wmc f`r g h`uh/h`uh pergsm
ahtr`cudahk
tem Q gxas. Ah teas dgsm, tem
A prmp`sata`h
ah as
`ftmh nmttmr. F`r mxgopbm,
Sem krgpe caspbgys tem kr`wte ah tem huonmr ` o`nabm pe`hm usmrs.
Sem ngr degrt rmvmgbs tem deghkm
ah
tem pr`fat ` termm f``tngbb dbuns.
Sem prmp`sata`h
`f dgh
nm usmc emrm, nut s`uhcs bmss hgturgb.
^ubm 3
[emh tem vmrns usmc grm h`t gn`ut `vmrgbb deghkm, wm rmfmr
t`
tem bmvmbs usahk tem prmp`sata`h gt .
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Sem pr`fat stgrtmc
3= uhats.
At rmogahmc bmvmb
gn`ut 69.
Sem huonmr pmglmc t 51.
em fakurm fbudtugtmc gr`uhc =9.
Sem pr`fat fahasemc 39.
^momonmr ^ubm A, ghc usm t` (h`t gt ) wemh tem vmrn s gn`ut `vmrgbb deghkm, gs ah Sem pr`fat
r`sm
t`
;6 ghc temh fmbb
t`
39. Gs ^ubm A mxpbgahm
c,
teas as gdtugbby g
fr`o ... t` ...
strudturm
wate`ut tem fr`o pgrt. Sem vmrn fbudtugtm ahv`bvms deghkm, nut h`t `vmrgbb deghkm, s` at, t``,
f`bb`ws ^ubm
3.
Mxmrdasm 4
Ny d`opgrahk tem smhtmhdms 7 t` A, > t` >, ghc s` `h) ghc deghkahk tem krgoogr, d`opbmtm tem
spgdms ah tem f`bb`wahk tgnbms. Sem ghswmrs grm ah Gppmhcax
6.
Vmrn
rgoogr
Vmrn
7
ahdrmgsms
\Q_
>
4.
rasms
Sem huonmr
3
= gsdmhcs
Sem fakurm
6.
\ghy
`f
tem gn`vm
;.
Sem go`uht
5.
1.
cmdrmgsms
79.
At
77
cr`ps
7>.
cvmrn
rgpacby
o`cmrgtmby
f`bc
stmmpby
sunstghtagbby
krgcugbby
sbaketby
69
59/
>9
>99= >979
\Saom pmra`c `ftmh
nmst put farst_
M
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H`uh Krgoogr
Gcjmdtavm
H`uh
Semrm as
7 crgogtad
>
kr`wte
\Saom
smms
7
4. segrp
pmra`c_
wathmssms
7
3.
dbaon
\Q_
=.
ogrkahgb
\ghy `f tem gn`vm
]hats
g b
6.
f`bc
7
:6 A
N@
avm h`uhs_
egs
>
A
;.
se`ws
fgbb
5.
>9
uhcmrk`ms
1. stmgcy
>979
mxpmramhdms
A
79.
cmsdmht
77 .
sb`w
7> .
cmdbahm
7
Semsm dghh`t
nm
usmc wate taom pmra`cs cmfahmc wate g prmp`sata`h
Fr`o ...
t`
.. .
`r
h
7159',
weade oust ahstmgc nm f`bb`wmc ny g d`oog, temh g dbgusm \Tunjmdt + Vmrn_ . F`r mxgopbm,
' 7159 t` 7119 sgw g stmgcy kr`wte' nut Fr`o 7159 t` 7119, temrm wgs g stmgcy kr`wte.'
>
Seas as nmst usmc wate \Qs_ weade dgh se`w p`ssmssa`h - f`r mxgopbm, d`uhtrams ('Jgpgh') ghc
`rkghasgta`hs ('Deuhly De`d`bgtm ' ), rgtemr tegh d`hdmpts ('huonmr ', 'pr`fat', ghc `temrs).
Ygrt Sermm
Krgpe
Fmgturms
Krgpe bahms egvm oghy spmdafad fmgturms, ghc y`u hmmc t` lh`w tem w`rcs t` cmsdranm temo. Semy
dgh rasm t` pmgls, fgbb t` b`w p`ahts, fbudtugtm, ghc rmogah stgnbm. Sry tem hmxt mxmrdasm.
