4

Click here to load reader

FSA ELA Writing Rubric 5 FSA ELA Writing Rubric The FSA ELA Writing Rubric is a scoring tool that describes the characteristics of a written response for each score point within each

Embed Size (px)

Citation preview

Page 1: FSA ELA Writing Rubric 5 FSA ELA Writing Rubric The FSA ELA Writing Rubric is a scoring tool that describes the characteristics of a written response for each score point within each

Grade 5

FSA ELA Writing

Rubric

The FSA ELA Writing Rubric is a scoring tool that describes the characteristicsof a written response for each score point within each domain. The rubricmay assist educators with evaluating the strengths and weaknesses ofstudent responses based on the text-based writing prompt/task included inthe practice test as well as responses based on other text-based writingprompts/tasks educators choose to use in a classroom setting.

The FSA ELA Writing tests for Grades 8-10 will be administered online.Grades 4-7 will be paper-based assessments for all students and for studentsin Grades 8-10 with an IEP or 504 plan that specifies a paper-basedaccommodation. (Paper-based and online FSA ELA Practice Writing tests are available on the FSA portal so that students have an opportunity to practicewith both administration formats.)

The following FSA ELA Writing Practice Tests are available on the FSA portal:

Elementary Grade BandGrade 4 - Informative/Explanatory Grade 5 - OpinionMiddle Grade BandGrade 6 - Informative/ExplanatoryGrade 7 - ArgumentationGrade 8 - Informative/ExplanatoryHigh School Grade BandGrade 9 - ArgumentationGrade 10 - Informative/Explanatory

Page 2: FSA ELA Writing Rubric 5 FSA ELA Writing Rubric The FSA ELA Writing Rubric is a scoring tool that describes the characteristics of a written response for each score point within each

Go OnPage 2

FSA ELA Writing Rubric

G

rade

5

Opi

nion

Tex

t-bas

ed W

ritin

g Ru

bric

(S

core

poi

nts w

ithin

eac

h do

mai

n in

clud

e m

ost o

f the

cha

ract

eris

tics b

elow

.) Sc

ore

Purp

ose,

Foc

us, a

nd O

rgan

izat

ion

(4-p

oint

Rub

ric)

Evid

ence

and

Ela

bora

tion

(4-p

oint

Rub

ric)

Conv

entio

ns o

f Sta

ndar

d En

glis

h (2

-poi

nt R

ubric

beg

ins a

t sco

re p

oint

2)

4 Th

e re

spon

se is

fully

sust

aine

d an

d co

nsist

ently

fo

cuse

d w

ithin

the

purp

ose,

aud

ienc

e, a

nd ta

sk;

and

it ha

s a c

lear

ly st

ated

opi

nion

and

effe

ctiv

e or

gani

zatio

nal s

truc

ture

crea

ting c

oher

ence

and

co

mpl

eten

ess.

The

resp

onse

incl

udes

mos

t of t

he

follo

win

g:

St

rong

ly m

aint

aine

d op

inio

n w

ith li

ttle

or n

o lo

osel

y re

late

d m

ater

ial

Sk

illfu

l use

of a

var

iety

of t

rans

ition

al

stra

tegi

es to

cla

rify

the

rela

tions

hips

bet

wee

n an

d am

ong

idea

s

Logi

cal p

rogr

essio

n of

idea

s fro

m b

egin

ning

to

end

with

a sa

tisfy

ing i

ntro

duct

ion

and

conc

lusio

n

The

resp

onse

pro

vide

s tho

roug

h an

d co

nvin

cing

su

ppor

t/ev

iden

ce fo

r the

writ

e o

pini

on th

at in

clud

es

the

effe

ctiv

e us

e of

sour

ces,

fact

s, a

nd d

etai

ls. T

he

resp

onse

incl

udes

mos

t of t

he fo

llow

ing:

