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    THEPARTSOFSPEECH:"Partsofspeech"isreallyjusttheterminologyweusetoidentifyaword'sFUNCTIONorROLEinasentence.

    Youhavetomemorizethetermsifyouhaveanyhopeofunderstandingthepartsofspeechandidentifyingtheminsentences.

    Doyouknowthepartsofspeech?

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    Understandinghowwordsinteractinasentencewillmakeyouabetter

    writer.

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    thing

    kindofboard

    linksboardwithawesometool

    describestool

    thingthatidentifiesboard

    wheretheboardisused

    actionaction

    place

    anidea

    identifieswhichboard

    Understandinghowwordsinteractinasentencewillmakeyouabetter

    writer.

    article

    noun article adjective verbadjectivenounverb

    prep. articlenoun verbnoun

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    Everyone

    Those

    Anybody

    Some

    This

    NoneFew

    Who

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    ActionVerbs

    HelpingVerbsAm Could ShaltIs Should WillAre WouldWas CanWere HasBeing HadBe HaveBeen Shall

    LinkingVerbsIsAreWasWereLookSeemBecame

    Link a subject with a

    description

    Help action verbs

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    Prepositions

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    ReviewingPartsofSpeechBreaktheSentenceDown...

    Lighttravelsfasterthansound.Thisiswhysomepeopleappearbrightuntilyouhearthemspeak.

    Weneverreallygrowupweonlylearnhowtoactinpublic.

    Knowledgeisknowingatomatoisafruit.Wisdomisnotputtingitinafruitsalad.

    Eveningnewsiswheretheybeginwith'GoodEvening,'andthenproceedtotellyouwhyitisn'tagoodevening.

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    ReviewingPartsofSpeech

    IthoughtIwantedanawesomecareer.ItturnsoutIjustwantedawesomepaychecks.

    WheneverIfilloutanapplication,inthepartthatsays,'Incaseofemergency,notify:'Iput'aDOCTOR.'

    You'renevertoooldtolearnsomethingstupid.

    Moneycan'tbuyhappiness,butitsuremakeslifebetterwhenyouaremiserable.

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    Reviewing Prepositions

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    ListofPrepositions:aboard about above across after against along

    alongside at besides except during down following

    amid amidst among amongst around as aside

    atop barring before behind below beneath beside

    between beyond but by circa concerning despitefor from in inside into like minus

    near next of off on onto opposite

    out outside over past per plus regarding

    save since than through throughout till times

    to toward towards under underneath unlike until up

    upon versus via with within without worth

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    Prepositions:

    Wejoggedacrossthefield.

    Thehousebytheschoolisvacant.

    Theteacherstrolledintotheclassroomafterlunch.

    Pull

    Pull

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    Asalesrep,anadministrationclerk,andthemanagerarewalkingtolunch

    whentheyfindanantiqueoillamp.TheyrubitandaGeniecomesout.

    TheGeniesays,IllgiveeachofyoujustonewishMefirst!Mefirst!

    saystheadministrationclerk.IwanttobeintheBahamas,drivinga

    speedboat,withoutacareintheworld.Poof!Shesgone.Menext!Me

    next!saysthesalesrep.IwanttobeinHawaii,relaxingonthebeach

    withmypersonalmasseuse,anendlesssupplyofPinaColadasandthe

    loveofmylife.Poof!Hesgone.OK,youreup,theGeniesays

    tothemanager.Themanagersays,Iwantthosetwobackintheoffice

    afterlunch.

    Moralofthestory:Alwaysletyourbosshavethefirstsay.

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    WHERE(acrossthefield)WHEN(afterlunch)WHICHONE(bytheschool)

    Prepositions

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    The first person to write down 20 prepositions is a winner!

    1.Don'trelymetoremindyou.2.Iagreedtheteacherforonce.3.Myshoesaresimilaryours.4.Iwasreallyashamedmyself.5.There'snopointinbeingannoyedme.6.Davewassufferingareallybadheadache.7.Don'tgo!Pleasewaitme.8.Thedogjumpedthegatetobiteme!