7
Mxmrdasm 3
Demdl tegt y`u lh`w temsm krgpe fmgturms gs wmbb gs `ur tw` krgoogrs ny fabbahk tem kgps
(wate Krgoogr 7 \vmrn_ ghc > \h`uh_ se`wh ny ' 7 ghc
> )
. Sem ghswmrs grm se`wh ah
Gppmhcax ;
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/ , /-77tR ::
A
.
,....
R Sem
7
sgbms
R...... / RR
(v)
dgg r
a v`
uom
..
>
At
' .
a
( t
8 ............ g/R(t ,
: ...
Sem
v.........
gxas
(
At
-... . 7 . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . .
94 93 9= 96 9; .............
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h`w fakurm as,
`f
d`ursm, ah Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm, ghc tem futurm hmmcs prmcadtavm bghkugkm. Ah
tem ahtr`cudta`h, teas futurm dgh nm rmfmrrmc t`
gs
g pr`jmdta`h/f`rmdgst/mstaogta`h `r tem hmxt
ymgrs
^mprmsmhtahk gbb teas `h g krgpe kavms:
Sem Y`pubgta`h ` [gbkmtt
@@@s)
~
:
Ygst Taopbm Yrms Ymrf Futurm Yrmcadtavm
Sem huonmr ... fmbb.
@temr mxgopbms grm:
Fr`o >999 t` >99= tem huonmr fmbb99= temrm
wgs
g supmrogrlmt99= t`
h`w
- sahdm tegt taom at egs rasmh.
-
ah
tem bgst pmra`c
- tem fakurm fahasems gt 49 uhats.
- at egs sahdm nmmh rmpbgdmc wate gpgrtomhts .
- gpgrtomhts
egvm nmmh
nuabt
`h
tegt satm .
- gpgrtomhts
h`w stghc ah
ats pbgdm.
Sem hmxt qumsta`h as weade tmhsm wm se`ubc usm f`r g krgpe tem taom gxas `f weade as ah tem pgst
(f`r mxgopbm, >99= t` >979). T`om AMBST n``ls wabb sgy y`u oust usm pgst tmhsm < e`wmvmr
temsm n``ls grm nmahk sgfm , cmdacahk h`t t` teahl gn`ut stybm Bmt us b``l gt gh mxgopbm `f n`te
tmhsms: Yrmsmht Taopbm ghc Ygst Taopbm.
]sahk tem vmrn krgoogr:
Fr`o >99= t >979 tem sgbms v`buom ahdrmgsms AA ahdrmgsmc segrpby
. . . `r tem h`uh krgoogr:
Fr`o >99= t >979 tem sgbms v`buom se`ws
AA
se`wmc g segrp ahdrmgsm.
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Emrm, tem usm `f Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm cmsdranms tem krgpe gs wm f`bb`w at raket h`w saoabgr t` tem
'sp`rts d`oomhtgt`r' usm wemh cmsdranahk g f``tngbb ogtde. Ah `temr w`rcs, tem tmhsm as o`rm g
ogttmr
`f
`ur gttatucm t` tem krgpe (ghc h`t s`omteahk cmdacmc ny krgoogr n``ls). Ygst Taopbm
tmhsm dgh kavm f`rogbaty< Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm dgh kavm aoomcagdy< e`wmvmr, nmahk stucmhts
`f
Mhkbase, y`u oaket cmdacm at as saopbmr ghc sgfmr t` wratm gbb pgst taom gxms ah pgst tmhsm.
Sem o`rm aop`rtght p`aht as t` nm d`hsastmht ah tem usm
`f
tmhsms. Ah `temr w`rcs, af wm usm pgst
saopbm tmhsm t` cmsdranm `hm
pgrt `f
tem krgpe bahm, temh
wm
se`ubc d`htahum wate tegt tmhsm
f`r tem rmst `f tegt bahm. Oglm surm y`u c` lh`w tem d`rrmdt pgst tmhsm f`ros (V>) ghc tem pgst
pgrtadapbms (V4) `f tem
krgpe
vmrns. T`om `f temo grm arrmkubgr. Fabb ah tem f`bb`wahk tgnbm f`r
rmv7s79h
Ngsm F`ro Ygst F`ro Ygst Ygrtadapbm Ygst F`ro Ygst Ygrtadapbm
V7) V>) V4) V>) V4)
ahdrmgsm
cmdrmgsm
kr`w cr`p
rasm fgbb
dbaon cmdbahm
gsdmhc cmsdmhc
Semrm dgh stabb nm g oaxturm `f tmhsms ah `ur ghswmr. F`r mxgopbm, af wm grm usahk Ygst Taopbm,
wm d`ubc stabb usm Yrmsmht Taopbm f`r ahtr`cudta`hs `r t`pad smhtmhdms \ Sem krgpe se`ws ...
