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    Kristen McCullough

    Form and Technique #2

    Christina Robertson

    2.6.11

    Adrenaline Rush

    I pull myself down the sidewalk one foot at a time until I collapse onto a wooden bench.

    I feel the wood suck at my clothes, wet from a day of water rides. Kenzies knees buckle and she

    lands next to me, a sigh puffing her cheeks and escaping with a whoosh. I pat her back and

    shield my eyes from the sun to find my dads face. I smile at the dark red spilling from the

    armpits of the once dry areas of his usually pale red button up. He smiles back at us. My eyes

    travel from his wrinkled forehead to the moving speck in the distance. It halts, a crackling voice

    echoes over the fair grounds, and a snap precedes the scream. The speck falls from a height of

    eighteen stories.

    I point, my lips twitching into a smile. Lets.

    Lets not, my best friend groans, shifting on the parched wood.

    Dad turns to look. Ill pay, he offers, if you both go.

    Come with us.

    Dad pats his belly and says, We dont want to break the ride.

    I turn back to Kenzie. Come on, itll be fun.

    She pushes back a wet strand of auburn hair. Well. . . alright.

    I shift back and forth on my feet, watching the ride attendant slip the body suit around

    Kenzie and tighten the straps. Kenzie winces and tugs on the area wrapping around her thighs.

    This will be interesting, she turns to me, her eyes bright. She begins to pull her hair up,

    tugging a band around making a pony tail.

    Yep.

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    Are you scared?

    Of course Im scared, I snap, watching the cable pull another two people into the air.

    Itll be okay.

    I know. I hop on my heels, laughing when a scream punctures our short silence. I look

    for Dad and see he has his camera out. He grins at me.

    Okay, come on, the ride attendant coaxes.

    We step onto a platform that starts to rise, taking us to the cable hanging above. The

    attendants clip Kenzie and I together on the cable. With a jolt, we flip forward, facing the

    ground. A breath rattles out of my mouth in shock. Kenzie and I lock arms as instructed, and

    inch by inch, we climb above the attendants sweat dripping brows. As the grass loses its detail

    and becomes a sea of green, we rise above the smell of smoke, hotdogs, and popcorn. My heart

    is trudging through the thick sludge of fear that is now secreting from my pores. I laugh

    nervously as Kenzie waves to my dad. I look sick. I keep my eyes peeled, looking at the top of

    my dads balding head.

    I hear a snap as the cable locks into place. Kenzie lets go of my hand to grasp the release

    cord. My chest squeezes tight as the loudspeaker crackles.

    Three. . . two. . . one. . . pull!

    Kenzie must have yanked the cord, because the next thing I know Im fighting to keepmy stomach out of my throat. We hang suspended, the cord slack; I feel like Ive just jumped

    from a building without a parachute. My eyes water and my nose clogs as we pick up speed, air

    ripping my hair from the band holding it together. I fling my arms out, superman-style, as we

    rocket over the attendants, their mouths split into smiles. For a moment, Ive forgotten that Im

    strapped into a harness, hooked to my best friend, suspended by a thick cable. All I see is blue.

    All I smell is the moisture within the thin whips of cloud. I reach out, and for a moment, all I feel

    is the sun poking holes through my skin, down to the fear, melting it away. My ears pop as the

    cord swings us around to face the glowing ball of gas in the sky. I whoop, and as feeling comes

    back to my limbs and the sun exits my ears, I hear Kenzie laugh.