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    PartsofSpeechTriangle

    n.n.v.

    adj.n.v.adj.n.adv.v.

    adj.n.adv.v.prep.n. ReindeerReindeersprint.

    Speedyreindeersprint.Speedyreindeeroftensprint.

    Speedyreindeeroftensprintinsnow.

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    CoordinatingConjunctionsF or

    A nd

    N or

    B ut

    O r

    Y et

    S o

    Coordinatingconjunctionslinktwothings.

    Let'sgoswimmingorhiking. SavannahandSierraaremychildren. Youarefriendlybutshy.

    Coordinatingconjunctionscanalsolinkcompletethoughts.

    Sheistired,sosheisstayinghome. Iwasthinkingaboutreading,butIcannotfindmybook.

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    Conjunctions: coordinating subordinating

    1.Whatdoesitmeantocoordinate?

    2.Whatdoessubordinatemean?

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    TermstoKnow:

    1.Clause:

    2.IndependentClause:

    3.DependentClause:

    4.CoordinatingConjunction:

    5.SubordinatingConjunction:

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    IgocampingIenjoyreading.

    IgocampingIenjoyreading.

    and

    orwhen even thoughbut

    after because

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    Amanisgettingintotheshowerjustashiswifeisfinishinguphershower

    whenthedoorbellrings.Thewifequicklywrapsherselfinatowelandruns

    downstairs.Whensheopensthedoor,therestandsBob,thenextdoorneighbor.

    Beforeshesaysaword,Bobsays,Illgiveyou$800todropthattowel.Aftershe

    thinksforamoment,thewomandropshertowelandstandsnakedinfrontofBob.

    Afterafewseconds,Bobhandsher$800dollarsandleaves.Thewomanwraps

    backupinthetowelandgoesbackupstairs.Whenshegetstothebathroom,her

    husbandasks,

    Whowasthat?

    ItwasBobthenextdoorneighbor,shereplies.

    Great!thehusbandsays,Didhesayanythingaboutthe$800heowesme?

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    SubordinatingConjunctions:Subordinating:

    Clause:fancynameforagroupofwords

    IndependentClause:acompletegroupofwords=sentence

    DependentClause:agroupofwordsthatcan'tstandalone

    IwillbeabletodriveIgetolder.

    thecharacterfaceschallengessheovercomesthem.

    youhelpmeIthinkIcandoit.

    Iwillwaitwithyoumymompicksmeup.

    when

    Although

    , ,

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    Ablondehadjustgottenanewsportscarandwasoutforadrivewhensheaccidentallycutoffatruck

    driver.Hemotionedforhertopulloversothathecouldteachheralesson.

    Whenshedid,hegotoutofhistruckandpulledapieceofchalkfromhispocket.Hedrewacircleon

    thesideoftheroadandgrufflycommandedtotheblonde,"StandinthatcircleandDON'TMOVE!".

    Hethenwenttohercarandcutupherleatherseatssincesheobviouslycaredmoreaboutherselfthan

    others'safety.Whenheturnedaroundshehadaslightgrinonherface,sohesaid,"Ohyouthinkthat's

    funny?Watchthis!"Beforeshecouldreact,hegotabaseballbatoutofhistruckandbrokeevery

    windowinhercar.Whenheturnedandlookedather,shestillhadasmileonherface.Hegrew

    increasinglyangrybecauseshewasobviouslynotbotheredbyhisbehavior.So,hegothisknifeback

    outandslicedallhertires.Shestartedlaughingashecontinuedtodestroyhercar.Whileshecontinuedto

    laugh,hewentbacktohistruckandgotacanofgas,poureditonhercarandsetitonfire.Whenheturned

    around,hesawshewaslaughingsohardshewasabouttofalldowneventhoughatthispointhercarwas

    destroyed.

    Althoughthetruckdriverwasfurious,heasked,"What'ssofunny?"

    Theblondereplied,"Everytimeyouweren'tlooking,Isteppedoutsidethecircle!"

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    TransitionalWordsalsocalledCONJUNCTIVEADVERBS

    Iwantedtogohowever,Iwastoobusy.