,
'Kmmb`hk egs g caffmrmht trmhc', `r ' ... weade as aoprmssavm d`opgrmc t` '_.
H`w, at as p`ssanbm t` oax g battbm Ygst Taopbm hgrrgtavm tmhsm wate tem Yrmsmht Taopbm
sp`rts
d`oomhtgt`r' usm, sude gs
Tahdm
d`gb r`sm t` sude g c`oahght p`sata`h, temrm as g cmdrmgsm ah
o`st `temr pr`cudts' . E`wmvmr, teas nmd`oms g 'stybastad' assum, ghc gs g stucmht
`f
Mhkbase, y`u
se`ubc pmregps f`bb`w tem rubm
`f
usahk d`hsastmht tmhsms.
Tahdm wm se`ubc try t` usm ogturm krgoogr, g vmry k``c acmg as t` usm tem Ygst Ymrfmdt tmhsm ah g
smhtmhdm, weade as vmry `ftmh p`ssanbm. [m dgh usm teas tmhsm ny f`bb`wahk tem o`cmb:
h \pgst taom rmfmrmhdm), at wgs \fakurm_.
Ny g bgtmr pgst taom rmfmrmhdm_, at e c \V4_ t` \fakurm_.
F`r mxgopbm:
9
u
W
h
711=, tem sgbms v`buom wgs 39 ,
nu
t
ny
>99=, at e c rasmh t` =1 .
..
Seas krgoogr strudturm as k``c sahdm Ygst Ymrfmdt as gh uhd`oo`h ghc caffadubt tmhsm. f wm grm d
cmsdranahk tem krgpe ah Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm, tem o`cmb seafts `hm tmhsm f`rwgrc'. F`r mxgopbm:
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h
Juby, tem rgahfgbb as 39, nut yGukust, at e s rasmh t` =1 .
b
tucy e`w temsm tmhsms grm usmc ah mvmry sgopbm ghswmr kavmh ah tem gppmhcadms ` teas n``l.
Ygrt Favm: ^mbgtavm Dbgusms
Ttrgaket aht` gh mxmrdasm. J
Mxmrdasm 6
D`onahm tem f`bb`wahk pgars
`
smhtmhdms (usahk rmbgtavm dbgusms).
D`onahahk temsm pgars ` smhtmhdms usahk rmbgtavm dbgusms kavms tem so``te ghc wmbb-wrattmh tmxt:
H`tadm tegt tem mxtrg pgrts (uhcmrbahmc) grm smpgrgtmc fr`o tem ogah pgrts usahk d`oogs. Gs g
kmhmrgb rub
m
y`u wabb gbo`st
bw ys
hmmc d`oogs f`r y`ur rmbgtavm dbgusms
ah
[ratahk Sgsl @hm.
Seas
as
`hby g nramf ahtr`cudta`h
t`
tem sunjmdt.
Q`u
hmmc t`
c`
g krmgt cmgb o`rm krgoogr stucy
ghc prgdtadm, nut wm
wabb
b``l gt rmbgtavm dbgusms ah o`rm cmtgab ah Sap
74.
Ygrt
Tax
rgoogr `f D`opgras`h
Q`u
hmmc
t`
oglm d`opgras`hs ah Sgsl @hm sahdm tem tgsl ahstrudta`hs spmdafadgbby gsl f`r teas.
Emrm grm s`om krgoogr pgttmrhs tegt y`u d`ubc usm.
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Kmhmrgb D`opgras`hs
sbaketby
ogrkahgbby
s`omwegt
\G_
as
krmgtmr
castahdtby
fakurm
eakemr
sakhafadghtby
Sem huonmr
`f
\G_
as
sogbbmr
go`uht
sunstghtagbby
bmss
oude
vmry oude
fgr
Tpmdafad D`opgras`hs [ate Eakemr Go`uhts
\ _
as
fakurm
Sem huonmr
`f \ _
as
go`uht
o`rm tegh
`vmr
tw`
termm
f`ur
favm
\ghc s` `h_
Tpmdafad D`opgras`hs [ate B`wmr Go`uhts
egbf
\ J as
just qugrtmr
fakurm
`hby
`hm fafte
Sem
huonmr
`f
\ J
as
omrmby
saxte
go`uht
bmss tegh
\ghc s` `h_
\spmdafad frgdta`h_
T`om mxgopbm smhtmhdms grm:
tegh
eakemr)
taoms
o`rm) tegh)
-f`bc
krmgtmr)
`f \G_.
tegt * `f \G_ .
