7/25/2019 ielts example answer task 2

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Trafc jam and pollution, which is produced by vehicles, are one o the most

serious problem we are acing these days. it is admittedly that vehichle are

giving so many advantages or us to ace our daily activity more eective

and efcient. at the same time, they are also gives us several disadvantages

which cannot be denied. related to the case, we are acing trafc jam and

pollution. it is commonly known that pollution could aect citizen healthy. i

citizen healty were decreased, it is also reducing our daily quality. regarding

to some suggestion, rising the price o petrol might be pushing people to

uses vehicles less than usual, because the possibility to aord the petrol

would be decrease. however, increasing the cost o petrol might also

inuenced the other price which are important too. !n !ndonesia, or instance,

the increasing price o petrol were ollowed by any other rising price o

things, such as the high price o ood, and the e"pensive cost o public

transportation, which is might be also an alternative to solve this problem.

#overnment should encourage citizens to uses public transportasion, withthat way, it could be decrease the total amount o vehicle in the roads, with

hopes, also could declined the trafc jam potention. urthermore, the

quantity o vehicle uses could be pressed by increasing the ta" o vehicles. !n

some developed country, it is also known that public transportation are the

$rst choice rather than private vehicles, because the ta" o vehicles are

e"pensive enough. so, the citizen preer to use public transportation. in sum,

the trafc jam and pollution problems are solved.