Rele

vant

evi

denc

e in

tegr

ated

smoo

thly

and

th

orou

ghly

with

refe

renc

es to

sour

ces

Ef

fect

ive

use

of a

var

iety

of e

labo

rativ

e te

chni

ques

, de

mon

stra

ting

unde

rsta

ndin

g of

the

topi

c and

text

Clea

r and

effe

ctiv

e ex

pres

sion

of id

eas,

usin

g pr

ecis

e la

ngua

ge

Ac

adem

ic a

nd d

omai

n-sp

ecifi

c voc

abul

ary c

lear

ly

appr

opria

te fo

r the

aud

ienc

e an

d pu

rpos

e

Varie

d se

nten

ce st

ruct

ure,

dem

onst

ratin

g la

ngua

ge

faci

lity

3

The

resp

onse

is a

dequ

atel

y sus

tain

ed a

nd g

ener

ally

fo

cuse

d w

ithin

the

purp

ose,

aud

ienc

e, a

nd ta

sk;

and

it ha

s an

opin

ion

and

evid

ent o

rgan

izatio

nal

stru

ctur

e w

ith a

sens

e of

com

plet

enes

s. T

he

resp

onse

incl

udes

mos

t of t

he fo

llow

ing:

A m

aint

aine

d op

inio

n, th

ough

som

e lo

osel

y re

late

d m

ater

ial m

ay b

e pr

esen

t

Adeq

uate

use

of t

rans

ition

al st

rate

gies

with

so

me

varie

ty to

cla

rify

the

rela

tions

hips

be

twee

n an

d am

ong

idea

s

Adeq

uate

pro

gres

sion

of id

eas f

rom

beg

inni

ng

to e

nd w

ith a

suffi

cien

t int

rodu

ctio

n an

d co

nclu

sion

The

resp

onse

pro

vide

s ade

quat

e su

ppor

t/ev

iden

ce fo

r th

e w

riter

s op

inio

n th

at in

clud

es th

e us

e of

sou

rces

, fa

cts,

and

det

ails.

The

res

pons

e in

clud

es m

ost

of t

he

follo

win

g:

Ge

nera

lly in

tegr

ated

evi

denc

e fr

om so

urce

s, th

ough

re

fere

nces

may

be

gene

ral,

impr

ecise

, or i

ncon

siste

nt

Ade

quat

e us

e of

som

e el

abor

ativ

e te

chni

ques

Adeq

uate

expr

essio

n of

idea

s, e

mpl

oyin

g a m

ix o

f pr

ecise

and

gen

eral

lang

uage

Dom

ain-

spec

ific v

ocab

ular

y gen

eral

ly a

ppro

pria

te fo

r th

e au

dien

ce a

nd p

urpo

se

Som

e va

riatio

n in

sent

ence

stru

ctur

e

Cont

inue

d on

the

follo

win

g pa

ge

Page 3: FSA ELA Writing Rubric 5 FSA ELA Writing Rubric The FSA ELA Writing Rubric is a scoring tool that describes the characteristics of a written response for each score point within each

Page 3

FSA ELA Writing Rubric

Scor

e Pu

rpos

e, F

ocus

, and

Org

aniz

atio

n (4

-poi

nt R

ubric

) Ev

iden

ce a

nd E

labo

ratio

n (4

-poi

nt R

ubric

) Co

nven

tions

of S

tand

ard

Engl

ish

(2-p

oint

Rub

ric)

2 Th

e re

spon

se is

som

ewha

t sus

tain

ed w

ithin

the

purp

ose,

aud

ienc

e, a

nd ta

sk b

ut m

ay in

clud

e lo

osel

y re

late

d or

ext

rane

ous m

ater

ial;

and

it m

ay h

ave

an

opin

ion

with

an

inco

nsist

ent o

rgan

izat

iona

l st

ruct

ure.