    Hereisalistofcommonconjunctiveadverbs.

    accordingly,furthermore,moreover,similarly,also,hence,namely,still,anyway,however,nevertheless,then,besides,incidentally,thereafter, next,certainly,indeed,nonetheless,therefore,consequently,instead,now,thus,finally,likewise,otherwise,undoubtedly,further,meanwhile.

    Asemicolonandacommaareusedtogetherwhenaconjunctiveadverbseparatestwomainclauses.

    Thecheckwasformorethanthebalanceconsequently,itbounced.

    Thesethingsreallyhappenedotherwise,Iwouldn'thaveclaimedtohaveseenthem.

    Inthesesentences,theconjunctiveadverbmaylooklikeacoordinateconjunction(FANBOYS),butitisnotasstrongasacoordinateconjunction.Therefore,thesemicolonisusedtolinkthetwomainclauses,andthecommaisusedtosetofftheconjunctiveadverbfromitsmainclause.

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    Asentenceisagroupofwords,madeupofasubjectandverb,whichisacompletethought.

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    Whatarethecharacteristicsofaneffectivesentence?

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    Somesentencestoconsider:

    Thelazycarpetateafalseshovel.

    WhenIdancewithmydog.

    Yougoing.Ipromisingyou.

    Itisinmyopinionthatbecauseofthefactthatitisniceoutside,itwouldmakealotofsenseifwe,allofus,couldgoorplayoutsideinthebackyard.

    Becauseitisniceoutside,weshouldplayinthebackyard.

    Weshouldenjoythisbeautifulweatherinthebackyard.

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    Anindependentclauseexpressesacompletethought.

    Anindependentclause,alsoknownasasimplesentence,containsasubjectandaverb.

    Connectasubjectandapredicatetocreatesomesimplesentencesbelow.

    MycousinMary

    droppedthecakelostthegame

    Daniel

    sawanalienoutsideTheclassroomfullofchildrenisnoisy

    Thelittlegirl

    seemedsad

    TheStructureofaSentence

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    SomeexamplesofWORDINESSandREDUNDANCY:

    1.Inthequote,itsays...ORThequotesays...

    2.Writersusemanypoeticdevicestotalkaboutthings.Thetoneissad.Thetoneisconveyedthroughtheuseofpoeticdevices,assaidinthequote.Twopoeticdevicesusedinthesongarefigurativelanguageandpersonification.Anexampleofthepoeticdeviceoffigurativelanguageisthe"clownshavegonetobed."

    Thesadtonein"TheWindCriesMary"iscreatedthroughfigurativelanguageandpersonification.Forexample,Hendrixexplainsthe"clownshavegonetobed."Here,theuseoffigurativelanguagehelps...

    3.Thereareemotionsinthesongthroughmanypoeticdevices.Feelingsareexpressedandtherearemanyexamplesofthis.Therearetwoexamplesofpoeticdevices.Anexampleofthisispersonification.

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    EliminatingWordinessExercise1Revisethesesentencestostatetheirmeaninginfewerwords.Avoidpassivevoice(whenthesubjectisnotdoinganaction),needlessrepetition,andwordyphrasesandclauses.Thefirstsentencehasbeendoneasanexample.

    1.ItisinmyopinionthatmostlikelymanylocalfarmersplantoattendnextFriday'smeeting.

    2.AlthoughBradleyHallisregularlypopulatedbystudents,closestudyofthebuildingasastructureisseldomundertakenbythem.

    3.Hedroppedoutofschoolonaccountofthefactthatitwasnecessaryforhimtohelpsupporthisfamily.

    4.Itisexpectedthatthenewschedulewillbeannouncedbythebuscompanywithinthenextfewdays.

    5.Therearemanywaysinwhichastudentwhoisinterestedinmeetingforeignstudentsmaycometoknowone.

    6.Itisveryunusualtofindsomeonewhohasnevertoldadeliberatelieonpurpose.6.Rarelywillyoufindsomeonewhohasnevertoldadeliberatelie.

    1.ManylocalfarmersplantoattendnextFriday'smeeting.

