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Iraolyn S. Humphreys
Grad School Personal Statement Writing Sample
Someone once told me that you will find your true livelihood when you discover what it
is that you do with ease, what you would do for free, and what it is that moves you to the point of
going against the grain, taking leaps of faith, and challenging yourself beyond all previously set,
self imposed boundaries. For me, it’s applying the writing gift that I’ve developed over the years
towards a lucrative career as a communications specialist. Most of my writing experience is
derived from drafting effective correspondence to clients and colleagues, helping peers with their
writing, providing insight on how to intelligently convey thoughts and ideas to senior level
management, and developing solid business relationships among chief level executives. Pursuing
a master’s degree in communications would not only allow me the opportunity to utilize my gift
as a writer on a more broader, professional scale, but I’d also evolve into a more natural and
crafted communications specialist by delving into every area of the communication spectrum.
I really do believe that the best barometer of what we ought to be doing with our lives is
locked up in our hearts, in our passions. The ability to speak and to write congruently has always
come rather naturally for me, thus causing me to take it for granted, and never really considering
it as a gifting or a talent. Needless to say, I was never driven by my ability to write well or to
work in public communications until my last semester in college. Before then, partying and other
various forms of immaturity distracted me from taking my future seriously; consequently, my
grades suffered. The summer before, I had taken an expository writing course and was taken
aback by the many distinct writing styles that there were and how I was able to quickly grasp
them, and successfully communicate messages by using more concise, yet detailed writing
variations. Even though I didn’t pursue a graduate education right away, the longing for a more
agreeable, suitable career never dissipated. Upon graduating, I took the time to reflect on what I
had learned, and whether or not I wanted to pursue the usual career paths of a political science
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major. The answer was no. It’s comical to me how one often searches scrupulously for their
purpose and passion, only to inevitably find that it was right in front of them all along.
Naturally, as a political science major I took quite a few courses within comparative
politics and international relations, and became aware that the world’s prosperous, diverse, yet
oftentimes conflicting political systems rarely agreed upon topics that were intended to impact the
good of the world. So once the revelation set in (and it did take some time) that my ability to
write well was actually a Godsend, I became consumed—almost to the point of an obsession—
with figuring out what exactly my writing niche was and exactly what I needed to do to perfect it
and turn it into a budding career. The more I wrote, the more praises I received for my writing,
the more driven and determined I became.
Most of us thrive in the job or career that opens the door to our creative zeal and deep
fascination—when we can enjoy our employ and see our salary as a benefit rather than the
objective. It was coherent communication, both oral and written, which allowed me to excel in
business development by building lasting rapports between Fortune 100 companies and
consulting firms. Through studying and understanding the attitudes, practices, and concerns of
both the client and the customer, I developed business, and generated and increased revenue.
My post undergraduate accomplishments are completely opposite of what my degree
suggests that they may have been. Having a work history comprised of mostly business
development positions; I think it’s reasonable to assert that I’ve gained the foundational skills
necessary to become an accomplished public relations specialist. While I have made a decent
living working in that field, the idea of acclimating it as my permanent career has never been an
option for me. I wasn’t getting the sense of fulfillment that one should gain from a career. The
pining for more, which I have oftentimes delayed confronting, remained a sputter that permeated
the truth of my dreams and desires.
I don’t believe that the things we are good at are all a matter of happenstance. I believe
that they all intertwined in order to reach a desired outcome, a purpose. It was a light bulb
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moment for me when I realized that I shouldn’t categorize my success in business development,
my ability to effectively communicate, and the happiness that I feel when motivating and
uplifting others as random things that I happen to do well. They are all fundamental elements of a
clear, efficient communications specialist. I assert that these attributes have laid a solid,
forthcoming underpinning which will soundly lead to a gratifying career in public relations.
As a business development professional working in the helm of the political landscape,
witnessing the influence and persuasiveness of effective of political communication, I more than
welcome the chance to study at one of the area’s most prominent and revered learning
institutions. Entering the master’s communication program will perfectly position me to
transition careers and become a better rounded communicator. The program affords working
professionals and alike the chance to get ahead and to go after those dreams and ambitions that
may have lain dormant, or that they may not have otherwise had an opportunity to pursue.
With its diversity among students and faculty, Trinity Washington University
differentiates itself by offering a rigorous, comprehensive program designed to help students
excel, all while ensuring that they are well equipped to address the demanding and ever-changing
public relations arena. My determination to succeed in this program is fueled by a passion that
demands more from me than the mundane and mediocre. Moreover, I am driven by a passion
that won’t allow me to become deterred by the incessant demands of life. In retrospect, I believe
that it is the zest that I have for my purpose and my destiny that qualifies me as being capable of
successfully tackling the challenges that will undeniably come with all of the rewards that the
communication program will bring.
I’ve recently taken a couple of major steps that are strategically aligned with my decision
to change career paths. I have started writing for the Magnificent View magazine, which is a
quarterly published Christian magazine produced by Greater Mount Calvary Holy Church in
Washington, D.C. There is no pay associated with writing for the magazine. The fulfillment is in
being able to serve, without pretense, while simultaneously crafting my writing skills.
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I am also involved with a local Toastmasters Club. Their commitment of helping people
to develop and refine their oratorical and speechwriting skills has helped me to more aptly deliver
speeches and sales presentations. I am hopeful that the skill set that I am gaining and the graduate
program will place me at a great advantage to compete with some of the best PR specialists in the
DC metropolitan area. I respectfully look forward to the challenge ahead.