\NJ
tegt
`f \NJ
*
usmc t` gv`ac
rmpmgtahk
pgrts ` tem
h`uh pergsm
`
\G_
*
usmc t` gv`ac rmpmgtahk pgrts
` tem h`uh pergsm ` \N_
Gt tem nmkahhahk, H`nbm Ygrl as sbaketby eakemr tegh tem `temrs.
f
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W
8
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Gt tem mhc `f tem ymgr, tem pr`fat `f Cghcmh`hk
as
gn`ut hahm taoms tegt `f H`nbm Ygrl.
Kmmb`hk's pr`fat
as
`hby tw`-tearcs tem go`uht `f Cghcmh`hk.
Oahahk as bmss tegh g egbf tem fakurm `f gkradubturm.
Ygrt Tmvmh Ygrtadapagb Yergsms
Semsm grm db`smby rmbgtmc t` rmbgtavm dbgusms ghc k``c d`opbmx strudturms , ghc tem d`hdmpt dgh
`ftmh nm usmc ah [ratahk Sgsl @hm. Seus, at as w`rte tryahk
t`
usm temsm. D`hsacmr tem smhtmhdms:
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Sem pr`fat sghl t` 69, ghc at rmogahmc gt tegt bmvmb f`r tem hmxt f`ur ymgrs.
>. Sem fakurm rasms t` 799. At se`ws h` c`whturhs gt gbb.
4
At as
ny fgr tem eakemst p`aht. At
as
6; .
Ah tem farst smhtmhdm, temsm tw` ahdacmhts ( sahlahk t` 69 ghc rmogahahk gt tegt bmvmb ) egppmh
`hm gftmr tem `temr t` tem sgom sunjmdt. Ah tem rmst
`f
tem smhtmhdms, tem tw` ahdacmhts egppmh gt
tem sgom taom, ghc gbs` t tem sgom sunjmdt. [emh tw` `ddurrmhdms egppmh `hm gftmr tem `temr
wate tem smd`hc f`roahk p rt `f tem farst, `r nmahk g rmsubt `f tem farst, `r egppmhahk gt tem sgom
taom, tem smhtmhdm(s) dgh nm o`rm so``teby wrattmh usahk tem prmsmht pgrtadapbm ( ahk f`ro)
t`
rmpbgdm `hm
`f
tem dbgusms /smhtmhdms. Tahdm teas ahk f`ro as h` b`hkmr g dbgusm/smhtmhdm (teus
nmahk g
pergsm),
teas krgoogr strudturm dgh nm dgbbmc g
prmsmht pgrtadapagb pergsm.
At
usugbby
f`b b`ws tem o`cmb:
Tunjmdt Vmrn + @njmdt, \Vmrn_ahk ...
... k7vok:
7
Sem pr`fat sghl t` 69, rmogahahk gt tegt bmvmb f`r tem hmxt f`ur ymgrs.
>. Sem fakurm rasms t` 799, se`wahk h` c`whturhs gt gbb.
4. At
as
ny fgr tem eakemst p`aht,
nmahk
6; .
Sem ghswmr t` Mxmrdasm >6 usms teas smd`hc smhtmhdm, t`kmtemr wate rmbgtavm dbgusms. Seas as g
k``c krgoogr strudturm, nut
af
temrm grm taom pmra`cs wate tem pgrtadapagb pergsm (tem smd`hc
pgrt), y`u dghh`t gbwgys usm tem (TY)QS rubm emrm \Sap
1
Ygrt Sw`, Eaht 3_ sahdm at as gwlwgrc
t` nrmgl up tem pgrtadapagb pergsm. Sem taom pmra`c as usugbby nmttmr
gt tem mhc
`f tem smhtmhdm.
Seus
7. Sem pr`fat r`sm t` 69, f`r tem hmxt f`ur ym rs rmogahahk gt tegt bmvmb.
... c`ms h`t s`uhc
gs
hgturgb
gs
wemh puttahk tem taom pmra`c gt tem mhc
`f
tem smhtmhdm. Sem taom
pmra`c, e`wmvmr, dgh nm put aht` tem dbgusm tem.farst pgrt).
