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Inthisonlineclass,youandIwillwork1-on-1toperfectyourwritingabilitiesfor

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questions,10sampleGeneralTask1questionsand20sampleAcademicorGeneral

Task2questions.Youwillchooseanyofthesequestionstorespondto,writeyour

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Task1Questions(Academic)Question1ThefollowingtablefromStatisticsUKmakesclearinternetusagedemographicsintheUnitedKingdom.Writeabriefreportdescribingthetrends.

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Question2ThefollowingchartsoutlineconsumptiondifferencesbetweenmenandwomensurroundingValentinesDay-relatedpurchases.Writeabriefreportofatleast150wordsdescribingtheinformationdepictedhere.

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Question3ThefollowingchartsdepictthetypicalAmericandietin1990and2005.Writeareportforauniversitylecturersummarizingtheinformationpresented.

1990

2005

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Question4ThispiechartoutlinesconsumptionintheUSAfortheyear1999.Writeabriefingtooutlinetheinformationpresentedhere.

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Question5Thetwochartsshowchangesinthenumberofmotorvehicleaccidentsinselectedcountriesbetween1997and2000,andtherateofdeathsinmotorvehicleaccidentsforthosecountries.

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Question6ThebelowchartillustratesmarriageanddivorceratesintheUKduringthelatterpartofthetwentiethcentury.Composeanarticleinatleast150wordsoutliningthetrendsdepictedhere.

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Question7BelowisasummaryoftrainusageintheLondonUnderground.Summarizetheinformationpresentedforauniversitylecturer.

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Question8Write150wordsillustratingtheinformationpresentedinthetablebelow.

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Question9ThischartillustratesNorthAmericanfishingstatisticsforthefourthquarterofthetwentiethcentury.Summarizetheinformationpresented.

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Question10Summarizetheinformationpresentedbelow.

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Task1Questions(General)Question1Youhavehadabankaccountforafewyears.Recentlyyoureceivedaletterfromthebankstatingthatyouraccountis$240overdrawnandthatyouwillbecharged$70

whichwillbetakendirectlyfromyouraccount.Youknowthisinformationisincorrect.Writealettertothebank.Explainwhathashappenedandsaywhatyouwouldlikethemtodoaboutit.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

YoudoNOTneedtowriteyourownaddress.Beginyourletterasfollows:

DearSir,

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Question2Youhavewonagrantfromthegovernmententitlingyoutoreceive$40,000tohelpfundascienceprojectyouhavebeenworkingonwithasmallteam.Thismoneyiskeytothesuccessoftheproject.Mrs.TraceyPolin,agovernmentexecutiveworkingintheScienceandResearchdepartmentofyourcountrysgovernment,wasinstrumentalin

helpingyourteamreceivethismoney.Writealetterthankingherforhereffortsonyourbehalf.Writeatleast150words.

YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.

Beginyourletterasfollows:

Dear.......................,

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Question3Youhavereceivednoticethatyourapplicationforapositionwithacompanyinyourcityhasbeenrejected.Thereasonforthisrejectionisnotentirelyclear.Themajorrequirementslistedforthepositioninclude:

havingadegreeinComputerScience havinghadatleast2yearsofexperienceworkingatahigh-techfirm beingmobileandabletotravelaspartoftheposition

Youfulfillallthreerequirementsandfeelyouwerebyfarthebestcandidatefortheposition.Writealetteraskingforclarificationonthecompanysdecision.Writeatleast150words.

YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.

Beginyourletterasfollows:

Dear.......................,

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Question4Your-haveafull-timejobandarealsodoingapart-timeeveningcourse.Youarefindingitincreasinglydifficulttocontinuebothcommitmentsandhavethusdecidedtodroptheeveningcourse.Youhaveonlycompleted4weeksofthe18weeksrequiredforthecourse.

Writealettertothedirectorofthecourseexplainingyourdecisiontostop.Inyourletterinclude:

adescriptionofthesituation anapologyforaskingforearlyexitofthecourse apoliteinquiryintowhetherpartialrefundofthecoursefeeis

possibleWriteatleast150words.

YoudoNOTneedtowriteyouraddress.

Beginyourletterasfollows:

Dear.................,

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Question5Yourcityhasstartedanewprogramtohelpmodernizethecity.Aspartofthisprogram,officialsareaskingthegeneralpublictosubmitsuggestionsoutliningareasthecitycanimprove.Writeapolitelettersuggestingthecityenforceanewlawrestrictingdriversfromhonkingtheirhornsafter8pm.Youshouldalsothankthe

officialsfortheirproactiveeffortinreceivingfeedbackfromcitizensofthecityregardingwhatneedstobeimproved.Writeatleast150words.

YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.

Beginyourletterasfollows:

Dear.......................,

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Question6Youhavepaidforanitemtobeshippedfromaforeign,English-speakingcountry.Thedeliveryarrived4weekslateandwassupposedtoincludeahandbookdescribinghowtoassembletheproductbutthisismissing.Tomakemattersworse,onekeycomponentoftheitemisdamaged(partno.A305).Writealetterofcomplaint

outliningtheeissuesandsuggestinghowthissituationcanberectified.Writeatleast150words.

