EDITING KEY: Letters Daily Paragraph Editing

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Foreign ExchangeChicago _[llinois

June 12 2004

dear kyoko= ^ comingI just learned that you will be come to live with

am

my family this summer. I -is- so excited! The peoplesay

at the Student exchange Office says that you will= weeks

be here in two weaks I hope this letter reaches you

before you leave your home in japan

MONDAY WEEK 7

Let me tell you a little bit about our home, myworks -

mother work in a school office, so she is on vacation

this summer, my dad paints houses, so summer is a

busy time for him. my older sister has left home to

go to college so you and I will be the only "children"^ look

in the family I looked forward to meeting you~

best wishes to you

your american "sister"± = AAnicka

TUESDAY WEEK 7

Error Summary

Capitalization 6

Language Usage 3

Punctuation:

Comma 3

Period 2

Spelling 1

Error Summary

Capitalization 6

Language Usage 2

Punctuation:

Comma 4

Period 3

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EDITING KEY: Letters

Kamakura japan

June 18, 2004

Dear anicka.- ' excitingHow exiting to get a letter from my american

sister?\ It is even more exciting to think that in aA be

week I wilLmeeting you and staying at your house!

Thank you for welcoming me. This will be the firstwill be

time that I -em- away from home for so lona

WEDNESDAY WEEK 7

spendduring the summer I usually spending many hours

on the beaches of kamakura I will, no doubt spend

many hours this summer studying english and doing

schoolworkbut it will be fun to do it in Chicago.

It will also be very nice for me to have a sister

In my family, I am the only daughter.

we will speak in person soon Until then,

best wishes

your Japanese sister

Kyoko

THURSDAY WEEK 7

Daily Paragraph Editing

Error Summary

Capitalization >4

Language Usage 2

Punctuation:

Comma 2

Period 1

Other 1

Spelling 1

Error Summary

Capitalization 7

Language Usage 1

Punctuation:

Comma 5

Period 4

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