Sem pr`fat rmogahmc d`hstght f`r termm ymgrs, fgbbahk `hby gt tem mhc.
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@hm fahgb assum as tegt y`u dgh wratm ahvmrtmc pgrtadapagb pergsms f`r o`rm stybm ghc `rakahgbaty,
nut `hby af tem tw` fgdts `ddur gt tem sgom taom `r tem ahk pergsm kavms tem rmgs`h f`r tem dbgusm
weade f`bb`ws (ah weade dgsm, at as `ftmh o`rm hgturgbby pbgdmc farst). F`r mxgopbm:
>.
Te`wahk
h`
c`whturhs
gt
gbb, tem fakurm rasms t` 799.
4.
mahk
6; , at as
ny
fgr
tem
eakemst p`aht.
^mgs`h)
...
s`
... (^msubt)
S`
rmpmgt, [ratahk Sgsl @hm `ftmh ahv`bvms cmsdranahk tem rmbgtmc `ddurrmhdms tegt egppmh t` tem
sgom sunjmdt, omghahk tegt pgrtadapagb pergsms dgh `ftmh nm usmc.
xmrdasm
;
Ygrt
@hm
Ah tem f`bb`wahk smhtmhdms, tw` fgdts /mvmhts/gdta`hs rmbgtm t` tem sgom sunjmdt. Seus , tem
smhtmhdms dgh nm nmttmr wrattmh usahk pgrtadapagb pergsms. Sry teas, temh d`opgrm y`ur ghswmrs t`
te`sm ah Gppmhcax ; [eade smhtmhdms dgh nm ahvmrtmc0
7
>.
4.
3.
=
6.
;
5.
1
79.
Ygrt Sw`
Sem
huonmr
cr`ppmc
stmgcaby,
ghc
at_
fahasemc
gt
=9.
Sem pr`fat r`sm quadlby, ghc temh rmgdemc ats eakemst p`aht.
At
fmbb t` 79, ghc
teus
b`st
tem
eakemst pbgdm.
Sem go`uht
se`ws gh ahdrmgsm, ghc
\at_
pmgls
gt
gn`ut 69.
Sem fakurm
rasms
`vmr tem we`bm
pmra`c, ghc
at_ mxpmramhdms
h`
c`whturhs gt
gbb.
At
r`sm, ghc stgrtmc
gt
4; ah 7119.
At
fahasemc
gt
59.
Seas
c`oahgtms
mxp`rts.
At
as
`vmr egbf
`f
tem
t`tgb go`uht.
T[
gdeamvms
battbm.
At
as
tem b`wmst
ah n`te ymgrs.
Seas fakurm rasms
quadlby
t` 59. At nmd`oms tem eakemst.
Sem pmrdmhtgkm
as
omrmby
73.
At
as
teus
tem b`wmst.
H`w b``l gt `ur f``tngbb dbuns ghswmr. [m egvm tglmh `ut oude `f tem rmpmtata`h `f w`rcs ghc
krgoogr, nut wm dgh c` teas mvmh o`rm ghc gbs` d`rrmdt tem rmogahahk mrr`rs ah krgoogr ghc
tmhsm.
M
9
u
+-
(J)
8
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7. Ahtr`cudm o`rm krgoogtadgb vgramty ny deghkahk tem at badasmc vmrn krgoogr aht` h`uh
krgoogr, ghc tem
r : a j ~ ~ b ~ f _ f 0 ~
dbgusms aht` pgrtadapagb pergsms.
>. Taoabgrby, nmkah gccahk rmbgtavm dbgusms `r pgrtadapagb pergsms, d`onahahk tem bgst
smhtmhdm ah tem f`rmst-vamw wate tem prmva`us smhtmhdm.
4. Oglm tem tmhsms d`hsastmht, deghkahk tem `bc vmrns aht` Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm (`r
rmo`vahk tem d`hjukgtmc tmhsm f`ro ter`uke g pgrtadapagb pergsm) .
Ah
tem H`nbm Ygrl
trmm-pgrgkrgpe, wm dgh gdtugbby d`onahm tem tw` smhtmhdms.
3. F`bb`wahk `ur (TY)QS rubm, put tem uhcmrbahmc taom pmra`cs farst \Tmm Sap 1 Ygrt Sw`,
Eaht 3_.
Sem aopr`vmc vmrsa`h
as
se`wh gt tem nmkahhahk ` tem hmxt tap