    2.BradleyHallisusuallyfilledwithstudentswhodonotstudythebuildingasastructure.

    3.Hedroppedoutofschooltosupporthisfamily.

    4.Thebuscompanywillprobablyannounceitsscheduleduringthenextfewdays.

    5.Anystudentwhowantstomeetforeignstudentscandosoinmanyways.

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    EliminatingWordiness

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    1.Troubleiscausedwhenpeopledisobeyrulesthathavebeenestablishedforthesafetyofall.

    2.Acampusrallywasattendedbymorethanathousandstudents.Fivestudentswerearrestedbycampuspolicefordisorderlyconduct,whileseveralothersarechargedbycampusadministratorswithorganizingapublicmeetingwithoutbeingissuedapermittodoso.

    3.Thesubjectsthatareconsideredmostimportantbystudentsarethosethathavebeenshowntobeusefultothemaftergraduation.

    4.Inthenottoodistantfuture,collegefreshmenmustallbecomeawareofthefactthatthereisaneedforthemtomakecontactwithanacademicadviserconcerningthematterofamajor.

    5.Inourcompanytherearewideopenopportunitiesforprofessionalgrowthwithacompanythatenjoysanenviablerecordforstabilityinthedynamicatmosphereofaerospacetechnology.

    6.Somepeoplebelieveincapitalpunishment,whileotherpeopleareagainstittherearemanyopinionsonthissubject.

    Therearepeoplewhoareforandpeoplewhoareagainstcapitalpunishment.

    Disobeyingsafetyregulationscausestrouble.

    Fiveoutofmorethanathousandstudentsatacampusrallywerearrestedfordisorderlyconduct,andseveralotherswerechargedbycampusadministratorswithorganizingapublicmeetingwithoutapermit.

    Studentsthinkthatthemostimportantsubjectsarethosethatwillbeusefulaftergraduation.

    Sooncollegefreshmenmustrealizethattheyneedtocontacttheiradvisorsabouttheirchoicesofmajors.

    Ourcompanyprovidesopportunitiesforprofessionalgrowthandstabilityinthedynamicfieldofaerospacetechnology.

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    Exercise:EliminatingWordinessbyCombiningSentencesDirections:Combineeachsentencegroupintooneconcisesentence.

    1.Thecliffdroppedtoreefsseventyfivefeetbelow.Thereefsbelowthesteepcliffwerebarelyvisiblethroughthefog.

    2.Theircarisgassedup.Itisreadyforthelongdrive.Thedrivewilltakeallnight.

    3.SometimesStanwentrunningwithBlanche.Shewasagoodathlete.Shewasonthetrackteamatschool.

    4.TaylorbroughtsomecandybackfromEurope.Itwasn'tshapedlikeAmericancandy.Thecandytastedkindofstrangetohim.

    5.Governmentleadersliketomentionthecreationofnewjobs.Theyclaimthatthesenewjobsindicateastrongeconomy.Theydon'tmentionthatlowwagejobswithoutbenefitsandsecurityhavereplacedmanygoodjobs.

    Governmentleadersliketomentionthecreationofnewjobs,claimingthatthesejobsindicateastrongeconomy,butignoringthefactthatlowwagejobswithoutbenefitsandsecurityhavereplacedmanygoodjobs.

    Thecliffsdroppedtothereefsseventyfivefeetbelow,whichwerebarelyvisiblethroughthefog.

    Theircarisgassedupandreadyforanallnightdrive.

    TaylorbroughtsomestrangetastingcandybackfromEuropethatwasn'tshapedlikeAmericancandy.

    SometimesStanwentrunningwithBlanche,agoodathleteonthetrackteamatschool.

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    Createasentenceabout________withthreewords.

    Createasentenceabout________withsixwords.

    Createasentenceabout________withtenwords.

    Createasentenceabout________withfifteenwords.

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    FragmentsandRunonsor...

    TruckDrivingUSAWithasentencefragment,youdonotgetthewholepicture.

    Withasentencefragment,youdonotgetthewholepicture.

