Great Sentences for Great Paragraphs

Review for ExamDecember 24, 2013

Sentence or Fragment?

1. Is dark yellow and green.2. Ellen is a smart woman.3. Country is my favorite type of music.4. Every day at 5 o'clock.5. She my friend.6. Your room big?7. I like pineapples.

The following sentences make up a paragraph. Put the sentences in the correct order by filling in each blank with a number (1 through 7)

Whale Watching in the San Juan Islands____The Orca whales travel to these islands every summer.____Orcas also go to there for protection. The channels near the islands offer more protection to the whales than the open sea.____In fact, many visitors travel to the San Juan Islands each summer to go on boat tours to see Orca whales closely. ____The San Juan Islands, which are located off the coast of Washington State, are a great place to go whale watching.____If you want to go whale watching, you now know a wonderful place to go.____A final cause is instinct. The whales' natural instinct to migrate twice a year creates a pattern that does not change.____They migrate there primarily for food. The waters near the San Juan Islands are full of salmon, which is a main food of the Orca.

Whale Watching in the San Juan Islands1. The San Juan Islands, which are located off the coast of

Washington State, are a great place to go whale watching.2. In fact, many visitors travel to the San Juan Islands each

summer to go on boat tours to see Orca whales closely. 3. The Orca whales travel to these islands every summer.4. They migrate there primarily for food. The waters near the San

Juan Islands are full of salmon, which is a main food of the Orca.

5. Orcas also go to there for protection. The channels near the islands offer more protection to the whales than the open sea.

6. A final cause is instinct. The whales' natural instinct to migrate twice a year creates a pattern that does not change.

7. If you want to go whale watching, you now know a wonderful place to go.

Staying Healthy___Doctors say that one hour of moderate exercise each day can keep you in good shape.___First, think about the food you eat.___It is easy to stay healthy if you follow some simple steps.___You can follow these steps to help yourself stay healthy.___The best types of food are fruits and vegetables.___In addition, exercise is good for the body and mind.___Finally, relaxation is very important.___It is important to eat lots of them every day.___Next, consider some exercise.

Staying Healthy

1. It is easy to stay healthy if you follow some simple steps.

2. First, think about the food you eat.3. The best types of food are fruits and vegetables.4. It is important to eat lots of them every day.5. Next, consider some exercise.6. Doctors say that one hour of moderate exercise each

day can keep you in good shape.7. In addition, exercise is good for the body and mind.8. Finally, relaxation is very important.9. You can follow these steps to help yourself stay

healthy.

There are 10 mistakes: 5 missing verbs, 2 missing subjects, 2 capitalization and 1 punctuation mistake.

The Beauty of Tuscany

Tuscany a beautiful region in Italy. Is famous for cities such as florence, Siena and Pisa. The appenine Hills in Tuscany? Tuscany also famous for the production of beautiful ceramics. For example, bowls, vases and oil jars very popular with tourists. Tuscany has so many interesting places to see. Assisi and Siena two beautiful cities that many people love to visit. Is a wonderful place to visit!

There are 8 mistakes: 3 with adjectives, 3 missing verbs, 2 capitalization mistakes

Aspirin

aspirin is an incredible type of medicine. This small white pill is not a drug new. We do not know exactly why or how it works. However, millions of people use aspirin every day. we take aspirin for reasons many. Aspirin good for headaches, colds and pain. Aspirin can help with so many different health problems. Aspirin a medicine simple , but it great.