The

resp

onse

may

incl

ude

the

follo

win

g:

Pa

rtia

lly fo

cuse

d op

inio

n bu

t ins

uffic

ient

ly

sust

aine

d or

unc

lear

Inco

nsist

ent u

se o

f tra

nsiti

onal

stra

tegi

es w

ith

little

varie

ty

U

neve

n pr

ogre

ssio

n of

idea

s fro

m b

egin

ning

to

end

and

an in

adeq

uate

intr

oduc

tion

or

conc

lusio

n

The

resp

onse

pro

vide

s une

ven,

curs

ory

supp

ort/

evid

ence

fo

r the

writ

ers o

pini

on th

at in

clud

es in

effe

ctiv

e us

e of

so

urce

s, fa

cts,

and

det

ails.

The

resp

onse

may

incl

ude

the

follo

win

g:

W

eakl

y in

tegr

ated

evi

denc

e fr

om so

urce

s and

err

atic

or

irre

leva

nt re

fere

nces

Repe

titiv

e or

inef

fect

ive

use

of e

labo

rativ

e te

chni

ques

Impr

ecis

e or s

impl

istic

exp

ress

ion

of id

eas

In

appr

opria

te o

r ine

ffect

ive

dom

ain-

spec

ific

voca

bula

ry

Se

nten

ces p

ossib

ly li

mite

d to

sim

ple

cons

truc

tions

The

resp

onse

dem

onst

rate

s an

adeq

uate

com

man

d of

bas

ic co

nven

tions

. The

resp

onse

may

incl

ude

the

follo

win

g:

So

me

min

or e

rror

s in

usag

e bu

t no

patt

erns

of

erro

rs

Ad

equa

te u

se o

f pun

ctua

tion,

capi

taliz

atio

n,

sent

ence

form

atio

n, an

d sp

ellin

g

1 Th

e re

spon

se is

rela

ted

to th

e to

pic b

ut m

ay

dem

onst

rate

litt

le o

r no

awar

enes

s of t

he p

urpo

se,

audi

ence

, and

task

; and

it m

ay h

ave

no d

iscer

nibl

e op

inio

n an

d lit

tle o

r no

disc

erni

ble

orga

niza

tiona

l st

ruct

ure.

The

resp

onse

may

incl

ude

the

follo

win

g:

Ab

sent

, con

fusin

g, o

r am

bigu

ous o

pini

on

Fr

eque

nt e

xtra

neou

s ide

as im

pedi

ng

unde

rsta

ndin

g

Few

or n

o tr

ansit

iona

l str

ateg

ies

To

o br

ief t

o de

mon

stra

te k

now

ledg

e of

focu

s or

org

aniz

atio

n

The

resp

onse

pro

vide

s min

imal

supp

ort/

evid

ence

for t

he

writ

ers o

pini

on, i

nclu

ding

little

if a

ny u

se o

f sou

rces

, fa

cts,

and

det

ails.

The

resp

onse

may

incl

ude

the

follo

win

g:

M

inim

al, a

bsen

t, er

rone

ous,

or i

rrel

evan

t evi

denc

e fr

om th

e so

urce

mat

eria

l

Expr

essio

n of

idea

s tha

t is v

ague

, unc

lear

, or

conf

usin

g

Lim

ited

or in

appr

opria

te la

ngua

ge o

r dom

ain-

spec

ific

voca

bula

ry

Se

nten

ces l

imite

d to

sim

ple

cons

truc

tions

The

resp

onse

dem

onst

rate

s a p

artia

l com

man

d of

ba

sic co

nven

tions

. The

resp

onse

may

incl

ude

the

follo

win

g:

Va

rious

err

ors i

n us

age

In

cons

isten

t use

of c

orre

ct p

unct

uatio

n,

capi

taliz

atio

n, se

nten

ce fo

rmat

ion,

and

spel

ling

0

Th

e re

spon

se d

emon

stra

tes a

lack

of c

omm

and

of

conv

entio

ns, w

ith fr

eque

nt a

nd se

vere

err

ors o

ften

ob

scur

ing m

eani

ng.

Page 4: FSA ELA Writing Rubric 5 FSA ELA Writing Rubric The FSA ELA Writing Rubric is a scoring tool that describes the characteristics of a written response for each score point within each

Office of AssessmentFlorida Department of Education, Tallahassee, FloridaCopyright © 2015 State of Florida, Department of State