    EventhoughIhatewakingupforschool

    EventhoughIhatewakingupforschool,IhaveagreattimewhenIgetthere.

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    RunonsLet'ssaytwotrucksarecruisingdownI90theyneedtokeepasafedistanceapartor...

    Thinkofeachtruckasanindividualsentence.Iftheystayasafedistanceapart,alliswell.

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    KeepYourSentencesSafe

    1.separateintotwosentenceswithPERIODS,QUESTIONMARKSand/orEXCLAMATIONPOINTS

    Igocamping.Ienjoyreading.

    2.useaSEMICOLON

    IgocampingIenjoyreading.

    3.useaCONJUNCTION(withaCOMMAifneeded)

    Igocamping(,)andIenjoyreading. WhenIgocamping,Ienjoyreading.IenjoyreadingwhenIgocamping. Igocampinghowever,Ienjoyreading.

    coordinating conjunction subordinating conjunctionconjunctive adverb (transition)

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    Elizabeth,NewJersey,whenmymotherwasbeingraisedthereinaflatoverherfathersgrocerystore,wasanindustrialportaquarterthesizeofNewark,dominatedbytheIrishworkingclassandtheirpoliticiansandthetightlyknitparishlifethatrevolvedaroundthetownsmanychurches,andthoughIneverheardhercomplainofhavingbeenpointedlyilltreatedinElizabethasagirl,itwasnotuntilshemarriedandmovedtoNewarksnewJewishneighborhoodthatshediscoveredtheconfidencethatledhertobecomefirstaPTAgrademother,thenaPTAvicepresidentinchargeofestablishingaKindergartenMothersClub,andfinallythePTApresident,who,afterattendingaconferenceinTrentononinfantileparalysis,proposedanannualMarchofDimesdanceonJanuary30PresidentRooseveltsbirthdaythatwasacceptedbymostschools.

    Justbecauseyoucandoesn'tmakeitagoodidea...

    Soremember...correctgrammardoesnotequalgoodwriting.

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    Practicerecognizingcompletesentences:

    Readthelyricsandinyourjournalswritedownthreecompletesentencesandthreefragmentsfromthesong.

    CompleteSentence IncompleteSentence

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    "WishYouWereHere"byPinkFloyd

    So,soyouthinkyoucantellHeavenfromHellblueskiesfrompainCanyoutellagreenfieldfromacoldsteelrailAsmilefromaveilDoyouthinkyoucantellAnddidtheygetyoutotradeyourheroesforghostsHotashesfortreesHotairforacoolbreezeColdcomfortforchangeAnddidyouexchangeawalkonpartinthewarforaleadroleinacageHowIwish,howIwishyouwerehereWe'rejusttwolostsoulsswimminginafishbowl,yearafteryearRunningoverthesameoldgroundWhathavewefoundThesameoldfearsWishyouwerehere

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    TypesofSentencesIt'sallaboutthesubjectsandtheverbs...

    SimpleSentence:

    CompoundSentence:

    ComplexSentence:

    Compound/ComplexSentence:

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    and

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    but

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    when

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    after

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    ThePoweroftheSimpleSentenceHestoodatthefoullinebecausetherestoftheplayershadbeen

    instructedtogotothesidelines.Thepepbandwassilent,andeventhefansdidn'tcheer.Everyone,infact,watchedbreathlesslyashegrippedthebasketballtightly.Hebouncedittwicebeforeshootingandmakinghisshot.

    Hestoodatthefoulline.Hewasalone.Alltheotherplayerswereatthesidelines.Thepepbandwassilent.Nofancheered.Everyonewatchedbreathlessly.Hegrippedtheballtightly.Hebounceditonce.Hebouncedittwice.Heshottheball.Swish.

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    BUT...

    SIMPLEISNOTALWAYSBETTER...

    Theboyhasadog.Theboyhasacat.Thedoghasblackhair.Thecathasredhair.Thedogiscute.Thedogisfriendly.Thedogisabeagle.HisnameisMax.Thecat'snameisbuttons.

    Isthisgoodwriting?

