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EDITING KEY: Letters Daily Paragraph Editing
Preview the 4 daily lessons to ensure you review or introduce skills that may be unfamiliar to students.
Foreign ExchangeChicago _[llinois
June 12 2004
dear kyoko= ^ comingI just learned that you will be come to live with
am
my family this summer. I -is- so excited! The peoplesay
at the Student exchange Office says that you will= weeks
be here in two weaks I hope this letter reaches you
before you leave your home in japan
MONDAY WEEK 7
Let me tell you a little bit about our home, myworks -
mother work in a school office, so she is on vacation
this summer, my dad paints houses, so summer is a
busy time for him. my older sister has left home to
go to college so you and I will be the only "children"^ look
in the family I looked forward to meeting you~
best wishes to you
your american "sister"± = AAnicka
TUESDAY WEEK 7
Error Summary
Capitalization 6
Language Usage 3
Punctuation:
Comma 3
Period 2
Spelling 1
Error Summary
Capitalization 6
Language Usage 2
Punctuation:
Comma 4
Period 3
36 EMC 2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004 by Evan-Moor Corp.
EDITING KEY: Letters
Kamakura japan
June 18, 2004
Dear anicka.- ' excitingHow exiting to get a letter from my american
sister?\ It is even more exciting to think that in aA be
week I wilLmeeting you and staying at your house!
Thank you for welcoming me. This will be the firstwill be
time that I -em- away from home for so lona
WEDNESDAY WEEK 7
spendduring the summer I usually spending many hours
on the beaches of kamakura I will, no doubt spend
many hours this summer studying english and doing
schoolworkbut it will be fun to do it in Chicago.
It will also be very nice for me to have a sister
In my family, I am the only daughter.
we will speak in person soon Until then,
best wishes
your Japanese sister
Kyoko
THURSDAY WEEK 7
Daily Paragraph Editing
Error Summary
Capitalization >4
Language Usage 2
Punctuation:
Comma 2
Period 1
Other 1
Spelling 1
Error Summary
Capitalization 7
Language Usage 1
Punctuation:
Comma 5
Period 4
38 EMC2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004 by Evan-Moor Corp.