YoudoNOTneedtowriteyouraddress.

Beginyourletterasfollows:

Dear.................,

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Question7Yourentahousethroughanagency.Theheatingsystemhasstoppedworking.Youphonedtheagencyaweekagobutithasstillnotbeenrepaired.Writealettertotheagency.Inyourletter

1.introduceyourself2.explainthesituation3.saywhatactionyouwouldliketheagencytotakeWriteatleast150words.

YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.

Beginyourletterasfollows:

Dear.......................,

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Question8YouhaverecentlywatchedanewprogrammeonTV.YouliketheprogrammebuthavejustdiscoveredthattheTVstationhasmovedittoalatertime,whenyoureunabletowatchit.WritealettertotheTVstation.Inyourletter:

Describewhyyouliketheprogramme Explainwhyyoubelieveitshouldnotbeonatalatertime SaywhatactionyouwouldliketheTVstationtotake

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.

Startyourletterasfollows:

DearSir,

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Question9Yournewroommateisnotdoinghischores.Writealettertohimcomplainingaboutthissituation.Inyourletter:

Describehismessinessandpoorhygiene Complainabouthislackofconsideration Saywhatactionyouwouldlikehimtotake

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.

Startyourletterasfollows:

DearSir,

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Question10Youlostyourwalletonthetrain.Noonehasfoundityet.Writealettertothestationmasterofthelocaltrainstation.Inyourletter:

Describeyourwalletandwhatwasinit Requestinformationabouttheirlostandfoundservice Saywhatotheractionyouwouldlikethestationmastertotake

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.

Startyourletterasfollows:

DearSir,

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Task2Questions(AcademicandGeneral)Question1-Theageofinformationtechnologyhastakenalotofpeoplebysurprise.Whileithasbecomeawayoflifeforsome,othersknowverylittleaboutit.Eventuallywewillhaveapolarisedsocietyandthiswillleadtoserioussocialproblems.Forman

opinionbasedontheinfoaboveandwriteawell-reasonedessay.Question2-TheexpressionNever,nevergiveupmeanstokeeptryingandneverstopworkingforyourgoals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.Question3-Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Withthehelpoftechnology,studentnowadayscanlearnmoreinformationandlearnitmorequickly.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Question4-Awardsandprizesaregivenforexcellenceinvariousfields.Dothese

awardsandprizesserveausefulpurpose?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Question5-Somepeoplethinkthathumanneedsforfarmland,housing,andindustryaremoreimportantthatsavinglandforendangeredanimals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththispointofview?Whyorwhynot?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Question6-Whatisaveryimportantskillapersonshouldlearninordertobesuccessfulintheworldtoday?Chooseoneskillandusespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourchoice.

Question7-Resolvingproblemsbetweenindividualsorgroupsisimportant.Whatshouldbeconsideredorkeptinmindinresolvingproblemsbetweenindividualsorgroups?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Question8-Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Self-confidenceisthemostimportantfactorforsuccessinschooloratwork.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.

Question9-Whydoyouthinksomepeopleareattractedtodangeroussportsorotherdangerousactivities?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportouranswer.Question10-Whichismoreimportantforsuccess:thenaturalabilityyouarebornwithorhardwork?Explainyouropinion,usingspecificreasonsandexamples.

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11-Somepeopleprefertogetupearlyinthemorningandstartthedayswork.Othersprefertogetuplaterinthedayandworkuntillateatnight.Whichdoyouprefer?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourchoice.

12-Whataretheimportantqualitiesofagoodsonordaughter?Havethesequalities

changedorremainedthesameovertimeinyourculture?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.13-Somepeopleprefertoworkforalargecompany.Othersprefertoworkforasmallcompany.Whichwouldyouprefer?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyourchoice.

14-Peopleworkbecausetheyneedmoneytolive.Whataresomeotherreasonsthatpeoplework?Discussoneormoreofthesereasons.Usespecificexamplesanddetailstosupportyouranswer.

15-Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Face-to-facecommunicationisbetterthanothertypesofcommunication,suchasletters,email,ortelephonecalls.Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer.16-Somepeopleliketodoonlywhattheyalreadydowell.Otherpeopleprefertotrynewthingsandtakerisks.Whichdoyouprefer?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourchoice.17-Somepeoplebelievethatsuccessinlifecomesfromtakingriskorchance.Othersbelievethatsuccessresultsfromcarefulplanning.Inyouropinion,whatdoessuccesscomefrom?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

18-Whatchangewouldmakeyourhometownmoreappealingtopeopleyourage?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.19-Peopleattendcollegeoruniversityformanydifferentreasons(forexample,newexperiences,careerpreparation,increasedknowledge).Whydoyouthinkpeopleattendcollegeoruniversity?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.20-Nowadays,foodhasbecomeeasiertoprepare.Hasthischangeimprovedthewaypeoplelive?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.