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    Simplesentencescontainonesubject.Simplesentencescanbeimprovedthroughtheuseofadjectives,adverbsandprepositions,whichoffermoreinformationaboutthesubjectandverbinthesimplesentence.

    Expandthefollowingsentences:

    1.Avisitorarrived.

    2.Thecampersroastedmarshmallows.

    3.Thecrowdstared.

    4.Abellrang.

    5.Thecatlooked_________.

    6.Hisfacewas__________.

    Rememberlinkingverbslinksubjectswithadescription.

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    Addacoordinatingconjunctiontoconnectthetwoindependentclauses.

    CompoundSentence:

    and nor but for

    yet so or

    Alistofcoordinatingconjunctions:

    Nancywasfeelingveryill, shedecidedtogohome.

    Idonotlikethoseshoes, Idolikethematchingpurse.

    Ienjoyedwatchingthemovie, thefoodwasnotbad,either.

    and nor butfor yet soor

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    SubordinatingConjunctionscreateCOMPLEXsentences:

    1.Ifeltfoolishbecause

    2.Ifachipmunkspoketome,

    3.Igetreallyangrywhen

    4.AlthoughtomorrowisSaturday,

    5.IcangoafterI

    SUBORDINATINGCONJUNCTIONSHELPUSEXPLAINRELATIONSHIPSBETWEENOURIDEAS.Remembertheymaketheclausetheypairupwithunabletostandalone.

    For And Nor But Or Yet So

    Theseguysalsojoinideasbutthegrammargodscallthesecoordinatingconjunctions.Justmemorizethem.It'seasier...

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    Whichisthebestsubordinateconjunctiontoplaceintheblank?

    ___________youhavenoteeth,youhavetoeatpizzafromablender.

    Although

    IfAfter

    When

    Because

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    Drag the comma to the correct position.

    2. The teacher delivered a lecture about attendance when the students arrived.

    1. When the students arrived the teacher delivered a lecture about attendance.

    ,

    #1Pull

    deliveredalectureaboutattendance.

    #2Pull

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    Understandingsubordinateconjunctionsallowsyoutoveryyoursentencestructure:

    whenthejudgeenteredthecourtroom

    everyone stood

    Pull

    Pull

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    VaryingYourSentenceStructureisthemarkofasophisticatedwriter.

    Inthequoteitisaboutpoetry.Thefirstpartsays____.Thismeans____.Thesecondpartsays______.Thismeans_____.Thethirdpartsays______.Thismeans______.

    OR

    Engle'squoteexploresthedefinitionofpoetry.Inthebeginning,Englesuggeststhatpoetryis________,meaning_____.Hegoesontoexplainthatpoetryis_______.Englesuggestsherethat_____.Exploringtheideathatpoetryis_____,Engleconcludesthat_____.

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    Createasentenceabout________withthreewords.

    Createasentenceabout________withsixwords.

    Createasentenceabout________withtenwords.

    Createasentenceabout________withfifteenwords.

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    Canyoufindtheerrorsinthisparagraph?Nowyouknowalittlemoreaboutsentence

    types,fragments,andrunons.Iknowyouwillimprove.Withhoursofpractice.Itisnoteasyittakestimeyouwillbeabetterwriterasyoumastertheuseofsentences.Goodluck.

  • Attachments

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    Varying Sentence Structure

    References

    2001 by Ruth Luman

    Adding Variety to Sentence Structure

    To make your writing more interesting, you should try to vary your sentences in terms of length and structure. You can make some of your sentences long and others short. Read the two paragraphs on the next page.

    Two Paragraphs

    Read the paragraphs below. Choose the

    paragraph that is more effective.

    I love living in the city. I have a wonderful view of the entire city. I have an apartment. I can see the Golden Gate Bridge. I can see many cargo ships pass under the bridge each day. I like the restaurants in San Francisco. I can find wonderful food from just about every country. I dont like the traffic in the city.

    I love living in the city of San Francisco. I have a wonderful view of the entire city from my apartment window. In addition, I can see the Golden Gate Bridge under which many cargo ships pass each day. I also like San Francisco because I can find wonderful restaurants with food from just about every country; however, I dont like the traffic in the city.

    How do you vary sentence structure?

    You will want to use a variety of sentence structures in your writing. There are three types of sentences we will study in this lesson:

    - Simple Sentence

    - Compound Sentence

    - Complex Sentence

    The Simple Sentence

    A simple sentence has one independent clause (one subject and a verb):

    I live in San Francisco.

    Subject

    Verb

    Compound Sentence

    A compound sentence contains two independent clauses that are joined together.

    She works in the city, but she lives in the suburbs.

    Independent Clause

    Independent Clause

    Compound Sentence

    You can make a compound sentence by joining two logically related independent clauses by using

    - a semicolon

    - a coordinating conjunction

    - a transition

    Using a Semicolon

    Independent Clause ; Independent Clause

    I love living in the city ; there are so many things to do.

    Independent Clause

    Independent Clause

    Using a Coordinating Conjunction

    Independent Clause ,coordinating conjunction Independent Clause

    He couldnt watch the show , so he decided to tape it.

    Independent Clause

    Independent Clause

    Coordinating Conjunctions

    Logical RelationshipCoordinating Conjunction

    AdditionAnd

    ContrastBut, yet

    ChoiceOr, nor

    CauseFor

    ResultSo

    FANBOYS

    For F

    And A

    Nor N

    But B

    Or O

    Yet Y

    So S

    Another way to remember these is

    CAUTION!

    Do NOT use a comma every time you use the words and, or, but, nor, for, so, yet. Use a comma only when the coordinating conjunction joins two independent clauses.

    Independent Clause

    No comma- not an independent clause

    The necklace was beautiful but expensive.

    Simple Sentence

    Using a Transition

    Independent Clause ; transition , Independent Clause

    I love San Francisco ; however, I hate the traffic.

    Independent Clause

    Independent Clause

    John cannot set up his typewriter

    because the wall has no outlet.

    Complex Sentences

    A complex sentence contains at least one independent clause and one dependent clause.

    Independent Clause

    Dependent Clause

    Subordinating Conjunction

    Example- Complex Sentence

    A complex sentence contains at least one independent clause and one dependent clause.

    She will go to school in the city

    until she finds a job.

    Independent Clause

    Dependent Clause

    Subordinating Conjunction

    When I first moved to the city,

    I was afraid to drive the steep and narrow streets.

    Complex Sentences

    Use a comma after a dependent clause if it begins the sentence.

    Subordinating Conjunction

    Independent Clause

    Use a comma if the dependent clause is the first part of the sentence.

    Practice Exercises

    Now you are ready to practice what youve learned. Click the link below to return to Unit D. Print and complete the Practice Exercise on adding sentence structure variety to your writing. Check your answers with a tutor.

    Correct!

    Excellent! This sentence reads more smoothly

    because it has more sentence structure variety.

    I love living in the city of San Francisco. I have a wonderful view of the entire city from my apartment window. In addition, I can see the Golden Gate Bridge under which many cargo ships pass each day. I also like San Francisco because I can find wonderful restaurants with food from just about every country; however, I dont like the traffic in the city.

    Simple Sentences

    Compound/Complex Sentence

    Complex Sentence

    Im Sorry!

    These sentence do not read as smoothly.

    These sentences contain no sentence variety.

    Simple Sentences

    I love living in the city. I have a wonderful view of the entire city. I have an apartment. I can see the Golden Gate Bridge. I can see many cargo ships pass under the bridge each day. I like the restaurants in San Francisco. I can find wonderful food from just about every country. I dont like the traffic in the city.

    RelationshipTransition

    AdditionMoreover FurthermoreIn additionbesides

    Reinforcement/EmphasisIndeedIn fact

    ContrastHowever On the contraryIn contrast On the other hand

    Result or EffectConsequently AccordinglyThus HenceTherefore As a result

    Reinforcement/EmphasisIndeedIn fact

    ExemplificationFor exampleFor instanceIn particular

    ExemplificationFor exampleFor instanceIn particular

    TimeMeanwhile (at the same time)Subsequently (after)Thereafter (after)

    RelationshipTransition

    References

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